Adultery The Facilitator

[Saikarthik]

Superb update

[DeanWinchester00007]

Man , you done it again . Each chapter is so polished , Greatly written. How do you do it ? Every chapter is just perfect . Kudos to writer .

Now , Man I really hope Priya gets her revenge now , Please writer dont do U turn or change of heart , Let Priya to have her revenge . I like that Kunal's role is getting smaller which is good atleast we wont see him suffering and or turning into cuck for his wife. I think its good approach to have him in background .
Esha went too war , I dont think its right to blame Priya for her affair , Esha is not child , She is 33 years old women with kid works in i guess high position so she is not dumb she is responsible for her action . But also I am curious , why now ? Why Priya is taking her revenge now ? After so many years ? she could have strike earlier or later why now ? Is because of Aniket she thought this might be right time to taker revenge ? Or she was waiting for right now ?

[Harry Jordan]

I believe the two main characters in this story are Esha and Priya , while Priya is the title character of "The Facilitator" , Esha I believe is the main lead of the story. We are introduced to Esha first and majority times only her part of the story is explored while Kunal is just an obligatory character since there is still a lot of missing information about him like his job or where he works , only thing clear from the storyline standpoint about Kunal is that he is not exactly good looking and he is somewhat rich since his job has him going to USA and stuff.

I am tempted to believe that Aniket is the hero of the story since he was introduced through his perspective and we actually witness Esha and his first meeting. The narration kind of shows that they are the more important characters to the story since their dynamic and their interactions are detailed and explored further. And considering how Kunal's arc has taken a backseat and isn't much relevant to the story , I am tempted to believe that the final endgame of this story will most likely be Esha and Aniket becoming a couple after Priya's mind game and all the chaos subsides.

To some extent it is made clear that Aditya is also important to the story , so Esha's greatest sanity marker or her prime source of attachment will always be Aditya. Aditya I believe will eventually turn to a focal point in the story , somewhere down the line his role will be substantial to the character of Esha.

As for Priya , she is the titular character , but its still a balance in see-saw whether she is good or bad. And it makes sense because in Priya's mind she is conflicted about her relation towards Esha. A part of her wants to take revenge on her for ruining her career while another part has her painting herself as Esha's guardian angel , and that has resulted in a conflicted thought in Priya's mind because she doesn't know what she seeks with Esha.

Then there is Aniket , there is some good chunk of info on him and he is also showcased as a sane man. But the story also clearly shows he is madly in love with Esha. He is risking it all with her even after knowing she is someone else's wife to the point he wants to make her pregnant. Now is it only a fantasy for him or does he genuinly wants her in his life , only time will tell. But judging by how much this story has advanced , its safe to say that Aniket is the love interest character of Esha and he will be part of this major game of puppetry that Priya is playing with them.

As for Kunal , I now definitely believe that he is not at all important to the main part of the story. Kunal is always meant to be the collateral in this story. He is going to be the unexpected victim in this powerplay of Priya and to some extent even Priya is aware of it. However as it may , I have a strong sense that Kunal's story will only end in tragedy. I initially believed he was meant to be an important character to the story but judging by how much he was absent in the story and how less chapter is left for exploration , I believe he is far less than a side character to the story. His fate is sealed , either Esha and Aniket will unite and maybe Aditya will live with them resulting in Kunal getting slowly erased by the end of the story or have Kunal himself divorce Esha and Aniket and take Aditya with him thus painting him as a villain. Or else there might be some surprise or twists where Kunal suddenly dies in an accident or Priya's mindgame goes too much and Kunal commits suicide resulting in Priya loosing her grip in her game of puppetry.


One thing is for sure , the story is indeed interesting. There is some depth to certain characters especially Esha and Priya and this story is most likely more focussed on the tug of war between these women and how their lives will change in this game of control and chaos.

[clearlover]

✨ A Note to  Readers ✨
Thank you so much for all the comments and likes! It's been an absolute pleasure to read every single one. I truly appreciate you taking the time to engage with my story.
Here are a few thoughts I wanted to share:
I wholeheartedly welcome your critiques! It's fantastic to see how deeply some of you are immersed in the story, analyzing and appreciating every bits and pieces.
As mentioned, I've meticulously planned this story, and all the chapters have been drafted with careful consideration. While I appreciate your suggestions, I'm committed to following the path I've laid out.
I understand that many readers enjoy stories with explicit content and diverse sexual encounters. This story, however, takes a different approach. You could call it a "writer's bias," just as readers have their own preference.
Some of you have noticed the frequency of intimate scenes. Rest assured, each one serves a specific purpose in driving the narrative forward. If they didn't, I wouldn't include them!
A wise author once said that no character in the Mahabharata is purely black or white; it's all a matter of interpretation. I've embraced this philosophy in my own writing. Feel free to interpret the characters and their actions through your own lens.
Lastly, if Kunal will turn out to be a "Cuckold", well that depends on his destiny. It he has to, then he will be.

Note:Expect next update, sometime next week. 
Happy reading!

[Harry Jordan]

✨ A Note to  Readers ✨
Thank you so much for all the comments and likes! It's been an absolute pleasure to read every single one. I truly appreciate you taking the time to engage with my story.
Here are a few thoughts I wanted to share:
I wholeheartedly welcome your critiques! It's fantastic to see how deeply some of you are immersed in the story, analyzing and appreciating every bits and pieces.
As mentioned, I've meticulously planned this story, and all the chapters have been drafted with careful consideration. While I appreciate your suggestions, I'm committed to following the path I've laid out.
I understand that many readers enjoy stories with explicit content and diverse sexual encounters. This story, however, takes a different approach. You could call it a "writer's bias," just as readers have their own preference.
Some of you have noticed the frequency of intimate scenes. Rest assured, each one serves a specific purpose in driving the narrative forward. If they didn't, I wouldn't include them!
A wise author once said that no character in the Mahabharata is purely black or white; it's all a matter of interpretation. I've embraced this philosophy in my own writing. Feel free to interpret the characters and their actions through your own lens.
Lastly, if Kunal will turn out to be a "Cuckold", well that depends on his destiny. It he has to, then he will be.

Note:Expect next update, sometime next week. 
Happy reading!

I applaud your work clearlover.

And I wholeheartedly agree with your inspiration regarding "Mahabharata" , its easy to write good characters and bad. The tough ones are always grey because there we get to explore each emotions and characteristic and conflict the reader to have a tough time deciding who is good or bad. 
And I only have my personal issue of opinion regarding "Cuckold" here simply because this site is basically overstuffed with that kind of stories. I love your story approach and the minimal literary display which shows each word in your narration holding weight. With few words , you tell a whole lot with this story.
Take as much time as you want , you are also one of the reason I myself started to do my own attempt at story writing as well. So I can understand the struggle.

All The Best For Your Work.

Harry Jordan

[Kaedukettavan]

The destiny of kunal is already written. Esha wants to eat the cake and have it too. So, she and Aniket will definitely make kunal as cuckold and Esha will carry Aniket child in her womb without caring about kunal. She will fuck with Aniket in the marital bed while kunal will prepare food for her and Aniket. Kunal will do the babysitting and wash the panties of his wife and her lover and dry clean the stains of the bed sheets. Esha will call kunal after the fuck and ask him to lick and clean the flowing pussy. Aniket will humiliate him to get naked and ask him to shake his tiny dick which Esha will also laugh at. Esha understood kunal is a cuck within when he asked her to fuck Aniket in front of him. The shameless bugger will continue to live with Esha and be father of Aniket child as he knows that if he marry any woman divorcing Esha, his fate will be the same with that woman too.

[Harry Jordan]

The destiny of kunal is already written. Esha wants to eat the cake and have it too. So, she and Aniket will definitely make kunal as cuckold and Esha will carry Aniket child in her womb without caring about kunal. She will fuck with Aniket in the marital bed while kunal will prepare food for her and Aniket. Kunal will do the babysitting and wash the panties of his wife and her lover and dry clean the stains of the bed sheets.  Esha will call kunal after the fuck and ask him to lick and clean the flowing pussy. Aniket will humiliate him to get naked and ask him to shake his tiny dick which Esha will also laugh at. Esha understood kunal is a cuck within when he asked her to fuck Aniket in front of him. The shameless bugger will continue to live with Esha and be father of Aniket child as he knows that if he marry any woman divorcing Esha, his fate will be the same with that woman too.

Ugghh.....that is by far the worse storyline I have ever read....and I read stories in Lush Stories site as well 

[Kaedukettavan]

Ugghh.....that is by far the worse storyline I have ever read....and I read stories in Lush Stories site as well 

Certain truth are bitter to accept. But this is the world of survival of fittest. 

[drillhot]

Make kunal as cuckold as he only deserves it. Let esha give a live show to him with Aniket in the marital bed which he asked for. Let aniket fuck esha mercilessly and show what she is yearning for and what a real man will do for a woman.
Let kunal see how his wife has turned into a cock hungry bitch and how much he has kept her unsatisfied in these 7 years of marriage. He should at least know his mistake of being a wimp husband. He has already agreed partially to it by presenting a dildo. Let him see what a real cock is and how his tiny lulli in front of it.
If he loved esha truly, he should give her divorce and move out of her life and let her marry aniket as he is the right person for her in every way. Already esha is pissed off with him and told she is ok for any decision he takes. she will accept the divorce without any second thought as she knows that aniket will not let her down like kunal and aniket will definitely marry her.

[Harry Jordan]

Certain truth are bitter to accept. But this is the world of survival of fittest. 

Yes , the world of humiliation. However I will not be interested in this story if Kunal turns cuckold because I had enough with wimp idiots in stories. A storyline only works when the character has heart.  When there isn't, it's only meaning will turn into a jerk off fantasy for cuck lovers.

[clearlover]

Hi guys, I read one of the comments, where someone mentioned about error in part A, about Aditya going to college . Well seems like the website is converting "Intended word" to college for some strange reason(May be as per characters need to be above 18). When I edit it, I see "Intended word" but when I post, it becomes "college". Strange, may be moderators can look into it.But, read accordingly.

Also it is funny in sense, when I write "OLD SCH00L" to represent, someone old styled, it converts into "OLD COLLEGE".

[drillhot]

Hi guys, I read one of the comments, where someone mentioned about error in part A, about Aditya going to college . Well seems like the website is converting "Intended word" to college for some strange reason(May be as per characters need to be above 18). When I edit it, I see "Intended word" but when I post, it becomes "college". Strange, may be moderators can look into it.But, read accordingly.

Also it is funny in sense, when I write "OLD SCH00L" to represent, someone old styled, it converts into "OLD COLLEGE".

 
In this forum rpae change to bang and Sch 00l changes to college as stories does not allow underage content