Misc. Erotica CHAMPA - EK AURAT YA KHILAUNA

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Yes Dolly....

Suchi is much too classy to sleep with her driver of all people.... Even if you treat what happened with Zeenat as aa one time lapse of judgment, she could never sleep with her driver....

You goofed up BL

[n976512]

I agree Just wish that Devyani manages to get through to Manu and clean up his shit filled brain....

Waiting

[n976512]

Dear BL....

Firstly, I'd like to apologise... I have been a strong critic... Yes I was a silent reader, but when I felt you were diverging from the plot, I started commenting... Sorry if my comments upset you... But Please understand that people like VKF, Dolly, myself and others are loyally following this story for what 14-15 years.... I don't think any story has run for so long and has such genuine followers...

I think you are a master storyteller and I really appreciate your patience and panache for keeping us interested in this story for so long ...

But please understand that as loyal followers, we also have much invested in this saga... It's absolute joy to read your updates....

But it's your story.... However we are so connected that we have views.... When you make some changes we think are wrong, we like to tell you ... Well atleast I do....

However it's your story ... Continue the way you want to.... If my comments offend you, kindly let me know....

If they do, I will go back to being the silent reader.... I really want you to continue to engage us with the continuation of the saga of Champa, Manu and the gang....

Lastly I will still say that you are diverging from the original plot... However it's your call...

Please do update

Regards

[Bhatakta Rahi]

Jahan tak mujhe yaad hai, Suchi ki gaand abhi tak kori hai. (Bharosa nahin, kahni chupke chupke gaand ka tanka bhi khulwa aayi ho.) Agar aisa hai to uski gaand ke udghatan ke liye mere dimag mein ek candidate hai, jo ki khud ek bahut bada gandu hai. Aur wo hai security officer commissioner. Jo khud gaand marwane ka shokeen hai. Majedar drishya hoga jab do gandu ek saath honge. Pahle Suchi uski gaand kisi dildo se maregi fir Suchi ki gaand ka udghatan hoga. Agar uske lund ne saath nahin diya to same dildo hi use kar sakte hain.

[Bhatakta Rahi]

Is story mein ab tak 3 character aise aaye hain jinke liye kaha gaya ki ye saakshaat kali maan ki beti ya sakshat bhagwati hai. Aur wo teenon hi apna bhosda khol kar janha mauka mile wahan chudwa rahi hai.

Aur jo Kanhaiya kuchh samay pahle tak Manu ya kisi aur dwara chod ke chhodi huyi bur ko bhi amrut samajhta tha, wo achanak bina kisi extra effort ya extra devine power mile hi dhunadhaar tareeke se prediction kar raha hai ki ye hoga wo hoga, tumhare beta hoa tumhare beti hogi. Aaj ke baad tum sirf mujh se hi chudwaogi blah blah blah.