04-11-2024, 07:28 PM
Nice update in liked it.. But what abt the husband who got betrayed will he stand up for himself fir the betrayal or its gng to be some normal cuckold stories? ? Give me a different ending from other stories. .
Adultery The Cheating Wife ?
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04-11-2024, 07:28 PM
Nice update in liked it.. But what abt the husband who got betrayed will he stand up for himself fir the betrayal or its gng to be some normal cuckold stories? ? Give me a different ending from other stories. .
04-11-2024, 07:42 PM
Dear writer, God bless you! You're an exceptional writer, and your story made my day. I've been reading Xossip stories for 20 years, and yours stands out as one of the finest. I'm eagerly awaiting the detailed continuation, particularly Ganga's transformation into 'Raniganj ki Randi.' Thank you!"
04-11-2024, 09:13 PM
(04-11-2024, 07:42 PM)sahebraopawar Wrote: Dear writer, God bless you! You're an exceptional writer, and your story made my day. I've been reading Xossip stories for 20 years, and yours stands out as one of the finest. I'm eagerly awaiting the detailed continuation, particularly Ganga's transformation into 'Raniganj ki Randi.' Thank you!" No,No...she is RRR,...Raniganj ki Rani Randi.
04-11-2024, 09:14 PM
OR maybe Raniganj ki Randiyo ki Rani
04-11-2024, 09:24 PM
(04-11-2024, 05:20 PM)Hornytamilan23 Wrote: Hi kk007007,Anna - Always admiring your wise comments. Gangasthan universe
04-11-2024, 09:47 PM
(04-11-2024, 07:28 PM)Sathiesh034 Wrote: Nice update in liked it.. But what abt the husband who got betrayed will he stand up for himself fir the betrayal or its gng to be some normal cuckold stories? ? Give me a different ending from other stories. . Again Stop judging and concluding the end. you have not read the full story yet
04-11-2024, 10:02 PM
(04-11-2024, 07:42 PM)sahebraopawar Wrote: Dear writer, God bless you! You're an exceptional writer, and your story made my day. I've been reading Xossip stories for 20 years, and yours stands out as one of the finest. I'm eagerly awaiting the detailed continuation, particularly Ganga's transformation into 'Raniganj ki Randi.' Thank you!" What a Legend !! ![]() ![]() 20 years You must be the OG pervert
04-11-2024, 10:03 PM
04-11-2024, 10:03 PM
such an extra ordinary update. The delay did hurt but it is worth the wait. Will there be sex scenes like she said once more? will we know the slums thing? The most important when will we can expect next update?
And happy diwali. Hope you are doing fine in personal life.
05-11-2024, 01:04 AM
Amazing and extraordinary update KK.... I hope the second round of sex will be more raunchy in your words.... Waiting for the update eagerly to see how Ganga treats them or rather how they treat Ganga for the 2nd round of sex. And also to see what's Srinu's reaction about it.... Is he going to get a hard on or he is going to get angry on Ganga watching them having sex again.... And then ahead where she becomes the Raniganj ki randi.
Val
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05-11-2024, 06:31 AM
(04-11-2024, 10:03 PM)Ta(:pro10 Wrote: such an extra ordinary update. The delay did hurt but it is worth the wait. Will there be sex scenes like she said once more? will we know the slums thing? The most important when will we can expect next update? (05-11-2024, 01:04 AM)val.coutinho Wrote: Amazing and extraordinary update KK.... I hope the second round of sex will be more raunchy in your words.... Waiting for the update eagerly to see how Ganga treats them or rather how they treat Ganga for the 2nd round of sex. And also to see what's Srinu's reaction about it.... Is he going to get a hard on or he is going to get angry on Ganga watching them having sex again.... And then ahead where she becomes the Raniganj ki randi. ![]()
05-11-2024, 09:52 AM
Hi, Kk, I wanted your opinion on my story, is there any place where we can talk, discord or telegram
05-11-2024, 11:35 AM
Awesome update. What a narration. Author got great writing skills. Keep it up bro. Thank you for the update❤️
05-11-2024, 11:26 PM
06-11-2024, 01:32 AM
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Hi KK….,
Exquisite writing. I couldn’t imagine how difficult it would be to describe via the video what was going on in the room between Ganga, Javed and Chacha; at the same time introduce in extreme detail what Ganga had written in her diary; and at the same time relay what Shrinu was feeling…..this is super difficult. The English language and grammar was good, the zooming in and out with your story between the diary , the video and Srinu’s reaction was at the perfect time and was just extraordinary. The attention to details was also extraordinary….you actually noted that Chacha placed the phone to record at a good angle…had you forgotten this, then the readers would wonder where the video came from? Showing Ganga fucking around behind Srinu’s back this early in the story may have killed the suspense that was the appeal of this story….”the cheating wife?” Well, now we know that she is INDEED cheating, then what’s the point of the story going forward? Won’t it then just turn into one of those standard “fuck-fest” stories that are dime a dozen on the internet? NOTE: I don’t mind the belated updates….it’s really difficult to write good erotica so please take your time. Thanks Intrepid
06-11-2024, 10:01 AM
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This is one of the best stories i read ever. Perhaps, a masterpiece. The intrigue, the suspense, the plot twists, wow. The best and the most unexpected yet somehow seemed possible was her willingness to commit debauchery, and yet be upfront about it in her diary, which only means she is going to suck the husband into being a cuck eventually. Kindly proceed to Ranigunj soon. Eagerly looking forward to the next.
06-11-2024, 11:05 AM
your story is next level man
06-11-2024, 01:38 PM
(06-11-2024, 01:32 AM)intrepid Wrote: Hi KK…., Thanks for your genuine opinion.. But i would like to tell you story is not done yet.. so dont come to any conclusions. Now, 30+ updates is EARLY in the story?? How much long do you think it should have gone for? And about killing appeal of the story. i would say suspense is only part of the excitement, But if there is no treasure at the end of treasure hunt. Then what's the point of all the excitment ? you tell me. Intrepid, I hope you understand. what i'm trying to say here. ![]()
06-11-2024, 03:34 PM
Man.. I've read the last updates so many times!! Each moment is so well defined both in diary entry and video recording.. and it all syncs with the Yin and Yang imagination of Srinu too.. so his intuitions were bang on? Maybe? Big thanks for the efforts bro.. what an erotic thriller this is!
Only one question bro.. when is the next update dropping???
06-11-2024, 04:00 PM
(06-11-2024, 03:34 PM)tomdickharry2024 Wrote: Man.. I've read the last updates so many times!! Each moment is so well defined both in diary entry and video recording.. and it all syncs with the Yin and Yang imagination of Srinu too.. so his intuitions were bang on? Maybe? Big thanks for the efforts bro.. what an erotic thriller this is! IDK |
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