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Dear writer, God bless you! You're an exceptional writer, and your story made my day. I've been reading Xossip stories for 20 years, and yours stands out as one of the finest. I'm eagerly awaiting the detailed continuation, particularly Ganga's transformation into 'Raniganj ki Randi.' Thank you!"
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OR maybe Raniganj ki Randiyo ki Rani
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such an extra ordinary update. The delay did hurt but it is worth the wait. Will there be sex scenes like she said once more? will we know the slums thing? The most important when will we can expect next update?
And happy diwali. Hope you are doing fine in personal life.
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Amazing and extraordinary update KK.... I hope the second round of sex will be more raunchy in your words.... Waiting for the update eagerly to see how Ganga treats them or rather how they treat Ganga for the 2nd round of sex. And also to see what's Srinu's reaction about it.... Is he going to get a hard on or he is going to get angry on Ganga watching them having sex again.... And then ahead where she becomes the Raniganj ki randi.
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Hi, Kk, I wanted your opinion on my story, is there any place where we can talk, discord or telegram
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Awesome update. What a narration. Author got great writing skills. Keep it up bro. Thank you for the update❤️
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Hi KK….,
Exquisite writing. I couldn’t imagine how difficult it would be to describe via the video what was going on in the room between Ganga, Javed and Chacha; at the same time introduce in extreme detail what Ganga had written in her diary; and at the same time relay what Shrinu was feeling…..this is super difficult.
The English language and grammar was good, the zooming in and out with your story between the diary , the video and Srinu’s reaction was at the perfect time and was just extraordinary.
The attention to details was also extraordinary….you actually noted that Chacha placed the phone to record at a good angle…had you forgotten this, then the readers would wonder where the video came from?
Showing Ganga fucking around behind Srinu’s back this early in the story may have killed the suspense that was the appeal of this story….”the cheating wife?” Well, now we know that she is INDEED cheating, then what’s the point of the story going forward? Won’t it then just turn into one of those standard “fuck-fest” stories that are dime a dozen on the internet?
NOTE: I don’t mind the belated updates….it’s really difficult to write good erotica so please take your time.
Thanks
Intrepid
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This is one of the best stories i read ever. Perhaps, a masterpiece. The intrigue, the suspense, the plot twists, wow. The best and the most unexpected yet somehow seemed possible was her willingness to commit debauchery, and yet be upfront about it in her diary, which only means she is going to suck the husband into being a cuck eventually. Kindly proceed to Ranigunj soon. Eagerly looking forward to the next.
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your story is next level man
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Man.. I've read the last updates so many times!! Each moment is so well defined both in diary entry and video recording.. and it all syncs with the Yin and Yang imagination of Srinu too.. so his intuitions were bang on? Maybe? Big thanks for the efforts bro.. what an erotic thriller this is!
Only one question bro.. when is the next update dropping???
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Hi kk, can you tell us about some of your inspiration, stories which made you go I want to write one too