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Adultery Main,Meri beti...aur wo.. New Style.
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(25-08-2024, 12:31 PM)Milfloverravii(Sid kidoo) Wrote: Lagta hai sab ko story kuch khas pasand nahi AA rahi..????

Please post the old updates of Bade ghar ki chutain. We all love your writings very much.
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#22
bahut shandaar update!
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#23
(25-08-2024, 01:10 PM)Jyoti Saha Wrote: Please post the old updates of Bade ghar ki chutain. We all love your writings very much.

Yes,agree
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#24
Fantastic update. You are a great interfaith storyteller. We are very grateful to you for coming this forum.
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#25
Great start!
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#26
Superb, very nice and excellent story! thanks
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#27
bilkool kamaal ka update,ekdom manpasand kahaani!
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#28
Super fantastic start!
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#29
bahut badiya shuruwat
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#30
Stunning start
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#31
Wonderful and beautiful start!
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#32
Awesome update
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#33
Dashing and fabulous writing ✍️
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#34
Excellent build up
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#35
UUPDATE 4


Preeti - toh ab kaisa feel Kar rahe hai..

Ali - thik hun Malkin.. lekin AP yaha..

Preeti - bataya tha na main doctor hun..

Preeti - hmm apki sab reports normal hai.. aj raat rest kariye.. hum Kal subha baat karenge..


AB AGEY..


Next Morning 10 baje..

Karim - madam.. Madam..

Preeti - Hmm Kya Hua.. itna Chila Kyu Rahe Ho..

Karim - madam.. Ali Ghar Jane Ki Jid Pe Ada Hai.. Ap Hi Kuch Kariye..

Preeti - ( room No.56 ) Kya Hua.. Ap Itna Apne Dost Ko Paresan Kyu Kar Rahe Hai..

Ali - mujhe Ghar Jana Hai..

Preeti - manti Hun Apki Sab Reports Normal Hai.. Lekin Iska Matlab Ye Nahi Ke Ap Pure Thik Hai.. Apko Do Din Aur Observation Ke Liye Hospital Me Rukna Hoga..

Ali - Nahi.. aur Mere Pass Itne Paise Bhi Nahi Hai.. Waisi Bhi Apki Ye Aspatal Bohot Mehengi Hai.. ( Karim Ki Taraf Dekhte Hue.) Tujhe Agar Mujhe Aspatal Lana Hi Tha Toh Koi Saste Sarkari Me Le Jata.. Ye Hi Fi Hi Mila Tuje..

Karim - kya Karta Yar.. teri Halat Dekhi Toh.. Jo Sabse Nazdik Tha Ushi Me Le Aya..

Ali - Ab Mere Ilaj Ke Paise Kya Tera Abbu Bharega.. Nahi Main Aur Yaha..

Preeti - Bas.. Apko Paise Dene Ki Zarurat Nahi.. Main Bhar Dungi.. Bas..

Ali - Nahi.. Mante Hai Hum Garib Hai.. Lekin Bhikari Nahi..

Preeti - arre Toh Udhar Le Lijiye..

Ali - lekin Hum Itni Badi Rakam Chukaiyenge Kaise.. Waise Agar Ap Humare Auto Ka Istemal Kare.. Toh Dhire Dhire Hi Sahi Ye Rakam Chukta Ho Sakti Hai.. Lekin Ap Hamare Do Kodi Ke Auto Me Bhaithinge Hi Kyu..

Preeti - Nahi Nahi Aisi Koi Baat Nahi Hai.. Thik Hai YE Hi Karte Hai.. Ab Toh Thik Hai Na..

Ali - hmm..

Preeti (Karim Se) - Ap Mere Sath Meri Cabin Me Ayie..

Preeti - ye Sab Inhone Kyu Kiya.. Ghar Me Koi Tension Hai Kya.. Jante Hai Na Ye Security Case Banta Hai.. Patient Ne Apni Nas Katli Thi..

Karim - nahi Nahi.. Ap Security Walon Ko Kuch Mat Kehna..

Preeti - toh Bataiye Kya Problem Hai.. Jisse Inhone Itna Bada Kadam Uthaya..

Karim - kya Bataun Madam Ji.. Ye Sab Iski Un 3 begumon Ki Wajah Se Hua Hai..

Preeti - kaise Jara Khulke Bataiye Tabhi Toh Mujhe Kuch Samaj Ayiega..

Karim - MadamjI Iski Teeno Begum Isse Bohot Bura Behewar Karti Hai.. Hamesha Sirf Paise Paise Karti Rehti Hai..

Preeti - isme Galati Toh Apke Dost Ki Hai.. Mana Ke Apke Majhab Me Kitni Hi Shaadhiyan Kar Sakte Ho.. lekin Jab Financial Condition Hi Nahi Hai Toh Kya Jarurat Thi..

Karim - fiii Fiinnnn Kya..

Preeti - kya Kehta Hai..hmm Aaye.. Jab Itni Aaye Hi Nahi Hai.. Toh Kya Jarurat Thi..

Kakim - jarurat Nahi Madamji.. Majburi..

Preeti - kaisi Majburi..

Kakim - Apko Pata Nahi.. Wo Teeno Ali Ki Dur Ki Ristedar Thi.. Us Gaon Me Baad Ayie Aur Sab Kuch Beh Gaya.. Wo Teeno Anath Ho Gayi.. Aur Wo Aise Kaise Un Teeno Ko Apne Ghar Me Panah De Sakta Tha.. Duniya Wale Kya Kehte.. Bas Isiliye.. Un Teeno Ke Liye Usne Nikah Kiya.. Lekin Tabhi Se Wo Teeno Ispe Bohot Julum Dhati Hai.. Aur Ye Bichara Chup Chap Sab Sehta Rehta Hai.. Aur Janti Hai Ye Ek Ladki Se Pyar Bhi Karta Tha.. Lekin ,.' Ki Jaise Marji..

Preeti - ( shoked. ) Kya.. Itna Sab..

Karim - haa Madamji.. Itna Sab Karne Ke Baad Bhi Wo Teeno Ishe Jarasa Pyaar Tak Nahi Jatati.. Bas Isse Paise Paise Karti Rehti Hai.. Aur Ishiliye Mera Dost..

Preeti - ( ye Sab Kaise.. Meri Hi Wajah Se Unhone 25 hazar Auto Me Laga Diye.. Taki Main Aram Se Safar Kar Sakun.. Aur Maine Hi Unko Itna Bura Balha Bol Diya.. Manti Hun Ye Sab Un Teeno Ki Wajahse Hua Hai.. Lekin Kahin Na Kahin Isme Meri Bhi Galati Hai.. )

Do Ghante Baad..

Security Officer - ji Madam Apne Hume Kyu Bulaya.. Koi Case Hai..

Preeti - ji Ek Patient Ne Unki Patniyon Ki Dawab Me Akke Suicide Attempt Kiya..

Security Officer - thik Hai.. Patient Kaha Hai.. Uski Gawahi Leni Hai..

Room No 56.

Preeti - ye Rahe Patient.. Ali Tapori..

Ali - ye.. Ye Sab Kya Hai..

Phir Security Officer Ne Sab Kuch Bata Diya..

Ali - nahi Hume Koi Complaint Nahi Karni Hai . Aur Apko Kisne Kaha Ye Sab Hamari Begumon Ki Wajah Se Hua Hai.. Wo Hamse Bohot Pyar Karti Hai..

Preeti - Ali Ji Meri Baat Toh Suniye..

Ali - nahi Hume Kuch Nahi Sunna.. Ap Inhe Yahase Bhagaiye..

Preeti - sorry Officer..

Security Officer - it's Okay Madam.. Aisa Kai Case's Me Hota Hai.. Lekin Pehli Baar Ulta Dekh Raha Hun..

Preeti - ulta .. main Kuch Samjhi Nahi Officer..

Security Officer - ulta Yani Pehli Baar Pati PE Julm Ho Rahe HI.. Aur Wo Uski Patni Ko Bachane Ke Liye Sab Kuch Jhel Raha Hai.. Warna Hamare Me Toh Ulta Hi Hota Hai.. Pati Julm Karta Hai.. Aur Patni Jhelti Hai..

Ali - apko Ye Sab Kisne Kaha.. Karim Tune Bataya Na..

Karim - Haa Maine Bataya.. Teri Halat Ki Wajah Se..

Preeti - jab Wo Teeno Apko Is Haad Tak Paresan Kar Rahi Hai.. Ki Apne Ye Kadam Utha Liya.. Toh Complain Kyu Nahi Kari..

Ali - nahi.. Wo Jaisi Bhi Hai Hamari Begum Hai.. Hamari Zimedari Hai..

Karim - Lekin Wo Tujhse Pyar Nahi Karti..

Ali - toh Kya Hua.. Hum Toh Karte Hai Na..

Preeti - ( kitne Acche Hai Ali Ji Un Teeno Ne Itna Sab Karliya Phir Bhi.. Aur Sahi Hi Kaha Security Officer Ne.. Hamare Majhab Me Pati Pike Ata Hai Aur Bina Wajah Baat Ke Hath Utha Tha Hai.. Jaise Patni Ko Kharid Laya Ho.. Aur Yaha Ye 3-3 ko..)

Ab Ye Sab Dekhke Mujhe Apne Kiye Pe Aur Guilt Hone Laga..

Next Morning Subha 8 baje..

Preeti - Toh Ap Samaj Gaye Patient KI Kya Condition Hai..

Dr.Sanjeev - hmm. Samaj Gaya.. Iska Main Reason Gussa Hai.. Gusse Ki Wajah Se Hi Wo Khudpe Apa Kho Bhaitha.. UskI Family Pe Hi Uska Gussa Na Nikle.. Ishiliye Usne Ye Kadam Uthaya..

Preeti - toh Hume Uske Andar Ke Gusse Ko Nikalna Hoga.. Right Doctor..

Dr.Sanjeev - hmm Absolutely Right.. Hume Uske Andar Ke Gusse Ko Bahar Ka Rasta Dikhana Hoga.. Kaise Bhi Bass Gussa Uske Dil Me Dabane Se Rokna Hoga.. Phir Wo Apne Ap Dhire Dhire Stable Hota Jayega..

Preeti - thanks Doctor..

Aise Hi Do Din Nikal Gaye.. Aur Ali Ko Discharge Bhi Mil Gaya..

Ali - madamji.. Humne Baat Ki Thi Na Ki Ap Hamare Auto Me..

Preeti - Ha Ali Ji.. Kalse Ap Subha 8 baje Mujhe Mandir Ke Liye.. Aur Phir 10 baje Hospital Ke Liye Chodne Ajaiyega.. Phir SHam 5 baje.. Hospital Se Ghar Thik Hai..

Ali - thik Hai Madam Ji..


Aur Ye Meri Sabse Badi Galati Sabit Hone Wali Thi.. Kaise.. Hmm Lets See In Next Update..


To Be Continued...
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#36
shandaar update
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#37
very nice going.
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#38
Wonderful and beautiful update! clps
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#39
mast update dala hai jldi long updates dalo
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#40
Superb and excellent update!
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