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-Each and every movement was described so beautifully and erotically.
- The detailing of the atmosphere itself was thrilling
- The use of the word 'desire' as in the title.
- Words are less to describe it.
But dear author thank you for your time for this beautiful creation. This is certainly one of the best erotica. It was hard to read it in one go - IYKTYK.
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Very errotic and well described... It was fantastic reading.. Hope the writer doesn't end the story here.. There's scope for continuation..
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Wow, truly outstanding,,
No matter how much I try to praise you, words will not be enough.
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Thank you guys for your valuable comments, it motivates me to write better for my readers so that they wont feel that they have waste their time. I am thinking of continuing the story coz it has scope. And i am also planning to write short stories for you guys with same thrill and hotness.
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Make the Khan Bhai fuck the living daylights out of the B r a h m i n girl in all holes
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Make the Khan Bhai fuck the living daylights out of the B r a h m i n girl in all holes
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When is next update coming?
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(This post was last modified: 7 hours ago by Celeb41. Edited 2 times in total. Edited 2 times in total.)
Loving the story. Previous update was fire. A slight suggestion make danish more dominant and demanding towards kavya. Also try rough things in next encounter.
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