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Dear Shanti,
You are an excellent writer , the way you have described each scene . As a reader it feels so realistic as if scene is coming to life itself.
Please carry on the great work you are doing. At this point this is the best I have read in many many years.
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Happy New Year, Shanthi Ji
Kahan ho aap???
updates ke bina story banzar hua ja raha hai...
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shanthi ji kahan ho aap???
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Shanthiji, i am confident you are not going to conclude the story anytime soon. There are many sequences I hope you're envisioning. Keep continuing. Thank you for a wonderful update. I
P.s. read the next update on x fo rum
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Now everyone is updated with the story on both forums … enjoy these two updates and i am coming with the next update very very soon !!!
Love to all ❤️❤️❤️
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aapko dubara dekh kar achha laga shanthi ji or kya updates diya hai apne,,,uff mza hi aagya.
Yeh toh abhi suruaat hai safar ka or abhi se roshni ki haalat kharab ho raha ha....
Na jane aage kya hoga roshni ka...
Dono budhhon ko jhel na paayegi....
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Awesome writing, I am reading this story by translating it to English. Make a pee party with two old men, make it dirty
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As always... SHANDAARRR,,,JANDARRR,,, DHAMAKEDARRR UPDATES!!!
bechari Roshni ki kismat hi kharab h... Jinta woh dono budhon ko ignore krna chahti h utna hi khud ko unke pass pati h...
katai sandwich ho rakhi h dono k bich m...
main aise or v erotic scenes dekhna chahunga roshni ki dono budhon se chudne se pehle... jahan dono jabardast tarike s roshni ko kavi aage–piche se kavi agal–bagal se chheda–chhadi kr rahe ho...or roshni ki chut m aag lag rahi ho but helplessly sb kuch jheli ja rahi ho...
Or mujhe intezaar h un dono ki reaction ki jb unhe pata chalega ki roshni dono se chud chuki h... Or roshni kya excuses degi...
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Marvellous!!!
Roshni ki kismat hi kharab... Ek taraf kua to dusri taraf khai... Woh waqt zyada dur nahi... Jab Aslam or Salim aage-pichhe se karenge roshni ki tabadtod thukai...!!!