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(28-10-2024, 05:55 PM)Iambatmann Wrote: Oh man everything is connected here.... The strangled knot going to untied in upcoming episode really awesome.. If vikram was mani uncle did mani told everything about jaya to vikram.. By that info did vikram came to jaya apartment purposefully to hunt jaya
Ha ha you said it....... VIKRAM is mani's uncle..... (Update -16) I mentioned his name. ? But VIKRAM knows more of Jaya's secrets.....
- Jaya - Young college Teacher
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(29-10-2024, 08:28 AM)couples2k9 Wrote: U r narration superb..... Video call situation was marveless... Whar a skills uhave... I never read this kind of narration.. Its look like... When i am reading the story its on presence in front of me.... Wowww u r a great writer.... Thanks for u r marvless update..... Really eager to waiting for next one....
Pls continue.... Slowly seduce her.... We need this kind of scence more... Like video call ashima between raghu...this is my idea only.... Writer u continue u r words plss
Thank you bro, thanks for your valuable comments....
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it was mind-blowing bro you are genius keep rocking...bro
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Waiting for next update bro
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Fantastic update kya build up diya hai bro Kamal hai ab agale twist dekhne ka maja aaega
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Oh! Poor reghu went out hungrily (in both the ways).
Waiting for next update bro. How Ashima approach reghu and how both becomes one.
Will Ashima takes initiative due to her guilt on scolding or reghu takes initiative due to lust. Waiting for your writings bro...
How will be Jaya with Vikram also...
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U rocked it... fantastic..
Deepika
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Great going... Eagerly waiting for your next update
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Great story
Please narrates ashima and reghu between video call or if any chance then ashima calling to her husband and reghu doing what her husband saying in phone call
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Awesome, jaya got another cock and ashi got another cock
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Update today on the occasion of Diwali
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Ashima is waiting for reders likes and reviews.........
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As usual excellent update... But every time one thing I can say.. your writing skills always up to mark
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We are waiting for Ashima.. Please give a diwali gift with ur awesome writing
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01-11-2024, 12:30 PM
(This post was last modified: 01-11-2024, 03:19 PM by Herbiee. Edited 2 times in total. Edited 2 times in total.)
The update-28 was hot fantasy and peak of the erotic path. She did’nt even think that such a most pleasurable experience would happen in her life. Reghu fuckin her like hell. It’s overboard BrO. Really an overboarded sex season.
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That class room scene was too erotic fantasy. Superbb BrO.
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01-11-2024, 07:01 PM
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Dear Kuttoosan009, Thank you so much for continuing this story, as a reader I’m enjoying the Jaya's journey. You have perfectly written the plots, twist and turns which is needed. While reading this story some thought has came out I would like share with you if you like please write something on this.
1. We would like to know First encounter between Ashima and Reghu.
2. If you could bring threesome episode between Jaya, Ashima and raghu because he can’t control his mind between two women and Jaya caught raghu with her, she felt betrayed confess to her.
3. Jaya has gone to Education instuitions where she meet her old lover Rahim. If you could bring old character ‘Rahim’ Jaya’s first lover. He is the one who has changed her from Shy wife to Bold and sex addicted but he could not fucked her due to his Bad-Luck but Mani got the opportunity to taste her beauty. That will help Jaya character to build her circle like Reghu, Rahim, Mani her New Lover Vikram to take revenge with Mahesh and his family.
4. She is becoming cock hunger and sex addicted with her all lovers but she is determine but due change her sex urges she is using and sharing her beautiful body with others to satisfying her sexually needs she forgot about the taking revenge with Mahesh because she felt that Raghu is also like Mahesh who has cheated on her with Ashima.
5. What about the guy Albert who shown the video of Mahesh making love with his wife to Jaya.
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