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Adultery Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani
#21
Beautiful and superb update!
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#22
Lajawab update, ekdum fatafati, jhakkass writing
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#23
Thank you! Aap logo ke koi ideas ho toh jarur share karna. Main aur detail mein likhna chahti hoon par ye nahi chahti ki padne wale bore ho jaye.
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#24
Your writing is extremely exciting and erotic. There are many kinds of adultery on the basis of themes and plots such as interfaith, non interfaith, low class house servant and high class female members, young female members and older male members, older females and younger male members,one female character and innumerable male characters, one male character and many female characters.cuckold, submissive female member and dominant male member, dominant female members and submissive male members and more. I don't know what kinds of adultery you like most. If you want to write the story according to your own perspective and fantasy then it doesn't need to care for whether the readers like it or not but if you want to see that the readers like your story and post comments on it then you have to care for the majority readers and what kind of theme they like most. In my opinion high class female and low class experienced male themed adultery is extremely hot and erotic when it's limited to single male and multiple female members.
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#25
hot update dena bro... sex seduce with other man low class
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#26
Nice update Bhai..... Supriya ka papa aur sasur ko moka milega kya Supriya k sath......
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(21-12-2024, 04:41 AM)Nadia Qureshi Wrote: Your writing is extremely exciting and erotic. There are many kinds of adultery on the basis of themes and plots such as interfaith, non interfaith, low class house servant and high class female members, young female members and older male members, older females and younger male members,one female character and innumerable male characters, one male character and many female characters.cuckold, submissive female member and dominant male member, dominant female members and submissive male members and more. I don't know what kinds of adultery you like most. If you want to write the story according to your own perspective and fantasy then it doesn't need to care for whether the readers like it or not but if you want to see that the readers like your story and post comments on it then you have to care for the majority readers and what kind of theme they like most. In my opinion high class female and low class experienced male themed adultery is extremely hot and erotic when it's limited to single male and multiple female members.

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(21-12-2024, 04:41 AM)Nadia Qureshi Wrote: Your writing is extremely exciting and erotic. There are many kinds of adultery on the basis of themes and plots such as interfaith, non interfaith, low class house servant and high class female members, young female members and older male members, older females and younger male members,one female character and innumerable male characters, one male character and many female characters.cuckold, submissive female member and dominant male member, dominant female members and submissive male members and more. I don't know what kinds of adultery you like most. If you want to write the story according to your own perspective and fantasy then it doesn't need to care for whether the readers like it or not but if you want to see that the readers like your story and post comments on it then you have to care for the majority readers and what kind of theme they like most. In my opinion high class female and low class experienced male themed adultery is extremely hot and erotic when it's limited to single male and multiple female members.

Thank you, I appreciate the comment. I will try to continue the story as I have planned and hopefully it turns out good.
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Update 5

Car ke ghar par pahuchte hai sab logo ke use gher liya. Atul aur Supriya car se utare aur ghar ke darawaze par Atul ki mummy, Sarita ne unki aarti ki. Unhone Supriya ko chawlo ek ek kalash ko apne daye pair se girane ke liye kaha aur fir Supriya laal rang ke pani mein pair rakh kar ghar mein pravesh hui.

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Atul ka ghar Supriya ke ghar se kafi bada tha, aur abhi kafi saare rishtedaar bhi they. Atul ke cousins Supriya ke aas paas ghoom rahe they. Sabhi nayi bhabhi se milna chahte they. Supriya sab ke beech mein thoda ghabrayi hui thi par usne himmat karke saari rasme dheere dheere poori ki.

Pehle Atul aur Supriya ko ghar ke mandir le jaa kar unse pooja karwayi gayi. Uske baad ghar ki saari ladies muh dikhayi ki leyi ek saath baith gayi. Saath mein geet aur dhol bhi chal rahe they. Atul ki Taiji, Chachi, Mausi and Mami ne ek-ek karke Supriya ki muh dikhayi ki rasm ki aur use gifts aur jewellery di. Sabhi ne Supriya ko dekh kar yehi kaha ki bahu toh bahut hi jyada sundar hai aur Atul ki toh kismat hi khul gayi.

Fir uske baad, Supriya aur Atul ko saath bitha kar kuch khel jaisi rasme karwayi gayi. Pehle kangna khulayi ki rasm hui

Arpita - Aap dono ko is kangna pe bandhe kapde ko kholna hai. Bhai aap sirf ek haath hi use kar sakte ho. Supriya aap dono haath use kar sakti ho.

Supriya se halke se muskura ke kaha - Didi main bhi ek haath se khol lungi.

Arpita - Oh hooo. Bhai ise kehte hai confidence. Tu nahi jeetne wala Supriya se.

Ye sunte hi Supriya ki smile aur badi ho gayi. Gaanth kafi tight thi aur Atul se ek haath se nahi khul rahi thi. Fir Supriya ne try kiya aur usne ek haath se hi gaanth khol di. Sabhi log jaise Supriya ki side ho gaye they.

Uske baad ek thaal mein chawal ke paani aur fool ke saath ek angooti rakhi gayi. Un dono ke paas 3 mauke they angooti nikalne ke. Jisne jyada baar nikal di woh hi jeetega. Supriya ne teeno bar fatafat se angooti ko utha liya aur khush ho gayi.

Arpita - Bhai ab toh confirm ho gaya. Supriya ki hi chalne wali tum dono mein.

Is tarah se kafi sara hasi majak chalta raha aur un dono ko khana bhi khilaya gaya. Raat hone par, Arpita Supriya ko upar ke floor mein ek room mein le gayi. Room kafi jyada saja hua tha aur beech mein ek bed tha jis par fulo se ek dil bana hua tha. Supriya samajh gayi ki yehi uska suhaagraat ka room hoga. Abhi room mein ghar ki kafi saari ladies thi aur bachche bhi khel rahe they. Ladies apas mein aur Supriya se suhaag raat ki baatein karne lagi.

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Taiji - Supriya tum thak toh kafi gayi hongi par aaj raat sone ko nahi milega. Abhi toh raat bhar ki kushti baaki hai.

Chachi - Ise dekh kar toh nahi lagta ki ise neend aa rahi hai. Ye bhi wait hi kar rahi hai ki kab Atul aaye aur hum log bahar jaye.

Taiji - Nahi, dekho kitna ghabra rahi hai. Ab har koi tumhari tarah besharam nahi hota na. Tum logo ki ne toh apni suhaagraat mein itni zor zor awaaze ki thi ki poora ghar nahi so paaya tha.

Chachi - Ab usme meri kya galti thi. Aapke devar hi paagal ho gaye they.

Taiji - Rehne do, tum bhi kam nahi thi. Arpita tu bhi toh bata apni. Vineet ji bhi kum nahi hai hume pata hai.

Arpita thoda sharmate hue - Haan hum logo bhi jyada so nahi paye they. Vineet ko rokna toh ek mushkil kaam hi hai. Kam se kam teen baar toh kiya tha humne.

Taiji - Kafi lucky ho tum jo tumhe Vineet jaisa pati mila hai. Aur ab Atul ko Supriya jaisi biwi mil gayi. Dono hi bahut lucky ho.

Chachi - Haan bhai Atul toh ghar ka sabse seedha ladka hai. Supriya kahin uska toh tumhe chhute hi na nikal....

Arpita thode gusse mein - Chachi aap bhi na... kuch bhi bolte ho. Supriya daro mat, aapke jiju sab samjha denge bhai ko.

Thodi der tak ye hasi majak chala aur fir Atul ko lekar uske jijaji room mein aa gaye. Atul ke cousins room se nikalne ko tayyar hi nahi they. Un sab ki demand thi ki bhai se jab tak ek bada sa gift nahi milega woh log bahar nahi jayenge. Kisi tarah se Arpita ne un sabko manaya aur 10,001 dekar room se bahar kiya.

Jaate jaate, woh Supriya ke kaan mein boli - Supriya wahan bed ke side par doodh ka glass rakha hai, bhai ko pila dena. Aur drawer mein vaseline bhi rakhi hai agar koi problem ho toh. All the best!

Aur fir usne kamre ke darwaze band kar diye aur bahar se kundi laga di. Ab room mein sirf Supriya aur Atul akele reh gaye they.
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#30
Awesome update!
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#31
bahut badhiya update! Rocking aur mast kahani
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#32
Bohot hi zabardast update, bahot bahot hot aur erotic writings!
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#33
Amazing update and lovely story
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#34
Update 6

Kamra band hone ke baad Atul ne bhi andar se kundi laga di. Supriya bed ke ek kone par baithi hui thi aur uski aakhein neeche dekh rahi thi. Atul ne design wala kurta pyjama pehne hue tha, jabki Supriya saree aur jewellery pehne hue thi.

Atul - Hi Supriya….

Supriya ne softly bola - Hi…

Atul - Chalo finally ye log kamre se nikle. Kitne lamba raha na ye din.

Supriya - Hmmm. Haan.

Atul - Tum kafi thak gayi hongi, main help kar du jewellery aur baki sab utarne mein?

Supriya ne mann hi mann socha ki jyada hi jaldi hai ise toh sab utarne ki, pehle ek doosre ko jaan toh le.

Atul - Mera matlab tha thoda halka feel karogi aur aaram se baith payenge.

Supriya ne Atul ko dekh kar sir haan mein hila diya aur apni jewellery utaarne lagi. Jab usse gale ka haar peeche se nahi khula toh usne Atul ki aur dekha. Atul abhi tak darwaze ke paas hi khada tha, aur woh Supriya ka ishara samajh nahi paya.

Supriya ko bolna pada - Atul suno. Ye necklace nahi khul raha, help kar doge please.

Supriya ne shaadi se pehle hi Atul se ye manwa liya tha ki woh use naam se hi bulayegi. Aji or suno uske liye kafi old fashioned tha. Waise Atul usse 5 saal bada tha, Supriya abhi kuch hi mahino pehle 23 ki hui thi aur Atul 28 ka. Par Atul ko bhi isse koi problem nahi thi.

Atul jaldi se palang par Supriya ke peeche baith gaya aur peeche se necklace kholne laga. Use peeche se Supriya ki gori peeth dikh rahi thi jo kafi chikni aur soft lag rahi thi jaise us par koi bhi baal hi na ho. Necklace kholte hue Atul ke thandi ungliya Supriya ke gale par lagi aur Supriya ka poora shareer jaise kaanp hi utha. Necklace khulte hi Atul ne apne haath peeche kar liye.

Supriya - Thank you, ab mere baalo ke pin bhi hata doge please? 

Atul - Haan bilkul.

Atul ek ek karke Supriya ke baalo ke pin hatane laga. Pin hatate hatate usne ginti kho di thi ki kitne pin they. Kuch pin khulte hi Supriya ke baal uski peeth aur chehre par girne lage. Supriya ke baal uske kandhon se thoda neeche uske blouse ke beech tak aa rahe they. Atul uske baalo ko chhu kar feel kar pa raha tha ki uske baal kafi jyada hi silky aur soft they. Atul ko yakin nahi ho raha tha ki ye sab ab uska tha.

Atul ne pin nikal ka side mein rakh diye. Supriya ko ab kafi better mehsoos ho raha tha. Usne apne haathon se bhari kangan bhi nikal diye aur maang teeka bhi utaar ke side mein rakh diya. Saari jewellery utaarne ke baad Supriya bed par upar sarak kar baith gayi aur uske theek saamne Atul baitha tha.

Atul use gaur se dekh raha tha. Use pehli baar mauka mila tha Supriya ko photo ke bahar itni paas se dekhne ka. Supriya ka face kafi cute tha aur uske bhare hue gaal jaise koi bhi pakad kar kheechna chahe. Supriya waise toh patli thi par uska shareer sahi jagah se bhara hua tha. Tabhi toh shayad uski bhabhi use Golu bulati thi.

Supriya Atul ko ghoorte hue dekha toh woh pooch baithi - Kya hua, kya dekh rahe ho?

Atul - Kuch nahi, aise hi. Yakin hi nahi hota ki ham ab pati patni hai.

Supriya ko samajh nahi aaya woh kya bole - Mujhe bhi yakin nahi ho raha ki meri shaadi ho gayi hai. Sorry matlab hamari shaadi ho gayi.

Atul ne thodi himmat karke bola - Tumhe pata hai na shaadi ke baad pati patni kya karte hai. Yani ki hume aaj raat kya karna hai.

Supriya ke gaal ekdam laal ho gaye aur woh bholi bante hue boli - Nahin mujhe toh nahi pata.

Atul - Jhooth mat bolo. Tumhe tumhari bhabhi ne bataya toh sab hoga.

Supriya ne use ghoor kar dekha aur boli - Aap mujhe pehle hi din jhoothi bol rahe ho?

Atul hadbada sa gaya - Nahi, mera woh matlab nahi tha. Main toh bas keh raha tha…

Supriya usko hadbada dekh kar has padi - Its ok, majak kar rahi thi. Aapko bhi sab pata hi hoga. Waise aapki didi aapke liye ye doodh ka glass de kar gayi thi.

Ye bolte hi Supriya ko laga ki ye nahi bolna chahiye tha. Kya ye sochega ki main isko doodh peena ka bolkar invite kar rahi hoon sab karne ke liye.

Supriya - Matlab, aapka mann hai toh pee lo nahi toh theek hai.

Atul ne socha ki mann toh bahut hai mera, aur wait bhi itna kiya hai maine. Atul ne glass uthate hue bola - Haan main pee leta hoon.

Ek-do ghoonth peene ke baad use yaad aaya ki use Supriya se bhi pooch lena chahiye - Tum piyogi kya?

Supriya - Nahi nahi, aap pijiye.

Atul ne jaldi se doodh khatam kiya aur fir supriya ki aur dekhne laga. Usne kabhi sex nahi kiya tha toh use samajh nahi aa raha tha ki woh kaise shuru kare sab. Par bahar baithe sabhi logo ki shayad yehi ummeed thi usse ki woh aaj raat sab kar lega. Aur woh khud bhi chahta tha ki woh Supriya ke saath aaj raat sab kar le.

Supriya - Hum log aaj raat bas baatein bhi kar sakte hai.

Atul - Haan kyun nahi.

Atul aa kar Supriya ke barabar mein baith gaya aur uski baatein sunne laga. Jara si der mein Supriya toh jaise bolna hi shuru ho gayi, aur woh use shaadi ki baatein batani lagi. Himmat karke Atul ne Supriya ka haath apne haath mein le liya aur use aaram aaram se masalne laga. Uska haath tha hi itna mulayam ki Atul use chhod hi nahi paa raha tha. Par Supriya ki kahaniya toh khatam hi nahi ho rahi thi. Thodi der ke baad bolte bolte Supriya ko bhi ubaasi aane lagi aur uski aankhein bhi kafi bhari ho chuki thi. Kafi thand thi, toh Atul ne khade ho kar bed par ek rajai bicha di aur fir light off kar di.

Light band karne ke baad bhi kamre mein bahar ki roshni aa rahi thi. Light band karke Atul bhi rajai mein aakar leta, aur uske pair Supriya ke pairo se takraye. Pair takrate hi Supriya toh jaise neend se jaag hi gayi. Andhere mein Atul ka thoda confidence bada aur usne apne pairo ke neeche Supriya ke pair daba liye. Shayad doodh mein jo bhi mila hua tha woh bhi ab kaam karne laga tha. Woh dheere dheere Supriya ke aur paas aa gaya aur use peeche se pakad liya. Usne Supriya ke gaalo ko halke se kiss kiya aur use apni aur kheecha. Fir usne apni ek taang Supriya ki tang par rakhte hue use apne neeche kar liya. Ye sab itni jaldi ho gaya tha ki Supriya ko kuch sochne ka mauka hi nahi mila. Par uski neend ab poori tarah se ud chuki thi.

Gaalo ko choomte choomte, Atul ne uske hoothon ka choomna shuru kiya aur apna haath Supriya ke pet par ghumane laga. Supriya ka poora shareer itna soft tha ki Atul aur excited ho raha tha. Supriya ne kiss karte hue apni aankhein band kar li aur woh bhi Atul ko halke halke kiss kar rahi thi.

Atul ko Supriya ke shareer ki khushbu aur sparsh ne pagal sa kar diya tha. Usne Supriya ko halka sa uthaya aur uski saree ko kheech kar utaar faika. Uske baad woh fir se Supriya ke upar aa gaya aur uske gaalo aur hothon ko aur bhi jyada zor se kiss karne laga. Supriya ne apne ek haath se zor se bed ki chaddar ko pakad liya.

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Atul - Supriya… ahhhhh… kitne soft hai tumhare honth.

Atul ke lagatar kiss se Supriya ke honth toh jaise sil hi gaye they aur woh dheere dheere siskiya le rahi thi.

Kiss karte hue Atul ke haath Supriya ke poore shareer par ghoom rahe they. Atul ne uska blouse aur petticoat bhi khol diya aur ab woh sirf bra aur panty mein thi. Supriya Atul ke neeche thi aur Atul uske gale aur bra ke upar choom raha tha. Atul ne fatafat se apna kurta pajama bhi utaara aur Supriya ko apni baho mein bhara. Atul itna excited ho chuka tha ki use samajh aa gaya ki use jaldi jaldi sab kar dena chahiye, isse pehle uska virya underwear mein nikal jaye. 

Usne Supriya ki panty ko kheech kar neeche utaara aur apna underwear bhi utaar diya. Dono neeche se ab bilkul nange ho kar ek dusre se lipte hue they. Supriya ki dil ki dhadkan badi hui thi aur use samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki abhi tak shaant Atul ne ek dam se kaise itni jaldi uske saare kapde utaar diye they.

Atul ne Supriya ki taango ko failaya aur apne lund se yoni ka dwar khojne laga. Use andhere mein samajh nahi aa raha tha ki woh kahan apna lund daale. Supriya ko uska lund neeche takrata hua mehsoos hua. Waise toh kafi thand thi, par uske paseene nikle hue they. Bhabhi ne use samajhaya tha ki kayi baar ladko ko choot ka chhed nahi milta, toh unki help kar deni chahiye. Help karna galat chhed mein daalne se toh behtar hi hai. Supriya ne neeche haath karke uske lund ko sahi disha di. Lund pakadne par use laga ki Atul ka lund jyada bada ya mota nahi hai. Shayad uski hatheli se thoda sa lamba.

Atul ka lund choot ke bahar takra raha tha aur andar jaane ki koshish kar raha tha. Supriya siskiya le rahi thi aur usne Atul ke haath kaske pakde hue they. Atul ne jor laga kar Supriya ki choot mein apna lund thoda sa ghusa diya. Lund andar jaate hi Supriya ki jor si cheekh nikal gayi aur use laga ki uski choot mein se kuch beh raha hai. Bhabhi ne use bataya tha ki pehli baar karne par khoon nikalta hai toh woh thoda darr si gayi aur uske aasu nikalne lage.

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Andhere mein Atul Supriya ki halat samajh nahi paya aur usne apna lund poora tarah se andar daal diya aur uske haathon ko kas ke pakad kar woh uske andar dhakke maarne laga. Supriya ko dard ho raha tha aur uski halat kharab thi aur usne apni taango ko hawa mein uthaya aur Atul se lipat gayi. Kuch hi jhatko ke baad Atul ne ek zor ka dhakka maara aur Supriya ko kas kar pakad kar uske upar let gaya. Supriya ko apni choot ke andar kuch geela sa mehsoos hua, shayad Atul jhad gaya tha. Atul ke dhakke dheere hote gaye aur fir usne apna lund uski choot se nikal diya aur bed par side mein let gaya. Dheere dheere un dono ki tej saansein normal hui.

Supriya ko laga ki kya bas itna hi tha? Uska toh abhi tak kuch bhi nahi hua tha aur use toh abhi shayad ye sab thoda acha lagna shuru hua tha. Atul uth kar bathroom gaya aur apne lund pe lage khoon ko dekh kar thoda ghabra sa gaya par use bhi uske jiju ne samjhaya tha ki ye normal hai, balki acha hai kyunki isse ye pata chalta hai ki Supriya ne hsse pehle kisi mard ke saath sex nahi kiya tha. Atul ne apne aap ko saaf kiya aur kapde pehen kar bahar aaya.

Atul ke bahar aane par, Supriya bhi apne kapde samet kar bathroom mein gayi aur apne aap ko saaf karke aur kapde pehen kar bahar aayi. Use neeche thoda dard ho raha tha. Tab tak Atul ne bed ki chaddar change kar di aur firse kambal bicha kar usme let gaya. Supriya bhi bahar aa kar bed par Atul ke barabar mein let gayi.

Atul mann mein kafi khush tha ki usne Supriya ki seal tod di. Wahin Supriya ko samajh nahi aaya ki sab itni jaldi kaise khatam ho gaya. Shayad abhi thoda baad mein aur kare, usne socha.

Atul ne Supriya ka haath pakadte hue kaha - Supriya ab hum dono ek ho gaye hai. I hope tumhe acha laga hoga ye sab.

Supriya uski aur dekh kar halke se muskurayi aur apna chehra uske seene mein chupa liya.

Atul ne Supriya ko apni bahon mein bhar liya aur jald hi woh dono aise hi so gaye.
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#35
next update come soon with hot pics

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#36
bahut bahut shandaar update
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#37
awesome update
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#38
Fantastic and fascinating update
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#39
what a fantastic update! Very very sexy and erotic writings!! Your writing is really interesting and erotic!!!!
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#40
Bahut badhiya update
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