Romance An Old Debt has to be Paid..by salir

[Lollobionda]

A tingling eroticism with a high entertainment value, excellently written and staged within reach...


Even though I realise that this is not a fantasy story, but rather a mixture of autobiography and reports of 
experiences embellished with a little fantasy ... I was very surprised by Nadir's plot.

I would have been more understanding (and in my opinion it would have been the right way to go) if Nadir 
- after bringing Jalal into the house, informing Meena and announcing Jalal's visit - had said goodbye to 
him on the grounds that he still had something to do at the hospital... just as he had intended to do when 
he went to the car.

Now he has to live with the negative label of ‘cuckold’ and sexual failure - if Jalal takes this to the extreme 
and keeps telling Nadir this in the future -.

If he had left, the impression would have been created that Jalal's sexual intercourse with Meena in their 
marriage bed took place without his knowledge or involvement.

He would be in a better position without having diminished or even lost the reputation and respect that 
Jalal had shown him up to that point.

But only Nadir himself knows why he acted the way he did ...


In this sense
All the best

Lollobionda

[Salir]

A tingling eroticism with a high entertainment value, excellently written and staged within reach...


Even though I realise that this is not a fantasy story, but rather a mixture of autobiography and reports of 
experiences embellished with a little fantasy ... I was very surprised by Nadir's plot.

I would have been more understanding (and in my opinion it would have been the right way to go) if Nadir 
- after bringing Jalal into the house, informing Meena and announcing Jalal's visit - had said goodbye to 
him on the grounds that he still had something to do at the hospital... just as he had intended to do when 
he went to the car.

Now he has to live with the negative label of ‘cuckold’ and sexual failure - if Jalal takes this to the extreme 
and keeps telling Nadir this in the future -.

If he had left, the impression would have been created that Jalal's sexual intercourse with Meena in their 
marriage bed took place without his knowledge or involvement.

He would be in a better position without having diminished or even lost the reputation and respect that 
Jalal had shown him up to that point.

But only Nadir himself knows why he acted the way he did ...


In this sense
All the best

Lollobionda

It has to be told as it was, my friend...

Well, you can't reconcile my actions, or rather Nadir's actions, with rational thinking or normal behavior of a (normal) man in our society..

But what he thought and decided on that particular day...
He knew or thought that he was in a position of control, the topic that had always preoccupied him and that had also irritated him as much as the last days before...

He didn't want to be portrayed - especially for Jalal as his love rival - as a cheating husband who lost his wife and love to him, to Jalal., or whom Jalal could conquer his wife without his knowledge...

He wanted to tel and show him...:
"I know what you want and know you try to have my wife, you couldn't have her because of me. Now I decide whether you can, I allow you to have her but I can stop you any moment it if I want."
And with that, he achieved his goal in both directions. His selfish pride  about control and, more importantly, his inclination.

Enjoy,
Salir

[Salir]

Nadir suffered, he experienced pain when Mansour came out of the story as the winner, as one who conquered Meena and portrayed him as the loser, even though he enjoyed it sexually because of his inclination.

This time he wanted to prevent that, he wanted to show Jalal and say I know and I allow it to happen, that was the most important thing for him. Under no circumstances should Jalal think that he is the winner, he can take Meena, even if just physically, his Meena without his knowledge.

There is no cuckoldry element in his act, because a real cuckold, he thinks,  is active in the sex act, but absolute and just "submissive", other than Nadir who feels and sees himself as somebody who "dominates" the happenings.

In any case he wants to be under no circumstances as a cheated and abandoned husband.

I hope I was able to clarify the matter and his thoughts somewhat. Certainly not usual but typical for someone who thinks and feels like that.


Enjoy 
Salir

[RCF]

Agreed Nadir did the right thing this time if he had to keep his dominance as well as feed his fantasies both without any damage to his love. Meena knows Nadir is watching them and Nadir is having best time and Jalal getting his desire fulfilled. Every one in good position from here. I am pretty sure Nadir and Meena will also travel to his ranch coming weekend after tonight and there will be more adventures at the ranch.

Nadir and Meena living life full of adventures and sexy encounters. Hopefully they continue to enjoy with out any setback again.

~ RCF

[Lollobionda]

I fear that Jalal will try to use the new situation to his advantage: He will be even more demanding.
In contrast to Jalal, Mansour still had - if I may say so - decency and restraint when Nadir was present.
With Jalal, it's a completely different level. It developed very differently from the first moment and at the first opportunity.

I believe that this relationship will cause Nadir a lot of headaches and unrest.
We will see what the future brings...

In German it says:
"Kommt Zeit, kommt Rat"
Come time, come advice


In this sense
All the best

Lollobionda

[RCF]

I fear that Jalal will try to use the new situation to his advantage: He will be even more demanding.
In contrast to Jalal, Mansour still had - if I may say so - decency and restraint when Nadir was present.
With Jalal, it's a completely different level. It developed very differently from the first moment and at the first opportunity.

I believe that this relationship will cause Nadir a lot of headaches and unrest.
We will see what the future brings...

In German it says:
"Kommt Zeit, kommt Rat"
Come time, come advice


In this sense
All the best

Lollobionda

Yes quiet possible. There's always trouble when the 3rd fiddle doesn't respect boundaries. As long as he is kept distant when needed and reminded his boundaries he should not be able to threaten any relationships here , But we all know he wants Meena for himself as his wife from previous episodes so lets see how Jalal looks at new found freedom with Meena now that he knows Nadir is ok with him spending time with Meena.

~ RCF

[RCF]

Nadir,
Please post next updates. Eagerly waiting for next one.

~RCF

[Salir]

Nadir,
        Please post next updates. Eagerly waiting for next one.

~RCF

Soon my friend,
I am on a meeting trip and had no time. Today I fly back…

[Salir]

Here is Meena talking!


Ok, I’ve held back a bit in the last few days, I don’t like writing and discussing about the story, 
even if I like to write the story! 

The story goes on how it happened... Some events were fun for me,
and some not, and I'm not that proud of some of them, or not at all proud even ashamed, but 
that's life and I'm only a human... 
The main thing is that I'm satisfied with my life and with where I stand now, I could even say I'm happy.

Why I am writing this then, now? 

After reading the last posts of readers (as Nadir says always the friends,), I thought it was time I talk about a point that my dear man (A man of a male way of thinking!) hadn’t mentioned.

(By the way, he is coming back this night from a short trip abroad and I hope he could update the story, soon.) 

My lovely readers of this /my story,

 as it continues and is discussed, it seems to me that you see our relationships, in this phase of the story, as a line between two main active points, Nadir and Jalal. And I act or rather "react", as the third point, but just passive in the middle. 
They both pull me in opposite directions and the one who is stronger at a certain moment reaches to me and wins me and then a new game starts again from the beginning, and soon…

I just wanted to mention that if my this if my impression in this regard, is correct, your interpretation is fundamentally wrong, sorry but it is so, totally wrong!

I am not a typical feminist or dominatrix! As is fashionable these days.
I would rather describe myself as feminine and I still think I like this role better. I am very feminine and love to be, I love to give myself but only in certain moments. Otherwise, I am a person who decides what happens to her.
I do not let myself be enslaved or played with, I prefer to play with others, especially with those who describe themselves as the stronger sex!

I let Nadir do everything with and accept what he asks of me because he is my happiness and the love of my life; that's why he can play with me!

What I am saying is that the state here is actually like a triangle and not a line.
There are three main points that are active and clearly the upper point of triangle, that observes the two points below and moves in a intentionally chosen way to one of the others is Meena! 

I give something to someone when I want it and not when he decides what to give as a gift from me! It's that simple!
My Nadir was so busy with proudly and enthusiastically explaining his relationship to his “Controlling of the condition” that he has forgotten this point!

Kiss you all,

[Lollobionda]

" ... I give something to someone when I want it and not when he decides what to give as a gift from me! It's that simple!
My Nadir was so busy with proudly and enthusiastically explaining his relationship to his “Controlling of the condition” that he has forgotten this point!"
Meena

* * *

This is the crucial point, because in reality Meena is the one who keeps the two men on a tight leash and only allows what she wants. 

Meena gave Nadir, - who was sitting in front of the screen in his study watching the lovemaking between his beloved Meena and Jalal in their shared bedroom - (as so often happens at such moments) a sweet little smile through the camera as she looked up - knowing that Nadir was watching the lovemaking and her charms - and made him feel that he was the one who initiated, facilitated and was in control of this act...

... And Nadir is happy and blissful.


Ciao
Lollobionda

[Salir]

" ... I give something to someone when I want it and not when he decides what to give as a gift from me! It's that simple!
My Nadir was so busy with proudly and enthusiastically explaining his relationship to his “Controlling of the condition” that he has forgotten this point!"
Meena

* * *

This is the crucial point, because in reality Meena is the one who keeps the two men on a tight leash and only allows what she wants. 

Meena gave Nadir, - who was sitting in front of the screen in his study watching the lovemaking between his beloved Meena and Jalal in their shared bedroom - (as so often happens at such moments) a sweet little smile through the camera as she looked up - knowing that Nadir was watching the lovemaking and her charms - and made him feel that he was the one who initiated, facilitated and was in control of this act...

... And Nadir is happy and blissful.


Ciao
Lollobionda

Hi,
Just arrived from airport.
Completely correct, who decides about whom?

We men, we only THINK that we decide...

I'll try to give an update tomorrow, I hope I can do it... 

Salir, 

[Lollobionda]

Hi,
Just arrived from airport.
Completely correct, who decides about whom?

We men, we only THINK that we decide...

I'll try to give an update tomorrow, I hope I can do it... 

Salir, 

Welcome back, my friend!

Take your time and recover first. 
You have spoiled us with your updates over the last few days and made us happy.

Only very, very few authors manage that here.

Thank you both once again ...


Ciao
Lollobionda

[Salir]

Hi friends, I had planned to send an update today but unfortunately there was so much to do after my trip... 

I hope to be able to continue the story tomorrow.
 
And I promise that it will be an exciting and long update.

Have a good time

Enjoy
Salir

[desihunter]

Thanks for letting us know

[RCF]

Hi friends, I had planned to send an update today but unfortunately there was so much to do after my trip... 

I hope to be able to continue the story tomorrow.
 
And I promise that it will be an exciting and long update.

Have a good time

Enjoy
Salir

Thanks Salir. 

Eagerly waiting for next one.

[Salir]

… Continuation New Horizons 2 (III)

Nadir’s Narration:

 
He watched with his mouth hanging open as she crawled up on the bed, instinctively
 
raising up his left arm as she curled up next to him.
 
 
Meena stuck her tongue over her upper lip, pausing to look up at him, then took the
 
base of his cock in her left hand, wrapping her ringed fingers over all the loose skin
 
 that made up the top of his nuts sack and slowly tugged it up over the root of his
 
cock shaft.
 
 
Jalal's eye drooped and he let out a long sigh as his arm fall over Meena's
 
shoulders.
 
 
I felt faint. "Uhhh, Meena," I mumbled.
 
She looked at Jalal, biting her lip as she lazily stroked the wide base of Jalal's cock
 
shaft, the middle column of which was flexed prominently under her grip.
 
She held it out in front of her, examining the large head so closely she looked
 
cross eyed.
 
 
"Have you enjoyed fucking me previously with this thing Jalal?" Meena whispered, giving the
 
head a kiss, making it twitch.
 
 
"Oooh," he moaned. He was flexing his cock in Meena's grip.
 
 
She just stared at it, shaking her head.
 
"God... I'm going to have this big cock," she whispered. "Your big hard cock."
 
She started stroking it again and glanced over at him.
 
 
"Wow," I said under my breath. I had a hard on.


Meena looked back down at it and slowly leaned closer, rapidly flicking her tongue.
 
 
"Yes... please…" Jalal groaned out as his head fell back against the headboard.
 
 
"Yeah?" Meena asked softly, ",feels good?"
 
 
"Ohhhh..." he groaned as she took went on.
 
 
 Jalal rest a hand on the top of Meena's head waiting for her to contine.
 
 
She held still on him and began jerking all the loose nut sack skin in her hand
 
up and down the base of his cock, glancing around.
 
 
"Mmmm," she moaned over it as she continued jerking Jalal's shaft.
 
Meena tilted her head back to look at him, then returned her attention to his cock.
 
While holding it up with her right hand, she began running the nails of her left hand
 
over his entire nut sack and up the underside of his cock and back down again.
 
 
Jalal moaned out loud.
 
 
Meena grinned and bit her lip, tilting her head back to look up at him.
 
 
Jalal’s eyes were shut and his mouth hung open.
 
 
Meena began jerking the base faster, still straining to look up at him.
 
 
Jalal’s mouth opened wider.
 
 
She looked again at the head of his long dick and and began jerking the skin
 
around the base of it faster and faster, once more stopping and staring at Jalal's eyes.

 
She probably thought the whole time that I was watching her and her activity, although
 
she hadn't looked in the direction of the camera for the last few minutes, probably so
 
as not to draw Jalal's attention to it.
 
 
She stared at him as she slowly stroked his now very hard dick, her shoulders rising
 
and falling with her excited breath.
 

For a moment I noticed that she had turned her hand slightly and glanced down at
 
her wedding rings.
 
 
I didn’t know if Jalal noticed that. It was a very stimulating and erotic glance.
 
But unfortunately only lasted a short time.
 
 
but then another sinfull movement from her occurred. Meena looked at him
 
and flicked her ring at him with a sexy squint of the eyes.
 
Then she stared again at her left hand as she slowly rolled it up and down Jalal's length.
 
Her rings glinting bright against the wet brown skin of his thick shaft.
 
He moaned again and Meena turned to look up at him. "You like fucking a married
 
woman, Jalal?" she asked, jerking him.

 
"Hell yess, if her name Meena is…" he whispered back to her.
 
He was slowly pumping his hips up into her hand.

 
"Yes? Young married women? Do you like married Meena?  Do you want to stuff
 
this big cock, inside Meena’s little pussy and make her scream and beg
 
for more?"
 
 
"Meena..." I said, my mouth hanging open as I leaned toward monitor.
 
I felt like my boner was going to explode at any moment.
 
 
She just stared back at him as she jerked Jalal's cock.
 
 
"Hell yes…" he groaned in response.
 
 
"Mak her cum? Oooh!" Meena said through pursed lips as she stared at
 
his cock in her hand. "Shaking me up and down on this big, long cock! Ohhh!"
 
she groaned, quickly engulfing the head with a whimper and then holding it to
 
look at again.
 
"You want to fuck my little pussy Jalal, you wanted it since you saw me for
 
first time, and now you are here with your big cock. Mmm'ahhh," Meena
 
 moaned as she stared at it. "I'm holding your big cock in my bedroom. Uhhh!
 
Ohhhh my God..." Meena moaned as she looked at the big head.
 
 
I nodded as I stared at screen and rubbed my crotch.
 
 
"Oooh!" she moaned. "…baby..." She looked up at Jalal. ",going take care of your
 
cock Jalal," she whined sexily at him as she jerked his shaft. Then, looking back at
 
 it, "Take care of it with my little pussy..."
 
 
"God!" I gushed, feeling my eyes droop.
 
"Uhhh… God, Meena," I groaned. "I like seeing your pretty little face while you
 
take care of it... Of his big, hard rofd…" I stammered in a lust filled daze.
 
 
She bit her lip at him with an " You like watching me take care of this cock?"

 
"Yeah," he nodded through half closed eyes.

 
"Yeah?" she asked with honest sincerity in her eyes. "I made it all hard and now
 
 I'm gonna take care of it... Like a good girl, Jalal…", and watched slightly trembling,
 
 shining head of his dick.
 
"Ummm!" Meena gasped instinctively using her upper lip to clear the saliva that
 
had formed over her bottom lip and swallowing as she exhaled through her nostrils,
 
looking at the cock in her hand. She tilt her head back to look at Jalal as she lazily
 
stroked his shaft. "This okay?" she asked, gently cupping his egg-sized nuts and
 
rolling them in her tiny hand like a pair of Boading balls.
 
 
Jalal just look back at her with lustful hazy eyes.
 
 
"God damn that's sexy looking," I said under my breath.
 
 
"Goddd," I said under my breath, staring at Meena like a zombie.
 
I was a witness the whole time that Meena now dominates the scene.
 
She was doing whatever she wanted with him and me.
 
 
Meena stopped and spit into her left hand, then began jerking his cock from top to
 
 
bottom, getting another groan from Jalal as he lifted his head to look down at her.
 
 
His cock had become super rigid in Meena's slickened grip. Even me could hear it.
 
 
She jerked him faster, looking at him as she did with an increasingly furrowed brow.
 
"What's a mature man doing with such a big cock?" she whispered hotly at the large
 
head she was rolling in her palm.
 
 
Jalal just stared down at Meena with his mouth hanging open as she stroked him.
 
"Fuck that hot ass pussy," he mumbled with half closed eyes.
 
 
"Oooh…yeah?" Meena whined, tilting her head to look back at him. "Fucking
 
my little hot pussy? Fucking me good? Mmmm!" she moaned turning back to look
 
at it as she stroked it.
 
 
I coulnt stand it longer, her gaze, her wedding ring and her playing with that
 
larg dick and above all her words, her unspoken request to be taken from his
 
boner, were too much for me.
 
I reached down and and freed my throbbing hard on and started jerking.
 
It didn't take long before I squirted in my fist, and had to reach for some paper
 
towels over my desk.
 
 
 
Jalal just sat as he was, breathing heavy as he stared down at Meena.
 
"I just...want to get in your hot married pussy Meena, you know?" he said
 
looking down at her. "Meena?", he asked.
 
 
Meena bit her lip and gave him an anxious gaze in return to what he had said.
 
 
"I wanna fuck your married, hot pussy," he said, pumping his hips up.
 
 
This got Meena's attention and she resumed slowly stroking him as she looked back at him.
 
"God Jalal," she whispered at him.
 
 
"I can stop... if it is painful… I promise," he said to her.
 
 
"Byby," Meena said softly, reaching to caress his cheek.
 
 
"I wanna get inside you Meena," he stammered, flexing his cock in her hand and
 
causing her to look at it.
 
 
“Ohhh…” came her quivering sigh.
 
 
She looked back at his dick, bit her lip and took a deep breath, letting it out slowly
 
as she continued stroking him. She very slowly began pushing and pulling her hips.
 
"Can you take me inside you again?" ,he asked softly.
 
 
"Ehmmm," Meena whimpered faintly. Then after pausing a moment, she nodded
 
to him.
 
 
"Yeah? Do you let me?", he asked.
 
 
Meena took a deep breath and nodded again, looking from him to the cock she was
 
stroking and back to him again, an earnest look in her eyes.
 
 
"God that's sexy." I whispered.
 
 
Jalal scoot back to sit against the headboard.
 
 
Meena stayed as she was for a moment, then sat on one hip, then scoot back where
 
she was, curled up next to Jalal on his left.
 
 
She took his cock in her left hand and slowly stroked it as she stared at it,
 
"Oh my God," she sighed at the long dick, then flicked her head, tossing her hair over
 
to one side.
 
 
"Did you want doing that to me, Jalal?" she asked, not bothering to look up at him.
 
 
"Hell yeah," he exhaled as he looked down at her.
 
 
"Yes?" Meena moaned as she jerked his cock head faster with a loose grip.
 
 
She turned to look up at him. "You like fucking me good and hard and making me
 
take all this big cock? mmph…God!" Meena whimpered.
 
 
After a few more minutes of stroking she began jerking the base wildly, getting
 
a steady low groan from Jalal.
 
"Yeah?" she asked, tilting her head back to look up at him.
 
 
"I'm about to cum, Meena" he groaned.
 
Jalal moaned louder.
 
 
"Mmmm… Come on,"  Meena moaned stroked hard, staring at Jalal's cock as
 
she jerked it silly.
 
 
"Oh sh'... Ohh!!"
 
 
"Mmmm!!"
 
Jalal suddenly tensed up, flexing his calves, and then began to cum.
 
"Ohhhhshitttttttt!! OhmyGodddddthatshitissoooogoood!!"
 
 
Meena frantically jerked the base of his cock as his shaft flexed and pulsed
 
with seminal delivery.
 
 
"Oh Goddd..." I stammered, beside myself with lust.
 
 
Jalal just writhed against the headboard as she jerked him silly.
 
Jalal's cock pulsed in her jerking grip and several ropes of cum shot over
 
her eye and forehead and in her hair, getting another "Oh!" from Meena and
 
causing her to reflexively rear back, blinking.
 
She took a deep breath and took the head of his rod as she milked the cum from it.
 
 
Jalal's convulsing hips was the only movement from him, holding each time to
 
squeeze them up, only to quickly release and immediately squeeze up again.
 
Again Meena breathed in deep and popped as she jerked Jalal's cock, drops of cum
 
flinging from the end of it.
 
 
The mess on her face was dripping from her forehead and down her cheek and hanging
 
from her chin as she stroked him.
 
Another thick rope of cum suddenly pulsed out and lapped across her open mouth,
 
 just coating her bottom lip and chin with a sheen of sperm.
 
"Oooh!" she whined sexily.
 
Meena just stared at her tiny cum covered fingers as she rolled them up over the head
 
of Jalal's cock.
 
When she finally stopped she swallowed hard, taking in a deep breath and looking
 
around as strands of cum dripped from her face and hung from her chin.
 
She wiped her chin with the back of her hand and looked up at Jalal.
 
"You cum a lot," she said, blinking at him as she slowly stroked the head of his cock, "Wow."
 
Meena's face was a mess. It was dripping with cum.
 
 
“Damn,” he said, staring down at her, then let his head fall back.
 
 
"Mmmm," Meena moaned. "Did I do a good job for you Jalal?" she asked softly, turning
 
to look up at him smiling as she gently smacked the head of his penis against her cheek.
 
 
"Hell yeah," he sighed without opening his eyes.
 
 
"Yes?" she asked, giving the head of his penis a breif stroke.
 
 
"Oh!" he moaned.
 
 
Meena exhaled a weary smile as she turned back to his thick still partly erected
 
stem  in her hand.
 
" I enjoyed serving your big cock, ", Meena spoke softly.
 
Then she squeezed up the shaft and over the head and a thick glob of semen came out.
 
Meena bit her lip with a worried looking "Mmmm!", she said and then looked deeply
 
at his softening organ.
 
 
Meena reached for the night stand next to her and took some paper towels and cleaned
 
her hands, but not her face.
 
Then she just rolled over onto her back with her arms flung out and sighed.
 
 
It was so hot to see her relax with semen streaked across her face.
 
She had a glass of water on the night stand and Jalal leaned over her to reach it.
 
He took it and gave Meena.
 
 
"Thank you," she said, propping herself up to take a drink, finishing the glass in
 
three gulps.
 
 
" Can I use your bathroom? " Jalal asked and got up. 
 
 
" Yes, sure ,", and showed him the door.
 
 
I thought yes, Meena didn't want to have real sex with him anymore,
 
at least not today, because of discomfort and pain she felt before.
 
Would you like a continuation of the story? Then please write your opinion about it or 
 
at least activate the like button on the bottom right ! Thank you!

[Lollobionda]

Meena uses all her feminine charms and attributes to satisfy Jalal's craving for her on the one hand
and to fulfil her beloved husband Nadir's long-awaited dream - after Mansour was no longer in their 
life - of seeing her with another mature man in a hot erotic game on the other.


The two men in their different roles were like two shadow puppets in a shadow theatre.
And Meena was the source of light.
In this play, she had full control over the two men lying at her feet from the very beginning.
Meena showed us once again that she is a very special woman.

Whether this is the end of the evening or the beginning of another highly erotic game, we will
probably find out in the next episode.

In any case, I'm already very excited and can hardly wait ...


In this sense
All the best

Lollobionda

[Salir]

Tomorrow the third and probably a fourth part of this installment, New Horizons 2, will be updated.
 All these parts (New H...2) belong together and should be read in one go...

I would like to announce here that this episode, New H... will soon be over. 
Probably in 1 or 2 installments, (New H.. 3 and possibly New H.. 4).

appearance of following episodes depending on the interests of readers.

We are honestly disappointed how neutral some people towards the story,  behave,  

and if this condition continues in the next 2-3 parts,  we unfortunately have to disappoint 

our loyal readers who are always present here.
 
We would stop the story, at least here on this portal.

We are very sorry but please agree with us...

We would like to thank a few very nice friends who are always happy about a sequel 

and show their satisfaction with their analyses or explanation their opinions.

Thanks a lot,
S + M.

[Lollobionda]

Tomorrow the third and probably a fourth part of this installment, New Horizons 2, will be updated.
 All these parts (New H...2) belong together and should be read in one go...

I would like to announce here that this episode, New H... will soon be over. 
Probably in 1 or 2 installments, (New H.. 3 and possibly New H.. 4).

appearance of following episodes depending on the interests of readers.

We are honestly disappointed how neutral some people towards the story,  behave,  

and if this condition continues in the next 2-3 parts,  we unfortunately have to disappoint 

our loyal readers who are always present here.
 
We would stop the story, at least here on this portal.

We are very sorry but please agree with us...

We would like to thank a few very nice friends who are always happy about a sequel 

and show their satisfaction with their analyses or explanation their opinions.

Thanks a lot,
S + M.

Ich glaube, ich weiß, warum viele Leser die Geschichte "nur" lesen und es dabei belassen, "ohne" einen 
Kommentar abzugeben oder ihre Meinung zum Ausdruck zu bringen.
Sie denken sich;
"Es ist ja eh eine "reale" Geschichte, die sich so zugetragen hat und die wir mit unseren Meinungen und 
Vorschlägen in ihrem Verlauf ja auch gar nicht beeinflussen können. Also lesen wir es und nehmen es so 
zur Kenntnis".

Ein Vorschlag von mir wäre (natürlich nur, wenn ihr beide damit einverstanden seid), anzukündigen, dass 
ihr in den nächsten Kapiteln mehrere "Phantasieepisoden" in die Geschichte einbauen werdet, die dem 
Leser die Möglichkeit geben, mit seinen Anregungen, Ideen und Vorschlägen den Verlauf mitzubestimmen.

Vielleicht ist das für den Einen oder Anderen ein Anreiz, sich aktiv in die Geschichte einzubringen.
Eine Garantie dafür gibt es nicht, aber einen Versuch wäre es wert ... 


Ich wünsche euch eine gute Nacht
Lollobionda

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Nice story