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07-12-2024, 03:44 PM
Hello everyone,
Welcome to my another story, this is slow seducing and needs little patience to make your dick raise, i shall not post any pictures but would expect viewers to post per there character imagination, as this would motivate me to write more, and the completion of the story all depends on the viewers so motivate us more by your feedback.
Episode 1
It was raining heavily around 8pm in the night, Inspector Ashok stopped the jeep in front of the Sankalp security office in Bangalore, he honked the jeep horn to alarm the constables to come out and hearing the continuous horn constable Ramappa took a umbrella and saw outside.
A: Hey Ramappa what are you looking at my face, move your ass and come here quickly.
R: yes, sir coming ( he took umbrella, his inner mind was abusing the inspector for being so rude, but still he continued to perform his duty)
As soon as he came , Inspector Ashok opened the back door to reveal the thirf whom he had arrested.
R: sir, who's he?
A: ah? He's my relative,and wanted to see my working place so i have got him.
R: oh is it sir, then why have you put cuffs around his hand sir, you could have got without that.
A: yeah, but what what to do Ramappa that's the ethnic attire i requested him, as it's mandatory in our office.
R: oh correct know sir, ok i shall treat your relative wisely..sir ah... ( Talking with thief) Hello sir, my name is Ramappa I'm head constable here.( He just gave a funny smile and turned to his right)
A: Hey Ramappa, you just getting old without any brain, he's a thief don't you understand that also, what kind of question do you ask, get him inside.
R: oh sorry sir, I got to know he's thief but ..
But...
A: ya ya close your buttt and get him now..
Hey getup, what you sitting like a boss, Ramappa held him by his collar and got him inside the station. There were roughly around 9 officers in the security office all sorrounded around him and only station Inspector Ashok came front to introgate him.
A: so tell me, what's your name?
T: my name is Vishnu sir
A: hmmm, so Vishnu with all due respect tell me where's the bag?
V: which bag sir? I don't know what you trying to ask
A: look don't try to act too smart shut up and open your mouth else, I need to show you my true face.
V: sir, seriously I don't know what you are talking about ( immediately Ramappa kicked him from behind and started abusing)
R: son of a bitch open your blady mouth, you think we are fool to get you into office?
V: sir, please understand what bag are you talking about?
A: it's the same bag which you took from minister Shivkumar
V: size i don't know any minister by name Shivkumar
R: Sir, if we ask like this he would not open his mouth ( Ramappa started hitting on his head)
V: sir, hit me anywhere but not on my head, it pisses me off.
R: blady rascal don't give instructions to me, i shall hit their only...whatbwill you do.
V: now sir, please don't want.....
When Ramappa didn't stop, thief Vishnu got up and kicked him and after which other security officer officer attached him and he started to hit every one, inspector Ashok was instructing constables to attack but the strong built 20 year old Vishnu was thrashing everyone, and all the security officer officer had got bruises by fighting with him, but inspector Ashok smartly from behind took a rod and banged on the head of Vishnu ..
The hit was very painful and surprising. Vishnu's vision became blurry, his ears rang loudly, and he felt extremely dizzy.
He felt his legs give way and his body collapsed. He couldn't think clearly and everything around him seemed far away.
The pain in his head became unbearable, and Vishnu passed out, losing consciousness.
Flashback......
*Scene: Minister Shivkumar's Office*
Inspector Ashok: Minister Shivkumar, sir. I've been seeking a transfer for months, but it's not going through. I was hoping you could help me. Actually my parents are sick sir, so it would help if you transfer me to Mangalore.
Minister Shivkumar: (smirking) Ah, Ashok, my friend. I can definitely help you. But you know how much we need to bribe our superior's too, this is something I'm saying youbfrim long time hmm first arrange 30 lakh, rest we shall think
Inspector Ashok: (stunned) hmmmm ok sir
*Days Later, Phone Conversation*
Minister Shivkumar: (over phone) Ashok, my friend. I've been thinking. Maybe we can revisit that transfer application of yours. So we need to speak.
Inspector Ashok: (cautious) What changed your mind, Minister?
Minister Shivkumar: (laughing) Let's discuss it over dinner. I'll send a car for you at 8 pm. Ensure you without notifying in the station
Inspector Ashok: (hesitant) Sure sir, I will come
Around 8 finally the car came, Ashok finished his work, and went early
Minister Shivkumar: Ashok, i hope no one noticed, come have a seat let's have dinner
Inspector Ashok: yes sir, ( he looks around the big mansion) no one did, so actually why you called here sir?
Minister Shivkumar: ahh( takes a deep breath) I've been cheated out of one crore rupees in an anti-smuggling operation. I need your help to find the culprit Shivkumar.
Inspector Ashok: Who could it be, Minister? And how you got involved?
Minister Shivkumar: That's what I want you to find out. I used party funds for the operation, so this needs to be handled discreetly. And om the background don't show much interest.
Inspector Ashok: I understand. You want me to investigate quietly, without filing a complaint?
Minister Shivkumar: Exactly. Because it involves party fund and I don't want anyone to know about this, Just find out who's behind this and retrieve the money. Leave the rest to me.
Inspector Ashok: Alright, Minister. I'll get to work on it. But I have to ask, why did you use party funds for an anti-smuggling operation?
Minister Shivkumar: (nervously) Let's just focus on finding the culprit, Ashok. And, this investigation needs to be kept quiet.
Inspector Ashok: Understood, Minister. But I have been seeking a transfer for months.
Minister Shivkumar: Solve this case, and I'll make sure you get transferred to the location of your choice.
Inspector Ashok: That's a big promise, Minister.
Minister Shivkumar: I'll keep my word, Ashok. You have my assurance.
Inspector Ashok: Alright, Minister. I'll investigate discreetly.
Minister Shivkumar: Thank you, Ashok. I'm counting on you. And I need the culprit alive.
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Episode 2
Current day.
Inspector Ashok was looking at unconscious Vishnu and he asked one of the constable to check if he's breathing...
The constable confirmed that he's alive... Ashok took a deep breath and took him to hospital for further treatment..
Ok the way to hospital.
A: oh god suni, suji... Pick the call...
S: Hi Ashok, sorry was attending patient, i just saw 5 missed call...tell me what happened.
A: thank God you picked suji, an emergency case, will reach hospital in next 10min.
S: yup, directly come to Emergency room Ashok..i hope you doing fine honey?
A: I'm good dear, i had to subdue a thief and he's now unconscious.
S: oh goddess....come soon..
Scene: Hospital Emergency Room
(Inspector Ashok rushes in with Vishnu, urgency etched on his face)
Dr. Sujatha: (concerned) Ashok, how bad is it? You sounded worried on the phone.
Inspector Ashok: (relieved she's already prepared) I had to subdue him, Sujatha. He was trying to escape. I didn't mean to hurt him this badly.
Dr. Sujatha: (nodding) You told me it was a thief. What was he stealing?
Inspector Ashok: (grimly) Minister Shivkumar's files. I've been investigating. This could be the break we need. But I need him alive dear for further investigation.
Dr. Sujatha: (examining Vishnu) His injuries are severe. We need to stabilize him.
Inspector Ashok: (guilt-ridden) I know I shouldn't have hit him so hard. But he was resisting arrest...
Dr. Sujatha: (calmly) Ashok, you did what you thought was necessary. Now, let's focus on saving him.
(Dr. Sujatha swiftly examines Vishnu, barking orders to her team)
Inspector Ashok: (anxiously) Will he make it? Can he recover?
Dr. Sujatha: (focused) We'll need to run tests, but I'm concerned about potential brain damage. We'll do an MRI and CT scan. Please wait outside Ashok.
Introduction of Sujatha..
She's the wife of inspector Ashok, she is general physician and recently she completed her MD in psychiatrist too.. she is 5.3 feet women with elegant legs, long black hairs , brown eyes... The most attractive part of her body is her ass, which is soft and measured 36, her body is too curvy, well maintained stiff boobs with 34 size.. she's perfect Homely doctor with attractive body figure.
Back to story.
Sujatha comes out of emergency room she's wearing blue stiff cotton saree, which revealed her long navel and side boobs which were covered in white blouse, her red bhindi is going well with her make up and her attractive eyes can pull anyone's attention and forget people from what they talking...
Hospital Corridor
(Dr. Sujatha exits the emergency room,and approaches Inspector Ashok, who's pacing anxiously)
Dr. Sujatha: (exhaling) Ashok, the surgery was successful. We've stabilized his vital signs.
Inspector Ashok: (urgently) And? Is he going to make it?
Dr. Sujatha: (reassuring) He's out of immediate danger, but we're closely monitoring his condition.
Inspector Ashok: (relieved) Thank God. What about brain damage?
Dr. Sujatha: (serious) The brain scan shows some damage, but we can't assess the extent until he regains consciousness.
Inspector Ashok: (concerned) What does that mean?
Dr. Sujatha: (explaining) The scan indicates possible cerebral edema and contusions. But we can't determine the impact on cognitive function or potential long-term effects until he wakes up.
Inspector Ashok: Hopefully he gains concious quickly...
Scene: Hospital ICU
(Vishnu's eyes flicker open, confusion etched on his face. Inspector Ashok and Dr. Sujatha are by his side.)
Vishnu: Where...where am I?
Dr. Sujatha: (calmly) You're in the hospital, Vishnu. You've been in an accident.
Vishnu: (panicked) Accident? What accident? I don't remember...
Inspector Ashok: (watching closely) Easy, Vishnu. Take your time.
Vishnu: (frustrated) I don't know...anything. Who are you?
Dr. Sujatha: (softly) I'm Dr. Sujatha, your doctor. And this is Inspector Ashok.
Vishnu: (scared) Inspector? What do you want?
Inspector Ashok: (firmly) Vishnu, you're in custody. You were involved in a theft.
Vishnu: (lost) Theft? I don't know what you're talking about.
Dr. Sujatha: (interrupting) Ashok, please. Let's not overwhelm him. This is hospital not your security officer station.
Inspector Ashok: (reluctantly) Fine. But I need to know, Vishnu...do you remember anything?
Vishnu: (desperate) I...I don't know. Faces, places...nothing makes sense all looks new to me, why am I here, what am I doing here, somebody please help me to understand.
Dr. Sujatha: (explaining) Vishnu, you've suffered a head injury due to which you are facing memory loss.
Vishnu: (tearfully) oh god.... My head is breaking doctor...
The tension builds as Vishnu's confusion and fear escalate, and Inspector Ashok's determination to uncover the truth intensifies, meanwhile Sujatha calms her husband and takes him to her cabin and Ashok looks too confused and concerned with situation that has arised.
Inspector Ashok: (puzzled) What's going on, Suji? He doesn't remember anything? How could thisneven happen, i know that in the intensity I have hit little hard but but...
Dr. Sujatha: (thoughtful) Retrograde amnesia. Common with head injuries Ashok, i understand it happened with the flow as you were in intensity to resolve the case.
Inspector Ashok: (frustrated) How long until he regains his memory suji?
Dr. Sujatha: (cautious) Difficult to predict. Days, weeks, months...or never.
Inspector Ashok: (impatient) Never? Suji are you out of your mind? Don't you remember why this case is very important to us? It's been years my parents are sick and they are pleading me to take transfer and come to my native, but but this minister is demanding 30lakh bribe..
Dr. Sujatha: (serious) Yes, Ashok i understand that you are doing this for our future even I'm concerned about my in law's as they are the one who supported my education and because of them I have my carrier but, Some memories may be lost forever Ashok but nothing is impossible in this world.
Inspector Ashok: (determined) I need him to remember suji, if not the minister will not leave me, forget about helping me in transfer, he would kill me for sure to screwing the evidence of this case, ahh He's the key to the case Suji.
Dr. Sujatha: (advising) Ashok relax everything would be alright, recently i too graduated MD in psychology so we can plan to have this treated, don't pressurise too much.
Inspector Ashok: (resolved) thanks dear that's such a relaxing news, I'll give him time. But I need to know...is he faking it?
Dr. Sujatha: (confident) No, Ashok. His scans and behavior indicate genuine amnesia. So he needs rest peace of mind to his mind and heart and unrealistic situations would create more panic, so don't ask any questions to him as we need to give time for him to heal and this is to deal with mental disorder and getting his memory back, so it requires patiance.
Meanwhile in the ICU room.
Vishnu lies in bed, staring at his reflection in a mirror attached to the wall and talks to himself...
Vishnu: (whispering) Perfect. (He gazes at his bandaged head and hospital gown, a sly grin spreading across his face) They bought it what they deserve ahhhh Amnesia. Brilliant.
(He glances around the ICU, ensuring no one is watching) Time to play the victim card Vishnu hahah Must keep up the act, as I can bail myself outof this situation if I take advantage of the situation and continue acting like I have lost my memory and later will figure out right opportunity and escape from here. (He further settles into his pillow, a satisfied smile hidden behind his face and continue to potray confusion)
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Episode 3
Scene: Inspector Ashok's Office
(Minister Shivkumar calls Inspector Ashok)
Minister Shivkumar: Inspector Ashok how are we progressed in this case? , I'm extremely dissatisfied with the progress of the theft case. What's the latest update you have for me?
Inspector Ashok: (diplomatically) Minister Shivkumar, sir, our exhaustive investigation has yielded a significant lead, indicating the prime suspect has fled the station and is currently being tracked across neighboring districts by our specialized task force.( Shivkumar didn't wanted to reveal the exact reason as this could impact his transfer)
Minister Shivkumar: (irritated) That's unacceptable. The media will be relentless in their criticism if they get to know that I have used party funds Ashok
Inspector Ashok: (cautiously) Sir, these complex cases includes forensic analysis, witness interviews, and strategic collaboration with neighboring law enforcement agencies as he has flewed out of here. While I understand the urgency, but understand my challenges sir, we do not have any legal complaint from you and we are supposed to handle this investigation like a shadow, I assure you that rushing the process would reveal the hidden details, so please give me time.. probably 6 months from now?
Minister Shivkumar: Ashok though the extension of 6 months is too much but still I can compromise as i understand the risk which you foresee, but if I witness your inability to deliver results even after giving time, then forget about your tranfer, you would loose your job as well.
Inspector Ashok: (alarmed) Sir, i shall keep up my word, within 6 months you would see the culprit with money. Now i shall make a move sir, thank you.
Ashok's Home....
(Ashok enters, looking worried. His wife, Sujatha, greets him with concern)
Sujatha: Hey Ashok what happened you look worried? Is everything all right dear.
Ashok: Sujatha, I'm in a tight spot. Minister Shivkumar's threatening to take my job if I don't crack this case soon.
Sujatha: (concerned) What? That's outrageous! How can he do that to you, when you loyally investigating a case which is not even lodged.
Ashok: (frustrated) He's breathing down my neck, and I feel like I'm running out of time. If I don't deliver results, I'm out of a job dear, we have to something for that stupid culprit to gain his memory
Sujatha: (supportively) Don't worry, Ashok. You're a great investigator. We'll figure this out together. I have few things in my mind to take few practical therapy but as you know I'm traveling to abroad in 2 days to collect my final assessment and graduated certificates from London.
Ashok: (determined) I know, but this case is tricky. Vishnu's amnesia is a major roadblock dear, i don't know my 6th sense says that he's is faking it but as per the scan results their is a damage, ahh god I'm stuck with this,... But now until you are back what am I supposed to do with him. Because I can't even keep him in hospital suji, because there is no official case also against him and you aren't sure when he gains his memory...
Sujatha: (thoughtfully) We need to help Vishnu regain his memory. I can try various therapies as his doctor but only after i return, but you have valid point, you can't keep him in security officer station until he's proven guilty ahhh such a tricky situation.
Ashok: yes, now my worry is how to handle him until you return dear, i can't even keep in station...
Sujatha: Ok we shall do one thing Ashok, as part of my psychology study when situation like this arises especially in the cases of amnesia the preliminary test what we do is
(thoughtfully) To help Vishnu regain his memory, we'll start with a holistic approach. I recommend a natural therapy called "Nature Sound Therapy" or "Sound Healing." Ashok..
Ashok: (curious) oh ok, How does it work dear?
Sujatha: So, We'll create an environment or find the location where Vishnu is surrounded by calming sounds of nature, like birdsong, waterfalls, or ocean waves. This helps reduce stress and promotes relaxation.
Ashok: And how does that help his memory?
Sujatha: Scientifically, it's called "Psychoacoustics." The calming sounds alter brainwave activity, shifting from beta to alpha states, inducing relaxation and reducing cognitive overload.
Ashok: (impressed) That's fascinating. But i didn't understood anything hahaha but yeah one thing is for sure, you would pass in your MD ....ok coming to serious topic, tell me how long this treatment would take to give me results because i just have 6 months....
Sujatha: hold on darling, still I'm not done, as Vishnu has lost is memory we need someone as a nurse who can take care of him, someone who understands his background as it involves theft...and also that person has to take care him without revealing her identity.
Ashok: hmm i didn't get you exactly, do you mean that person who takes care of him should be related to Vishnu? But how do we identify them because he doesn't remember anything.
Sujatha: this is the key point for us that he has lost his memory, we can create a new family for him and make him believe that, they are his relatives...so i would give that task to you, so quickly identify who can take this task and rest inwill talk to that person once you identify.
Ashok: hmm makes sense and yes, we need someone to accompany his, and that person should know his background to assist us in solving this case....let me think..
Sujatha: ok dear, think if you don't get any other options we can use my trustworthy nurse Nalini to help...but do let me know we ok, uff ok honey i shall go to bed... It's already late..
Ashok: good night sweet heart ( continues to think for options)
Next day in the hospital....
(Sujatha enters Vishnu's room with a warm and reassuring smile, attempting to alleviate his evident distress)
Sujatha: Good morning, Vishnu; I do hope you're experiencing a slightly better day today, considering your challenging circumstances.how are you feeling today dear.
Vishnu: (confused and disoriented) Morning... doctor... I think? (But his sight focus on her navel which was revealing in her cotton saree, oh god what a navel, her stomach is so flat and that navel so deep ufff camr take my eyes off her)
Sujatha: (reassuringly) Yes, I'm Dr. Sujatha, and I'm here to ensure your well-being and recovery; please, don't worry, you're completely safe.( She keeps her hand on his head and kneads his hair, and looks at him to give confidence)
Vishnu: thanks doctor, but... But..why can't I recall anything? ( sujatha lifted her hand to caress his hair, it gave a quick glimpse of her boobs in her pink blouse, her mangalsutra was on the sides of her blouse and behind that with minimum cleavage her big side boobs were revealed, Vishnu was ogling at it without blinking his eyes)
Sujatha: (sensibly realising his observation, calmly she just pulled her pallu with out any reaction as thisnis something she faces too often with her patients)You're currently in the hospital, Vishnu, where you've been receiving treatment for the past few days; your memory will gradually return, I assure you. But I need your will cooperation dear.
Vishnu: (frustrated and desperate) But who am I, Doctor? What's my name, my family, my life? ( He started to cry)
Sujatha: We're actively working on reconstructing your past, Vishnu; for now, focus on regaining your strength eat food and fruits, take more liquids. And coming down to your family, I have a good news we have traced down then finally.
Vishnu: oh ( shocking) are you...you... Serious doctor, please tell me.. who are they.. where are they doctor..ahh my head is aching..
Sujatha: We'll discuss the details later; your health is the priority Vishnu, take some rest, inspector Ashok would come today with further details and soon we shall discharge you from here..( she leaves the room and walks out)
Vishnu talking to himself.....
Oh oh oh.. these fuckers have traced my family? How did they find out my trial? Not possible... And they can never dig my family roots, hmm then are they getting some unknown person as my parents and expect me to accept them? Ahhh god whatever may be the situations but I shall not come out of my character i would continue to act like I have lost my memory, but need to be mindful when no one is around me.
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Episode 4
Scene: Ashok's Office
(Ashok sits at his desk, lost in thought, questioning the feasibility of Sujatha's suggestion to hire a nurse familiar with Vishnu's past)
Ashok: (to himself) Hiring a nurse who supposedly knows Vishnu's background is fraught with risk; what if they're not trustworthy or, worse still, compromised? Oh god this is a question about my job, why should risk all these on someone whom I don't know, ahh i should only find out a trustworthy person... Hmm Perhaps can i think about Rajesh ( suspended constable) hmm nice, offering Rajesh an opportunity to redeem himself by working on this high-stakes case could be the key to canceling his suspension? Oh god i think this is the best opportunity, because Rajesh too need to cancel his suspension and continue his work, and I can encash him for this situation...
(Ashok picks up the phone and dials Rajesh's number)
Ashok: (over the phone) Rajesh, report to the station immediately; I have a critical proposition that could potentially resolve your current suspension.
Rajesh (over the phone): Sir? But I'm still suspended; what could you possibly change that?
Ashok: (firmly) Just get your ass here, Rajesh; we'll discuss the details here, or you continue to rotten at home?
Rajesh: No sir, on my way will reach in a while..
(The call ends)
(Ashok's expression reveals a calculated risk, weighing the potential benefits and drawbacks of involving Rajesh in the case)
Ashok: (whispering) If Rajesh agrees to cooperate, I'll consider recommending cancellation of his suspension, effectively giving him a second chance.
Background of Rajesh...
Rajesh is a constable who was suspended a week back due to helping one of the lorry driver by taking bribe in the checkpoint, and there by he had left a lorry which has smuggled illegal drugs...
Coming back to his personal life, Rajesh is 46 year's old and he is married to Nayana, (Our first lead heroine of the story) she is 37 year's old but look wise if anyone sees her then they would think she's just around 26 or 28( i shall explain her complete features once she meets Vishnu ;-) hahaha) ... Rajesh is fat and he's not perfect husband for Nayana, as her parents were poor they got her married at early age of 18 to Rajesh just because he had government job, but Rajesh never understood her sentiment and also he's born impotent, he bribed nayana's Father to get her married so that he didn't wanted people and his relatives to know that he's impotent as already he was reaching marriage age.
Nayana, is very silent and digested all the facts that she went through in her life till date she never had any physical intimation with her husband and till date she's VIRGIN, it's all because of her silent nature and her weak family background, she never expressed her feelings with everyone.. she's typical Indian women and has overwhelming traditional values in her life.. though she knows her husband's incapabilities but still she ensured to have the same respect towards him, but love? That's something god had not written in her face but Rajesh was taking good care of her...
Rajesh knowing is incapabilities decided to adopt a baby as his wife would be lonely when he goes to work and he thought that she can keep herself engaged... So finally they adopted a 3 year old baby from a orphanage and later after 15 years the kid grew up and he eloped from the house as he involved with bad company... Nayana went into depression as she was too attached to him, Rajesh made all the attempts to find out his lost son but all his efforts went for vein as he never able to discover where he went....
Back to current situation...
(Rajesh arrives, curiosity and apprehension etched on his face)
Rajesh: Sir? What's this about? Tell me how I can help to lift my suspension.. my family is struggling and at any cost I need this job back.
Ashok: (serious) Rajesh, I have a critical case that requires your cooperation; help me crack it, and I'll consider recommending cancellation of your suspension.
Rajesh: (cautious) What's the case sir can you brief me everything?
Ashok: (takes a deep breath,he briefly explains the entire situation, starting from the meeting of minister to the current state of Vishnu , as he believed he cannot hide anything because he's looking the safety and privacy of the incidents) so Rajesh thisnis the story.
Rajesh: hmm this is quite challenging situation sir, but you didn't mention what's my role and how I can be helpful.
Ashok: so, Rajesh i remember you had a son who eloped 6 months back right?
Rajesh: yes sir, we made all the attempts to search but no clue till date.
Ashok: hmm, so this Vishnu is also around your son age i think, might be around 19 to 20 years old, so now I want you to take him to your village in western ghats, i believe you mentioned before that there is a small cottage right?
Rajesh: yes sir, we had constructed it to use as a Store room to keep our agricultural equipments but...
Ashok: so, ( he stopped Rajesh in between) I want your wife to take care of him in that particular place, because as per the doctor's advice he needs to stay in nature where the place should be peaceful, as that would help to gain his lost memory. And also people will not think any suspicious as they would assume he is your lost son, and i believe you never been their after a very long period?
Rajesh: yes sir true, after my transfer we never went there , but how's that possible sir i mean taking s thief along...hmmm see sir he's a thief and complete stranger to us, and with him how can I send my wife? And that too there are hardly one or 2 houses around that place, and also i believe it's too risky.
Ashok: what comes in life without taking risk Rajesh? I too took the risk to solve this case for minister, so in return he would assist me in my tranfer , so now I'm offering to cancel your suspension effective tomorrow itself if you do what I say, and i Heard you are in financial crisis as you depended parents and wife? ( Gives cunning smile)
Rajesh: hmm ( with tension) yes sir, my parents health is not in good state.. and getting back to work is very important for me..
Ashok: yes i know because that's the reason you took bribe from lorry driver right hahaha
Rajesh: hmm ( nods his head in silence)
Ashok: see Rajesh, I have given you the option so now you decide and tell me...
Rajesh: sure sir, give me time until tomorrow, i would talk to my wife and let you know
Ashok: yes please, take your time..
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Episode 5
On the way to home Rajesh would be thinking how to convince her wife... But he knew that it's not so difficult because his eloped son is also of the same age of Vishnu... So he has his ways to convince his wife...
At home Nayana is wearing purple saree with red bhindi on her forehead, white blouse, neatly oiled and combed her head, she's standing in front of gods photo and doing prayer, which has become a every day routine and also now she was spending more time in doing pooja after her son was missing. So today also she was pleading god to find his son, because he's the only person whom she had cared so much, though he was adopted son, but still Nayana had pure motherly love on him.
Scene: Rajesh's Home
(Rajesh enters, finding Nayana in the living room, lost in thought, surrounded bymemories of their missing son, Rohan, and with a deep sense of longing in her eyes)
Rajesh: (gentle, with a hint) Nayana why sitting like this dear, I understand the pain which you are going through but nothing is there in our hand.
Nayana: without any reaction.. just nods her head and keeps her head down..
Rajesh: Ok, listen i have a special request to make to you, one that requires your unwavering motherly love and nurturing spirit; Ashok sir has trusted me with a critical case involving a young man named Vishnu, who currently lies in the hospital,and struggling to regain his lost memories.
Nayana: (curious) What? And how's that even related to me dear, and what help i can do here?
Rajesh: (serious) Vishnu needs someone to care for him with the unconditional love and devotion of a mother, and I knew instantly that you, Nayana, with your boundless empathy and maternal heart, would be the perfect guardian for him. And also inspector Ashok has given this case to me, so if we assist him he would cancel my suspension and I can resume work from tomorrow itself, further if we are able to successfully help the kid to regain his lost memory then he would help me in promotion as well
(Nayana's expression transforms, reflecting a mix of sorrow, longing, and happiness)
Nayana: (whispering, her voice trembling with emotion) Oh you can rejoin to your tomorrow itself dear? This is such a good news, and Rajesh, he's roughly Rohan's age, isn't he?
Rajesh : hmm( just nods his head as he knew her motherly love would accept anyone who's of that she)
Nayana: It's as if God has sent Vishnu to us in our beloved son's form dear, so god is offering us a second chance to experience the joys of parenthood. ( She runs to pooja room and prays to God again) Oh god, finally you heard my prayers, thank you so much. Don't worry Rajesh I will take care of him and also help him to gain his lost memory of that helps your promotion, I'm so happy today...
Rajesh: Nayana, it may be a coincidence that even he's of our lost sons age, but your love and care can be Vishnu's lifeline and it can help him to cure his disease and also solve all our problems in life.. especially my career and our financial crisis...
(Nayana's face sets in resolute determination)
Nayana: No worries, I shall care for Vishnu with the same unwavering love and dedication I had for Rohan dear, I'll be his mother figure, nurturing him back to wholeness...
Rajesh: (grateful, with relief) Thank you, Nayana; your pure love and mother love can achieve anything in this world, i shall convey this message to Ashok sir now itself..
(Nayana's eyes shine with tears as she hugs Rajesh, her heart overflowing with emotion)
Nayana: (whispering, her voice barely audible) Rohan's returned to us, Rajesh, in Vishnu. Thanks god thanks god... ( Rajesh wipes her tears and takes his phone to confirm his decision to Ashok)
Scene: Hospital Room
(Ashok arrives at the hospital, a sense of relief washing over him as he enters Vishnu's room, where Dr. Sujatha is monitoring the patient's progress)
Ashok: Sujatha, I've found a suitable caregiver for Vishnu; Rajesh, my trusted constable, has agreed to have his wife, Nayana, take on the role of Vishnu's guardian, providing the emotional support and nurturing environment crucial for his recovery.
Dr. Sujatha: That's excellent news, Ashok; a stable and loving environment will greatly aid Vishnu's rehabilitation. Good sign...you need to her her soon here dear, because there are certain things which I need to explain to her, because those things has to be kept in the mind before treating him, as this being sensitive case.
Ashok: (confident) Nayana will be here soon to take custody of Vishnu; so you can convey all the procedures that she has to follow, uff please ensure all necessary arrangements are made for his discharge. This could be the turning point in Vishnu's recovery; Nayana's maternal instincts will help him regain his memories.
Dr. Sujatha: (smiling) Indeed; sometimes, love and care are the best medicines someone needs Ashok...don't worry everything will be alright.
(Ashok nods, his mind already racing with the next steps in the investigation)
On the other side...
Vishnu was pretending to have lost his memory, but in reality, he was fully aware of everything going on around him. He was listening to Ashok and Dr. Sujatha's conversation about his care and was secretly planning his next moves, while acting helpless and clueless.
(Vishnu lies motionless in his bed, maintaining a blank expression, as Ashok and Dr. Sujatha discuss his care and rehabilitation)
Vishnu: (whispering to himself, a hint of amusement in his voice) They think I've lost my memory. Little do they know on the facts, Nayana, Rajesh's wife, will be my caregiver? Interesting. And what's Ashok's true motive?
(Vishnu's gaze drifts toward Ashok, a calculated glint in his eye) I'll play along, for now. Let them think I'm clueless, it's Time to gather information, manipulate the situation, and uncover their real plan.
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Episode 6
Scene: Hospital Room as Nayana enters Dr.Sujatha's cabin along with her husband
Dr. Sujatha: Rajesh, could you please wait outside for a moment? I need to discuss something with Nayana. And this is little personal thing and i cannot have those conversation in front of you as it might make your wife little conscious.
Rajesh: Is everything alright? Because I am aware of the background of this case
Dr. Sujatha: Yes, i understand, but certain medical things needs to be explained to your wife as she's the one who will take care of Vishnu...
Rajesh: sure doctor, i shall wait outside...
Dr. Sujatha: (lowering her voice) Nayana, I have concerns about Vishnu's situation. I suspect Vishnu's memories hold secrets. And i believe already your husband has explained everything to you
Nayana: yes doctor, i know that he is involved in theft and in between of introgation he was man handled and lost his memory. So tell me doctor what should I do?
Dr. Sujatha: Keep a close eye on Vishnu. Ensure his safety and confidential trust no one, Nayana because you be staying alone with him.
Nayana: yes doctor, I will take care more than his real mother would care about him...
Sujatha: that's good, now let's come to interesting part of his treatment. I want to discuss a vital aspect of Vishnu's recovery.
Nayana: What is it doctor?
Sujatha: Research shows maternal bonding can stimulate memory recall. I recommend you assume a maternal role, nurturing Vishnu as his mother would. Create a safe, loving environment. Vishnu's subconscious will respond to the familiarity.
Nayana: How do I do that?
Sujatha: Imagine yourself as his mother. Show affection, care for him, and recreate memories from his childhood. This emotional connection can unlock his memories.
Nayana: (determined) hmmm ok
Sujatha: Nayana, I must warn you, Vishnu's lack of memories may lead to confusion and uncertainty.
Nayana: What do you mean doctor?
Sujatha: He may not understand the concept of motherly love or boundaries. He might ask probing questions or even exhibit physical responses.
Nayana: hmm (with concern)Physical responses? What kind?
Sujatha: Inappropriate touching or affection. It's essential Nayana, and also this is crucial. Vishnu's behavior may be unpredictable. You must prioritize your emotional well-being with him
Nayana: I understand, Doctor. I'll be cautious.
Dr. Sujatha: (nodding) Good. Remember, this role-playing is thebangutic. Your goal is to stimulate Vishnu's memories, not encourage romantic or physical attachment. So allow Vishnu's physical affection because he doesn't understand how he needs to behave with his mother but mentally establish limits
Nayana: (clearly) I'll keep that in mind.
Sujatha: i know this is tuf, but we need to take certain chances with patients especially your mind game is important in this roleplay, certain time the patient get confused and exhibit his love and affection towards mother which he supposed to do with his wife or girl friend, because he don't know his past, whether he had a mother/wife/ girl friend in his life, but all this emotions which you show should help him to recall his lost memory...
Nayana: so doctor, ideally we don't know what character would help Vishnu to gain his memory back, so you are saying I need to be prepared for it, so it can be as a mother, wife or girl friend?
Sujatha: yes Nayana, that's my point because that's when his actions would connect back to his lost memory and performing similar actions would help to cure his situation and gain back the lost memory. But don't worry, in his current situation he can't force you physically even if goes to intimacy level because he stops things when you instruct, because the moment we introduce you to him stating you are his mother, his mind registers a relationship with you... But fails to register the boundaries he needs to follow because that's not registered in his mind..
Nayana: So doctor when i introduce to him as his mother, can i not set the boundaries he should be following with his mother?
Sujatha:Nope, don't do that dear, because i already explained to you... We don't know what kind of relationship would tie back to his memory? So be liberal in your physical approach and probably that's when he would explore a mother/wife/girl friend when he connect with him, so observe his body language and that would help us to understand our next treatment level.
Nayana: thanks doctor for all the details, i would keep this in mind...
Sujatha: no problem Nayana, so to make things look more natural, you travel back to your native in western ghats today itself and get things settled, meanwhile I shall ask your husband to take Vishnu along with him tomorrow...so you have time to settle things there... And don't worry i would be back from abroad in a month and i would connect back to you..
Nayana: thanks doctor...bye..i shall handle things.
Meanwhile Vishnu was already aware of the nayana's visit to hospital, he was curious to understand the rational behind it, and now he heard all the conversations between doctor and Nayana...
Vishnu (talking to himself): well well well, what could be the level of happiness for a thief like me? Oh God... I'm getting to stay with a woman in western ghats.. all alone? And I can get physical comfort from her? Well too many benefits in this memory loss game... But i would encash this to the fullest... Who would get this kind of opportunity.. hmm the only request is how's Nayana? Is she too old? Initially doctor is asking her to introduce her to me as a mother? Hmm so is she around 50 plus age? Hmm no no if she is 50 plus how can her looks be flexible to be my wife or girl friend too? Looks like she might be 40 plus.. ah nevertheless... I just need some boobs, a lip to kiss... A hole to fuck...... If she's not pretty...then keep my agenda straight " Cover the face, Fuck the base"
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Oh thank you bro super. Wonderful concept Vistnu will be the luckyest person.
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Can't wait, keep going take your time but please finish it.
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sexy and wowsome. Please update next part...............i am eagerly waiting for it.
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Awesome story. Keep writing.
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Going to be Nayana's llife very romantic
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