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(04-02-2025, 11:28 PM)puneet852365 Wrote: Nice update.
Apko ek part un veshyaon ka bhi hona chahiye jinko zaleel kar sana ne unka dhanda band ker diya tha.
Sam use jabardasti karke use wahan bheje aur waha wo randiya use zaleel kare aur usse dhanda karwaye.
Thanks Puneet jee for your appreciation, and Yes woh scene bilkul hoga but thora saa story me aage jakar hai, so please wait.
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(05-02-2025, 03:08 AM)Bobby9034 Wrote: I don’t like humiliation/torture but I like your writing style, it’s very hot especially when describing how horny Sana becomes and how she loses control.
Those scenes remind me of Pinkbaby’s old stories which do have humiliation but also lot’s of sex.
The cinema part looked like it was going to be hot and dirty but nothing really happened, I understand as the boys are young but the security guard should have had an opportunity to fuck her it was strange how he was more worried about the floor being dirty.
Please add more sex scenes, the last update with Gopal was very hot. He got his revenge but he also satisfied his lust.
Thanks Bobby jee, but honestly speaking, There is no comparison between me and Pink Baby, he is a great writer and my inspiration to write my own story regarding humiliation and degration, so i am on focusing on it, Detailed sex scene wala kam Pink Baby par hi chortey haina, kyun k unse achw detail Sex scene koi nahi likh sakta, aur main to bilkul nahi
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(05-02-2025, 09:44 AM)hirarandi Wrote: Superb updates
Parh ker maza aa gaya. Pehle to yakin nahi hua k story Phir se start ho gai hai. 2 bar updates parhay. Thanks
Thanks Randi jee, Kafi dair kardi aap ne anay me
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Next update kab tak aayega sena g
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(05-02-2025, 12:46 PM)Jerry Gupta Wrote: Next update kab tak aayega sena g
Working on it Gupta jee.
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(05-02-2025, 12:22 PM)Sana Shah Wrote: Thanks Bobby jee, but honestly speaking, There is no comparison between me and Pink Baby, he is a great writer and my inspiration to write my own story regarding humiliation and degration, so i am on focusing on it, Detailed sex scene wala kam Pink Baby par hi chortey haina, kyun k unse achw detail Sex scene koi nahi likh sakta, aur main to bilkul nahi 
You’re too modest. The fact that legends like Hirarandi and pinkbaby commenting on your story should how talented you are.
I feel your writing has same intensity as Pinkbaby, the humiliation that was in Ajeeb si pyas also here.
Please please I request write more sex scenes involving Sara and other men and let her be enjoyed fully by all those men she has wronged. Put her in lockup and let the criminals use her. Servants, villagers, low labourers, all these people who she never respects should get justice.
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(06-02-2025, 12:02 AM)Bobby9034 Wrote: You’re too modest. The fact that legends like Hirarandi and pinkbaby commenting on your story should how talented you are.
I feel your writing has same intensity as Pinkbaby, the humiliation that was in Ajeeb si pyas also here.
Please please I request write more sex scenes involving Sara and other men and let her be enjoyed fully by all those men she has wronged. Put her in lockup and let the criminals use her. Servants, villagers, low labourers, all these people who she never respects should get justice.
Thank you soo much for your kind words but honestly i am nothing in front of Pink baby or other legend writers, and definitely i will try to include some of your suggestions in story, especially Locker scene.
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Nice story ... Exciting plot
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(07-02-2025, 01:23 AM)Wickedguy Wrote: Nice story ... Exciting plot
It is a great honor for me that you commented on my story and appreciated it. This means a lot to me, and I am truly grateful to you from the bottom of my heart. I hope you will continue to support me in the same way in the future.
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Waiting for next update Sana g
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Waiting for another hot and erotic update Sana ji
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