Adultery Maids Conspiracy
This story is w/o peer.. just a bit longer updt ........
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Dear author,

Without wishing to offend you, I would like to tell you the following.

Firstly, I would like to thank you for deciding to continue this story.

Secondly, I would like to ask you to render both the narration of the story and the 
dialogues between the protagonists in ENGLISH.

Xossipy has provided portals for all authors and writers to write their stories in any 
language and publish them here.
Therefore, only stories written in ‘English’ should be published on this portal,

I am from Germany and do not understand this language. I estimate that every 
fourth visitor and member of Xossipy does not understand this language. 
That is more than 25% of all visitors and fans of Xossipy.

My appeal to you and all other authors is
Please ONLY post and publish completely English stories on the ‘English Stories Portal’.

Thank you for your understanding.

Lollobionda
Berlin - Germany
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(05-10-2024, 11:15 PM)Lollobionda Wrote: Dear author,

Without wishing to offend you, I would like to tell you the following.

Firstly, I would like to thank you for deciding to continue this story.

Secondly, I would like to ask you to render both the narration of the story and the 
dialogues between the protagonists in ENGLISH.

Xossipy has provided portals for all authors and writers to write their stories in any 
language and publish them here.
Therefore, only stories written in ‘English’ should be published on this portal,

I am from Germany and do not understand this language. I estimate that every 
fourth visitor and member of Xossipy does not understand this language. 
That is more than 25% of all visitors and fans of Xossipy.

My appeal to you and all other authors is
Please ONLY post and publish completely English stories on the ‘English Stories Portal’.

Thank you for your understanding.

Lollobionda
Berlin - Germany
No lol lobindo ,low class desi chats cant be that much xpressed by eng.  Rest is upto the author. & yes 25/100 nvr complains..its just a couple of u
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Those who want the entire conversation in English, please hit the like button.
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Hi New writer I request you to kindly start a new threa 
Reason 
Your Update is Garbage 
The idea that you have is taking the story to nowhere You have already lost the plot with these 2 tiny update 

What if Nostalgic plans to revisit this story and continue from where he left 

Pls delete your tiny updates from here as well and paste it under the new thread 

Thanks
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Updt it buddy.. fast fast
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It was an interesting story, too bad like most of the interesting stories is cursed to not be complete banana
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Spurha and aditi Update pls
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Glad this story restarted, pls author do a regular update.
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Glad this story restarted, pls author do a regular update.
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Thought Process of Erotic Writer (Original Writer)


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Sorry friends, i am not here to spoil this story and thread (Aur gyan bhi nahi dena chahta hun) by discussing my point of view here. 

I am not a writer still want to put few of my points.

At first the writer will struck with a central point or theme. 
we can compare it with the Eye of the above picture. 

Then slowly he will develop the story by adding other characters. ( these are mouth and fins)
The dots in the pics can be compared with twists and specific situations in the story.

When he starts writing the story by joining the dots in the order we will get a nice story. 

If every thing goes correctly without any hinderances such as job, family, health issues we will get a complete story. 
Otherwise the pic is incomplete. but still few dots are there where we can follow. 
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The second writer ( continuing from where the writer left the story)

Here comes the Tricky part, 
the more the story has the fan following the more tricky and challenging it will be for the second writer to complete it , and that too in the same thread because many readers will object to it. 

And if the second writer any how contact the Original writer and take his advice and ideas how to proceed with the twists and specific scenes it will be somewhat good. 

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Actual original writers story if completed by him is like this (cute little Blue Whale). 

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And if the second writer dont follow the dots left by the Original writer the story may end up like this.


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Dear The Thinker,

Your attempt the continue the story was really great. Hoping to see you comeback with great passion buddy!

Cheers!
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Missing aditi
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Aditi - anna - sparha
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Kindly update
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Ni chance i think.
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(12-03-2024, 11:31 AM)Nostalgic Wrote: Sorry guys , I could not connect to this site from long time. Going through difficulties in professional and personal life. 
I know how it must be feeling since this story was not progressed since long time. If anyone would like to take it further I would be very happy. 

I am not sure when I can write next part, really not in that mood at this point.

Can you consider your decision friend Namaskar Namaskar Namaskar Namaskar Namaskar
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Is this story going to be continued????
Val Namaskar
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