A wedding ceremony in village

[Logan555]

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Shabana vapas aa jaye to maza aa jaye... Uske bade doodh daba daba ke uski moti gaand maarne me jo maza hai vo aur kisi me nahi..

[Pandu1990]

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The way of your naration really marvelous. Your story is unique. The best top story on this site

[Amit Sir]

Awesome Amazing Story

[Logan555]

Shabana vapas aa jaye to maza aa jaye... Uske bade doodh daba daba ke uski moti gaand maarne me jo maza hai vo aur kisi me nahi..

Shabana ki atory ka 95% kaam ho chuka hai Lalu and company bhi haweli se ja chuke hai ab Shabana ki story me jada kuch bacha nahi hai.

[Logan555]

The way of your naration really marvelous. Your story is unique. The best top story on this site

Thanks bro mai to puri koshish karta hu story ka narration badiya se karu isi update ko maine teen baar likha kabhi tash ka khel khilwaya kabhi roleplay karwaya par wo dono mujhe khud padte hue achhe nahi lage to teesri baar me ye update likha. Par readers ka jada feedvack nahi mila. Its Disappointing as a writer.

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Thank u hai Mr Pandu

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Shukriya Amit jee

[Deepak.kapoor]

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I, Logan Jee, am a fan of your writing skills and have only started writing recently. I used to follow your story, but then there was a gap, so I lost interest. Can you update the Front index so readers can easily go to the right update?

[pujaa69]

That was really fucking awesome updates??
Love your work keep writing

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[Rohanx40]

Update please

[Logan555]

Garima apni teen saheliyo Shabana Neha aur Shobha ke paas haweli pahuch chuki thi. Veena yaha se kaafi door Venus puja ke liye nirdharit kiye gae bhawan me thi, Aarti ko Ajaystar Aghoriyo ke us gupt kabile me le gaya tha jaha waha ke guru Aarti aur Abhay ke ateet ke rehesyo ko jaanne ke liye ek vishesh saadhna kar rahe the. Aur baachi Neetu jisne kal raat apna Kaumarya andhkaar ke devta Hades ko Samarpit kara tha use ab hosh aa raha tha.
Aghori us waqt Vineeta aur Lakhan singh se phone par baat kar raha tha shayad unhe aaj raat ki puja ki aage ki vidhi bata raha tha. ( Is vartalaap ke baare me Vineeta ke aane wale updates me bataya jaega ). Vineeta Lakhan ko sab kuch samjhane ke baad Aghori Neetu se mukhatib hua.



Aghori : Uth gai aap kaafi der tak behosh rahi aap. Kaafi kathin prakriya se guzarna pada aapko par aapne kal raat ki vikat chunauti ka saamna bhi badi bahaduri se kiya aur mujhe is baat ki khushi hai ki aap jis uddeshya se yaha aai thi aapne wo hasil kar liya. Ab aapka mangetar puri tarah surakshit hai uske jeewan par aya sankat ab door ho chuka hai.
Neetu : Ye sab aapki wajah se hi sambhav ho paya hai. Agar aap na hote to ya sab kabhi mumkin nahi tha.
Aghori : Koi baat nahi mai uparwale se aap dono ke khushhaal bhavishya ki prarthna karunga. Ab aap tayaar ho jaiye.
Neetu: Tayar ho jaiye matlab kya abhi kuch aur bhi bacha hai.
Aghori (muskurate hue) : Are nahi nahi tayaar hone se mera matlab hai apni saheliyo ke paas jaane ke liye tayaar ho jaiye. Aaj apki saheli Vineeta aur Lakhan singh ki navgrah puja bhi sampann ho jaegi jiske baad unke pariwaar par laga shrap bhi hat jaega. Isi khushi me haweli me aaj utsav ka mahaul hai aise me aapko bhi unke sath hona chahiye. Hai ki nahi.
Neetu : Ha aap sahi keh rahe hai.
Aghori : To mai bahar apka intezaaar kar raha hu aap kuch achhe kapde pehenkar aa jae. Shaam ho rahi hai mai andhera hone se pehle aapko haweli chhod aaunga.

Itna keh kar Aghori kamre se bahar nikal gaya. Neetu apne bag se kapde nikal kar tayaar hone lagi. Usne ek gulaabi saree aur matching blouse pehna halka makeup bhi kara aakhir itne dino baad apni saheliyo ke paas ja rahi thi aise me kisi ko kuch shaq nahi ho isliye halka fulka makeup zaroori tha.



Tayaar hokar jab wo bahar aai aur Aghori ki nazar us par padi to manmohak roop saundarya dekh kar wo kuch pal ko bhool hi gaya ki wo kaun hai aur ektak Neetu ko niharta hi reh gaya. Neetu ki bengali badi badi aankhe, aankho me laga halka halka kajal, kamar tak latakte kaale ghane baal, aur uske saawle salone roop ko aur jada akarshak bana rahi uski gulabi saree. Aghori to puri tarah mantramugdh sa ho gaya tha. Jeewan me pehli baar Aghori kisi stree ki taraf itna akarshit hua tha. Par Aghori ne apne man ko ekagrachitt karke apni bhawnao ko kabu karte hue Neetu se chalne ke liye poocha.

Aghori : To hum chale
Neetu : Jee chalte hai

Neetu se sehmati milte hi Aghori haweli ko jaane wale raaste par chal pada aur uske peeche peeche Neetu bhi chal di. Aghori ke badan par kewal ek langot tha. Uska shesh badan puri tarah khula tha.



Aur peeche chalti Neetu bus unka ye gatheela badan niharte hue chali ja rahi thi. Neetu ke dimag pichle kuch dino me uske aur Aghori ke beech ghati saari ghatnae ek chalchitra ki tarah chal rahi thi. Kis tarah usne shuruaat me Aghori ko ek dhongi samjha tha uski tantrik kriyao ko mazak samjha tha. Par jab Aghori ne yaha baithe baithe Raj(Neetu ka mangetar) ke upar aae sankat ko uske saamne la diya. Tab use khud usi Aghori ki sharan me jana pada. Neetu un sari kamuk kriyao ke baare me bhi soch rahi thi jo usne pichhle kuchh dino me Aghori ke sath kari. Phir chahe wo Aghori se apni Yoni ki puja karwana ho ya Aghori ke sath kiye gae wo Kamuk Aasan. Un palo ko yaad karte hi Neetu ke tan badan me bechaini si ho jati. Kal raat to usne apna Kaumarya tak Aghori ko saup diya par us sambhog kriya ka use jada kuchh yaad hi nahi tha kyuki wo sab uske aur Hades ke beech hua, Aghori ka to kewal shareer tha.

Shayad ye uski aur Aghori ki aakhiri mulakaat hai. Iske baad dubara use jeewan me kabhi Aghori se milne ka mauka nahi milega. Aghori ka sudaul hatta shareer use barbas hi apni taraf akarshit kar raha tha. Wo yuhi yaha se nahi jaana chah rahi thi. Wo apne is antim kuchh palo ko apne puri zindagi ke liye yaadgaar bana dena chah rahi thi. Apne aur Aghori ke baare me aise vichaar ko sochne matra se uski yoni ne paani chhodna shuru kar diya tha. Par kya ye sahi hai uske man me ek ajeeb si duvidha chal rahi thi. Ab tak usne Aghori ke sath jo bhi kiya wo sirf aur sirf Raj ke liye kara par ab wo kyu Aghori ke baare me aise vichaar apne man me la rahi hai. Par ek aurat ka kunwarapan jo kewal uske pati ke liye hota hai wo to pehle hi wo Aghori ho samarpit kar chuki hai. Bhale hi Aghori ke shareer me koi aur tha par wo shareer to Aghori ka hi tha. Aur sabse bura ye hai apne jeewan ka wo pehla sambhog jo har aurat apni saari zindagi yaad rakhna chahti hai uske baare me Neetu ko kuch yaad hi nahi. Jis purush ne apne ling se uski Kuamarya ki deewar ko toda us purush se ab wo dubara kabhi nahi milegi.



Ye baat soch soch kar hi uska man bechain ho raha tha. Kya use Aghori se pyar ho gaya tha ya sirf ye ek shaaririk akarshan tha. Aghori tez kadmo se haweli ka raaste par chala ja raha tha. Neetu peeche se awaaz dekar use rokna chah rahi thi par uski awaaz to jaise muh tak aakar wapas laut ja rahi thi. Ek Aghori ke sath prem karna theek nahi hai par phir bhi prem par kisi ka koi bas bhi nahi hai. Wo tez kadmo se bhag kar Aghori se lipat jana chahti thi. Par wo to ek zombie ki tarah Aghori ke peeche peeche chali ja rahi thi. Chalo ek baar wo Aghori ke saamne apni dil ki bechaini zahir kar bhi deti hai to kya Aghori iske liye tayaar hoga. Wo pichhle kuchh dino me Aghori ke sath bitae gae palo ke adhaar par Aghori ke man ko padne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Wo jaise use dekhta tha jaise use chhuta tha kya uske man me mere liye zara sa bhi akarshan tha ya nahi.

Haweli ki doori kum aur kum hoti ja rahi thi use jo bhi faisla lena tha jaldi lena tha. Ya to wo chupchap apne aur Aghori ke sath ke in bache khuche palo ko yuhi unke peeche peeche chalte hue kaat de aur phir sari zindagi ye sochti rahe ki uska pehla sex kaisa raha hoga aur phir is baat ka afsos karti rahe ki kaash usne ek aakhiri baar Aghori ke sath apne aakhiri palo me apne pratham sambhog ko anubhav kar liya hota. Ya phir isi samay khud se aage bad kar prayaas kare Aghori ko ek antim milan ke liye.

Aap hi batae mujhe kya karna chahiye.

NEETU

[Logan555]

That was really fucking awesome updates??
Love your work keep writing

Thanks pujaa thanks for ur appreciation.. Definetly i try my best to keep on writing till the end of this story.

Story thodi slow ho sakti hai par aaegi zaroor.

[Logan555]

Update please

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Next update jald aaega.

[Logan555]

I, Logan Jee, am a fan of your writing skills and have only started writing recently. I used to follow your story, but then there was a gap, so I lost interest. Can you update the Front index so readers can easily go to the right update?

Thank u Deepak kapoor jee meri writing ko pasand karne ke liye. Shayad ye apka pehla comment hai. Mai bhi samay nikal kar apki story zaroor visit karunga. Ab gap ka kya hai ki kabhi mood is tarah ka nahi ho pata ki comment likh saku kabhi family vyastatato ke chalte samay nahi hota. Hmm front index ko bhi jald se jald update kar dunga.

[Curiousbull]

Garima apni teen saheliyo Shabana Neha aur Shobha ke paas haweli pahuch chuki thi. Veena yaha se kaafi door Venus puja ke liye nirdharit kiye gae bhawan me thi, Aarti ko Ajaystar Aghoriyo ke us gupt kabile me le gaya tha jaha waha ke guru Aarti aur Abhay ke ateet ke rehesyo ko jaanne ke liye ek vishesh saadhna kar rahe the. Aur baachi Neetu jisne kal raat apna Kaumarya andhkaar ke devta Hades ko Samarpit kara tha use ab hosh aa raha tha.
Aghori us waqt Vineeta aur Lakhan singh se phone par baat kar raha tha shayad unhe aaj raat ki puja ki aage ki vidhi bata raha tha. ( Is vartalaap ke baare me Vineeta ke aane wale updates me bataya jaega ). Vineeta Lakhan ko sab kuch samjhane ke baad Aghori Neetu se mukhatib hua.



Aghori : Uth gai aap kaafi der tak behosh rahi aap. Kaafi kathin prakriya se guzarna pada aapko par aapne kal raat ki vikat chunauti ka saamna bhi badi bahaduri se kiya aur mujhe is baat ki khushi hai ki aap jis uddeshya se yaha aai thi aapne wo hasil kar liya. Ab aapka mangetar puri tarah surakshit hai uske jeewan par aya sankat ab door ho chuka hai.
Neetu : Ye sab aapki wajah se hi sambhav ho paya hai. Agar aap na hote to ya sab kabhi mumkin nahi tha.
Aghori : Koi baat nahi mai uparwale se aap dono ke khushhaal bhavishya ki prarthna karunga. Ab aap tayaar ho jaiye.
Neetu: Tayar ho jaiye matlab kya abhi kuch aur bhi bacha hai.
Aghori (muskurate hue) : Are nahi nahi tayaar hone se mera matlab hai apni saheliyo ke paas jaane ke liye tayaar ho jaiye. Aaj apki saheli Vineeta aur Lakhan singh ki navgrah puja bhi sampann ho jaegi jiske baad unke pariwaar par laga shrap bhi hat jaega. Isi khushi me haweli me aaj utsav ka mahaul hai aise me aapko bhi unke sath hona chahiye. Hai ki nahi.
Neetu : Ha aap sahi keh rahe hai.
Aghori : To mai bahar apka intezaaar kar raha hu aap kuch achhe kapde pehenkar aa jae. Shaam ho rahi hai mai andhera hone se pehle aapko haweli chhod aaunga.

Itna keh kar Aghori kamre se bahar nikal gaya. Neetu apne bag se kapde nikal kar tayaar hone lagi. Usne ek gulaabi saree aur matching blouse pehna halka makeup bhi kara aakhir itne dino baad apni saheliyo ke paas ja rahi thi aise me kisi ko kuch shaq nahi ho isliye halka fulka makeup zaroori tha.



Tayaar hokar jab wo bahar aai aur Aghori ki nazar us par padi to manmohak roop saundarya dekh kar wo kuch pal ko bhool hi gaya ki wo kaun hai aur ektak Neetu ko niharta hi reh gaya. Neetu ki bengali badi badi aankhe, aankho me laga halka halka kajal, kamar tak latakte kaale ghane baal, aur uske saawle salone roop ko aur jada akarshak bana rahi uski gulabi saree. Aghori to puri tarah mantramugdh sa ho gaya tha. Jeewan me pehli baar Aghori kisi stree ki taraf itna akarshit hua tha. Par Aghori ne apne man ko ekagrachitt karke apni bhawnao ko kabu karte hue Neetu se chalne ke liye poocha.

Aghori : To hum chale
Neetu : Jee chalte hai

Neetu se sehmati milte hi Aghori haweli ko jaane wale raaste par chal pada aur uske peeche peeche Neetu bhi chal di. Aghori ke badan par kewal ek langot tha. Uska shesh badan puri tarah khula tha.



Aur peeche chalti Neetu bus unka ye gatheela badan niharte hue chali ja rahi thi. Neetu ke dimag pichle kuch dino me uske aur Aghori ke beech ghati saari ghatnae ek chalchitra ki tarah chal rahi thi. Kis tarah usne shuruaat me Aghori ko ek dhongi samjha tha uski tantrik kriyao ko mazak samjha tha. Par jab Aghori ne yaha baithe baithe Raj(Neetu ka mangetar) ke upar aae sankat ko uske saamne la diya. Tab use khud usi Aghori ki sharan me jana pada. Neetu un sari kamuk kriyao ke baare me bhi soch rahi thi jo usne pichhle kuchh dino me Aghori ke sath kari. Phir chahe wo Aghori se apni Yoni ki puja karwana ho ya Aghori ke sath kiye gae wo Kamuk Aasan. Un palo ko yaad karte hi Neetu ke tan badan me bechaini si ho jati. Kal raat to usne apna Kaumarya tak Aghori ko saup diya par us sambhog kriya ka use jada kuchh yaad hi nahi tha kyuki wo sab uske aur Hades ke beech hua, Aghori ka to kewal shareer tha.

Shayad ye uski aur Aghori ki aakhiri mulakaat hai. Iske baad dubara use jeewan me kabhi Aghori se milne ka mauka nahi milega. Aghori ka sudaul hatta shareer use barbas hi apni taraf akarshit kar raha tha. Wo yuhi yaha se nahi jaana chah rahi thi. Wo apne is antim kuchh palo ko apne puri zindagi ke liye yaadgaar bana dena chah rahi thi. Apne aur Aghori ke baare me aise vichaar ko sochne matra se uski yoni ne paani chhodna shuru kar diya tha. Par kya ye sahi hai uske man me ek ajeeb si duvidha chal rahi thi. Ab tak usne Aghori ke sath jo bhi kiya wo sirf aur sirf Raj ke liye kara par ab wo kyu Aghori ke baare me aise vichaar apne man me la rahi hai. Par ek aurat ka kunwarapan jo kewal uske pati ke liye hota hai wo to pehle hi wo Aghori ho samarpit kar chuki hai. Bhale hi Aghori ke shareer me koi aur tha par wo shareer to Aghori ka hi tha. Aur sabse bura ye hai apne jeewan ka wo pehla sambhog jo har aurat apni saari zindagi yaad rakhna chahti hai uske baare me Neetu ko kuch yaad hi nahi. Jis purush ne apne ling se uski Kuamarya ki deewar ko toda us purush se ab wo dubara kabhi nahi milegi.



Ye baat soch soch kar hi uska man bechain ho raha tha. Kya use Aghori se pyar ho gaya tha ya sirf ye ek shaaririk akarshan tha. Aghori tez kadmo se haweli ka raaste par chala ja raha tha. Neetu peeche se awaaz dekar use rokna chah rahi thi par uski awaaz to jaise muh tak aakar wapas laut ja rahi thi. Ek Aghori ke sath prem karna theek nahi hai par phir bhi prem par kisi ka koi bas bhi nahi hai. Wo tez kadmo se bhag kar Aghori se lipat jana chahti thi. Par wo to ek zombie ki tarah Aghori ke peeche peeche chali ja rahi thi. Chalo ek baar wo Aghori ke saamne apni dil ki bechaini zahir kar bhi deti hai to kya Aghori iske liye tayaar hoga. Wo pichhle kuchh dino me Aghori ke sath bitae gae palo ke adhaar par Aghori ke man ko padne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Wo jaise use dekhta tha jaise use chhuta tha kya uske man me mere liye zara sa bhi akarshan tha ya nahi.

Haweli ki doori kum aur kum hoti ja rahi thi use jo bhi faisla lena tha jaldi lena tha. Ya to wo chupchap apne aur Aghori ke sath ke in bache khuche palo ko yuhi unke peeche peeche chalte hue kaat de aur phir sari zindagi ye sochti rahe ki uska pehla sex kaisa raha hoga aur phir is baat ka afsos karti rahe ki kaash usne ek aakhiri baar Aghori ke sath apne aakhiri palo me apne pratham sambhog ko anubhav kar liya hota. Ya phir isi samay khud se aage bad kar prayaas kare Aghori ko ek antim milan ke liye.

Aap hi batae mujhe kya karna chahiye.

NEETU

Neetu ko apna pahala sambhog agar yaad nahi hai to dobara kar apni yaado ko sashakt karna chahiye.

[HBK♡♡]

Next update jald aaega.

Thank you very much shukriya dhanyawad

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