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Adultery Daikhte Daikhte Hi
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Tongue 
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Good start
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nice.... waiting for more updates
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Update day diya pls conments and tell
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the writing words and language is not very clear as there seem to be lot of mis spelt words n incomplete sentences without any meaning.
Please re-read your updates and you wil know how difficult it is.
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(06-09-2024, 11:34 AM)qazmlp Wrote: the writing words and language is not very clear as there seem to be lot of mis spelt words n incomplete sentences without any meaning.
Please re-read your updates and you wil know how difficult it is.

Ok i will try to improve this time. 
Thanks for the feedback
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waiting for next update
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Stay Tuned
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Nobody is reading my story. Should i stop it?
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Very nice story. Please keep going ?
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Very nice writings
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(14-09-2024, 08:12 AM)Pinky Barua Wrote: Very nice story. Please keep going ?


Lekin kaha hai re baaaadmaass.....
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Bhai likhoge aur continue rakhoge to readers to interest aayega aur wo padhenge aur follow karenge.... Aaj pahli baar mere samne ye story ka title aaye lekin mujhe is page pe kuch dikha hi nahi
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