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(19-07-2024, 01:27 PM)madiha.agarwal Wrote: THANK YOU All those who supported me during this. I wanted to write something offbeat other than the usual small dicked Weak husband and bull who satisfies the wife.
Here,I want to explore how women from seemingly happy marriages end up to the world of infidelity just because of minor discomforts which thye could ahve resolved.
I've planned few more chapters, only thing is whether to include others and make it cliche gangbang plot or just explore the aftermath of cheating by a wife...
Do send me your feedback... I will start writing soon...
Hi Madiha,
Your story is going in a great way. I love this story very much .
I have a suggestion. Please don"t involve so many guys in kavya life and make it a intense relationship between Man iand kavya.
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As the memory of this trip, Kavya should get pregnant with Mani's child. Waiting to read more.
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Happy New Year to everyone!!! Hope this year doesnt suck as much as the previous!!
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Im really sorry...i was busy professionally and personally and I had to install this company firewall in mobile phone..Hope I can provide more updates quickly this year
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"When I saw your t-shirt getting drenched in sweat, I was just waiting for the moment to lick it off you," he said, huskily.
Kavya could only moan softly in response. Her whole body trembled when his tongue started moving in circles on her breasts. Kavya had sweaty sex before, but she never knew that someone actually loved licking the salty moisture off the skin. It was almost unbelievable that something as simple as licking could make her feel so good.
Mani pressed her against the tree trunk and held her hips tightly, his mouth busy licking and sucking on her juicy tits. Every time he licked her, she shuddered with pleasure and screamed in excitement. She could already feel herself dripping wet between her legs.
Finally, Mani stopped licking her boobs and lowered his head to lick her navel. She arched her back and moaned in delight as he flicked his tongue over her tiny hole. Kavya's entire body was on fire and every nerve ending in her body was on high alert. Mani slowly removed her belt and pulled down her jeans till they hit the ground. He buried his face in her panties and breathed in heavily, trying to fill his lungs with her scent.
She felt his warm breath against her pubic mound. Kavya tried to hold back, but the sensations became too intense for her. She grabbed his shoulders with both her hands and pushed her crotch firmly against his face. He moved and his lips brushed against her pussy lips. Mani didn't want to suck her panties again, so he ripped them off using his teeth. Now there was nothing separating him from her deliciously wet pussy.
She let go of his shoulder and slid backwards a few steps until her butt rested on the trunk of the tree. He placed his knees between her legs, spreading them wide apart. She took his head into her hands and pushed his face against her dripping pussy. He happily obliged by kissing her bottom lips tenderly.
Kavya gasped as she felt his warm breath hitting her slit. His tongue parted her lips and found its way into her vagina. He slowly circled around her clitoris while massaging her G-spot. As his tongue worked on her, Kavya's whole body began to tremble.
His tongue came out of her pussy and touched her clit. He slowly flicked his tongue across it several times. Kavya moaned loudly and her back arched at his touch. Then he went back to work, alternating between fucking her with his tongue and stroking her clit at the same time.
Kavya couldn't take anymore of his sensual assault on her sensitive pussy and suddenly let out a loud scream of ecstasy. She threw her head back against the tree trunk and cried out uncontrollably. "I am cumming! I am cumming!! Oh My God!!! I can't stand it!!!" she screamed out as she came all over Mani's face.
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why this story didn't have a regular update like other stories of you why and moreover you're update is small why please put big updates
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Why kavya is hungry towards mani cock as if her husband is impotent.
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Excellent bro.
She has no guilt or thoughts about her family. So, let her husband and child die in some accident, so that she gets more freedom.
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(09-01-2025, 12:00 AM)madiha.agarwal Wrote: Im really sorry...i was busy professionally and personally and I had to install this company firewall in mobile phone..Hope I can provide more updates quickly this year
When are the next parts coming @madiha.agarwal? Any timeline? Please put them up fast.
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(11-01-2025, 06:45 PM)drillhot Wrote: Excellent bro.
She has no guilt or thoughts about her family. So, let her husband and child die in some accident, so that she gets more freedom.
This would be something.
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Just don't make it a gangbang plot or include Priya in the equation
Try to make it so it's just Kavya and Mani exploring each other during the trip and having a mock wedding night while both are dressed to attend the wedding celebrations. And also try to go ahead with chapters after their return to their normal lives where they get sent together to another place for some work-related matter for a year. It can be a smaller town or a rural area, where they have to live together. They can pretend to be a couple and build their relationship while Kavya's husband ceases contact with her because she goes on a long work trip. This break, and pretending to be a couple, should allow Mani and Kavya to make love endlessly, and fall hard in love with each other. They should secretly get married and have an erotic wedding night, where Kavya gets pregnant. Their newlywed life with regular fucking would be extremely hot to read. Please try to end the story with the couple discovering their pregnancy and celebrating by making love, while Kavya's old husband receives a divorce notice from her at their old home.
As another user has mentioned above, you could also write along the lines of Kavya's family dying and mani being her sole support in every way till she falls in love with him and they build a family together.
Since this story has no year mentioned, you could make it to be sometime just before COVID. The rest of the gang go home after the wedding, but Kavya and Mani decide to stay another day or two in the same resort or in a town close by. And lockdown strikes, leaving them stranded in there for a year. They should use the year productively to make unending love, get pregnant and marry secretly.
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Superb update. Give big update next.
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