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Adultery Lust and revenge
ekdom mast aur superb update
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bahut badiya kahaani, beautiful and cute writings!

superb and absolutely mind blowing narrations! Namaskar
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Awesome update
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Bahut bahut shandar update
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Ekdum jackass update
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Lovely update
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ekdom kamaal ka update, zabardast writings aur behad hi exciting build up
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Fantastic update
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EXCELLENT
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faadu aur ekdum kamaal ka update
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Message me for bdsm , I am 25 year old male
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bahut khobsurat kahaani, damaka aur danshu writings
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hello guys , I'm back . abhi tak apne meri kahani ko bhut achha response diya hai . umeed hai ye aage bhi jari rahegi . ab se regular updates aate rhenge , kitne kitne din baad ayenge , ye kehna mushkil hai , par main puri koshis krunga ki jyada gap na ho updates ke bich.   agla update dene se pahle , main 
kuchh chize clear krna chahunga :     


                                                                                                                                                                                         
 1. kuchh logo ne pahle comment krke ye sujhaw diya tha ki , story interfaith honi chahiye . I know ki interfaith story me eroticness aur thrill ko bdhati hai, par main nhi chahta ki meri ye story interfaith wale section me chli jaye . kyunki us section me jane ke baad story ki reach kaafi had tak kam ho jaati hai. 
                 
  2. kuch logo ne ye bhi sujhaw diye ki story me ek aur female character honi chahiye ( ranbir shinde ki behan ). toh guys , abhi story ki bus suruwat hui hai, aage romanch aur thrill ke hisab se aur bhi characters add honge .

   3. Dosto , aane wale updates me koi bhi photo mai nhi lga paunga , kyunki ye kaafi pechida kaam hai , already ek shaandar storyline imagine krna apne aap me tough hai . isse mera time bhi save hoga . isliye aaplog cooperate krna. already maine 2nd update me sabhi female characters ki ek ek photos upload kar di hai . Aage story me aap un kirdaron ke jagah un photos ko imagine kar sakte hain. aur aage jitne bhi nye characters ayenge , mai unki ek photo zarur upload kar dunga . 
        
   Agla update jald hi ayega , thanks.
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(20-12-2024, 10:23 PM)Prince raj Wrote: hello guys , I'm back . abhi tak apne meri kahani ko bhut achha response diya hai . umeed hai ye aage bhi jari rahegi . ab se regular updates aate rhenge , kitne kitne din baad ayenge , ye kehna mushkil hai , par main puri koshis krunga ki jyada gap na ho updates ke bich.   agla update dene se pahle , main 
kuchh chize clear krna chahunga :     


                                                                                                                                                                                         
 1. kuchh logo ne pahle comment krke ye sujhaw diya tha ki , story interfaith honi chahiye . I know ki interfaith story me eroticness aur thrill ko bdhati hai, par main nhi chahta ki meri ye story interfaith wale section me chli jaye . kyunki us section me jane ke baad story ki reach kaafi had tak kam ho jaati hai. 
                 
  2. kuch logo ne ye bhi sujhaw diye ki story me ek aur female character honi chahiye ( ranbir shinde ki behan ). toh guys , abhi story ki bus suruwat hui hai, aage romanch aur thrill ke hisab se aur bhi characters add honge .

   3. Dosto , aane wale updates me koi bhi photo mai nhi lga paunga , kyunki ye kaafi pechida kaam hai , already ek shaandar storyline imagine krna apne aap me tough hai . isse mera time bhi save hoga . isliye aaplog cooperate krna. already maine 2nd update me sabhi female characters ki ek ek photos upload kar di hai . Aage story me aap un kirdaron ke jagah un photos ko imagine kar sakte hain. aur aage jitne bhi nye characters ayenge , mai unki ek photo zarur upload kar dunga . 
        
   Agla update jald hi ayega , thanks.

Please write the story on the basis of interfaith theme. If the story will be shifted to the restricted section then you can also shift the story to another forum in which you will get more responses and views. Namaskar Namaskar Namaskar
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(20-12-2024, 10:37 PM)Mousumi Wrote: Please write the story on the basis of interfaith theme. If the story will be shifted to the restricted section then you can also shift the story to another forum in which you will get more responses and views. Namaskar Namaskar Namaskar

Agree
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Update-7 



agle din subah hoti hai , sinde parivaar ke sabhi sadasya naaste ke liye dinning table par ikatha hote hain. birju bhi subeh uthke apne malik ke dwara btaye hue kaam me lag jata hai . fir nasta kar ke Ranbir aur karan office ke liye nikal padte hain.naste ke baad sabhi log apne apne kmre me chle jaate hain . rishita kuchh der baad nhane chli jaati hai , nhane ke baad wo ek saree pehanti hai , uske saath sleevless aur backless blouse , jisme uski gori peeth kafi had tak dikh rahi thi. uske baad usne halka makeup kiya aur honto par red lipistick lgai . 

        udhar birju kisi kaam se terrace par gya tha , fir wo terrace se wapas laut raha tha , aur idhar rishita bhi ache se taiyar hokar kamre se bahar niklne wali thi. terreace se niche jane ke liye rishita ke bedroom se hoke gujarna hota tha . toh jaise hi birju rishita ke room ke pass aya , thik usi samay rishita bhi room ka get khol kar bahr nikli aur achanak dono ki takar ho gai . rishita ki choochiyan birju ke sine se jaa lagi , birju bhi thoda jldi me tha toh use kuchh samjh nhi aaya . khair , jaise hi dono takraye , birju to rishita ke choochiyon ka ahsas apne sine pr pake mano khin kho gya , use ek pal ke liye aisa laga jaise do bade bade mulayam rui ke gole uske sine par lage ho. whin rishita ka birju se takrane ke baad thoda balance bigad gya aur wo girne ko hui , waise hi birju apne dono haath le jaake rishita ke kamar par rakh deta hai , taki ishita gire na. iss samay rishita wiase hi birju se chipki thi aur birju ke dono haath uske kamar par the . Aaah..kafi hot scene tha , birju ke do kale haath rishita ke gori nangi kamar par the . iss samay iss ghar ki khubsurat bahu ko ek bdshurat buddha naukar kamar se pakde hue tha . jaise hi birju ke hathon ka aehsaas rishita ko apne kamar pr hota hai , uski aankhe thodi der ke liye band ho jaati hai aur uska muh thoda khul jata hai. uske baad brju rishita ke gore khunsurat chehre ko dekhta hai , aur risshita ke saamne birju ka kala bdsurat chehra hai. ye sari cheeze bas kuch seconds me hui thi. iske baad rishita birju se jladi se alag hoti hai , aur apni saari thodi thik krti hai.

rishita- " you bastard , dikahai nhi deta kya ,andhe ho kya ". rishita kaafi gusse me bolti hai . birju haath jodte hue,

birju- " maaf kijiyega malkin , wo hme kaam tha zaruri , isliye thoda jldi me the ". 

rishita- " bas bas ...ab apni safai dena band kro aur jao yaha se , dirty fellow( dhimi awaz me )".

iske baad birju wahan se nikal jaata hai , lautte waqt , brju( mann me )- kya sahi time pe entry mara birju , saali kuchh pal ke liye toh mere baahon me aa gai thi . uski badi badi choochiyon ka ehsaas ..aur uski gori kamar par mera haath ,..aah kya mulayam badan hai iss bade ghar ki bahu ka . ye sab soch kar birju le lund me tanaw aane lga . fir wo khud ko control krke baki ke kamo me lag gya .

waise hi fir shaam aur shaam se raat ho jati hai, ranbir aur karan office se aate hain , sab log dinner krte hain aur apne apne room me sone ke liye chle jate hain . raat ke 11 bje ,...biiju apne kamre me let kar kuchh soch aha hai , " agar mujhe iss ghar ki auraton pe danka daalna hai , toh ye badi sawdhani se krna hoga aur ek ek krke main in sundar apsaraon ko apne jaal me phsaunga aur apne niche lita ke maze lutnga . sabse pahle toh iss ghar ki badi bahu ko fasana hoga , aah sali kya maal hai ...chune se hi mera toh khada Ho gya tha. Lekin us jaisi kadak maal, mere jaise kale budhe se Kyun fasegi, aisa hai hi kya mere paas ". Thodi der sochne ke baad birju ke chehre pe muskaan tair jaati hai, wo sochta hai " hai birju bilkul hai (apna ek hath lund par rkhte hue) ye 9 inch kala aujar har kisi ke paas nhi hota, aaj tak jitni bhi randiyo ne iski sawari ki hai, sab dubara isse lene ke liye betab rehti hai. Aur mujhe toh pakka vishwas hai ki in ameer ghar ke laundo ka hathiyar itna bda nahi hota hoga, saale aisho araam me plane Wale in haram ke pillon ke lawde me kahan itni takat hoti hogi ki kisi aurat ko Puri tarah santusht kr de , inki auraton ko bhi aise bejaan lawdon ki aadat pr jaati hai. Hum jaise kisani mazdoori krne wale mardon ke pass hi toh asli Lund Hota hai, jo ek baar kisi ke ander chla jaye toh chikhe aur pani dono barabar niklte hai. Agar mera ye kala hathiyar iss sahi khandan ke auraton me ek baar sama gya, smjho mera kaam ban gya, kyunki uske baad toh wo chah kar bhi mere iss lawde se dur nhi bhaag sakti. Lekin uske liye pahle mujhe uss rishitha maal ko behlana aur fir apne niche lana hoga. Ye kaam bhut soch samjh ke aur planning ke saath krni hogi ". Uske baad birju aage ke plan ke bare thodi der sochta hai aur so jaata hai.

        Subah Hoti hai, har roz ki tarah sabhi sadasya naasta krtr hai, uske baad Ranbir aur karan office ke liye nikal jaate hai. Rishita aur Baki sadasya apne kmre me chle jaate hain. Birju paudho ko pani dene ke liye garden me chla jata hai. Thodi der baad hi anshika apne kmre se bahar nikalti hai, usne abhi abhi nhaya tha, baal thode gile the. Nha ke usne ek tight top aur ek loose pjama pehna hai. Kmre se nikal ke wo garden me chli jaati hai apna phone lekar aur garden me tehlte hue phone use kar Rahi thi. Birju abhi bhi paudhon ko pani de raha tha, tabhi uski nazar tehelti hui anshika par padti hai. Birju use dekhta hi reh jata hai, (mann me)- " ye toh ranbir sinde ki beti hai, kya maal lag rahi hai, tight top me iske chuche bahar niklne Ko betab hai, kya gaand hai, ek baar dabane ko mil jaye to mera toh maza hi aa jayega, iski umra jada nhi lagti, iss kachi kali ko full bnana hi hoga. Ranbir sinde, teri iss phul jaisi beti ko maine apne lawde pe nhi nchaya na, toh mera naam bhi birju hlsaar nhi". Birju ye sab sochte hue lagataar use ghure jaa raha tha, anshika ka dhyan phone pr tha. Use bilkul bhi andazaa nhi hai ki usi ke ghar me ye budhha naukr use gandi nazron se ghur raha hai. Fir anshika kisi se phone par baat krne lagti hai. 5 min. Gujar jaate hai, anshika ek jagah khde hoke phone par baat kar rhi thi. Tabhi birju ko Kuch krne ko sujhta hai, uske chehre par kutil muskan tair jaati hai. Jahan anshika khde hokar baat kar rhi thi, birju wahan jaake uske piche khda ho jata hai, Kuch sconds baad birju aur pass jata hai,.. Kuch seconds baad aur paas. Anshika abhi bhi baat krne me magn thi isliye uske piche Koi aake khda hai iska bilkul bhi andaza use nhi hota. Ab Birju lagbhag chipak ke khda tha, itne pass khde hone se anshika ki perfume birju ke naak me padti hai.. birju ko bda maza aata hai. Aur itne pass se anshika ki badi aur tight gaand (jo ki loose pajame me bhi saaf pta chal raha tha) ko niharna, ye uske lawde me tanav lane ke liye kaafi tha, lekin vo khud pe control krta hai. Khair, thodi der baad anshika ka baat krna ho jata hai aur wo phone kat ke piche mudnne ko hoti hai. Jaise hi wo piche mudti hai, uske saamne birju ka kala badsurat chehra hota hai, jyada duri bhi nhi thi dono ke chehron ke bich. whin birju ke saamne toh jaise kisi ne chand ka tukra hi pdosh diya ho. Birju ko anshika ke khubsurat chehre ko itne pass se didar krne ka mauka milta hai, bhle hi kuchh seconds ke liye hi. Anshika ka gora dudh jaisa rang, uspar do khubsurat aankhe, lambi naak aur uske niche sabse anmol cheez yani ke uske rasbhre gulabi hoth. Birju ka toh mann kiya ki abhi iske chehre ko pakad ke apni zuban se chaat lu aur iske rasbhre gulabi hoto ko apne kale sukhe hoth mila ke nichod lun. Lekin fir burji khud ko sambhata hai. Anshika jab achank birju ko Yun apne piche dekhti hai toh ek pal ke liye toh wo dar jaati hai. Fir wo Birju se puchti hai. 

 Anshika - " kya baat hai kaaka aap yahan kya kar rahe hain, aapne paudho me pani de diya".

Birju - " nhi beti, pani de hi raha tha ki achanak pipe se pani aana band ho gya, toh hum puchne aye the ki nal Kahan par hai, hum dekh aate ". Birju ne jaan bujh ke nal bnd kiya tha. 

Anshika - " Haan wo udhar piche ke side me hi tap hai, aap wahan jaake dekh sakte Hain ". 

Fir birju wahan se jaane lagta hai, jaate jaate wo ek baar anshika ko piche mud ke dekhta hai, jiska dhyan phone pe tha. 

Birju (mann me)- " aah.. anshika rani..aaj toh tere jism ko ko nazdik se sirf dekha hai, ek din tere iss nazuk jism ko apne bahon me samet ke iska pura ras nichorunga , aur apne iss lund ka ras iske andar daalunga ".  Aisa sochne ke baad Birju muskurate hue wahan se chla jata hai aur apne kaam me lag jata hai.
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Fantastic update! Very nice build up. Please apply slow and steady seduction and also double meaning naughty conversations.
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bahut badhiya ek mast kahaani! bahut acha likhte hain aapne yaar,bahut khoob!
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Super seductive and erotic writings!!
Thanks a lot for your excellent and exciting story!!
Namaskar Namaskar Namaskar
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Hot story!
Good going!
Terrific writing!
Please keep posting!!
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