17-09-2024, 03:47 PM
Okay phit kuch hi dino me agla update deta hu.
Fantasy Sona my Proud Sister
|
17-09-2024, 03:47 PM
Okay phit kuch hi dino me agla update deta hu.
20-09-2024, 05:41 PM
21-09-2024, 07:23 AM
Bhai Aaj aur kal meri chutti hai. Thodi story likh Li hai aur baaki aaj se kal tak poora karke update de dunga.
Story ko padh ke samajhne me thoda time lag rha hai. Kyuki dusre writer ko padh ke uske shabdo ke hisab se continue Krna hai to acche se samjhna padega.
21-09-2024, 12:08 PM
(21-09-2024, 07:23 AM)Hero24600 Wrote: Bhai Aaj aur kal meri chutti hai. Thodi story likh Li hai aur baaki aaj se kal tak poora karke update de dunga. theek hai aap bas updatai poora karake kahaanee aagen badhao ham aapake saath hain
23-09-2024, 09:31 PM
(This post was last modified: 23-09-2024, 09:41 PM by Hero24600. Edited 4 times in total. Edited 4 times in total.)
UPDATE 3
Madhu ki fuli kachori jaisi chut red panty me kisi fuli hu gulab ki Pankhudi ke tarah lag rhi thi. Madhu sharmate hue apne kadmo se petticoat ko side kiya aur khadi ho gyi. Tabbu- kya maal hai Madhu, bilkul apne naam ki tarah. Sona apna haath Madhu ki peeth pe rakhte hue, Sona- abhi apne kuch dekha hi kaha hai. Aur phir madhu ke blouse ke hookh ek ek krke khol diye aur Madhu ka blouse dheela ho gya jise uske apne badan se alag kr diya. Ab wo sirf red panty aur bra me khadi thi sabke samne. Tabbu uthi aur Madhu ke pas aa ke uska chehra apne hatho me thamte hue ek nazar uski aankho me dekha aur ek uske hotho ke jaam ka ek ghunt liya jisme Madhu ne bhi uska poora saath diya. Tabbu- Is umar me bhi tu ras se bhari hai, lagta hai aaj tak tujhe kisi ne acche se nichoda nhi. Sona- Pehle to shayad nhi hua hoga, magar ab to bahut mauke milenge aure Maa ko bhi koi shauk nhi apna ras bacha ke rakhne ka, kyu maa. Madhu- Bilkul sahi kaha Sona, ab to bas is zindagi ka luft uthana hai, ek din to ye sharir bhi saath nhi dega. To jab tak maze le skte hai le lene do. Tabhi Tabbu ne Madhu ko apni baho me le liya aur apne haath peeche le jaake Madhu ki bra ke hooks khol diye aur bra ko uske badan se alag krte hi uske dono heavy duty boobs chalak pade. Tabbu ne uske boobs ko apne dono haatho me tham liya aur ek boobs ko masalte hue dusre ko chusne lagi phir chor kr Tabbu- tumhare poora sharir hi kamal ka hai Madhu, ( sexy tone me Madhu ki chut pe haath ferte hue) ab mai intezar nhi kr skti iske liye. Aur apne daaye haath ki ungliyo ko uske panty ki elastic me phasate hue ek jhatka me gheechti hai jis se Madhu ki panty phat ke uske haath me aa jaati hai. Madhu ki nazuk chut par bhi ek jhatka sa lagta jis se ki uske muh se ek aah nikal jaati hai aur uski chut paani chorne lagti hai. Sona aur Rashmi bhi ise dekh ke muskara deti hai. Rashmi- Tabbu ji, jara aram se. kahi hamari pyari Madhu ki nazuk chut khi chot na kha jaaye. Tabbu-( Madhu ki chut ragadte hue) are iski chut to shakt se shakt land ke jhatka ko bhi jhel le phir ye kya hai. Aur ek ungli chut me ghusa ke andar bahar krne lagi aur Madhu Tabbu ki baho ke sahare khade hoke Is anand ka maza lene lagi. Idhar Rashmi ye sab Drishya dekh kr garam hone lagi thi aur apne saree ke upar se hi apni chut ko sehla rahi thi. Lekin ab ye garmi jyada hone lagi thi Madhu ko apne yaar ke baho me aise machalte dekh kr. Rashmi se ab raha nhi gaya aur usne apni saree utar kr sofe ke handrest pr rakh di aur apna badab sehlane lagi. Sona bhi Madhu aur Rashmi ki halat dekh kr khud ko rok na saki aur dhere dhere apne badan se kapdo ke bojh ko halka krne lagi. Idhar Madhu Tabbu ki lagatar fingering aur harkato se apne charam ke kareeb pahuch rahi thi. Wo soch rhi thi ki Tabbu sach much ek aurat ke sharer ko sahi se samajhti hai aur istemal krna janti hai. Jaise hi Madhu apne charamseema pe pahuchi uski chut ki deeware kasne lagi aur tabi Tabbu ne apni ungaliya rok li. Madhu ka orgasm kharab ho gya, aur wo thoda jhunjhlate hue boli boli “ rok kyu diya karo na “. Tabbu ki unglaiya abhi bhi uski chut me hi tha aur wo phir uski aankho me dekhte hue Dheere Dheere apni harkat karne lagi aur boli meri aankho me dekhte raho nazar hatni nhi chahiye. Madhu uski aankho me hi dekh rhi thi jaise keh rhi ho ki mujhe apani manjil tak pahucha do magar Tabbu ke chehre pe ek muskan thi. Rashmi aur Sona is kritya ko dekhte hue apne apne badan se khel rhi thi. Sona sirf panty bra me thi aur Rashmi ab tak apne blouse utar ke bra aur petticoat me aa chuki thi. Idhar lagatar fingering se phir se Madhu ki chut me pressure ban na shuru hua aur usne anand ke maare apni aankhe band kr li. Aur uski aankhe band hote hi “ chatak” ki awaj sabke kaano me padi. Ye thappad Madhu ke gaalo pe pada tha aur Sona thoda shock hui par Rashmi ke chehre pr ek shararti muskan aa gyi. Magar is thappad Madhu ko naraz krne ka bajaye uski excitement ko badha diya. Aur phit se Tabbu ne apna kaam shuru kiya. Magar is baar Madhu- Tabbu ji Tabbu- bol meri rani Madhu- slap me Tabbu ruk gayo- kya Madhu – Tabbu ji please slap me, meri andar ek alag hi aag laga di apke thappad ne. Patan hi kyu pr mera man aur maag raha hai. Tabbu- tu to sach much ki randi nikali Madhu rani, tu bahut maza degi mujhe. Lekin meri ek shart hai. Tu meri ijajat ke bina nhi jharegi. Madhu- thik hai Aur phir lagatar fingering ke saath Madhu ko slapping ka dose milta raha aur 4-5 thappado ke baad Madhu fir se apne charam seema pe pahuchti hai aur Tabbu se permission mangati hai. Magar Tabbu usko tadpane ke liye agle 5 minute tak uske orgasm ko roke rehti hai aur jab usko lagta hai ki Madhu ka control chut raha hai to wo apne ungaliya bahar nikal leti hai. Madhu usko ek sawaliya nazar se dekhti hai aur tabhi Tabbu uske gaalo pe ek aur thappad jad deti hai aur is thappad se Madhu khade khade jhadne lagti hai aur Tabbi ka sahara leti hai warna wo gir jaati. Aur 20-25 seconds tak jhadti rehti hai. Aur ye nazara dekh kr Sona aur Rashmi bhi paani chor deti hai. Madhu- Aisa ehsaas mujhe aaj tak nhi hua. Tabbi- abhi to ye shuruat hai meri jaan abhi to hame bahut se maze lena hai aaj ke din.
23-09-2024, 09:39 PM
dosto mai janta hu ki maeri story ki disha aur likhna ka tareeka original jaisa nhi hoga. kyuki jab writer likhta hai to uske man me kuch vichar aur uska sochne ka tareeka hota hai ki wo story ko kaha le jaana chahta hai. jo ki unique hota hai. lekin mere likhne aur sochne ka tareeka alag hai.
to agar ye kahani apko pasand na aaye to jarur bataye mai iske aage nhi badhaunga. aur koi mistake ho ya advice ho to wo bhi de.
23-09-2024, 11:51 PM
देखों भाई अब original लेखक तों आ नहीं रहा हैं तो जैसा है वही सही मेरा इस स्टोरी में यह कहना है कि यहाँ सोना और मधु को अब ज्यादा खोल दिया गया हैं कहानी को और मजेदार करने के लिए अब समय हैं संदीप का अपनी माँ मधु के बारे में जानने का पर ऐसे नहीं की वह जान लिया और वह भी सेक्स करनें लगा वह जानता हैं यहाँ कुछ ऐसा जोड़ो की संदीप को पता चल जाए पर वह कुछ नहीं कर पाता हैं फिर मधु अपने कुछ राज सोना को बताती हैं और भी बहुत कुछ इसमें जोड़ा जा सकता है बस थोड़ा दूर तक सोचना है
09-10-2024, 03:34 PM
(23-09-2024, 09:39 PM)Hero24600 Wrote: dosto mai janta hu ki maeri story ki disha aur likhna ka tareeka original jaisa nhi hoga. kyuki jab writer likhta hai to uske man me kuch vichar aur uska sochne ka tareeka hota hai ki wo story ko kaha le jaana chahta hai. jo ki unique hota hai. lekin mere likhne aur sochne ka tareeka alag hai. Bhai, aap ne achha likha hai, keep it up. Muze job me time nahi mil pata aage sochne k liye, lekin khush hun ki aap is kahani ko aage badha rahe ho. Jaisa Manju Roy chahti hain wo ho sakta hai, agar aap back ja k dekho, jab Madhu diwali vacation me Hyderabad aayi to uska pahala round unke ghar me hua, Sona ne Cctv on kar k dekhne ka try kiya, lekin fir kuch der aldi jaldi me rakh diya, aur uske dimag se utar gaya ki Cctv me record bhi hua hoga. Evening me Sandy ne aa k dekha ki uska Laptop bed pe tha, usko laga ki Sona ne kuch Kaam se laptop liya hoga. Cctv ka switch bhi on tha, jo Sandy ne band kiya lekin is baat pe dhyan nahi diya ki Sona ne wo on kyu kiya, usko laga ki shayad galti se on kar diya aur off karna bhool gayi. Sandip kuch din baad Sona ki purani recording dekhne k liye try karega tab usko Madhu ka kaarnama dekhne ko milega. Aage apne hisab se likho jaisa Manju Roy ne kaha. Achha likhte ho aap bhi. Thanks
09-10-2024, 04:43 PM
(23-09-2024, 09:31 PM)Hero24600 Wrote:Acha try ta.... starting ese hi hoti h ....keep it up
09-10-2024, 04:43 PM
(09-10-2024, 03:34 PM)Romain Wrote: Bhai, aap ne achha likha hai, keep it up. Muze job me time nahi mil pata aage sochne k liye, lekin khush hun ki aap is kahani ko aage badha rahe ho. Romain Bhai ladke ko guide karte rahna....
11-10-2024, 01:05 PM
(09-10-2024, 03:34 PM)Romain Wrote: Bhai, aap ne achha likha hai, keep it up. Muze job me time nahi mil pata aage sochne k liye, lekin khush hun ki aap is kahani ko aage badha rahe ho. अरे यार तुम ही इस कहानी को सही फिल दे सकतें हो ज्यादा नहीं छोटा छोटा कर के ही कहानी को पुरा कर दो तुम लिखते हो तो मजा ज्यादा आता हैं वैसे भी जिसकी कहानी होतीं हैं वही जानता है कहाँ क्या लिखना हैं तों please कहानी आगे बढा़ओ
28-10-2024, 11:10 AM
Romain यार कहाँ चले गये कहानी तों आगें बढ़ा दो बहुत दिन हो गये हैं एक update तक नहीं आया है please update दे दो आपकी कहानी बहुत मस्त और जबरदस्त हैं
|
« Next Oldest | Next Newest »
|