05-10-2024, 01:26 PM
This story is w/o peer.. just a bit longer updt ........
Adultery Maids Conspiracy
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05-10-2024, 01:26 PM
This story is w/o peer.. just a bit longer updt ........
05-10-2024, 11:15 PM
Dear author,
Without wishing to offend you, I would like to tell you the following. Firstly, I would like to thank you for deciding to continue this story. Secondly, I would like to ask you to render both the narration of the story and the dialogues between the protagonists in ENGLISH. Xossipy has provided portals for all authors and writers to write their stories in any language and publish them here. Therefore, only stories written in ‘English’ should be published on this portal, I am from Germany and do not understand this language. I estimate that every fourth visitor and member of Xossipy does not understand this language. That is more than 25% of all visitors and fans of Xossipy. My appeal to you and all other authors is Please ONLY post and publish completely English stories on the ‘English Stories Portal’. Thank you for your understanding. Lollobionda Berlin - Germany
07-10-2024, 11:05 PM
(05-10-2024, 11:15 PM)Lollobionda Wrote: Dear author,No lol lobindo ,low class desi chats cant be that much xpressed by eng. Rest is upto the author. & yes 25/100 nvr complains..its just a couple of u
08-10-2024, 12:40 AM
Those who want the entire conversation in English, please hit the like button.
10-10-2024, 11:15 AM
Hi New writer I request you to kindly start a new threa
Reason Your Update is Garbage The idea that you have is taking the story to nowhere You have already lost the plot with these 2 tiny update What if Nostalgic plans to revisit this story and continue from where he left Pls delete your tiny updates from here as well and paste it under the new thread Thanks
13-10-2024, 09:11 AM
Updt it buddy.. fast fast
21-10-2024, 11:47 PM
It was an interesting story, too bad like most of the interesting stories is cursed to not be complete
25-10-2024, 01:01 AM
Spurha and aditi Update pls
30-10-2024, 12:09 AM
Glad this story restarted, pls author do a regular update.
30-10-2024, 10:35 AM
Glad this story restarted, pls author do a regular update.
02-11-2024, 09:56 AM
Thought Process of Erotic Writer (Original Writer)
Sorry friends, i am not here to spoil this story and thread (Aur gyan bhi nahi dena chahta hun) by discussing my point of view here. I am not a writer still want to put few of my points. At first the writer will struck with a central point or theme. we can compare it with the Eye of the above picture. Then slowly he will develop the story by adding other characters. ( these are mouth and fins) The dots in the pics can be compared with twists and specific situations in the story. When he starts writing the story by joining the dots in the order we will get a nice story. If every thing goes correctly without any hinderances such as job, family, health issues we will get a complete story. Otherwise the pic is incomplete. but still few dots are there where we can follow.
02-11-2024, 11:18 AM
The second writer ( continuing from where the writer left the story)
Here comes the Tricky part, the more the story has the fan following the more tricky and challenging it will be for the second writer to complete it , and that too in the same thread because many readers will object to it. And if the second writer any how contact the Original writer and take his advice and ideas how to proceed with the twists and specific scenes it will be somewhat good. Actual original writers story if completed by him is like this (cute little Blue Whale).
02-11-2024, 07:21 PM
10-11-2024, 06:58 PM
Dear The Thinker,
Your attempt the continue the story was really great. Hoping to see you comeback with great passion buddy! Cheers!
13-11-2024, 01:17 PM
Missing aditi
15-11-2024, 05:06 PM
Aditi - anna - sparha
30-11-2024, 01:15 AM
Kindly update
30-11-2024, 09:29 AM
Ni chance i think.
30-11-2024, 11:20 AM
(12-03-2024, 11:31 AM)Nostalgic Wrote: Sorry guys , I could not connect to this site from long time. Going through difficulties in professional and personal life. Can you consider your decision friend |
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