30-12-2024, 12:51 PM
If a woman can love two men and fuck with two men, why cant she live with two men. Six months with krish and another six month with susheel desai. :)
(30-12-2024, 12:51 PM)Rangushki Wrote: If a woman can love two men and fuck with two men, why cant she live with two men. Six months with krish and another six month with susheel desai. :)
(29-12-2024, 09:40 PM)Harry Jordan Wrote: I am building a scenario that can help in improving Krish's character man. When Meera leaves him Krish's downfall and turmoil will begin. He will fall down in his own darkness and become an alcoholic and face severe depression. Krish's business will be affected due to him not coming for work most times and spending the life crying. Plus the departure of Meera from his life will completely reduce any sexual thoughts whatsoever in his mind. Eventually the cuckolding kink in him dies a cruel death as Krish succumbs to his loneliness and depression. But then Nidhi becomes the rescuer , he tries to console him and maybe Parvathy too joins her in motivating Krish. Krish later learns how much he matters to many people around him to survive , Nidhi is still young to seek other job opportunities. Reluctantly Krish returnes to work but with more determination to make a better life for himself. Eventually Maithrei helps him and she starts his Therapy. Krish gains his confidence back and much more. Eventually he becomes a better man.
And then we can take the story to two different endings.
1. Have Krish and Meera stay separated. Meera is with Desai and thats it , there is no more exploration of their story , making them the bad guys in Krish's life. Nidhi and Maithrei convinces Krish to move on and they end up setting him up with another woman , someone new and single this time. Krish likes this new woman's company and eventually they fall in love and start a family , but this time Krish has no thoughts of cucking or any other kink but only pure love and affection to his new love. He forgets Meera and Desai as a bad nightmare.
An epilogue can give us something short and sweet like Krish becomes a father with this new woman and starts a new family while Meera and Desai are referenced living their lives..
2. Reveal that Meera never actually boarded the plane. But Meera chooses to move away from Krish and Isolate herself and we will have the same turmoil and depression happening with Krish happen with Meera as well. Eventually it will be revealed that Maithrei and Nidhi were both working together to fix Krish and Meera and make them back to their normal self. And just like the first ending , but this time both Krish and Meera evolve and become better parts of themselves. Eventually Nidhi and Maitrei orchestrates a surprise reunion where Krish learns Meera truely loves him and Meera sees Krish has changed and his kinks are long dead. They reunite and Krish takes her to their bedroom and fucks her with so emotion and love that they both orgasm with the overwhelming their feelings for each other.
An epilogue for this can just show a time leap and show Krish and Meera being a happy couple with children and then maybe reveal a short but shock twist that Desai was actually was helping Maitrei and Nidhi in reuniting Krish and Meera as gratification towards them for making him a better person. He finds love and is having his own happy ending as well.
This is what my perspective looks like.
(30-12-2024, 05:18 PM)DeanWinchester00007 Wrote: Not gonna lie , I would consider this ending for me , If something bad happens to Krish . lol
This would be perfect summary of chapter 51 ( Final Chapter ) for me .
9/10 , 9 because you included Desai in the end . lol . you should rewrite the last chapter and create plot similar like this , so we can have an alternate good ending for for readers with weak heart . lol
(30-12-2024, 06:07 PM)సెక్సీచరణ్ Wrote: క్రిష్ పడిపోయినప్పుడు, మీరా స్నేహం పేరుతో దేశాయ్తో ఎంజాయ్ చేస్తోంది.
విమాన ప్రమాదం గురించి విన్నప్పుడు, ఆమె తన భర్తను కోల్పోయినట్లు ఆందోళన చెందింది,
ఆమె క్రిష్ కంటే దేశాయ్ను ఎంతగా ప్రేమిస్తుందో చూపిస్తుంది.
మీరా స్వతంత్రురాలు, అందమైనది, తెలివైనది, బాగా సంపాదించేది. కానీ, క్రిష్ ఒకరిపై ఎక్కువ ఆధారపడి ఉంటాడు.
ఒక పురుషుడు స్త్రీకి ఇవ్వగల భద్రత లేదా రక్షణను క్రిష్ ఎప్పుడూ ఇవ్వడు. ఎక్కువ సమయం, అతను మీరాను నిరుత్సాహపరుస్తాడు మరియు ఆమెపై స్వాధీనతను కలిగి ఉండడు. అది తనకు ఇస్తున్న స్వేచ్ఛ అని అతను భావిస్తాడు.
మీరాకి ఎలాంటి స్వేచ్ఛ అవసరం లేదు, ఆమె జీవితంలో ఇప్పటికే ఉంది. ఆమె తన మనిషిని గౌరవించాలని, ప్రేమించాలని మరియు మంచంపై ఆధిపత్యం చెలాయించాలని ఆమె కోరుకుంటుంది. క్రిష్ ఎప్పుడూ అలాంటి పాత్రలను ప్రదర్శించడు.
మీరా దేశాయ్లో ఆ పాత్రలను కనుగొన్నప్పుడు, ఆమె అతనిని కోల్పోయింది. ఆమె ఏ కారణం చేతనైనా అతన్ని తప్పించుకోదు లేదా విస్మరించదు. ఆమె అలా చేసినప్పుడల్లా, ఆమె తన హృదయానికి వ్యతిరేకమని ఆమెకు తెలుసు.
ఈ కారణాల వల్ల మరియు ఎక్కువ మంది క్రిష్ మీరాలో భాగం అయ్యే అర్హత లేదు. అతను ఆమెకు సునాయాసంగా విడాకులు ఇవ్వాలి మరియు మీరాకు మరింత ఆనందాన్ని ఇచ్చే జీవితాన్ని ఆమెకు ఇవ్వాలి.
(30-12-2024, 05:32 PM)DeanWinchester00007 Wrote: Man the demand of Meera to have Desai kid and finally kicking Pathetic cuck Krish out is so high . I am afraid that something like this gonna happens . My fear is not that Meera either agree on having desai kid or not its Krish definitely gonna accept this idea of Meera getting Pregnant by Desai . And also Meera does not love two men and does not fuck two men , She only fucks one man and also love him the other one is just her servant, slave, Puppet and who is gonna be Desai's dog and gonna live his life inside the cupboard of Meera's room . Yes the arrangement of six month living with krish in those months she can fuck others male in her society and the next 6 month breeding season is reserve for Desai . Meitrei and Nidhi can take care of desai in those six month . and Let Krish die finally Meera will be free and live happily with Desai .
(30-12-2024, 09:32 PM)RCF Wrote: So many comments and so much hate on Krish and love for Desai...Author has succeeded in making Desai a hero.
People do not care about morals any more...all they care about who is alpha and who can satisfy Meera..is that it? Pathetic...think beyond basic needs and outcomes.
If we go back to previous ending..you will see that Meera fucks Desai before Krish and agrees while love making for Desai's child. When Desai asks if she will have his child she says yes. Listening to this Krish heart broken leaves home and drives to Nidhi's house. Later he calls Meera next morning and he talks with Meera and he says he is ok with having Desai's child and he will become father to that child if it comes to that but he asks her not to leave him..such is the love of this man for Meera...Will Meera ever get any one who can love her like this? I doubt it. 1000 Desai's cannot love Meera like Krish loves her.
One reader wants Krish to have better life
One reader wants Krish to be come a pet dog for Desai
One reader wants Krish to die
One reader wants Krish to change and date other woman
Reality is Krish will not be able to survive with out Meera..its not possible. If it was he would have dated long time back when they got separated in part2. He doesn't have in him to move on from Meera. Ending if that happens will only mean Krish will die.
I hate Krish's character arc because his intelligence is demeaned and he doesn't take necessary precautions in logical way one husband does when his marriage is threatened not because he is not a good man..He is far better and one of the best person in this story morally. He tried to save Ananya from Desai despite knowing Desai wants Meera. He has that good heart to help people and see good in people. He deserves Meera or Meera deserves him at the end. Anyone who wants this alpha bullshit winning over Meera does not understand either Meera or Krish at all.
If I am proven wrong and Meera ends up with Desai..then I guess my whole perspective of this story is wrong. I will keep the old ending with me and discard this one.
Fortunately for me Author has given the ending I want already :)
~RCF
(30-12-2024, 06:07 PM)sexycharan Wrote: When krish fell down, meera was enjoying with Desai in the name of friendship.I dont see any reason to disagree with every point .
When she heard about flight accident, she was worried like she lost her husband
It shows how much she loved desai more than krish.
Meera is independent, beautiful, intelligent, well earning. But, krish is dependent more on someone.
Krish never give a safety or protection that a man can give a woman. Most of the time, he lets meera down and not possessive on her. He thinks that its a freedom that he is giving her.
Meera does not need any freedom, she already has in her life. She wants her man to respect, love, and dominate her in bed. Krish never exhibit such characters.
When meera found those characters in desai, she lost herself to him. she cannot avoid or ignore him for any reason. whenever she does that, she knows that she is against her heart.
For these reasons and more krish not deserves to be part of meera. He should gracefully divorce her and give her the life that give meera more happiness.
(30-12-2024, 05:50 PM)Harry Jordan Wrote: I do have something in mind. Though my story is more cinematic than grounded or realistic. Though its still on a planning phase. I am even considering to make an animated movie with it rather than write it with AI but I am still thinking about it.
(30-12-2024, 10:24 PM)Harry Jordan Wrote: I don't know man , even your argument seems to define that Krish is basically Meera's slave. Like there is no identity of him without Meera. And that is not exactly an ideal thing.
To be honest that is one of Krish's biggest problem. He never learned to say no to Meera , all his life , he only seem to Meera towards a point where he can fuel his fantasy. That needs to change , and for that to change , Krish has to grow. I understand your point about his love for Meera. And I truely believe that his love should never change , but his approach and mindset towards Meera must. Krish must evolve to a point where he will no longer push but lead Meera and match the steps with her to fullfill each other's love and desire. He must not be a person that is willing to reduce himself and become father to a child of Desai but rather a person who elevates himself and motivates Meera to understand his love and compassion and that they are unstoppable together.
If you're saying Krish should stay a Cuck , then this story has already lost its point. Whats the point with Desai going if Krish stays the cuck? Tomorrow someone else will come and this cycle will repeat.
For the right happy ending for Meera and Krish , his cuckold nature must die. And like I stated in previous post , I shared my head cannon on how it is possible with a temporary separation. Both Meera and Krish needs to develop as individuals and must have a fresh start together where there is no kinks or third person interjecting their lives. Love must triumph.
I am aware about your analysis and how Krish and Meera's whole life revolved around spicing their life but I believe they had enough spice for their lifetime. Its time for a family , and if that is their route then they must not be their old selves or else there is no true ending to the story. Because it doesn't matter Desai is gone or not , if Krish stays a cuck and their spicing sex life continues. There will be another Desai and their life will forever be relying on a third person to make them relevant.