28-08-2024, 07:41 PM
Writter sahab...pls ab update dedo yaar
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29-08-2024, 10:08 AM
Hello everyone
Mujhe acha nhi lg raha ke meri vjah se bin baat ke shubu ko aap sab ke katash bhare comments sunne padd rahe hai....
And iss baar update meri vjah se nhi de paya hai shubu...
Umeed krti hu ke aap sab ye baat jaante samjhte hai ke ye kahani ek kalpana hi hai.. pr ye reality se kafi hadh tak judi huyi hai... hum dono chahe ek dusre ke pati patni nhi hai pr sach ye bhi hai ke hum dono ek hi naav mei safar kr rahe hai... bacha na ho paane wali problem hum dono apni asal zindagi mei bhi face kr rahe hai....
Aur abhi tak bacha na ho paane ki vjah se mai asal zindagi mei boht depressed ho gyi hu.... last 2 weeks se shubu mujhe sambhalne mei hi lga hua hai... apni life ki problems se jhoojhte huye bhi mujhe mere depression se nikaalne ki koshish kr raha hai.... jis vjah se hum dono iss kahani ko time nhi de paye hai....
Aur mai aapko koi jhooth nhi kahungi.... hum iss kahani pr kaam kr rahe hai.. pr ab se updates thoda slow hi milengi.... kyunki hum dono hi nhi chahte ke hum koi bhi update bemann se ya sirf iss pressure mei likhe ke, readers wait kr rahe hai toh hume update deni hai...
Kyunki aap sab boht smart readers ho, jo hmari aur iss kahani ki bhaavnao se iss kadar jude huye ho ke aap samjh jaoge ke iss baar ki update mann se nhi likhi gyi hai....
Aur mann se likhne ke liye hume thoda time chahiye.... iss kahani ke liye boht kuch soch rakha hai humne, toh aisa nhi hai ke hum kahani beech mei chodonge ya kuch bhi.... bss aapko updates ke liye thoda jyada intzaar krna padd sakta hai....
Aur jo readers ye baat nhi samjh kr isse sirf ek bahana samjh rahe hai.... unse mai tahe dil se maafi maangti hu...
Aur jo readers abhi bhi hum par bhrosa rakh rahe hai.. unka mai tahe dil se shukriya krti hu.....
Mujhe acha nhi lg raha ke meri vjah se bin baat ke shubu ko aap sab ke katash bhare comments sunne padd rahe hai....
And iss baar update meri vjah se nhi de paya hai shubu...
Umeed krti hu ke aap sab ye baat jaante samjhte hai ke ye kahani ek kalpana hi hai.. pr ye reality se kafi hadh tak judi huyi hai... hum dono chahe ek dusre ke pati patni nhi hai pr sach ye bhi hai ke hum dono ek hi naav mei safar kr rahe hai... bacha na ho paane wali problem hum dono apni asal zindagi mei bhi face kr rahe hai....
Aur abhi tak bacha na ho paane ki vjah se mai asal zindagi mei boht depressed ho gyi hu.... last 2 weeks se shubu mujhe sambhalne mei hi lga hua hai... apni life ki problems se jhoojhte huye bhi mujhe mere depression se nikaalne ki koshish kr raha hai.... jis vjah se hum dono iss kahani ko time nhi de paye hai....
Aur mai aapko koi jhooth nhi kahungi.... hum iss kahani pr kaam kr rahe hai.. pr ab se updates thoda slow hi milengi.... kyunki hum dono hi nhi chahte ke hum koi bhi update bemann se ya sirf iss pressure mei likhe ke, readers wait kr rahe hai toh hume update deni hai...
Kyunki aap sab boht smart readers ho, jo hmari aur iss kahani ki bhaavnao se iss kadar jude huye ho ke aap samjh jaoge ke iss baar ki update mann se nhi likhi gyi hai....
Aur mann se likhne ke liye hume thoda time chahiye.... iss kahani ke liye boht kuch soch rakha hai humne, toh aisa nhi hai ke hum kahani beech mei chodonge ya kuch bhi.... bss aapko updates ke liye thoda jyada intzaar krna padd sakta hai....
Aur jo readers ye baat nhi samjh kr isse sirf ek bahana samjh rahe hai.... unse mai tahe dil se maafi maangti hu...
Aur jo readers abhi bhi hum par bhrosa rakh rahe hai.. unka mai tahe dil se shukriya krti hu.....
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29-08-2024, 03:52 PM
Also please kisi bhi time specific commitments ko avoid kriye. It disheartens us as readers.
29-08-2024, 05:46 PM
(29-08-2024, 03:52 PM)Projectmp Wrote: Also please kisi bhi time specific commitments ko avoid kriye. It disheartens us as readers.
Ajao saare readers... Jab tak updated aaye tab tak hum Ek game khelte hai..
Is kahani me akhir me kya hoga?
1) preet ko rahul le jayega?
2) preet shubham ki rahegi?
3) preet shubham ki rahegi magar rahul se sex karti rahegi chup chup kar?
4) rahul aur shubham ladte rahenge aur preet ko koi teesra villain aakar le udega?
29-08-2024, 06:15 PM
(29-08-2024, 05:46 PM)Naaz Wrote:
Ek game khelte hai..
Is kahani me akhir me kya hoga?
1) preet ko rahul le jayega?
2) preet shubham ki rahegi?
3) preet shubham ki rahegi magar rahul se sex karti rahegi chup chup kar?
4) rahul aur shubham ladte rahenge aur preet ko koi teesra villain aakar le udega?
4th option toh kaafi khurafati dimaag ki upaj hai Naaz ji.
Option 2 - Story ki happy ending rhegi .. dono ko bacche ka sukh prapt hoga. Shubh aur preet hi main characters the starting ke jinke around story bni.
Option 3 - Never ending scanario bn jayega. Aisa ho skta hai ki story ek time leap le aur kuch saalo baad Rahul Preeti ko fir Nazar aaye aur dono fir ek rishte me bandh jaayen.
Option 1 - Aksar villain ki Jeet hoti hai toh main toh personally prefer nhi krunga ye.
Naazi ji - shukriya aapka aise dilchasp cheezen uthane ke liye. Sabka mn lga rehta hai
29-08-2024, 07:01 PM
(29-08-2024, 06:15 PM)Projectmp Wrote: 4th option toh kaafi khurafati dimaag ki upaj hai Naaz ji.
Option 2 - Story ki happy ending rhegi .. dono ko bacche ka sukh prapt hoga. Shubh aur preet hi main characters the starting ke jinke around story bni.
Option 3 - Never ending scanario bn jayega. Aisa ho skta hai ki story ek time leap le aur kuch saalo baad Rahul Preeti ko fir Nazar aaye aur dono fir ek rishte me bandh jaayen.
Option 1 - Aksar villain ki Jeet hoti hai toh main toh personally prefer nhi krunga ye.
Naazi ji - shukriya aapka aise dilchasp cheezen uthane ke liye. Sabka mn lga rehta hai
Sabka mann laga raheta to aapki tarah sab reply bhi karte na
Yaha to sab update ke itne pyaase hai ki bas chale to site ko khod kar update nikal le( jaise kunwa khod kar paani nikalte hai)
Bechari shubham ki biwi ko khud yaha aakar safaai deni padi ki kyu late ho raha hai update me..
Ab update ka intezar mai nahi karne waali..
Ab to soch rahi hu ki khud hi ek story likh lu..
29-08-2024, 09:54 PM
(29-08-2024, 07:01 PM)Naaz Wrote: Sabka mann laga raheta to aapki tarah sab reply bhi karte na
Yaha to sab update ke itne pyaase hai ki bas chale to site ko khod kar update nikal le( jaise kunwa khod kar paani nikalte hai)
Bechari shubham ki biwi ko khud yaha aakar safaai deni padi ki kyu late ho raha hai update me..
Ab update ka intezar mai nahi karne waali..
Ab to soch rahi hu ki khud hi ek story likh lu..
Bilkul sahi kaha .. Saturation aa jata hai aksar readers ki traf se.
Naazi ji - bilkul shuru kriye apni story. full support rhega aapko ideas aur constructive feedback me.
31-08-2024, 09:01 PM
Koi bhi update mat mango.Bar bar mangne se inka attitude badh jata he.soch te he ham update nahi denge to log mar jaayenge
31-08-2024, 09:01 PM
Ek story suggest kar raha hun jake padhna bohat badhiya he inse hazar guna
31-08-2024, 09:02 PM
https://////.live/threads/ek-se-jee-nh-bhara-to-aur-b-sahi.86038/
31-08-2024, 09:38 PM
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01-09-2024, 03:48 PM
01-09-2024, 03:52 PM
01-09-2024, 03:54 PM
(01-09-2024, 03:48 PM)Projectmp Wrote: Thanks Play boy1 for recommendation. Poori toh nhi Hui abhi ..but jitni bhi pdhi behadhh kaamuk aur laajvab story hai . Kaafi Lambi story hai ..will finish it soon
@Everyone - please do give it a try.
It's a fantastic story complete it.puri seduction he and sex scenes puri details me he
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