14-01-2025, 02:34 AM
Wonderful update and excellent build up
(14-01-2025, 12:26 AM)pinkbaby Wrote: Dear friends
Aapky comments is baat ky ly chahye ky Maheen aor Vinod ka tea encounter kaisa tha. Aap ko kaisa laga.
Aor boss ky saath pahli mulaqaat py Maheen ka reaction kaisa laga.
Actually kahani main seduction almost nill hai siraf natural day to day incidences hain jo characters ko qareeb laany kaa baais ban rahy hain.
Please keep in touch for more.
Thanks
Pinkbaby
(14-01-2025, 12:26 AM)pinkbaby Wrote: Dear friends
Aapky comments is baat ky ly chahye ky Maheen aor Vinod ka tea encounter kaisa tha. Aap ko kaisa laga.
Aor boss ky saath pahli mulaqaat py Maheen ka reaction kaisa laga.
Actually kahani main seduction almost nill hai siraf natural day to day incidences hain jo characters ko qareeb laany kaa baais ban rahy hain.
Please keep in touch for more.
Thanks
Pinkbaby
(14-01-2025, 10:39 AM)Attitude Breaker Wrote: Sir tea encounter was amazing or boss wala scene was also good but Maheen should not get attracted to every other male. Uske andar k pakiza aurat bas Vinod k liye hi pighalni chaiye, or apka airport wala scene was the most erotic when described Vinod and his father or Vinod k forehead pe white tilak and all was so arousing and maheen ka veil dress or logo ka dono ko observe karna was top notch.
(14-01-2025, 01:07 PM)Fuckstar Wrote: Hi pinkbaby,
Story abhi tak bohot achi chal rahi hai..... Maheen ab ye realise kar chuki hai ki wo dusri country me hai aur wo bohot halka hi sahi open ho rahi hai..... Jese ki Adam aur Vinod ke saamne bina veil ke night dress me aana and anjaane me subaah Vinod ko bta dena ki wo kapde pehen rahi hai..... I think Maheen ko thoda aur open Adam ke saath hona chahiye because wo ek hotel ka boy hai to hotel se chle jaane ke baad Maheen usse kabhi nahin Milne wali to yahi soch kar Maheen usse thoda open ho jese ki usse pta chle ki uske under garments Adam khud dhota hai ya fir Maheen ek din subah thoda late jaae nahane aur Adam uske kapde room me dene aae but kyuki Maheen bathroom me hai to use knock sunaai nahi diya aur Adam ko bhi late ho raha hai isliye wo master key se room ke andar aa jaata hai but andar aa ke jese hi mudta hai to Maheen bathroom se sirf towel me bahar aa jaati hai..... Adam ke saath Aap Maheen ko open krne ki shuruaat kar sakte ho.....
(14-01-2025, 05:37 PM)Rustydusty66 Wrote: Wah wah finally Pinkbaby the master of erotic stories is back with a bang ?
Welcome back buddy
What a great story and plot so far
Apna trade mark leggy pharne Wala scene zaror add kariyega
I would suggest Maheen ko sabse pehle Boss se seduce kerwaya jaye baqi tau u know best and you're the King