Adultery Biwi meri, par Bacha kisi aur ka

[Parth Jagya]

Forget it story is over left incomplete

[Naaz]

Itni jldi is nishkash pe aa Jana uchit nhi Naazi ji.

[Projectmp]

I still have hope Naaz ji.. update may come late or some other day. Our author has been consistent throughout this journey of the story and always given amazing updates.Let's not forget it.

[Nayan@12345]

5,10rs fees लेणी चाहिये monthly per reader.
Writter भी free मे क्यू लिखेंगा

[Nayan@12345]

कोई ईनसान अपना समय दे रहा है तो story writing मे तो उसे भी कुछ मिलना चाहिये

[Naaz]

I still have hope Naaz ji.. update may come late or some other day. Our author has been consistent throughout this journey of the story and always given amazing updates.Let's not forget it.

Galati writer ki nahi hai..
Hum readers ki hai
Ki kuch jyada hi ummide bandh lete hai hum

[HumiliatingStories]

Hey everyone .....uffff maine abhi sab comments padhe ....yaar koi problem hai issi wajha se update ni aaya iss bari ..main toh ulte bada long update dene wala tha ...but kuch technical issues ki wajha se mere drafts delete ho gye jo maine banaye the ..iska yeh mtlab ni hai ki main story ko bich me chorke bhaag jaaunga ....aap sab log itne ache ho itna pyaar de rahe ho iss story ko toh aise nainsaafi hogi mera aise bich me chorke jaana ....abhi toh bahut kuch baaki hai story me...aur bahut kuch hona hai ....aur bhaiyoo mujhe koi paise ni chahiye iss story ko likhne k liye ...yeh toh main apni khushi se apne shauk k liye likh raha hu ..plzz aisi batein mat kiya karo ....

main fir se update ready kr raha hu iss bar saturday tak wait krne ki jarurat nhi hogi ..main kal eve tak hi update de dunga ...aur Saturday night ko naya update aayega ...
yeh maine socha ni tha story shuru krne se pahele ..ki aap sab itna pyaar doge ....thanks everyone for your love and support

[Rajendra karka]

Thanku writer we will wait

Hope all thing good

[Projectmp]

Galati writer ki nahi hai..
Hum readers ki hai
Ki kuch jyada hi ummide bandh lete hai hum

Galati kisi ki nhi hai Naazi ji .. Jb hum kisi cheez se bht attach ho jate hai toh choti moti cheezen bhi pareshan krne lgti hai . 

Dear author - Thank you for the information, please take your time.

[Naaz]

Hey everyone .....uffff maine abhi sab comments padhe ....yaar koi problem hai issi wajha se update ni aaya iss bari ..main toh ulte bada long update dene wala tha ...but kuch technical issues ki wajha se mere drafts delete ho gye jo maine banaye the ..iska yeh mtlab ni hai ki main story ko bich me chorke bhaag jaaunga ....aap sab log itne ache ho itna pyaar de rahe ho iss story ko toh aise nainsaafi hogi mera aise bich me chorke jaana ....abhi toh bahut kuch baaki hai story me...aur bahut kuch hona hai ....aur bhaiyoo mujhe koi paise ni chahiye iss story ko likhne k liye ...yeh toh main apni khushi se apne shauk k liye likh raha hu ..plzz aisi batein mat kiya karo ....

main fir se update ready kr raha hu iss bar saturday tak wait krne ki jarurat nhi hogi ..main kal eve tak hi update de dunga ...aur Saturday night ko naya update aayega ...
yeh maine socha ni tha story shuru krne se pahele ..ki aap sab itna pyaar doge ....thanks everyone for your love and support

Shukriya aapka
Negative comments ko bhi positive lena ye ache logo ki nishani hoti hai..

[nooki]

Hey everyone .....uffff maine abhi sab comments padhe ....yaar koi problem hai issi wajha se update ni aaya iss bari ..main toh ulte bada long update dene wala tha ...but kuch technical issues ki wajha se mere drafts delete ho gye jo maine banaye the ..iska yeh mtlab ni hai ki main story ko bich me chorke bhaag jaaunga ....aap sab log itne ache ho itna pyaar de rahe ho iss story ko toh aise nainsaafi hogi mera aise bich me chorke jaana ....abhi toh bahut kuch baaki hai story me...aur bahut kuch hona hai ....aur bhaiyoo mujhe koi paise ni chahiye iss story ko likhne k liye ...yeh toh main apni khushi se apne shauk k liye likh raha hu ..plzz aisi batein mat kiya karo ....

main fir se update ready kr raha hu iss bar saturday tak wait krne ki jarurat nhi hogi ..main kal eve tak hi update de dunga ...aur Saturday night ko naya update aayega ...
yeh maine socha ni tha story shuru krne se pahele ..ki aap sab itna pyaar doge ....thanks everyone for your love and support

Asal mai, mai es story ko fazool samjtha tha kyon kaay start mai story bohat slow thi aur boring b lakin aur I m 100% sure kaay script writer ki grip mai naahi hai aur his focus also be scatter hai writer b lakin two days before jab mai naay es kaay 25 pages deekjtay Aur 25 page paa b update tha aur previous pages paa readers kaay laambay laambay comments tu mai naay yeh story paarhi. Aur paarh kaay writer ko appreciate karna banta hai jis naay ek different point of view se yaa likha hai yaani husband, wife and wife' s lover kaay point of view se. Bohat kaamal kaa likha haai esi three point of view se likhay writer i think its a Nobel way to writing. Lakin ab Goa ka episode daal Kar I think kaay writer b script mai uljh gaya hai I do' t think Kay script likhtay huaway delete hugay hai writer himself confused how to further proceed this story. Then in this situations its humble request to the readers of this story is that they will show  patience and let b reconsidered the writer how he will now further maintain the momentum  and draw the more readers' attention in this story so be? and wait.
Anyhow congrats the writer and all credits go to him for his such tremendous effort and his dedication for writing this story.

[Ansarmu fucker]

Hey everyone .....uffff maine abhi sab comments padhe ....yaar koi problem hai issi wajha se update ni aaya iss bari ..main toh ulte bada long update dene wala tha ...but kuch technical issues ki wajha se mere drafts delete ho gye jo maine banaye the ..iska yeh mtlab ni hai ki main story ko bich me chorke bhaag jaaunga ....aap sab log itne ache ho itna pyaar de rahe ho iss story ko toh aise nainsaafi hogi mera aise bich me chorke jaana ....abhi toh bahut kuch baaki hai story me...aur bahut kuch hona hai ....aur bhaiyoo mujhe koi paise ni chahiye iss story ko likhne k liye ...yeh toh main apni khushi se apne shauk k liye likh raha hu ..plzz aisi batein mat kiya karo ....

main fir se update ready kr raha hu iss bar saturday tak wait krne ki jarurat nhi hogi ..main kal eve tak hi update de dunga ...aur Saturday night ko naya update aayega ...
yeh maine socha ni tha story shuru krne se pahele ..ki aap sab itna pyaar doge ....thanks everyone for your love and support

Bro aap ye na socho ki log aapko paiso ke liye bol rahe the sabhi readers ka ye hi kahna hoga ki aap story hi itni gajab likh rahe hai ki is story ke liye to paise bhi kharch kar sakte hai

[grp2200]

Update kitne tym bhai

[Projectmp]

Waiting

[Rajendra karka]

Waiting

[Parth Jagya]

Bhai tum chunna lagana band kardo update de raha hu k naam pe.

[Naaz]

Bhai tum chunna lagana band kardo update de raha hu k naam pe.

Kuch nagetive mat bolo 
Fans ko gussa aajayega

[Projectmp]

Kuch nagetive mat bolo 
Fans ko gussa aajayega

Nice humour

[Naaz]

Nice humour

Ab update aaye to aaye
Chalo hum aab readers milkar COMMENTS COMMENTS khelte hai banghead: banghead:

[Asli lund]

Ab update aaye to aaye
Chalo hum aab readers milkar COMMENTS COMMENTS khelte hai banghead: banghead:

Jarur ayega aur Goa me preet ki chut ki damdar chudai bhi hogi 
Update late ho gaya he writer ki mazburi he hame writer ki mazburi ko samjhna chahiye