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Yeah the disappointment of no scene involving Ganga is there, but this is a good update. The flashback could have been a bit shorter though. In future, please reduce the size of or completely eliminate flashback scenarios.
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So srinu had a disturbed childhood and he is worse than ganga. holy shit. I thought srinu is a nice man and is a great husband and this is revenge drama. He fucked maid and prostitute, he will get AIDS and he will spread this to Ganga and both will die. This is something else.
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As said by many readers above,disappointed that Ganga's sexual adventures were not covered in this update but after reading the update,it mostly compensates that absence.
Nice read and a different perspective to the story.
Still a big suspense about Ganga's adventures,eagerly waiting for the next update.
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Srinu is not a cuck, but a bastard. This update assasinated the character of srinu. I just hate these type. Looks like you are writing the story based on the pictures you get.
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The flashback ate half of the update and was unnecessary. A small peek would have been great that Srinu is not as pious as he looks but but it kinda got stretched.
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I think focus should mainly be on Ganga as she is the central character of this story and all other supporting characters should essentially take her story forward. Right now the story is in its mid way , opening up new branches will coagulate the story which will make it impossible for KK to make it streamline. As they say, don't overpopulated your story with characters that they pull the plot down.
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This update was very good. I personally liked the raw sex of swati and licking the piss filled pussy. I have a thing for maids. Unlike the others I have no problem including other characters in story if they have a purpose and have a sexy scene. Looking for more details from swati.
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You want to prove Srinu can fuck, Is it the reason why you involved this...
Am I right...
All pics and videos posted by me are copied from g**gle only
Please inform me to remove if you don't like them
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The author took the wind out of Srinu's sails by including the sex act with Swati.
As a result, Srinu lost his moral high ground and the character he had built up during his marriage was darkened.
He set out to investigate his beloved wife's infidelity - morally strengthened - to uncover her motives and the extent of it.
... And today he stands exactly where he would never stand, namely - where his wife Ganga stands - as an adulteress.
He himself has become a cheat ...
Now I am curious to see how he will deal with this and what strategy he will adopt.
Ciao
Lollobionda
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this story I layered like an onion
Feel free to critique
Leave a like, rate and comment it gives writter the kick same as you get by reading the story.
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