Adultery KAMINA CHUDDAKAD - NEW VERSION

[The Pervert]

very good update bro. this was indeed awaited.
now what follows is more eagerly awaited bro. keep it coming my dear.

[shake chilli]

very good update  bro. this was indeed awaited.
now what follows is more eagerly awaited bro. keep it coming my dear.

Boss masti jindagi ki update please please please please please please please please please please please please

[Nomita Paul]

chamatkar aur mazadar update! clp);

[Vamp]

bahut hi mast aur majedaar update hai yaar
aap ne bahut acha tharika se likha is kahaani
bahut hi maja aya yaar
thanks very much

[Raghu]

What an exciting update... Sparking and thrilling story!!!

[rajkumar90]

tu bhi chal neeta ..

Ji didi

neeta kitchen se bahar aati hai…. tabhi aarti notice krti hai ke neeta thoda ladkhada kar chal rahi hai….neeta ko dekh ke aarti kahte hai

neeta

Ji didi

neeta tuje kya hua aisa kyun chal rahin hain tu??

neeta aarti ke mun se ye baat sunkr dar si jati hai.... ab wo kya bolti...tab wo nawaz ke taraf dekhane lagati hai. Mere puchane ke baad  neeta nawaz ke taraf kyon dekh rahi hai ye aarti ko samaj nahi aata ..

nawaz ne jara jor se neeta ki chudai ki thi aur bahut dino ke baad uski chudai ki thi iss wajah se neeta iss tarha chal rahi thi .... tab aarti kahte hai

Use kya dekh rahe hai .. mai kuch puch rahi hu tume ..

Aarti ko kya jawab du wo neeta ko samaj nahi aa raha tha..aur nawaz bhi use kuch kah nahi sakata tha  kyon ki aarti samne khadi thi.. tab kuch soch ke neeta kahte hai

Pao mai moch aayi hai .. us wajah se ..

achha.. chal tu mere saath.  

phir nawaz ko dekh ke use kahte hai ..

Tu bhi chal

Ji memsaab

fir aarti aur neeta dono bahar jane lagte hain .... undono ke peeche nawaz chal raha tha..piche se nawaz dono  ki gand ko ghurte hui ja raha tha 



aur bich bich men apna kala lauda bhi masal raha tha.. pant ke upar se …. aab nawaz ke  badsurt chehre par ek ghinoni smile aa jati hai….

aab wo teeno bahar aa chuke the .. bahar aane ke baad aarti undono ko kahte hai ..

 tum dono us tempo mai ke paude niche utarkar us side mai rakh lo 

ji didi 

Aisa neeta  kahti hai tab aarti ko uske nanand ka message aaya tha 

Kanchan - hi Bhabhi

message wajah se aarti ka undono pai dhyan nahi tha .. wo aapne nanad ko reply karte hui bina undono ki taraf dekhate hui kahte hai 

Haan karlo 

aarti - hi didi

aab wo dono paude utarane lage .. 

Tempo aa gaya kya bhabhi 

Haan aa gaye  hai 

achha hai 

Phir kuch der dono ke beech idhar udhar ki baat hui 

kuch paude bahut nazuk  hai .. unko dhire se utarane ko kaho bhabhi 

Ji kahte hu ..

tab aarti samne dekhate hai… tab waha neeta nahi thi .. akela nawaz paude ko jhat jhat nikal ke niche rakh Raha tha.. tab aarti jhat se uske paas gayi .. 

tum iss tarah se paude utarane lagoge to ye kharab ho jayenge 

Tab nawaz aarti ki taraf dekhate hui kahata hai 

Phir kaise utaru ine 

tab Aarti  use  dekhane lagi ..



use dekhate hui kahte hai .. 

kaise utaru ka kya matlab hai...kya naam hai tumara 

Nawaz 

Haan nawaz .. kaise utaru ka kya matlab hai

Matlab aise nahi utaru to kaise utaru 

Dhire se ..utaro .. ye kya koi bori hai kya jo tum itana fast nikal ke niche rakh rahe ho 

Ji memsaab galati ho gayi 

uski taraf dekh ke kahata hai .. wo dono abhi close khade the .. thoda anatar tha ..jada dur nahi ..

thik hai .. aab ine dhire se nikal ke ahisata se niche rakh lo 

Ji memsaab 

Kah ke ek paude ko bahut dhire se temo se nikal ke ahisata se niche rakh deta hai ..

Aisa kya 

Haan Aisa hi 

Thik hai aab aise hi nikalunga .. aap ko shikayat ka koi mauka nahi dunga 

Aab nawaz mithe mithi baate karne ki koshish karane laga 

aur nawaz dhyan rakhna 

Ji kya dhyan rakhu 

inmai ke kuch paude to bahut nazuk hai 

aap ke jaise 

ye bahut dhire se nawaz ne kaha tha par aarti ne ye suna tha .. tab wo ghur ke nawaz ko dekhane lagi .. 



kya kaha tumane 

Kuch to nahi memsaab 

Pakka 

Muje laga kuch to kaha tumane 

Tab nawaz mann mai kahata hai.. 

Sali ke kaan bahut tez lag rahe hai .. aage se dhyan dena parega ..

nahi nahi .. bhala mere kya mazal jo mai kuch kahu aap ko .. shethji se maar khani hai kya .. 

Aisa kah ke dara hua sa chehara kar deta hai ..wo dikhana chahata tha ki wo darr gaya hai .. ye dekh ke aarti ke chehare par smile aa jati hai..wo aapne aap ko kahte hai .. 

Aarti ye kuch nahi kahega tuje Aisa waisa ..lagata hai ye to papaji se bahu darata hai ..

Tab nawaz aur paude utarane laga ..

Ye neeta kaha marr gayi .. 

Wo shethji ne use bahar bheja hai 

Bahar kyon 

Muje kya pata .. aap shethji se puch lijiyega 

Thik hai thik hai .. mai puch lungi .. tum paude dhire se utar lo .. 

aur phir wo aapne pati aur sasur ke paas chali gayi aur unse baate karane lagi ..

[Kerry Watson]

Awesome writings with superb pictures.

[SweetSonali]

Bahut hi shandaar aur seducive writings.
Mast, mazedaar.

[Juggernaut]

Wooooow bhai woooow!!! bahut bahut bahut hi maja aya. Bahut majedaar lazatdaar update tha ye.ekdom lajawab aur bahut hi mast jhakaas tharika se likha aapne ,Buss fadu update hai ye.
waiting for next update!

[rajkumar90]

Wooooow bhai woooow!!! bahut bahut bahut hi maja aya. Bahut majedaar lazatdaar update tha ye.ekdom lajawab aur   bahut hi mast jhakaas tharika se likha aapne ,Buss fadu  update hai ye.
waiting for next update!

Thanks..

Aaj aa jayega

[rajkumar90]

aur phir wo aapne pati aur sasur ke paas chali gayi aur unse baate karane lagi .. aab aarti waha khadi thi aur shethji aur arvind ekdusare se baat kar rahe the .. waha khade hoke wo aapne mobile mai chat kar rahi thi ..

thodi der baad bahar se neeta  aati hai aur nawaz  ke paas jati hai ....aur wo dono baate karane lage ..

kaise hai tere tabiyat neeta 

kaise hogi mere tabiyat..itane jor se karane ki kya jarurat thi .. 

Maine kaha jor se kiya .. aur tumane ki kaha tha 

Maine kab kaha tha bhala ..

tumane hi kaha na jaldi jaldi karo 

tab bura se moo karke neeta kahte hai



Nawaz maine jaldi jaldi karo kaha tha .. jor jor se karane ko nahi kaha tha 

tabhi aarti piche gardan karte hai to use ye dono dikh jate hai ..




aarti neeta ko dekhate hui kahate hai 

Lagata hai maharani aa gayi 

Tab arvind kahata hai 

Kon maharani 

tab smile karate hui aarti kahte hai 

Koi nahi .. aap muje bata do ye paude kaha kaha lagane hai 

Baat badalate hui aarti kahte hai 

Tab shethji kahte hai 

isse kya pata hoga .. tum aur kanchan hi decide karo 

Haan yahi sahi hai papa ji 

Aisa kah ke aapne sasur se baat karane lage .. kuch der baat karane ke baad ussne aise hi aapni gardan piche ki palati to aabhi bhi wo dono baat kar rahe the .. Tab curious hoke unko dekhane lagi .. aur mann mai kahane lagi .. 

Ye kya itane der se baate kar rahe hai .. kahi ye pahle se ek dusare ko janate to nahi na .. aur baato ko chakkar mai inn dono ne kaam karana hi band kar diya hai .. aab ye aise hi baate karenge tab paude kab niche utarange aur kab lagayenge .. yahi sochkar un dono ko dekhane lagi ..




Tabhi nawaz neeta ke paas jane laga .. matlab jane ke liye ek pair aage badaya tha usne 

Mat aao mere paas .. wo teeno waha kahade hai ..koi palat gaya to lene ke dene padenge .. 

tab nawaz idhar dekhane ke liye mudane wala tha tabhi aapni gardan ghuma ke aarti samne aapne pati aur sasur se baat karane ka natak karane lagi .. aur mann mai kahti hai ..

Inn dono ke sirf pachan hi hai ya inka kuch chakkar bhi hai kya .. muje aisa kyon laga nawaz iss ko milane ke liye aaage aa raha tha par isne rok liya aur uske baad hi palat kar idhar dekhane laga .. par agar neeta ka iske saath chakkar hai to isne pahle mujse kaha kyon nahi .. 

Tab khud hi kahane lagi .. 

aarti tu bhi pagal hai kya agar uska kisi ke saath chakkar hai to wo tuje kyon batayenge .. 

Kuch der shaant rahkar kahane lagi ..

Aatlest kabhi to uske moo se nawaz ka naam niklati .. galati se hi sahi .. agar hum kisi se pyar karate hai to uske bare mai achhi baat aapne friend ko batate to hai .. affair ke bare mai nahi bataya to bhi .. aur wo muje aapne friend aur badi didi manate hi hai to wo uske bare mai muje bata sakati thi .. i think mai kuch galat soch rahi hu .. neeta ka uske saath kuch nahi hai .. shyad jaan pachan hogi ya wo neeta pai lattu hoga .. waise hamare neeta achhi hi hai .. dikhane mai bhi achhi hai aur swabhav se bhi .. koi bhi uspai lattu hi hoga .. mai hi galat soch rahi hu ..

Aarti kuch vichar mai hai ye dekh ke shethji kahte hai 

Beta kya soch rahi ho ..

Kuch bhi to nahi 

Jada mat socho ..pahle undono se paude niche utar lo .. 

Ji 

phir aage ka sochenge .. kaha lagane hai .. waise tumare nanad hai hi tumare help ke liye .. wo kuch na kuch idea tume dege hi ..

Haa didi ka dimag iss mamale mai bahut chalat hai ..

Jake unse phataphat paude niche utar lo .. let ho gaya to baad mai barish aane ki sanbhavna hai .. 

haan papa mahol waisa hi lag raha hai 

uppar aakash ki taraf dekhate hui arvind kahta hai ..

Ji mai aabhi jati hu undono ke paas 

Aisa kah ke aarti palat ke jane lagi .. tab shethji kahte hai ..

Beta ..us kamchor ko jara idhar bhej do ..tab tak nawaz paude niche utar lega ..

Ji papa ji 

Aisa kah ke aarti undono ke paas jane lagi .. wo dono aapas mai baat karane mai busy the .. us wajah se unka idhar dhyan nahi tha.. aarti ke payal ki aawaaj bhi une sunayi nahi di ..unke paas jakar aarti kahati hai ..

baate hi karoge ya kaam bhi karoge .. 

ji ji didi .. kaam hi kar rahe hai ..

achha .. muje sikha rahe hai .. 

nahi didi ..

aisa kah ke paude niche rakhane lagi .. 

waise kya baate kar rahe the tum dono itane der 

kuch to nahi didi .. 

mai kab se dekh rahi hu ..tum dono paude nikalane ke bajaye baate kar rahe ho ..

iss waqt neeta aur nawaz ki peeth aarti ke chehare ke samne thii ..aur wo dono paude nikal ke niche rakh rahe the .. dono aarti ki taraf dekh nahi rahe the ..

nahi didi kuch baate nahi chal rahi thi ..

muje kya ullu samaz rakha hai kya ..

itana bol kar  aapne baal badane lagi ..niche gardan karke ..


 


tab nawaz piche gardan karke aarti ko kuch kahane wala tha tabhi uske samane ka nazara dekh ke uski aankhe ek jagah pai rukh gayi .. wo jahag thi .. aarti ke boobs .. uske bade bade mamme..

actually hua ye tha ki baal bandane ke liye usne aapne haat uppar kiye the aur usi waqt hawa ki wajah se uske saree ka pallu uske mamme se baju hua tha ..aur usne iss waqt sleevless blouse pahana tha .. iss wajah se uske mamme ka achha sa darshan nawaz ko ho gaya tha aur us wajah se uska lauda phir se tight hone laga tha .. 

iss waqt aarti niche dekh ke aapne baal bandh rahi thi .. iss wajah se use kuch pata nahi tha ki nawaz kya dekh raha hai aur wo anjane mai nawaz ko kya dikha rahi hai .. aur uska anjam aage jake uspai kya hone wala hai .. iss sab se aarti iss waqt bekhbar thi .. phir nawaz ne aapne aap ko control kiya aur aage dekh ke paude nikalane laga..

tab aarti phir se kahti hai 

tum dono ko kya lagata hai muje kuch pata nahi hai kya .. tum dono kab se kaam ke naam pai baate kar rahe ho .. kya tum dono sach mai muje ullu samaz rahe ho kya ..

tab nawaz jhat se kahata hai 

aap ullu kaha aap to smart ho 

tab aarti nawaz ko dekhane lagi .. par wo uski taraf pit kar ke kaam kar raha tha ..

achha tume 10 minute mai pata laga kya mai smart hu 

nahi didi ye to aise hi baate karta hai .. iss ki baat pai dhyan na do didi aap ..ye aise hi timepaas wali bate karta hai ..

lagta hai tuje iske bare mai bahut kuch pata hai 



ji didi .. thoda bahut .. 


 tu pahale se janati hai isse ..

jara aasharya se neeta ki aur dekhate hui kahti hai ..

haan didi 


kaise

wo didi maine uske saath aap ke khet mai kuch din kaam kiya tha na to iss wajah se muje Nawaz ke bare mai thoda bahut pata hai.

tab aarti phir se use puchati hai 

kya kah rahi tu 

kya didi 

kya timepaas wali baat .. matlab .. kya kahana chahati thi tu ..

darasal didi ise hai na ladiges longo ke saath faltu ki baat karne ki aadat hai .. 

faltu ki baat .. kaise faltu ki baat ..

memsaab aap iske baato mai mat aao .. ye neeta kuch bhi kahte hai mere bare mai ..

muje to lag raha hai nawaz neeta ko tumare  bare mai thoda bahut nahi  bahut kuch pata hai ..

aur smile karane lagi .. 

wo didi maine aap ko bataya na maine nawaz ke  khet mai kuch din kaam kiya tha na to iss wajah se muje Nawaz ke bare mai thoda bahut pata hai..... 

ye thoda bahut nahi bahut kuch hai ..

tab neeta kuch kahane wali thi tabhi udhar se shethji aawaj dete hai 

bete us kamchor ko bhej do idhar 

tab nawaz jara aasharya se aarti ke chehare ki aur dekhate hui kahata hai .. 

kon kamchor memsaab 

tab aarti chehare par smile late hui kahti hai .. 




dusara kon hai yaha .. neeta ke alawa .. neeta ko papa ji kamchor kahte hai .. 

tab jara gussa dikahte hui neeta kahti hai ..

mai kitana bhi kaam kar lu shethji ko mai kamchor hi lagati hu .. 

tab aarti kahti hai ..

ye aab tuje aur papa ji ko hi pata .. par tu aab jada baate mat bana nahi to papaji tuj par gussa ho jayenge .. tu nikal yaha se ..

ji didi ..

kah ke neeta waha se nikal jati hai .. 

[Nadia Qureshi]

Absolutely fantastic and fascinating story

[rajkumar90]

aur phir wo aapne pati aur sasur ke paas chali gayi aur unse baate karane lagi .. aab aarti waha khadi thi aur shethji aur arvind ekdusare se baat kar rahe the .. waha khade hoke wo aapne mobile mai chat kar rahi thi ..

thodi der baad bahar se neeta  aati hai aur nawaz  ke paas jati hai ....aur wo dono baate karane lage ..

kaise hai tere tabiyat neeta 

kaise hogi mere tabiyat..itane jor se karane ki kya jarurat thi .. 

Maine kaha jor se kiya .. aur tumane ki kaha tha 

Maine kab kaha tha bhala ..

tumane hi kaha na jaldi jaldi karo 

tab bura se moo karke neeta kahte hai



Nawaz maine jaldi jaldi karo kaha tha .. jor jor se karane ko nahi kaha tha 

tabhi aarti piche gardan karte hai to use ye dono dikh jate hai ..




aarti neeta ko dekhate hui kahate hai 

Lagata hai maharani aa gayi 

Tab arvind kahata hai 

Kon maharani 

tab smile karate hui aarti kahte hai 

Koi nahi .. aap muje bata do ye paude kaha kaha lagane hai 

Baat badalate hui aarti kahte hai 

Tab shethji kahte hai 

isse kya pata hoga .. tum aur kanchan hi decide karo 

Haan yahi sahi hai papa ji 

Aisa kah ke aapne sasur se baat karane lage .. kuch der baat karane ke baad ussne aise hi aapni gardan piche ki palati to aabhi bhi wo dono baat kar rahe the .. Tab curious hoke unko dekhane lagi .. aur mann mai kahane lagi .. 

Ye kya itane der se baate kar rahe hai .. kahi ye pahle se ek dusare ko janate to nahi na .. aur baato ko chakkar mai inn dono ne kaam karana hi band kar diya hai .. aab ye aise hi baate karenge tab paude kab niche utarange aur kab lagayenge .. yahi sochkar un dono ko dekhane lagi ..




Tabhi nawaz neeta ke paas jane laga .. matlab jane ke liye ek pair aage badaya tha usne 

Mat aao mere paas .. wo teeno waha kahade hai ..koi palat gaya to lene ke dene padenge .. 

tab nawaz idhar dekhane ke liye mudane wala tha tabhi aapni gardan ghuma ke aarti samne aapne pati aur sasur se baat karane ka natak karane lagi .. aur mann mai kahti hai ..

Inn dono ke sirf pachan hi hai ya inka kuch chakkar bhi hai kya .. muje aisa kyon laga nawaz iss ko milane ke liye aaage aa raha tha par isne rok liya aur uske baad hi palat kar idhar dekhane laga .. par agar neeta ka iske saath chakkar hai to isne pahle mujse kaha kyon nahi .. 

Tab khud hi kahane lagi .. 

aarti tu bhi pagal hai kya agar uska kisi ke saath chakkar hai to wo tuje kyon batayenge .. 

Kuch der shaant rahkar kahane lagi ..

Aatlest kabhi to uske moo se nawaz ka naam niklati .. galati se hi sahi .. agar hum kisi se pyar karate hai to uske bare mai achhi baat aapne friend ko batate to hai .. affair ke bare mai nahi bataya to bhi .. aur wo muje aapne friend aur badi didi manate hi hai to wo uske bare mai muje bata sakati thi .. i think mai kuch galat soch rahi hu .. neeta ka uske saath kuch nahi hai .. shyad jaan pachan hogi ya wo neeta pai lattu hoga .. waise hamare neeta achhi hi hai .. dikhane mai bhi achhi hai aur swabhav se bhi .. koi bhi uspai lattu hi hoga .. mai hi galat soch rahi hu ..

Aarti kuch vichar mai hai ye dekh ke shethji kahte hai 

Beta kya soch rahi ho ..

Kuch bhi to nahi 

Jada mat socho ..pahle undono se paude niche utar lo .. 

Ji 

phir aage ka sochenge .. kaha lagane hai .. waise tumare nanad hai hi tumare help ke liye .. wo kuch na kuch idea tume dege hi ..

Haa didi ka dimag iss mamale mai bahut chalat hai ..

Jake unse phataphat paude niche utar lo .. let ho gaya to baad mai barish aane ki sanbhavna hai .. 

haan papa mahol waisa hi lag raha hai 

uppar aakash ki taraf dekhate hui arvind kahta hai ..

Ji mai aabhi jati hu undono ke paas 

Aisa kah ke aarti palat ke jane lagi .. tab shethji kahte hai ..

Beta ..us kamchor ko jara idhar bhej do ..tab tak nawaz paude niche utar lega ..

Ji papa ji 

Aisa kah ke aarti undono ke paas jane lagi .. wo dono aapas mai baat karane mai busy the .. us wajah se unka idhar dhyan nahi tha.. aarti ke payal ki aawaaj bhi une sunayi nahi di ..unke paas jakar aarti kahati hai ..

baate hi karoge ya kaam bhi karoge .. 

ji ji didi .. kaam hi kar rahe hai ..

achha .. muje sikha rahe hai .. 

nahi didi ..

aisa kah ke paude niche rakhane lagi .. 

waise kya baate kar rahe the tum dono itane der 

kuch to nahi didi .. 

mai kab se dekh rahi hu ..tum dono paude nikalane ke bajaye baate kar rahe ho ..

iss waqt neeta aur nawaz ki peeth aarti ke chehare ke samne thii ..aur wo dono paude nikal ke niche rakh rahe the .. dono aarti ki taraf dekh nahi rahe the ..

nahi didi kuch baate nahi chal rahi thi ..

muje kya ullu samaz rakha hai kya ..

itana bol kar  aapne baal badane lagi ..niche gardan karke ..


 


tab nawaz piche gardan karke aarti ko kuch kahane wala tha tabhi uske samane ka nazara dekh ke uski aankhe ek jagah pai rukh gayi .. wo jahag thi .. aarti ke boobs .. uske bade bade mamme..

actually hua ye tha ki baal bandane ke liye usne aapne haat uppar kiye the aur usi waqt hawa ki wajah se uske saree ka pallu uske mamme se baju hua tha ..aur usne iss waqt sleevless blouse pahana tha .. iss wajah se uske mamme ka achha sa darshan nawaz ko ho gaya tha aur us wajah se uska lauda phir se tight hone laga tha .. 

iss waqt aarti niche dekh ke aapne baal bandh rahi thi .. iss wajah se use kuch pata nahi tha ki nawaz kya dekh raha hai aur wo anjane mai nawaz ko kya dikha rahi hai .. aur uska anjam aage jake uspai kya hone wala hai .. iss sab se aarti iss waqt bekhbar thi .. phir nawaz ne aapne aap ko control kiya aur aage dekh ke paude nikalane laga..

tab aarti phir se kahti hai 

tum dono ko kya lagata hai muje kuch pata nahi hai kya .. tum dono kab se kaam ke naam pai baate kar rahe ho .. kya tum dono sach mai muje ullu samaz rahe ho kya ..

tab nawaz jhat se kahata hai 

aap ullu kaha aap to smart ho 

tab aarti nawaz ko dekhane lagi .. par wo uski taraf pit kar ke kaam kar raha tha ..

achha tume 10 minute mai pata laga kya mai smart hu 

nahi didi ye to aise hi baate karta hai .. iss ki baat pai dhyan na do didi aap ..ye aise hi timepaas wali bate karta hai ..

lagta hai tuje iske bare mai bahut kuch pata hai 



ji didi .. thoda bahut .. 


 tu pahale se janati hai isse ..

jara aasharya se neeta ki aur dekhate hui kahti hai ..

haan didi 


kaise

wo didi maine uske saath aap ke khet mai kuch din kaam kiya tha na to iss wajah se muje Nawaz ke bare mai thoda bahut pata hai.

tab aarti phir se use puchati hai 

kya kah rahi tu 

kya didi 

kya timepaas wali baat .. matlab .. kya kahana chahati thi tu ..

darasal didi ise hai na ladiges longo ke saath faltu ki baat karne ki aadat hai .. 

faltu ki baat .. kaise faltu ki baat ..

memsaab aap iske baato mai mat aao .. ye neeta kuch bhi kahte hai mere bare mai ..

muje to lag raha hai nawaz neeta ko tumare  bare mai thoda bahut nahi  bahut kuch pata hai ..

aur smile karane lagi .. 

wo didi maine aap ko bataya na maine nawaz ke  khet mai kuch din kaam kiya tha na to iss wajah se muje Nawaz ke bare mai thoda bahut pata hai..... 

ye thoda bahut nahi bahut kuch hai ..

tab neeta kuch kahane wali thi tabhi udhar se shethji aawaj dete hai 

bete us kamchor ko bhej do idhar 

tab nawaz jara aasharya se aarti ke chehare ki aur dekhate hui kahata hai .. 

kon kamchor memsaab 

tab aarti chehare par smile late hui kahti hai .. 




dusara kon hai yaha .. neeta ke alawa .. neeta ko papa ji kamchor kahte hai .. 

tab jara gussa dikahte hui neeta kahti hai ..

mai kitana bhi kaam kar lu shethji ko mai kamchor hi lagati hu .. 

tab aarti kahti hai ..

ye aab tuje aur papa ji ko hi pata .. par tu aab jada baate mat bana nahi to papaji tuj par gussa ho jayenge .. tu nikal yaha se ..

ji didi ..

kah ke neeta waha se nikal jati hai .. 

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[rajkumar90]

Aab neeta waha se chali jati hai.. aur nawaz paude neeche lene lagata hai.  Aarti use bata rahi thi . Ye yaha se utao use yaha rakho .. pahle ye nikalo .. phir ye .  Aarti jaise jaise bata rahi thi waise waise nawaz kar raha tha

Kuch der baad aarti kahte hai

Neeta kya kah rahi thi tumare bare mai ..

kisi baat memsaab

Aare baba timepaas wali baat ..

memsaab aap uske baato pai dhyan na do

Achha

phir nawaz aapne kaam pai laga gaya .  Aab tempo ki bahar side wale paude nikalana ho chuke the .  aab andar ke paude baki the ..aandar ke paude nikalane ke liye nawaz ko tempo ke aandar jana padata tha par phir se bahar rakhane ke liye tempo ke corner pai paude rakh ke niche utar kar paude ko utake niche rakhana padata tha.  Ye bahut difficult honewala tha nawaz ke liye.  Ye sab sochkar nawaz kahata hai

Neeta kab aayege

Memsaab

Kyon .. 

wo aab aandar ke paude bache hai .. wo akele se nahi hoga na

Kyon nahi hoga .. aasan to hai .. aandar se paude utalo aur neeche rakh lo

aasan kaha hai memsaab .. uske liye muje aandar jana padega phir usko bahar leke aana padega phir yaha rakh ke niche utarana padega  aur phir paude ko utake niche rakhana padega

Baat to tum sahi kah rahe ho

Neeta hoti to help ho jati

Sach hai neeta hoti to help ho jati par aab wo aandar gayi hai.. yaha bahar bhi nahi hai

Aapne sasur ki taraf dekhate hui

Haan yaha dikh nahi rahi hai

aab aandar gayi hai ..bahar kab aayege ye  kamchor kya pata

Aap bhi neeta ko kamchor kahte ho kya

Tab neeta nawaz ki taraf dekhate hui kahte hai

Aab kamchor hai to kahungi na .. wo jane do aab bache hui paude kaise nikaloge wo bata do ..barish ka Mausam hai .. barish kabhi bhi aa sakati hai ..

Tab nawaz kuch sochane laga .. aarti ki taraf dekhate hui..tab aarti bhi tempo se sat ke khade hoke nawaz ko dekhate hai aur kahti hai ..



Kya soch rahe ho..

Tabhi tempo driver tempo mai jo aage side baitha tha wo kahata hai ..

Jaldi karo bhai .. muje mere gaanv jana hai .. barish ka Mausam hai.  Muje nadi cross karake jana hai

Tab jara gusse se nawaz kahta hai..

Baaa…

aur rukh jata hai..

Wo bahenchod kahana chahata tha par aarti ko dekh ke rukh gaya .. aur aarti wo samajh gayi

Bahan ke bhai .. dekh nahi rahe ho kar raha hu..

Tab aarti ko halke se  hase aa jati hai..

Haa haa jaldi karo

Ha kar raha hu



Usko dekhate hui kahte hai 

Uspai gussa hoke kuch fayada nahi..

Aab kya kare muje akele hi karana padega.. neeta nahi hai to

Thik hai kar lo phir

[Rezwana Choudhury Bannya]

Superb! Awesome and excellent update

[Nahida Parveen]

zabardast update

[Milky Aunty]

bahut bahut mast aur lajawab update,superb writings yaar

[rajkumar90]

Aab nawaz paude aandar se nikal kar bahar lata tha phir bahr tempo kai corner mai rakh kar niche utarkar gardan mai rakhata tha .. ismai nawaz ko bahut trasdayas tha ..ye aarti ne dekh liya tha ..

Lagata hai neeta aab jaldi nahi aayege ....mai tume help kar deti hu ..


nahi aap rahne do…

Kyon

Nahi aap rahane do

Kyon kya tuje kya lagata hai mai kar nahi paunge

Aise baat nahi hai

To kya baat hai

Jab nawaz paude aandar se bahar aake tempo ke corner mai rakhata hai tab aarti aapne saree ka pallu corner mai band ke wo pauda uta ke neeche rakhati hai

Nahi malkin aap mat karo ..

Aisa kah ke tempo mai hi ek side mai baith jata hai ..

Usko thaka hua dekh ke aarti kahti hai

kya re intane zaldi thak gaya...

nahi bus thoda ruk gaya…

Muje to laga tum bahut kaam karte ho .. body to kafi achhi banayi par jaldi thak gaye tum to

Nahi memsaab ..laghbhagh tempo khali kiya maine akele ..ye thodi  mahamuli baat hai.... Aab ye aandar bahar aur uppar niche karane  se thoda sa thak gaya hu ..  pairo pe thoda pressure aa gaya  hai… koi nahi abhi karva deta hu complete
Aur utane laga ..

Tab aarti kahti hai

Aare aaram karana hai to aaram karo ..mai to mazak kar rahi thi ..

Tab nawaz baith gaya neeche ..

Lagata hai tum bahut zyada thak gaye ho ..jara aaram karo ..mai aabhi aayi …

Bolke aandar chali gayi ..

Use aandar jate hui nawaz baithe baithe piche se dekh raha tha .. uski gaand ko ..uske nangi kamar aur nangi peet ko .. nawaz thak gaya hai ye jankar uske liye pine ko kuch laya jaya ye sochkar wo aandar jane lage thi .. kitchen mai .. jate jate wo ek baar palat ke dekhate hai tab wo pati ye nawaz use hi dekh raha hai.. 

wo bina koi reaction dekhe aandar jate hai aur thode der baad ek juice ka glass leke bahar aati hai

[Nadia Qureshi]

Great story and outclass writing skills

[Sumitra Sen]

Bahut badhiya update. Bahut bahut seductive writing ✍️