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Misc. Erotica Maheen ........ Mohy Rang Dy Piya
lagta hai writer khub busy hai,,,,,, hum to update ma intezar mein hai
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(07-02-2025, 10:45 PM)K MD THABREZ Wrote: Nice update thoda romantic scenes hona chahiye











Kaisa romantic scene bhai???












(07-02-2025, 11:13 PM)Vijayverma Wrote: Waiting for next update bro eagerly














BTW yeh koi comment nahi hota ky waiting for next update.









(07-02-2025, 11:25 PM)Jdk51335 Wrote: Bhai hania wali kahani bhi aage badhai













Jee koshish kron ga usko bhi start krny ki isky baad






(08-02-2025, 12:05 AM)masud93 Wrote: waiting bro,,, update kab aayega,,,,,aur PIC bhi hota to accha hota,,and tnx for REPLY















Bhai update likhny ka time bhi to dya krain na

Aisa nahi hota ky koi bhi writer siraf yehi kaam kr raha hota hai ya usny kahin sy copy paste krna hoti hai story.


Stay connected update bhi mil jaay ga.






(08-02-2025, 02:20 AM)Sharmin Shila Wrote: Chamatkar aur ekdum zabardast update












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(08-02-2025, 07:25 AM)y2klak Wrote: Superb writing, eagerly waiting for the next update












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(08-02-2025, 07:44 AM)masud93 Wrote: eagerly waiting for update













Acha jee





(08-02-2025, 02:20 PM)PodelaAmmu Wrote: just superb and mind blowing update!

(08-02-2025, 02:27 PM)Luca Brasi Wrote: Excellent and exciting update!
Terrific and stunning writings!
superb and dashing story!!!



















Thanks dear ? 








(08-02-2025, 02:43 PM)Monica Lewinsky Wrote: bahut hi mast aur behad mazadar story!















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(08-02-2025, 05:47 PM)Gangua Wrote: Dashing and thrilling update!!!













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(08-02-2025, 10:55 PM)Yash121 Wrote: Waiting for next update bhai












Okay






(08-02-2025, 11:18 PM)masud93 Wrote: lagta hai writer khub busy hai,,,,,, hum to update ma intezar mein hai













Jee busy bhi to ho hi sakta hai na writer.















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Bro we Fully understand that it takes time for a writer to write a quality content and besides that writer has other important day today jobs as well so take your time there is no hurry it's just that your story is too seductive and tempting that people loose patience and become eager to read another update. So please don't mind. Take care
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You are a superb writer. This story is really a masterpiece. How you describe the emotions, love, respect is fabulous. You are as great for adult literature as Shakespeare for english literature, as Ghalib for Urdu poetry or as Don Bradman for cricket.
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(09-02-2025, 06:22 AM)pinkbaby Wrote: Kaisa romantic scene bhai???


























BTW yeh koi comment nahi hota ky waiting for next update.






















Jee koshish kron ga usko bhi start krny ki isky baad





















Bhai update likhny ka time bhi to dya krain na

Aisa nahi hota ky koi bhi writer siraf yehi kaam kr raha hota hai ya usny kahin sy copy paste krna hoti hai story.


Stay connected update bhi mil jaay ga.


















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Acha jee

























Thanks dear ? 























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Jee busy bhi to ho hi sakta hai na writer.















Pinkbaby

Bhai one thing is for sure k pinkbaby kabhi cut copy paste nahi karte hain. One of the original and most genuine writer.
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(09-02-2025, 09:06 AM)oscarpistorious Wrote: Bro we Fully understand that it takes time for a writer to write a quality content and besides that writer has other important day today jobs as well so take your time there is no hurry it's just that your story is too seductive and tempting that people loose patience and become eager to read another update. So please don't mind. Take care









Thanks dear for your support and understanding. 

Love you dear.
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(09-02-2025, 02:15 PM)Attitude Breaker Wrote: Bhai one thing is for sure k pinkbaby kabhi cut copy paste nahi karte hain. One of the original and most genuine writer.





Thanks brother for your love ❤️
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Gajab likthe ho bhai update kab aayega next
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Pinkbaby Bhai 

Story bahot hi lajawab ja rhi h

Bs aise hi ap update dete raho or story Apne hisab se write krte raho

Suggestions pr zada dhyan na do

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(09-02-2025, 06:22 AM)pinkbaby Wrote: Kaisa romantic scene bhai???


























BTW yeh koi comment nahi hota ky waiting for next update.






















Jee koshish kron ga usko bhi start krny ki isky baad





















Bhai update likhny ka time bhi to dya krain na

Aisa nahi hota ky koi bhi writer siraf yehi kaam kr raha hota hai ya usny kahin sy copy paste krna hoti hai story.


Stay connected update bhi mil jaay ga.


















Thanks 



















Thanks 


















Acha jee

























Thanks dear ? 























Thanks 



















Thanks 


















Okay



















Jee busy bhi to ho hi sakta hai na writer.











Bhai big fan love you your all story Shazia unique major sahb ajab si pyas wadya ab Vinod k Sath romance start karo or Koshish karo Sath agar pics add ho jye to lajawab baqi love you always




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Next Day Saturday tha ........... weekend ......... Maheen ki subah 10 bajay aankh khuli ........... lakin normal way sy nahi .......... balky takleef sy ............. woh krahti hoi uthi .......... usky pait main shadeed dard ho raha tha .......... severe cramps ........... Maheen ny apny paon fold kye aor apny jisam ko fold krny lagi ........ apny pait ko dabaati hoi .............. uuuuuuuuuuuffffffffffffff ................. aaaaaahhhhhhhhhh .............. woh apny pait ko pakar ky apni awaz ko muffle krti hoi takleef sy cheekhi .............. ohhhh my god ........... mujhy yaad hi nahi tha iska to .......... uuffff ............ phir sy wohi taleef ............. Maheen khud sy boli ........ woh jaanti thi is takleef ko ........... yeh usky periods ki pain thi ......... jee ...... usky periods start ho rahy thy ...... aor ab do din ky ly us ko is shadeed takleef ko bardasht krna tha ...........

Maheen bari mushkil sy uthi aor pait ko pakar kr room sy bahar nikli ..... aor ahista ahista chalti hoi washroom mai gye ........ apny shorts ko neechy kya aor commod py beth gye ...... abhi bleeding start nahi hoi thi ......... mgar pains start ho chuki hoi thin ....... washroom sy farigh ho kr Maheen bahar nikli ...... to achanak sy hi dard ki shiddat mai izafa ho gya ...... Maheen apny room mai bhi nahi jaa saki aor wahin lounge mai hi sofay pr beth gye ........ apn pait ko pakar ky ...... apny pait py haath rakhy woh apny ghutno py jhuki hoi thi .......... takleef ky maary uski aankhon sy aansoo nikal rahy thy ........

Maheen abhi lounge main hi bethi hoi thi ky Vinod apny bedroom sy nikla ......... washroom jaany ky ly ....... ky uski nazar sofay pr bethi hoi Maheen pr pari ....... woh casually wahin ruk gya aor bola .......

Vinod ...... Maheen ...... kya hoa ...

Maheen ny apna sir uthaya ........ kuch nahi .....

Vinod ny uska chehra dekha to ghabraa gya ....... aor jaldi sy uski taraf aaya ......... Maheen dobara sy apny pait py haath rakhy hoy apny ghutno py jhuk gye .......... Vinod jaldi sy aagy aaya aor usky qareeb hi sofay pr beth gya ....... apna haath usny Maheen ki kamar py rakha ......

Vinod ...... are you okay Maheen ....... kya ho raha hai ..... btaao mujhy ......... tum theek nahi lag rahi ........

Vinod ka haath Maheen ki kamar pr tha .... aor woh ahista ahista uski kamar ko sahlaa raha tha ...... usy saaf feel ho raha tha ky Maheen ny neechy sy bra nahi pehni hoi ......... kyon ky usy Maheen ki bra ky straps feel nahi ho rahy thy ............. Vinod ky sakht hathon ko apny jisam pr Maheen bhi feel kr paa rahi thi .... usy ajeeb sa ahsaas ho raha tha ........... mgar us waqt woh jis takleef main thi uski wajah sy woh us ahsaas ko enjoy nahi kr paa rahi thi .......

Vinod ny aik haath Maheen ki kamar py rakha aor doosra usky kandhy pr rakh ky usy oper ko uthany laga ........ Maheen ny apna chehra uthaya to uski aankhon sy aansu nikal rahy thy .....

Vinod fikar mand ho gya ....... oh my god ...... Maheen tum to ro rahi ho ........... btaao please kya hoa hai ........

Maheen ny buhat hi kamzor si awaaz main kaha ..... aaahhhhhh ....... uuuuuuufffffffff.......... pait main dard hai ......

Vinod ny apna aik haath Maheen ki kamar py hi rakhy rahny dya aor doosra hath uski thigh py rakh dya ......... Maheen ky monh sy takleef ky bawjood bhi halki si siskaari nikal gye ...... jb Vinod ka haath Maheen ki nangi thigh py aaya .........

Vinod ...... aao doctor ky pass chalty hain ......

Maheen forn boli ........ nahi nahi ..... kahin bhi jaany ki zarurt nahi hai ........

Vinod uski thigh py haath rakhy hoy hi bola ....... to phir ... yeh dard ...... kaisy theek ho ga ...... kaisy pata chaly ga ky kyon ho raha hai .......

Maheen ny apni nazrain jhukain aor buhat hi dheery sy boli ........ Vinod ..... its my periods .......

Vinod chounk para ....... usy Maheen ki baat sun ky jaisy current sa laga ......... ohhh ..... I am so sorry ......... mujhy nahi pta tha .......... lakin phir bhi yeh pain kyon itna zyada ....

Maheen ny Vinod sy nazrain churaaty hoy hi ahista sy kaha ..... mery periods ky pahly do din aisy hi shiddat ka pain hota hai ky bardasht nahi hota .......

Vinod abhi bhi fikarmand tha ....... to phir ab kaisy theek ho ga .....

Maheen takleef ky saath bhi muskraai ..... usy Vinod ki fikarmandi ka ahsaas acha lag raha tha ........... ho jaay ga theek ....... kal tak ......

Vinod uski kamar ko sahlaaty hoy bola ..... lakin tum sy bardasht to ho nahi raha hai ........ Maheen ki chikni thigh ka ahsas bhi usy apny haath ky neechy ho raha tha ........

Maheen ny uski aankhon main dekha aor muskraai ..... kr lon gi bardasht ...... aap itny pareshan na ho .......... yeh routine hai mery ly .......

Vinod ...... hmmm theek hai ........ lakin Maheen i am here for you ... kisi bhi qisam ka koi bhi kaam ho to zarur btaa dena ...... chalo tumko room mai chor deta hon phir tumhary lye chaay bnaata hon .....

Maheen muskraa ky uthi .... bari mushkil sy ...... Vinod ny uski kamar main bazoo daal ky usy sahara dya ..... aor Vinod usy ahista ahista usky bedroom ki taraf ly jaany laga ......... Vinod ka haath Maheen ky bazoo ky neechy tha ...... aor usy Maheen ky bra less boob ki side ka ahsaas ho raha tha ....... aor Maheen ki bhi .... jis sy uski apni aankhain bhi band ho rahi thin ...........

Vinod Maheen ko ly kr usky bedroom main aagya ........ aor bed ky qareeb pohnchy to Vinod ki nazar uski nangi ho rahi thighs pr pari ..... aor woh chilla utha .....

Vinod ....... oh god ....... Maheen ......... yeh dekho .......... Maheen ki thighs pr usky periods ka thora sa blood aik patlee si lakeer ki shakal main behta hoa neechy aa raha tha ........ Maheen ny bhi neechy ko dekha ... aor woh bhi sharam sy paani paani ho gye ............ usy samjh nahi aa rahi thi ky woh kya kry ........

Maheen sharmindah hoti hoi boli ........ Vinod I am sorry ....... aap jaao main dekh leti hon ......

Vinod ...... nahi Maheen please ........

Vinod ny jaldi sy waha pary hoa tissue paper bos aor aik dustbin Maheen ky qareeb bed ky nazdeek rakh di ...... aor bola ..... main chaay bnaa kr laata hon .........

yeh bol kr Vinod Maheen ky room sy nikal gya .......... aor uska darwaza band kr gya .......... Maheen ko buhat hi sharam aa rahi thi ....... usny tissue box sy tissue papers lye aor apni thigh py behti hoi blood ki lakeer ko saaf kya ...... aor tissue paper dustbin main daal dya ...... phir Maheen ny apny shorts ko neechy sirkaya ....... aor apni choot pr sy blood ko saaf krny lagi ....... jo halka halka sa waha sy nikal raha tha ............ Mahee ny achy sy apny periods ky blood ko saaf kya aor pads rakhny ka socha ............ tabhi usy yaad aaya ky usky pass to pads hai hi nahin ........ usky to jaisy phir sy hosh udd gy ............. woh pareshan ho gye ky ab woh kia kry gi ............... Maheen bed ki bjaay bed ky qareeb rakhi hoi aik chair py beth gye ............ apna sir pakar ky ...........

Itny main door knock hoa .......... Maheen ny awaaz di .......... ajaao Vinod ........

Vinod chaay ky 2 cup lye hoy Maheen ky bedroom main daakhil hoa ....... Maheen us sy nazrain nahi milaa paa rahi thi ....... Vinod ny usky qareeb aa ky chaay ka cup usko pakraya ........... Maheen ny usy thanks bola ......

Vinod .... yaha kyon beth gye ho ....... bed py laitna tha na ......

Maheen dheery sy boli ....... nahi .. woh ...... bed py nahi ......

Vinod ....... kyon kya hoa ........... ab kya problem hai ......
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Maheen ny chaay ka aik sip lya ..... aor apni nazrain jhukaa kr cup ky kinaaron pr apni ungli phairti hoi buhat hi dheemi awaz main boli .............. Vinod ....... woh ...... ppppp ....... pppaadsssss ........

Vinod chounka ........... what ............. you mean to say you don't have pads for your periods .......

Maheen ny sharmindah ho kar apni nazrain jhukaa lin ....... yaad nahi raha ........

Vinod ...... its okay ...... relax main abhi ly aata hon store sy ........ Vinod uth ky door ki taraf barha .........

Maheen ....... Vinod ruko ..... pahly chaay pee lo .......... phir jaana please .......

Vinod ny haan main sir hilaya ..... aor phir Maheen ky saamny beth kr chaay peeny laga ....... aor Maheen ki dard ky baary main poochny laga ........ Maheen ki raat ko utaari hoi bra aor panty bhi usky qareeb hi sofay pr pari hoi thi ............... chaay khatam kr ky Vinod utha aor bahar jaaty hoy usny apny qareeb hi sofay pr pari hoi Maheen ki bra aor panty bhi uthaai aor room sy bahar ly gya ........... Maheen usy nahi rok saki ............

Maheen kursi ki back sy take lgaay hoy subah sy ab tak hoi sub baton ko soch rahi thi ........... aor sharmindah ho rahi thi ky kaisy bina chahty hoy bhi woh Vinod ky saamny khulti jaa rahi hai ........ kaisy unky darmyan sub kuch openn hota jaa raha hai ........... aor kaisy unky darmyan sub kuch comfortable hota jaa raha hai ............ khud sy hi . bina kisi ki koi koshish ky ....... bina kisi ky kuch chay ..............

Kuch der ky baad Maheen ky room ka door phir sy knock hoa ........ Maheen ny Vinod ko andar aany ko bola ............ Vinod haath main pads ka packet lye hoy andar daakhil hoa ........... Vinod ky qareeb aa kr usny woh sanitary pads ka packet Maheen ky qareeb rakh dya ........... aor bola ......

Vinod ....... panties kahan hain tumhari .......... btaao nikaal deta hon .......... usy pta tha ky Maheen ko pads rakhny ky ly panty chahy ho gi ......

Maheen ............ nahi please Vinod aap jaao main ly lon gi ........

Vinod ..... main ny kaha hai na btaa do .... tum sy hilaa to jaa nahi raha hai dard sy ............ woh Maheen ki cupbaord ki taraf jaaty hoy bola .....

Maheen ny sharmaty hoy ahista sy kaha .......... woh saamny draaz main ..........

Vinod ny jaa ky draz khola ..... usy draaz main Maheen ko panties aor bras rakhi hoi dikhin ......... Vinod ny apni marzi sy aik panty nikaali aor phir cupboard khol ky Maheen ka night suit niaal laya ...... aor usy Maheen ky qareeb bed py rakh dya ............

Vinod ........ Maheen aap change kr lo ........ main breakfast bnaata hon .......... yeh bol kr Vinod room sy jaany laga .........

Maheen ahsita sy boli ........... Vinod woh bra ............. please .....

Vinod ny draaz sy Maheen ki aik bra bhi nikaal ky Maheen ky pass rakh di .......... aor usky room sy nikal gya ..........

Maheen usy jaata hoa dekh rahi thi ....... ky is qisam ki situation main bhi woh kis qadar sharafat ka muzahira kr raha hai ..... aor bina kuch bhi ghalat harkat kye waha sy chala gya hai ........... Maheen ky dil main Vinod ki izzat aor bhi barh rahi thi ............ Maheen apni dil main soch rahi thi ........... kitna acha hai na yeh Vinod ........ main ny to apny ghar walon sy hamesha yahi suna tha ky kafir mard achy nahi hoty .......... ..zalim hoty hain ...... buray hoty hain ........ gandy hoty hain ....... mgar Vinod ny to yeh ghalat sabit kr dya hai ................. naa siraf in ki personality achi hoti hai balky behavior bhi acha hota hai ........... Maheen ko Rajiv ka bhi yaad aany laga ........ ky woh bhi kitna handsome aor good looking oar usky saath hi kitny achy mazaj ka mard hai ............... usy laga ky usky baap ny jo kuch bhi usko aaj tak Hiindduu mardon ky baary main btaya tha woh ghalat tha ........... woh Vinod sy dil sy mutaasir ho rahi thi ................ jaisy nadar hi andar usy Vinod acha lagny laga ho .............. jaisy Vinod ny uska dil jeet lya ho ............. aik kafir ny aik muuslimaa ka dil ..............

Maheen ny apny shorts aor shirt utaar ky apni bra aor panty pehni pad rakh ky .......... aor phir apna night trouser aor shirt pehan li ......... utaari hoi shorts py thora blood lga hoa tha ...... shirt aor shorts dono hi usny bed sy neechy rakh dye ...... farsh pr ..... aor bed py late gye ...........

Phir Vinod Maheen ky lye breakfast bhi usky room main hi ly aaya aor usy bed py hi dya .......... aor khud bahar jaany laga .......... Maheen ko acha nahi laga ........ woh boli ......

Maheen ........... Vinod ...... kya mery pass breakfast nahi kro gy ....... is it so bad ........ ???

Vinod Maheen ki baat ko samjh gya .......... aor jaldi sy bola ...... nahi aisi to koi baat nahi hai ............ main ny socha ky shayad tum comfortable nahi ho gi ........... main abhi laaya apna breakfast ......

phir Vinod bahar sy jaa ky apna breakfast bhi ly aaya aor Maheen ky pass hi bed py beth gya ooper charh ky .......... Maheen bhi usy dekh kr aik sharmeeli si muskrahat ky saath muskrany lagi ....... aor phir dono naashta krny lagy ......... Nashty ky baad Vinod Maheen ky ly aik rubber bottle main paani garam kr ky ly aaya ............. Maheen usy dekh kr muskraa di ............. bus bhi kro ab Vinod ............. woh boli ....... Vinod muskraya aor usy bottle dy kr usky room sy bahar jaany lga ...... uski nazar neechy farsh pr pary hoy Maheen ky shorts aor shirt py pari ........ Vinod ny aagy barh ky unko uthaa lya ............

Maheen ko buhat sharam aai ...... ky Vinod ko usky gandy kapray uthaany par rahy hain ........ woh forn boli ..

Maheen ...... Vinod please aap isy rahny do ...... main wash kr lon gi ......... inko alag sy wash krna hai na ....

Vinod muskraya ....... its okay Maheen ...... tum bus rest kro ...... yeh bol ky Vinod room sy chala gya ............ aor Maheen usy jaata hoa dekhti rahi .........

Saara din Vinod baar baar aa ky uski tabiat ka poochta raha ...... aor usky khaany peenay ka khayal rakhta raha ........... baar baar usy paani garam kr ky dya ............ raat tak Maheen ki tabiat kaafi behtar thi ............ usy khud bhi is baat ka ahsaas tha ky Vinod ky itni zyada care krny ki wajah sy uski yeh period pain jaldi behtar ho gye hai .......... jo pahly do din tak usy takleef main rakhti thi ........... in 2 dinno main hi unky beech cheezain aor bhi open ho chuki hoi thin ......... ky Maheen apny periods tak ki detail ko usky saath discuss kr rahi thi .......... bina kisi jhijhak ky ............

Vinod ......... tum ny kabhi kisi lady doctor ko check up nahi krwaya kya is pain ky ly .......

Maheen ......... krwaya tha ....... ammi ky saath gye thi kai baar ......

Vinod ..... phir ..

Maheen .... kucn bhi nahi ......... unho ny kaha ky yeh naturally kuch ladies main hota hai ........ isky ly zyada medicine leny ki zarurt nahi hai ...... bus thora sa bardasht kro aor heating kr lya kro ..........

Vinod ....... hmmm .......... lakin takleef to buhat hoti ho gi na shuru ky dino main ......

Maheen dheery sy muskraai ....... haan ......... woh to tum ny dekh hi lya hai ......... and thanks to you Vinod mera itna khayal rakhny ka ........... tum such mai buhat achy ho ........

Vinod bhi muskraa dya ...........

Shaam mai Vinod aor Maheen dono lounge mai bethy hoy tv dekh rahy thy aor batain kr rahy thy ......... ky Priya ki call aagye ...... Maheen ny muskraa kr Vinod ki taraf dekha aor usy call attend krny ko bol dya ........

Vinod us sy kuch fasly py hi alag sofay py betha Priya ky sath video call krny laga ....... Maheen ko bhi Priya ki awaz sunaai dy rahi thi ....... idhar udha rki baton ky baad Priya boli ..

Priya ....... Vinod yaad hai tumhain next Saturday ko tumhara birthday hai ........

Vinod ......... tumko yaad hai Priya ........ ???

Vinod ny Maheen ki taraf dekha to woh bhi muskraa kr Vinod ko dekh rahi thi aor usy aisa ishara kya jaisy pooch rahi ho ky kya yeh such hai .........

Vinod ny ahista sy haan main sir hilaa dya ........... thori der baat krny ky baad call end ho gye .........

Maheen ...... Vinod tum ny btaya hi nahi ky tumhara birthday aa raha hai ..........

Vinod ..... ary yaar is main btaany wali konsi baat hai ......... konsa hum ny celebrate krna hai ........

Maheen excited hoti hoi ........ kyon nahi krna bhala ....... zarur krain gy ............

Vinod ....... ary choro yaar ...... kya zarurt hai .....

mgar Maheen ny uski baat ko ignore kr dya ........ aor dil main soch lya ky woh Vinod ky ly birthday party zarur arrange kry gi ......... uski khushi thi aor uska dil chah raha tha ky woh bhi Vinod ky ly kuch kry ..... uski khushi ki khaatir ........
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Nice updates
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Zabardast update..iss incident sa dono aur close ho gai h...kya vinod ka b'day mai dono pass aa gaiga
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Superb update bro
waiting for next update eagerly
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Super....mast...mind blowing... update more
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