Thriller THE VILLAGE IS NO PLACE FOR GIRLS by desidesires - Continuation by me

[tharkibudda]

I love your writing style. People might be ignorant of your story but please do continue

It's disheartening that no-one commented or liked for a long time ... I had drafted 2 mote sets but due to lack of support i abandoned it

[rombyzomby]

It requires a little patience to get the support.

Please post your thoughts. people will come flocking with the support for good ideas.

[tharkibudda]

Meanwhile, back at the abandoned farmhouse, Pratap watches through a crack in the door as Birju and Garima engage in passionate lovemaking on the bed. He can't believe what he's seeing; it's like a scene straight out of a porn movie. He feels a mixture of awe and envy as he watches them, wishing he could be a part of it himself. But deep down, he knows that this moment is special, something he'll never forget.


Garima tenses up as she feels Birju's hardness pressing against her opening. She gasps in pain as he slowly pushes inside, stretching her in ways she never thought possible. Her body protests the intrusion, but she can't help the wave of pain that washes over her as he begins to thrust rhythmically. She bites down on her lip, trying to stifle her cries, but they escape her nonetheless.

Birju, oblivious to her discomfort, continues his relentless pace, lost in the pleasure of claiming her virginity. He growls with each thrust, his muscles straining against his skin as he takes her roughly. He reaches around, roughly gripping her breast, pinching her nipple until it's hard and aching. She arches her back, helpless under his touch.

Garima closes her eyes, trying to block out the pain and focus on the sensations that are beginning to stir deep within her. She feels a strange mixture of revulsion and desire as Birju's rough treatment ignites a fire inside her.Birju picks up the pace, his thrusts becoming more forceful and less controlled. He growls in satisfaction as he feels her body begin to respond to his brutality. His movements become more animalistic, his focus solely on his own pleasure. He doesn't care about the tears streaming down Garima's face, or the way she tries to push him off, her protests muffled by the sheets.

Garima's body begins to tense, her muscles tightening around Birju's thrusts. She lets out a gasp, and her eyes roll back in her head. He feels her walls begin to pulse around him, and with a groan, he releases himself deep inside her. Her body shudders violently as she comes, her first orgasm shattering the last remnants of her innocence.

Pratap watches, transfixed, as Garima's face contorts in a mix of pain and pleasure. He's never seen anyone look so beautiful in the throes of passion. He feels a pang of jealousy deep in his gut, wishing it were him who had brought her to this moment.Birju, oblivious to the voyeur in the corner, continues to pound into Garima, his breath coming in ragged gasps. He feels her body quiver beneath him, her walls clenching around him as she experiences a second orgasm. Her cries of pleasure mingle with the sounds of their rough, animalistic lovemaking, and he can't help but feel a surge of pride and power course through him.

Garima's body arches off the bed, her back bowed in a graceful curve as she reaches her peak once more. She can feel every inch of Birju inside her, and it feels so good. Her nails scbang down his back, leaving trails of blood and skin, and she bites down on her lip, tasting the metallic tang of blood as she does so.

Their lovemaking continues, unabated, as if they are two animals driven by some primal instinct. Garima wraps her legs around Birju's waist, pulling him deeper inside her with each thrust, feeling the tension building within her once more. She can't believe how good this feels, how right it feels to be with him like this. She gasps as he fingers her roughly, forcing her over the edge yet again, her body shuddering with the force of her orgasm.

[tharkibudda]

PLEASE REVIEW AND PROVIDE SUGGESTIONS. MY IDEA IS TO MAKE IT A BIT DARK ENDING BECAUSE OF THE TITLE AND WHAT THE ORIGINAL AUTHOR WROTE

but your suggestions are welcome

[doctor101]

Tharkibuddha this is great start. You are very good in erotic narration. Don't rush erotic moments. Ideas plots asper your request:
1. Pratap is next immediately blackmailing relunctant episode. This is golden opportunity. But he Deleted her video after sex. So Garima's izzat in society intact for her family. Preferable.
1A. And Garima's multipartners explorer - encounter. But keep it mind don't loose Garima's innocence and relunctance. Don't make her acting like a whore. Make her reluctant sexual journey deep inside enjoying new explorer.
2. Bridegroom
3. Gauri's Father
4. Hotel Boy who returns from assignment.
5. Old Srrvants of Gauri in Reception.
6. Gauri's Encounter - Suhagraat with Father in Law and Brother in Law, Dadaji in law when Bridegroom fainted due to heavy drunk.
Please update regularly. You atleast tried and started sexual journey. Which was incomplete in first virsion on xossipy