Adultery Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III

[abhinay67]

Finally, the chapter everyone was waiting, the grand finale is here and many were disappointed. To an extent I was too but I read the update again and I this time feel it could have been better on certain aspects.

The main problems I have with this rewritten version, esp. the last chapter are the following things:

1. Desai’s as masked cuckold theory.

Last ending we saw Desai was a rapist and hated for it and sent home, Krish_999 changed it to make him a better person this time but he was turned into a cuckold. Apart from last chapter, there were few signs before where he only impersonated Krish but at that time the chapters were written with words that show meaning as if he was trying to impersonate Krish as he is jealous of him because Meera loves him, and he ultimately as a person who was seeking her love wants to be as Krish when he is in bed with Meera so he can feel that love. So how did that turn into a cuckold theory? Ok let’s say in the past Ananya was made to sleep with his friend and he enjoyed the power in doing it and enjoyed watching it, but he is not a cuckold for doing it because he didn’t own Ananya as his wife or lover. She was only his conquest so him making her to sleep with other is truly not a cuckold theory if that is being portrayed as a cuckoldry and only sign in his life then I don’t know I feel its forced plot. Even in this last chapter, Desai asked Krish to be in the room and participate to only show Meera that Krish did not change so it would be easy for him to claim her eventually...that was his plan, and it was not him being cuckold. I do not know why he switched places with Krish and let him fuck her…that truly did not resonate with his personality, Old Desai would make Meera orgasm and let Krish fuck her mouth based on his past aggressive, dominating personality and show Meera that Krish is that cuckold but  he can claim her…The way he swapped places with Krish seems out of his character forcibly put so Meera can tag him with Krish.

In explanation, Author added a twist that Desai left Ananya because she regretted after she slept with his friend and now, he is looking for Meera because she is already some one who sleeps with others, so he was pursuing her to be his partner, so she won’t regret once she sleeps with the men, he chooses…whattttt?

“You and Meera were different. And I saw that as one of the many qualities that made Meera special. The bond you two had—I wanted that too. If she were to join me, I know I would have made her sleep with men of my choosing. And she wouldn’t regret it. I wouldn’t want her to regret it—that’s the point.”

Desai only knew her to sleep with others around chapter 40 or 41 when she revealed about Jai…he didn’t know anything about her before that chapter, but he carried her pic in his purse even before she revealed about Jai.…something is not right and not conveyed correctly in this plot. Desai being cuckold is a weak plot with many loopholes and very few convincing signs which make it hard to believe it.

2. The bond that Krish saw between Desai and Meera.

“I watched, amazed at how their conversation was unfolding. At the start, Meera had made it clear that there was no chance of them being together. But by the end, her gaze lingered on Desai more, her eye contact deepening, as if silently acknowledging the sincerity of his affection. It was clear to me now that, despite her words, something in her was responding to him.“

We have been hammered with chemistry between Desai and Meera since chapter 43 when she first time lays eyes on Desai again after he left, there was undeniable longing in him and his longing was unnerving Meera irrevocably and it kept on and on until they both couldn’t take it and committed adultery on concert night, then continued with Krish’s permission in second bedroom then again in alpine heights...this bonding that Krish saw in rewritten chapters was not there before and even if it was there, it never exceeded the levels beyond an affair…but Meera clearly felt comfortable, alive, responding to his bodily needs and yet there was a familiarity between them that we have never seen her have it with any of her past lovers over the 3 part series, and exactly for this reason Krish wanted to separate and want Meera to be with Desai because he saw that bond has developed so much that they could have a life together with out his fantasies and Meera would be happy, so this last chapter did not explain Meera’s feelings well, Maybe Meera in her mind has clarity on who she belongs to and who is just a temporary lover for her but that clarity is lacking in Krish in the first place before this chapter began but it was not resolved by end of it and it did not get resolved yet by the end of this story as well. So does that mean tomorrow if Krish let’s say pushes her towards Ashish or some one with no fantasies and genuinely loves Meera, it’s a given that she will fall for them…as she did for Desai. If not for Desai’s cuckoldry she would have gone with him for 2 weeks and she also rejected Krish and accepted that he won’t come back to her.

"Yeah, I know." Meera raised her hand as if to stop me and continued. "I know I'm done chasing you, done trying to make amends. It's time I…"
"I was just telling him I’m done resisting you. There’s no point in that anymore, right? It’s time I stop and really look at you – to see where your heart is."

Even the act of spitting was turned into nothing so there is no need for explanation.
If it was only kink...why would she suggest in the past that it only belonged to my Krish and why would she say in last chapter that Desai became special for her when she did it...I feel like author took an escape route here lol...This whole chapter skipped explaining her feelings for Desai, This gesture too is part of it, author conveniently  made its value 0.

So why would author skip explaining her stand towards Desai whether he is cuckold or not? End of the day it doesn’t matter if Desai is cuckold or not…last ending she chose Krish even before it was revealed that Desai is bad, this chapter she pushed both out of the house…but the bond she shared with Desai was conveniently skipped with out clarity to Krish.

3. Glorifying Meera and leaving Krish out to the dust.

The previous chapter was like Avengers: Infinity war, it has such an emotional connection, love poured between the couple and sacrifices were seen, hearts were heavy.
This chapter is not Avengers: end game…Plot was twisted and lost its way. Krish is the one who sacrificed his happiness as he knew his weakness, he knows he will make her sleep with other men if she stays with her, he was ready to leave everything for her, yet in the process of making Desai cuckold, Krish was brought back as a cuckold and his weakness was shown to us all. So, if correct parameters were set, situations arise, Meera is game then cuckold Krish never dies…He is always there lingering around in dormant state. Meera is parting with Krish, Krish is leaving Meera, Desai is the only one who should rejoice…but all three of them had sex…joyfully. I don’t know how dicks rise when people are losing their loved ones so unrealistic. I don’t know what Meera meant by this:

“It’s not that I wanted to change you, Krish. But I’ve always hoped to see you stand up for what you initiate. You made me sleep with other men, allowed me to play with my emotions, and then you began experimenting with it. I knew I would falter, but instead of hiding in the background, watching where I was heading, I would’ve preferred you to be a part of it—guide me, bring me back when I lost my way. I've never attached myself to anyone the way I have with you. But with Susheel, you pushed me too far. The threat of leaving me—it was too much. At one point, I even thought it was just a game between the two of you. But when I realized it was real, I prayed that it was just a game."

The whole point is for Krish not to initiate it again and again something where she is hurt. Yes he made her sleep with men, he experimented but at the same time she never says no but she has regret later so Krish is trying to do the only solution that is available to him that is to let her go so she will be at peace and question for her to falter and him bringing her back is not the solution…I thought she understood that in previous chapter and hence she said yes but here looks like she did not get it. She calls him heartless person; says he deserves to watch her and Desai…what the hell…You can’t even see a person and his sacrifice for you? Now suddenly it becomes Krish’s fault for inviting Desai? What happened to her fucking bond with Desai? If not for that…Krish would have accepted her like other million times when she came back from having sex with others like Das, Shekar, Ashish with out emotionally connected. He would have supported her and brought her back like she wanted in the above dialogue. 
He did not because he saw you cross a line with Desai and he hoped you would find happiness with him..…now she says that Krish threatening that he will leave her is too much for her. Damn it…what have you made Meera in this chapter…its portrayed as if no fault of her but the only sacrifice that Krish did was at a fault here?…Why this glorification of Meera? It would have been a perfect ending instead if she explained to both men what her feelings towards them are and choose Krish or maybe go separate ways. Maybe Krish will realize it and claim her back…this whole Desai cuckoldry is a forced plot which did not give ample space for couple to shine for their love.

“I realized then that this night wasn’t about the union of two souls – it was purely about the union of two bodies. Desai hardly made an effort to talk about anything meaningful; he was more focused on teasing, turning every moment into a game of seduction.”

Even if we keep the Desai cuckoldry, it should have been Krish who sees his nature and bring Meera back before she commits to his nature. He was seeing signs all this chapter how he was not aiming for her heart but going for her body…he was getting excited when Meera was reaching out to him and enjoying it. We read so many instances like that but ending glory again went to Meera…only because she must realize that Desai is a cuckold to let him go out of her system.

4. Using pregnancy for reunion.

This is my biggest gripe in this chapter. Why? Why pregnancy? It just sucked the emotion out rather than showed it as a compromise.
Would Meera called Krish and tried to bring him back to her life with out Pregnancy?

Her last statements are below:

“I’m done with both of you fuckers,” she shouted again. “I’m done with this life with you. I’m done with the friendship with you, Susheel fucking Desai.”

“You fucker, Krish. You said you weren’t good for me because you’d make me fuck other men. You said this moron would be the one for me.”

“You may believe I’m the one for you, but I believe you’re no better than Krish. You’re two sides of the same coin. Equal in weight. Equal in value. Equal in your twisted fantasies. . .And I’m not going to be a victim of your games anymore. I want to end it, damn it! Oh my God, what have I become?”

“You and I are not made for each other. Like Krish, you too deserve a woman who has the determination to say no to you when you come up with fantasies like this. If you don’t want such a partner, then go find someone else. I don’t want to be that partner.”

After saying all this and determining that she wanted a life with out games, fantasies and never want to be with the one’s whom she threw out of her life, she came back to Krish…she says she loves him but she forget that Krish is just another side of Desai so just because she loves Krish , does that mean she is OK to be with him and play his games? Did you come back to him because you loved him or because you are pregnant?

I believe she loved him as I have this whole story and not for baby, but Krish is some one who is a cuckold so how is she OK with it now after blaming Desai and throwing him out…is it fair? Hence, I told this whole cuckold plot is weak. 
I said earlier comment that first half is blockbuster and second half is weak…its because even if we keep this cuckold plot, if there was a way to show Krish changed convincingly and add lot of dialogues in depth about each other’s feelings and bringing back that lost bond between with the promises that she would say no and he would not be a cuckold then there would have been a way out at least for their future.

After the couple’s reunion is complete, both together finding out she is pregnant would have been better ending. Now the ending is shown as if even if they mess up again, they will find solution together so its like same as last ending with no solution for the fantasies problem. Maybe like the story said at the end, that its not an end but just a turn of a page.

Overall, the series is our favorite and epic and will always stay with us forever. It’s never easy to write for such a complicated plot and twists that went into this story. Krish_999 did a marvelous job in writing it so convincingly and making it a novel. I thank you myself and from all other readers for giving us this masterpiece. Hope you get much needed relief and rest from this writing.

~RCF

this was very loose writing, Meera has never missed taking pills, even in the last ending when she had a confrontation with Krish she took the pills. but this time when she had sex with two men and her future is uncertain she would have surely taken the pill. Also, her saying that the child is krish with certainty is not believable, she had sex with Desai before as well during her fertile period, and pills are not one hundred percent successful .

Even the language/dialogue used by Meera was not something she usually speaks, she is generally mild manner. there was no dialogue /reconciliation etc. When she left the house for Alpine Heights, she said Krish and Desai are different sides of the same coin, next appearance we see she is pregnant and he and Krish are magically together again

I would not have minded any outcome of the story, but this is a weak ending to an otherwise great story. Is this an improvement to the last ending, I don't think so.

I think the author got just bored with the story/characters

[qazmlp]

Wow...woww...wow...Its 10 minutes to 4 in the morning and I have been reading this for the past 2.5 hra taking small breaks,slowly digesting it as it developed.What an absolutely masterful and lovely ending...I loved it...
PS: Further praise for later. Good night,sweet dreams.

[masud93]

big thanks to krish,,,,
and about ending??? pehle comments to padlo,,, uske baad

[masud93]

most wanted chapter,,,, but i think this ending not satisfy for many reader. me also,,,,
whatever,,,, BIG SALUTE FOR AUTHOR

[masud93]

English to main jiyada nahi janta,,lekin is story padne ke liye thuda bahut sikh liya,,,,
love From Bangladesh,,,,,
and big fan of this story and krish

[choocha]

The way Meera ended things with Desai seems more like a tantrum, but may be more genuine than her suddenly developing lot of critical thinking abilities. and explaining all her actions till now. It may be more satisfying for some male readers to get logically sound reasons from Meera, but thats not the way world works .

Given it was the last episode (really?), any doubts lingering about whether Desai is the father, or Krish, wouldn't matter, but any such efforts to ascertain would only be harmful for Krish/Meera. But it would be a painful/comical reminder if the kid grows up looking like Desai.

[RCF]

this was very loose writing, Meera has never missed taking pills, even in the last ending when she had a confrontation with Krish she took the pills. but this time when she had sex with two men and her future is uncertain she would have surely taken the pill. Also, her saying that the child is krish with certainty is not believable, she had sex with Desai before as well during her fertile period, and pills are not one hundred percent successful .

Even the language/dialogue used by Meera was not something she usually speaks, she is generally mild manner. there was no dialogue /reconciliation etc. When she left the house for Alpine Heights, she said Krish and Desai are different sides of the same coin, next appearance we see she is pregnant and he and Krish are magically together again

I would not have minded any outcome of the story, but this is a weak ending to an otherwise great story. Is this an improvement to the last ending, I don't think so.

I think the author got just bored with the story/characters

It was never loose writing, His writing is exceptional even now...I feel when Krish_999 thought about rewriting it, he got an idea of making Desai a cuckold instead of bad person which is per-determined and rest is developed accordingly. As we go into past before in many chapters when Krish fell down the balcony and was bed ridden, we have seen glimpses of how possessive Desai was about Meera, In parties that he took Meera alone, Even one time Meera mentioned that Desai is not like Krish and he has good balance of possessiveness and caring. I thought all these days that Meera got attracted to Desai so much because the qualities she found in him are something that she missed in Krish and it involves esp not being a cuckold and being possessive, attentive and not treat her as object of fantasy as main qualities.

All of a sudden that perception got crushed in last chapter and it turned out him to be like Krish and hence this plot did not sit with me well. If its not for those qualities why would Meera connect with Desai so well? 
Ultimately, Meera became some one who is poor in judgement of character and Krish is some one who became a fool to sacrifice in the end and got blamed for it as coward instead of being selfless, both were thrown out of the house, Last chapter kind undone all the good the previous one did in this story.

Also I do not think taking pill or not is a big loose end. She is going through so much at that time so its understandable that she might have been alone and depressed. As far as whose child it as all readers are asking, that's too much. Obviously Desai did not cum inside her how would he get Meera pregnant over Krish who filled her completely.

Three main things that need to be explained before this chapter were 1. Meera and Desai bond 2. Krish's fantasies 3. Krish and Meera sex life going forward 4. How to make Desai villain and get him out of system for couple.

None of them were answered properly. 
-Bond ignored conveniently
-Fantasies will be there forever..maybe Krish will change temporarily because he has seen so much pain but that side of him won't be dead forever as couple acknowledged in the end.
-Krish again left Meera dry when he fucked her in last chapter, she orgasm later after Krish so Krish is still inadequate for her in terms of sex. He can never fill her like Desai and none of those things are really touched or explained. So we should assume that Meera should be happy and be content with love and what ever Krish can provide her.
- Desai was made cuckold, even though the plot was weak the writing around it to make Meera see it is exceptional. 

Only if the chapter did not end abruptly after Krish's return from Pilgrimage and if there has a few pages of emotional connect written for couple instead of pregnancy it would have been so good, Pregnancy news could be last paragraph to end it beautifully after the reunion.
Its important for Meera to acknowledge and explain why she is taking Krish back after yelling at both of them for being cuckold, Without that she would seem superficial and hypocrite, what happens if Desai comes back and asks her why she let Krish back and threw him out if both of us are same coin, is it just because she loves Krish or because she got pregnant?  Doesn't it seem a genuine question from Desai..though he won't cross paths again. Instead of answering this author used pregnancy to connect the couple which I felt was an OK ending like a 1000 wala fizzled out with out the dhamaka.


~RCF

[choocha]

Looks like you ignored/missed on option:

All Three of them sharing the bed. Krish and Meera will reunite, and so will Meera and Desai.

So this actually happened, though after this Meera throws a tantrum.

[Asish]

It was never loose writing, His writing is exceptional even now...I feel when Krish_999 thought about rewriting it, he got an idea of making Desai a cuckold instead of bad person which is per-determined and rest is developed accordingly. As we go into past before in many chapters when Krish fell down the balcony and was bed ridden, we have seen glimpses of how possessive Desai was about Meera, In parties that he took Meera alone, Even one time Meera mentioned that Desai is not like Krish and he has good balance of possessiveness and caring. I thought all these days that Meera got attracted to Desai so much because the qualities she found in him are something that she missed in Krish and it involves esp not being a cuckold and being possessive, attentive and not treat her as object of fantasy as main qualities.

All of a sudden that perception got crushed in last chapter and it turned out him to be like Krish and hence this plot did not sit with me well. If its not for those qualities why would Meera connect with Desai so well? 
Ultimately, Meera became some one who is poor in judgement of character and Krish is some one who became a fool to sacrifice in the end and got blamed for it as coward instead of being selfless, both were thrown out of the house, Last chapter kind undone all the good the previous one did in this story.

Also I do not think taking pill or not is a big loose end. She is going through so much at that time so its understandable that she might have been alone and depressed. As far as whose child it as all readers are asking, that's too much. Obviously Desai did not cum inside her how would he get Meera pregnant over Krish who filled her completely.

Three main things that need to be explained before this chapter were 1. Meera and Desai bond 2. Krish's fantasies 3. Krish and Meera sex life going forward 4. How to make Desai villain and get him out of system for couple.

None of them were answered properly. 
-Bond ignored conveniently
-Fantasies will be there forever..maybe Krish will change temporarily because he has seen so much pain but that side of him won't be dead forever as couple acknowledged in the end.
-Krish again left Meera dry when he fucked her in last chapter, she orgasm later after Krish so Krish is still inadequate for her in terms of sex. He can never fill her like Desai and none of those things are really touched or explained. So we should assume that Meera should be happy and be content with love and what ever Krish can provide her.
- Desai was made cuckold, even though the plot was weak the writing around it to make Meera see it is exceptional. 

Only if the chapter did not end abruptly after Krish's return from Pilgrimage and if there has a few pages of emotional connect written for couple instead of pregnancy it would have been so good, Pregnancy news could be last paragraph to end it beautifully after the reunion.
Its important for Meera to acknowledge and explain why she is taking Krish back after yelling at both of them for being cuckold, Without that she would seem superficial and hypocrite, what happens if Desai comes back and asks her why she let Krish back and threw him out if both of us are same coin, is it just because she loves Krish or because she got pregnant?  Doesn't it seem a genuine question from Desai..though he won't cross paths again. Instead of answering this author used pregnancy to connect the couple which I felt was an OK ending like a 1000 wala fizzled out with out the dhamaka.


~RCF

Meeras character is like she enjoys sex feels guilty gets angry on krish both promise not to bring desai , desai says we won't meet again , and the cycle repeats last chapter was nothing new same cycle repeating again and again .

[Asish]

Moreover there is nothing that says meera changed she has always been like that treating herself as the victim . Saying u pushed me to hum, saying I couldn't resist his charm , and ofcourse we saw what happened in the last chapter. It's more like female version of post nut clarity where she forgets everything while having sex with desai or others and then remembers fuck I am married to krish what I am doing and weeps infront of krish

[DeanWinchester00007]

It was never loose writing, His writing is exceptional even now...I feel when Krish_999 thought about rewriting it, he got an idea of making Desai a cuckold instead of bad person which is per-determined and rest is developed accordingly. As we go into past before in many chapters when Krish fell down the balcony and was bed ridden, we have seen glimpses of how possessive Desai was about Meera, In parties that he took Meera alone, Even one time Meera mentioned that Desai is not like Krish and he has good balance of possessiveness and caring. I thought all these days that Meera got attracted to Desai so much because the qualities she found in him are something that she missed in Krish and it involves esp not being a cuckold and being possessive, attentive and not treat her as object of fantasy as main qualities.

All of a sudden that perception got crushed in last chapter and it turned out him to be like Krish and hence this plot did not sit with me well. If its not for those qualities why would Meera connect with Desai so well? 
Ultimately, Meera became some one who is poor in judgement of character and Krish is some one who became a fool to sacrifice in the end and got blamed for it as coward instead of being selfless, both were thrown out of the house, Last chapter kind undone all the good the previous one did in this story.

Also I do not think taking pill or not is a big loose end. She is going through so much at that time so its understandable that she might have been alone and depressed. As far as whose child it as all readers are asking, that's too much. Obviously Desai did not cum inside her how would he get Meera pregnant over Krish who filled her completely.

Three main things that need to be explained before this chapter were 1. Meera and Desai bond 2. Krish's fantasies 3. Krish and Meera sex life going forward 4. How to make Desai villain and get him out of system for couple.

None of them were answered properly. 
-Bond ignored conveniently
-Fantasies will be there forever..maybe Krish will change temporarily because he has seen so much pain but that side of him won't be dead forever as couple acknowledged in the end.
-Krish again left Meera dry when he fucked her in last chapter, she orgasm later after Krish so Krish is still inadequate for her in terms of sex. He can never fill her like Desai and none of those things are really touched or explained. So we should assume that Meera should be happy and be content with love and what ever Krish can provide her.
- Desai was made cuckold, even though the plot was weak the writing around it to make Meera see it is exceptional. 

Only if the chapter did not end abruptly after Krish's return from Pilgrimage and if there has a few pages of emotional connect written for couple instead of pregnancy it would have been so good, Pregnancy news could be last paragraph to end it beautifully after the reunion.
Its important for Meera to acknowledge and explain why she is taking Krish back after yelling at both of them for being cuckold, Without that she would seem superficial and hypocrite, what happens if Desai comes back and asks her why she let Krish back and threw him out if both of us are same coin, is it just because she loves Krish or because she got pregnant?  Doesn't it seem a genuine question from Desai..though he won't cross paths again. Instead of answering this author used pregnancy to connect the couple which I felt was an OK ending like a 1000 wala fizzled out with out the dhamaka.


~RCF

Only if the chapter did not end abruptly after Krish's return from Pilgrimage and if there has a few pages of emotional connect written for couple

This is the only criticism i have but I can ignore this , As long as Krish and Meera are together .  

[DeanWinchester00007]

THANK YOU ! THANK YOU ! THANK YOU !  THANK YOU !  THANK YOU !  THANK YOU !  THANK YOU ! THANK YOU ! KRISH 


I can understand the criticism of others reader and Sorry for these words I am about to say " FUCK OFF" ( Please understand , Let it be , Be happy with this ending , please dont forced writer to again rewrite , I cannot handle it anymore    again I am sorry )

I know and I understand the Frustration , The story could have been much better with same ending but again Its still good . So good .
I wanted to write so much , But I am content and Happy with so i am leaving it . 

Thank You . Krish for this wonderful story and ending them together . They belong together . There is no MEERA without KRISH .
Finally they are together Happily with Kid . Happy Family . 

Wish :- My wish to get a whole chapter just Meera and Krish . No shit twist or nothing . Just Pure Meera and Krish , Chapters . 

man at the end When Krish called Desai I got anxious , No please stupid dont contact him, But thank god , it did not escalates further . 


I am so happy now   , Those 50 Chapters were so cruel , I was so bitter , Many times I showed my frustration against the Writer for purposely developing the plot just to separate The Couple and making Desai an angel. The anxiety , The torment i felt for last 2 months finally comes to end and with Happy Ending  . But making him cuck is the ultimate uno reverse . FUCK YOU DESAI , YOU CUCK . lol. He got so easy but I can ignore it . 

Final Request :- KRISH please again , Dont restart this story , Please PLease PLease let it be . They are finally happy , Its done , They are done with shit . I know I have no right to say this , But please Leave this story . To be Honest , There is nothing left to explore now . What will next chapter bring More men to fuck Meera or The couple will get separate ? I know you can explore many things in this but Again its done now . 

Please Please Please , Let it be . Dont Ruin the Happy Ending . ITS PERFECT END . 

I know as writer you must have many ideas left which you did not include in this story . I can see clearly you were exhausted and story is cleary rushed but still good , I think  because of our comment which were mean sometimes kind of affect the narrative and flow  , I must apologize for the comments .    . But its still Great . .

I know that there is more creative juice left , Please use it to Create  A New plot . I must Plea dont extend the story end this . Create something new , Something unique , You can , You always do . 

A new subject, New Theme, New characters , New torture  for us . I would happily read it . 

My Praise for the writer :- We already praised you so much , I dont know new words to put how much I  admired your writing . I wish if there was an option to where we can pay some gifts to the writer who put so much effort and write so wonderful story. 

Again Thanks Brother, KRISH 

ALL HAIL TO KING KRISH  !!!!!!!! 


My best wishes to you . SIR KRISH 

[Speedy21]

THANK YOU ! THANK YOU ! THANK YOU !  THANK YOU !  THANK YOU !  THANK YOU !  THANK YOU ! THANK YOU ! KRISH 


I can understand the criticism of others reader and Sorry for these words I am about to say " FUCK OFF" ( Please understand , Let it be , Be happy with this ending , please dont forced writer to again rewrite , I cannot handle it anymore    again I am sorry )

I know and I understand the Frustration , The story could have been much better with same ending but again Its still good . So good .
I wanted to write so much , But I am content and Happy with so i am leaving it . 

Thank You . Krish for this wonderful story and ending them together . They belong together . There is no MEERA without KRISH .
Finally they are together Happily with Kid . Happy Family . 

Wish :- My wish to get a whole chapter just Meera and Krish . No shit twist or nothing . Just Pure Meera and Krish , Chapters . 

man at the end When Krish called Desai I got anxious , No please stupid dont contact him, But thank god , it did not escalates further . 


I am so happy now   , Those 50 Chapters were so cruel , I was so bitter , Many times I showed my frustration against the Writer for purposely developing the plot just to separate The Couple and making Desai an angel. The anxiety , The torment i felt for last 2 months finally comes to end and with Happy Ending  . But making him cuck is the ultimate uno reverse . FUCK YOU DESAI , YOU CUCK . lol. He got so easy but I can ignore it . 

Final Request :- KRISH please again , Dont restart this story , Please PLease PLease let it be . They are finally happy , Its done , They are done with shit . I know I have no right to say this , But please Leave this story . To be Honest , There is nothing left to explore now . What will next chapter bring More men to fuck Meera or The couple will get separate ? I know you can explore many things in this but Again its done now . 

Please Please Please , Let it be . Dont Ruin the Happy Ending . ITS PERFECT END . 

I know as writer you must have many ideas left which you did not include in this story . I can see clearly you were exhausted and story is cleary rushed but still good , I think  because of our comment which were mean sometimes kind of affect the narrative and flow  , I must apologize for the comments .    . But its still Great . .

I know that there is more creative juice left , Please use it to Create  A New plot . I must Plea dont extend the story end this . Create something new , Something unique , You can , You always do . 

A new subject, New Theme, New characters , New torture  for us . I would happily read it . 

My Praise for the writer :- We already praised you so much , I dont know new words to put how much I  admired your writing . I wish if there was an option to where we can pay some gifts to the writer who put so much effort and write so wonderful story. 

Again Thanks Brother, KRISH 

ALL HAIL TO KING KRISH  !!!!!!!! 


My best wishes to you . SIR KRISH 

I think he will be remembered has one of the OG in this site his unique storytelling .... Always amaze me . I hope he restart the accident story

[Rian]

Krrish, you are a wonderful writer. This story will always stay in my heart, and Meera and Krrish feel so real, as if they truly exist in this world. But I have to say, you messed up the last chapter this time.

In the previous chapter, Krrish was letting Meera go, and she was reluctant to move on—something that was always the other way around. Krrish was always the one fighting to bring her back. So when Meera took on that role this time, it felt refreshing and powerful. I was excited to see her prove her unwavering love for Krrish, to show him that Desai meant nothing to her, and to fight for their love. At first, the final chapter seemed to be heading in that direction, but then suddenly, Meera gave in. Just because Desai was taking her to meet his parents, she seemed to forget Krrish in an instant! That didn’t feel like the Meera we’ve come to know. The deep, passionate love between her and Krrish seemed to disappear all of a sudden, and it made her look as if she was more desperate for sex and the pleasure Desai gives her in bed rather than the love she shared with Krrish. This felt completely out of character for her and was disappointing.

Additionally, the ending felt rushed. Their reunion didn’t have enough depth—it seemed forced rather than an emotional, well-earned moment. And I have to admit, a part of me is also a little unsatisfied that the anal sex between Desai and Meera didn’t happen again. I understand that it might not have fit the story’s flow, but it still felt like something was missing.

That being said, I truly congratulate you on finishing this story. It has been an amazing journey, and I hope you continue to give us more stories to cherish in the future.

[amzad2004]

I would like to congratulate Author Krish for his wonderful finishing of this story, I had mild stroke while the sex scene between Desai and Meera, at the end krish's ejaculation saved me. I had to took medical help and retuned to home. After read all the available comments made me sad because even the my fellow most intelligent bros like RCF, Harry Jordan, Phoonix have failed to read line which written between the lines. Let me explain what I understand as follow: Meera never have the words divorce/ separation from Krish in her dictionary. The sooner Krish announce separation immediately Meera flashed out Desai from her life and determined to save her marriage at any coast. To Meera only Krish is permanent and rest of the world is temporary. No matte how strong any bond-fond she is having with Desai or to anyone that caused her loose Krish has washed out in a micro second. The bond got weak when Desai and Meera got out from Alpine heights that is why Meera was rude with Desai what she mentioned in last chapter, She expressed the fear in chapter 50 that Krish might found out their that sex session. To save someone's love one or family or children men or women do not hesitate to fight with T-Rex dinosaur despite they know their confirm death. Here the so called bond is nothing compare to that. For Meera Krish is life to her, Desai is become nothing but cancer cell to her after she come to know that Krish is done with her. In last chapter from the beginning she determined to go any extend to save her marriage that is why she did not pack any luggage to be prepared for two weeks vacation with Desai. There was no vacation for Meera in her plan. That is why she announced that she won't wear Desai's gifted dress during bamboo resort visit. There is always determination in her eyes that Krish saw but failed to understand what exactly it is. She had plan a,b,c,d,e,f..... She knew that her plan will be successful because she saw Krish's painful eyes even during the anniversary night. She only needs to make Krish to understand that Desai is not good for her. At first she started to show to krish that Desai has only lust for her not love. That failed but she saw sadness has dipped in Krish's eyes. Then she kissed Krish to hope he backed off to pushing her towards Desai but not happened. Instantly she jumped to plan B that is getting intimate with Desai to make Krish to feel empty and more sad. Whatever she did in the anniversary night she has only goal in her mind that is to get back her life Krish, she was ready to go any extend for that. When Desai wanted Krish to watch them that made Meera to execute immediate plan to portrait Desai a cuckold. My fellow intelligent and wise readers (RCF, Harry Jordan, Phonix, Lolla some more) Love does not follow logic and rule. In order to save her love and marriage Meera have used whatever she could find as tools and weapon near her hand and mind. No matter if those are logical or lawful at that time. She only focused on one thing that is cut off the cancer cell from their marriage i.e. Desai. The way she portrait Desai as a cuckold it showed not logical but when you see it from the Meera's eyes you will find the logic. Desperate time requires desperate measures. In that process you saw Meera did not pressure Desai to close the door. Initially that was not the plan. Meera asked Krish to go to his room to sleep first so that Meera could pursue Desai to leave from their life, if Desai would not ready to leave then Meera could kill Desai and dumped his body in the forest. For love and saving beloved family people could go any extend which I saw in front of me many times. In that case Krish saved Desai's life by not leaving the hall. When Desai insisted krish to come along with Desai and Meera then she jumped to cuckold idea to implement. She manipulate Desai swapped the place with Krish. She saw the opportunity to become pregnant by Krish. She knew Desai has the desire to have love from Meera like Krish. So she have shown to Desai she aroused and enjoyed sucking Krish;s dick not only by pleasure but also by love. Plan succussed and Desai swapped the place. You people must remembered that in chapter 50 Meera had pleasured and cried out to have Krish child. Despite Krish's kink Meera see only one solution to shift Krish's kink to normal life is child. So in her mind there are two things she wanted at that time, one is portrait Desai a cuckold so that she can throw out Desai from their life and 2nd to get pregnant by Krish. After Krish ejaculated inside Merra's pussy and that thought of become pregnant by krish made Meera ejaculate her cum. After having accomplished her plan successful she did not wait to execute to cut off the cancer cell i.e. Desai. She used every tool whatever she find near her hand those might not logical. Desperate lover do not count logic as their weapon to fight. She never thought to throw out Krish from her life never. What she did to throw out Krish along with Desai is because she wanted Desai could not find any way to get back. That is why she throw out krish along with Desai. Regarding incident of Krish has thrown out is not genuine just part of a plan. After finally closing the door of her room then she packed her luggage. Because of she wants to moving to Alpine heights she used the opportunity and moved out so that she can re-paint and re-furnished the apartment and erased the all memories of Desai in the process and start a new married life with Krish. She knew she is going to get pregnant and immediately informed Krish then make him move in with her that was her plan. 1 month long Krish's outing Caused disruption that plan and made Meera frustrated and angry that is why she slapped him. Both Meera and Krish accept Krish's kink as well as their upcoming storms in their marriage life. They are certain of it and decided to face together. Now they do not have split, separation and divorce words in their dictionary. Whenever they will messed up in their life Meera will get pregnant by Krish. Here you people complain about unsolved loop holes not been solved, in that case you people have to understand that Author Krish himself is in a very young age. It is to much expectation towards him to write a story without any loop holes. Instead you can show him his mistake so that he could correct himself and able to improve his writing skill. We have to nurture him to become greatest writer. Still he has lack of diversity writing skill. That is all I have to say to my fellow readers. Brainless fellow readers pls ignore my comment.

[RCF]

Krrish, you are a wonderful  writer. This story will always stay in my heart, and Meera and Krrish feel so real, as if they truly exist in this world. But I have to say, you messed up the last chapter this time.

In the previous chapter, Krrish was letting Meera go, and she was reluctant to move on—something that was always the other way around. Krrish was always the one fighting to bring her back. So when Meera took on that role this time, it felt refreshing and powerful. I was excited to see her prove her unwavering love for Krrish, to show him that Desai meant nothing to her, and to fight for their love. At first, the final chapter seemed to be heading in that direction, but then suddenly, Meera gave in. Just because Desai was taking her to meet his parents, she seemed to forget Krrish in an instant! That didn’t feel like the Meera we’ve come to know. The deep, passionate love between her and Krrish seemed to disappear all of a sudden, and it made her look as if she was more desperate for sex and the pleasure Desai gives her in bed rather than the love she shared with Krrish. This felt completely out of character for her and was disappointing.

Additionally, the ending felt rushed. Their reunion didn’t have enough depth—it seemed forced rather than an emotional, well-earned moment. And I have to admit, a part of me is also a little unsatisfied that the anal sex between Desai and Meera didn’t happen again. I understand that it might not have fit the story’s flow, but it still felt like something was missing.

That being said, I truly congratulate you on finishing this story. It has been an amazing journey, and I hope you continue to give us more stories to cherish in the future.

The greatness of this story is seen when you see old readers come out and comment for the first time.

"In the previous chapter, Krrish was letting Meera go, and she was reluctant to move on—something that was always the other way around. Krrish was always the one fighting to bring her back. So when Meera took on that role this time, it felt refreshing and powerful."

Great point. I missed this one, yes for the first time its not Meera who walked out but Krish in last chapter and it did feel refreshing and last chapter was supposed to be her fighting for Krish but it turned other way round again.

"At first, the final chapter seemed to be heading in that direction, but then suddenly, Meera gave in. Just because Desai was taking her to meet his parents, she seemed to forget Krrish in an instant! That didn’t feel like the Meera we’ve come to know. The deep, passionate love between her and Krrish seemed to disappear all of a sudden, and it made her look as if she was more desperate for sex and the pleasure Desai gives her in bed rather than the love she shared with Krrish. "

Meera did not give in easily, if you see from Desai's perspective then yes it would seem that she gave in as soon as he came to the house and few drinks then they are making out, but look at this from her perspective and Krish..she has been fighting Krish not to end things since 3-4 weeks and trying to reach out to him again and again in different means, even when they were drunk you can see that she tiptoes to Krish and gave Krish one last kiss, trying to pull him in again..she let go of him once he pushed her again...she was responding to Desai but its written clearly that her heart is craving for Krish and looking for him to stop this madness.

She gave in because she is tired of trying to reach out again and again for Krish....When Desai went to restroom, she knew where this was going, she went to Krish to pull him into a kiss and show her desperation one last time but when Krish pushed her again, she was hurt and wantedly did things to hurt Krish back, her comments on Krish being heartless, deserve to sit and watch, why do you care about dream...are all things she said to hurt him back for her own pain she is going through because of Krish's persistence to break marriage. 

Like I said the writing to show Desai as cuckold and how Meera finds out are all exceptionally written.The plot felt weak that's all. The reunion was missing the spark and felt bland, Pregnancy was used as easy means to stitch the difference, else this is very good chapter overall. Hopefully we have an epilogue where couple discuss many things and we see young Jr.Krish.

~RCF

[Lollobionda]

I am not going to question the last chapter or criticise the abrupt ending.

No!

I would like to thank the author Krish_999 for this explicit story with ‘CULT STATUS’ from the bottom of my heart.
Thank you Krish!

There were several stories on this portal and its predecessor that deserved this rating in terms of structure and 
writing style, such as: 

* Who Watch The Watchmen
* Shy Indian Wife Opens Up
* Guru Ji Ka
* Innocent Wife
* My Friend's Wife ... etc.

All these stories - no matter how good the writer and how explicit the stories were - ended in the middle without being
finished and without any announcement or indication of why.
I find this behaviour towards the fans, readers and visitors of this portal DISRESPECTFUL!

... And here we have an author (Krish_999) who kept his word, regularly provided his fan community and readers with
information, always continued to write and publish promptly and in the end came out with a ‘completely finished!’ story
that is unrivalled here and elsewhere, namely a MASTERWORK!

Nevertheless, some people have presumed to come from somewhere and censor and belittle the story and the work 
that went into it.
All I can say to that is:
SHUT UP YOUR FACE!!!

My résumé:

The last chapter was pure ‘nerve tickling’ that went up and down, with everything that goes with it 
- not even Alfred Hitchcock could present it better -.
In the end, reason, love, common sense, marital devotion and mutual respect triumphed over physical desires, manipulation, 
deceit and materialistic show-offs...

For this I thank the author once again and bow before him in reverence...

(I would be delighted if the author would reconsider his decision and delight his fan community with another 4th part ‘
with a small leap in time - perhaps 5 years...)


In this sense
All the best

Lollobionda

[Rockket Raja]

It must be Desai child

[RCF]

I am not going to question the last chapter or criticise the abrupt ending.

No!

I would like to thank the author Krish_999 for this explicit story with ‘CULT STATUS’ from the bottom of my heart.
Thank you Krish!

There were several stories on this portal and its predecessor that deserved this rating in terms of structure and 
writing style, such as: 

* Who Watch The Watchmen
* Shy Indian Wife Opens Up
* Guru Ji Ka
* Innocent Wife
* My Friend's Wife ... etc.

All these stories - no matter how good the writer and how explicit the stories were - ended in the middle without being
finished and without any announcement or indication of why.
I find this behaviour towards the fans, readers and visitors of this portal DISRESPECTFUL!

... And here we have an author (Krish_999) who kept his word, regularly provided his fan community and readers with
information, always continued to write and publish promptly and in the end came out with a ‘completely finished!’ story
that is unrivalled here and elsewhere, namely a MASTERWORK!

Nevertheless, some people have presumed to come from somewhere and censor and belittle the story and the work 
that went into it.
All I can say to that is:
SHUT UP YOUR FACE!!!

My résumé:

The last chapter was pure ‘nerve tickling’ that went up and down, with everything that goes with it 
- not even Alfred Hitchcock could present it better -.
In the end, reason, love, common sense, marital devotion and mutual respect triumphed over physical desires, manipulation, 
deceit and materialistic show-offs...

For this I thank the author once again and bow before him in reverence...

(I would be delighted if the author would reconsider his decision and delight his fan community with another 4th part ‘
with a small leap in time - perhaps 5 years...)


In this sense
All the best

Lollobionda

You misunderstood my friend. Every one that wrote a comment after the story ended only has immense respect for the author. We all know what it takes to write and complete a story of this huge scale on this forum, sacrificing personal life and time to give us story for free and purely for our entertainment and also committing to complete it.

Our comments whether they are positive or negative are only means to show how much we love this story. I am very sure for any author any comment is better than no comments so our comments are means to motivate the author to write for us more and not to belittle his efforts or his work.

Having said that, I would like to see Krish explore and give us a new saga than part 4.

~RCF

[DeanWinchester00007]

I think he will be remembered has one of the OG in this site his unique storytelling .... Always amaze me . I hope he restart the accident story

There is no doubt about it . He is the OG , New blood . He is exceptional , I never thought that a sex story would make me so mad and frustrated  and I forget about all the sex in it . lol  

I hope he restart the accident story
I did not read that one , I will now . But As long He never touch Krish and Meera again , I am fine with it . lol .