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Adultery Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani
#21
Beautiful and superb update!
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#22
Lajawab update, ekdum fatafati, jhakkass writing
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#23
Thank you! Aap logo ke koi ideas ho toh jarur share karna. Main aur detail mein likhna chahti hoon par ye nahi chahti ki padne wale bore ho jaye.
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#24
Your writing is extremely exciting and erotic. There are many kinds of adultery on the basis of themes and plots such as interfaith, non interfaith, low class house servant and high class female members, young female members and older male members, older females and younger male members,one female character and innumerable male characters, one male character and many female characters.cuckold, submissive female member and dominant male member, dominant female members and submissive male members and more. I don't know what kinds of adultery you like most. If you want to write the story according to your own perspective and fantasy then it doesn't need to care for whether the readers like it or not but if you want to see that the readers like your story and post comments on it then you have to care for the majority readers and what kind of theme they like most. In my opinion high class female and low class experienced male themed adultery is extremely hot and erotic when it's limited to single male and multiple female members.
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#25
hot update dena bro... sex seduce with other man low class
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#26
Nice update Bhai..... Supriya ka papa aur sasur ko moka milega kya Supriya k sath......
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(21-12-2024, 04:41 AM)Nadia Qureshi Wrote: Your writing is extremely exciting and erotic. There are many kinds of adultery on the basis of themes and plots such as interfaith, non interfaith, low class house servant and high class female members, young female members and older male members, older females and younger male members,one female character and innumerable male characters, one male character and many female characters.cuckold, submissive female member and dominant male member, dominant female members and submissive male members and more. I don't know what kinds of adultery you like most. If you want to write the story according to your own perspective and fantasy then it doesn't need to care for whether the readers like it or not but if you want to see that the readers like your story and post comments on it then you have to care for the majority readers and what kind of theme they like most. In my opinion high class female and low class experienced male themed adultery is extremely hot and erotic when it's limited to single male and multiple female members.

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(21-12-2024, 04:41 AM)Nadia Qureshi Wrote: Your writing is extremely exciting and erotic. There are many kinds of adultery on the basis of themes and plots such as interfaith, non interfaith, low class house servant and high class female members, young female members and older male members, older females and younger male members,one female character and innumerable male characters, one male character and many female characters.cuckold, submissive female member and dominant male member, dominant female members and submissive male members and more. I don't know what kinds of adultery you like most. If you want to write the story according to your own perspective and fantasy then it doesn't need to care for whether the readers like it or not but if you want to see that the readers like your story and post comments on it then you have to care for the majority readers and what kind of theme they like most. In my opinion high class female and low class experienced male themed adultery is extremely hot and erotic when it's limited to single male and multiple female members.

Thank you, I appreciate the comment. I will try to continue the story as I have planned and hopefully it turns out good.
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#29
Update 5

Car ke ghar par pahuchte hai sab logo ke use gher liya. Atul aur Supriya car se utare aur ghar ke darawaze par Atul ki mummy, Sarita ne unki aarti ki. Unhone Supriya ko chawlo ek ek kalash ko apne daye pair se girane ke liye kaha aur fir Supriya laal rang ke pani mein pair rakh kar ghar mein pravesh hui.

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Atul ka ghar Supriya ke ghar se kafi bada tha, aur abhi kafi saare rishtedaar bhi they. Atul ke cousins Supriya ke aas paas ghoom rahe they. Sabhi nayi bhabhi se milna chahte they. Supriya sab ke beech mein thoda ghabrayi hui thi par usne himmat karke saari rasme dheere dheere poori ki.

Pehle Atul aur Supriya ko ghar ke mandir le jaa kar unse pooja karwayi gayi. Uske baad ghar ki saari ladies muh dikhayi ki leyi ek saath baith gayi. Saath mein geet aur dhol bhi chal rahe they. Atul ki Taiji, Chachi, Mausi and Mami ne ek-ek karke Supriya ki muh dikhayi ki rasm ki aur use gifts aur jewellery di. Sabhi ne Supriya ko dekh kar yehi kaha ki bahu toh bahut hi jyada sundar hai aur Atul ki toh kismat hi khul gayi.

Fir uske baad, Supriya aur Atul ko saath bitha kar kuch khel jaisi rasme karwayi gayi. Pehle kangna khulayi ki rasm hui

Arpita - Aap dono ko is kangna pe bandhe kapde ko kholna hai. Bhai aap sirf ek haath hi use kar sakte ho. Supriya aap dono haath use kar sakti ho.

Supriya se halke se muskura ke kaha - Didi main bhi ek haath se khol lungi.

Arpita - Oh hooo. Bhai ise kehte hai confidence. Tu nahi jeetne wala Supriya se.

Ye sunte hi Supriya ki smile aur badi ho gayi. Gaanth kafi tight thi aur Atul se ek haath se nahi khul rahi thi. Fir Supriya ne try kiya aur usne ek haath se hi gaanth khol di. Sabhi log jaise Supriya ki side ho gaye they.

Uske baad ek thaal mein chawal ke paani aur fool ke saath ek angooti rakhi gayi. Un dono ke paas 3 mauke they angooti nikalne ke. Jisne jyada baar nikal di woh hi jeetega. Supriya ne teeno bar fatafat se angooti ko utha liya aur khush ho gayi.

Arpita - Bhai ab toh confirm ho gaya. Supriya ki hi chalne wali tum dono mein.

Is tarah se kafi sara hasi majak chalta raha aur un dono ko khana bhi khilaya gaya. Raat hone par, Arpita Supriya ko upar ke floor mein ek room mein le gayi. Room kafi jyada saja hua tha aur beech mein ek bed tha jis par fulo se ek dil bana hua tha. Supriya samajh gayi ki yehi uska suhaagraat ka room hoga. Abhi room mein ghar ki kafi saari ladies thi aur bachche bhi khel rahe they. Ladies apas mein aur Supriya se suhaag raat ki baatein karne lagi.

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Taiji - Supriya tum thak toh kafi gayi hongi par aaj raat sone ko nahi milega. Abhi toh raat bhar ki kushti baaki hai.

Chachi - Ise dekh kar toh nahi lagta ki ise neend aa rahi hai. Ye bhi wait hi kar rahi hai ki kab Atul aaye aur hum log bahar jaye.

Taiji - Nahi, dekho kitna ghabra rahi hai. Ab har koi tumhari tarah besharam nahi hota na. Tum logo ki ne toh apni suhaagraat mein itni zor zor awaaze ki thi ki poora ghar nahi so paaya tha.

Chachi - Ab usme meri kya galti thi. Aapke devar hi paagal ho gaye they.

Taiji - Rehne do, tum bhi kam nahi thi. Arpita tu bhi toh bata apni. Vineet ji bhi kum nahi hai hume pata hai.

Arpita thoda sharmate hue - Haan hum logo bhi jyada so nahi paye they. Vineet ko rokna toh ek mushkil kaam hi hai. Kam se kam teen baar toh kiya tha humne.

Taiji - Kafi lucky ho tum jo tumhe Vineet jaisa pati mila hai. Aur ab Atul ko Supriya jaisi biwi mil gayi. Dono hi bahut lucky ho.

Chachi - Haan bhai Atul toh ghar ka sabse seedha ladka hai. Supriya kahin uska toh tumhe chhute hi na nikal....

Arpita thode gusse mein - Chachi aap bhi na... kuch bhi bolte ho. Supriya daro mat, aapke jiju sab samjha denge bhai ko.

Thodi der tak ye hasi majak chala aur fir Atul ko lekar uske jijaji room mein aa gaye. Atul ke cousins room se nikalne ko tayyar hi nahi they. Un sab ki demand thi ki bhai se jab tak ek bada sa gift nahi milega woh log bahar nahi jayenge. Kisi tarah se Arpita ne un sabko manaya aur 10,001 dekar room se bahar kiya.

Jaate jaate, woh Supriya ke kaan mein boli - Supriya wahan bed ke side par doodh ka glass rakha hai, bhai ko pila dena. Aur drawer mein vaseline bhi rakhi hai agar koi problem ho toh. All the best!

Aur fir usne kamre ke darwaze band kar diye aur bahar se kundi laga di. Ab room mein sirf Supriya aur Atul akele reh gaye they.
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#30
Awesome update!
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#31
bahut badhiya update! Rocking aur mast kahani
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#32
Bohot hi zabardast update, bahot bahot hot aur erotic writings!
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#33
Amazing update and lovely story
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