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Game of lust
Evil bhai ne story likhna band kar diya hai aur Raj hhai ne bhi?
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(06-05-2019, 07:36 PM)THE EVIL Wrote: Hey guys, i see some of you are expecting updates on this story but the fact is currently i dont have anything planned for this story. Maybe in the future i'll do that but for now i'm only concentrating on "Kahani ek bade ghar ki". 

Thank you

Plz evil bhai ish story ko continue karo plz avi tak ish story Ko kisi ne ched chad nai kiya hae Namaskar
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yes waiting for this story
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Hello
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Intezaar hae bhai apke update ka
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Plz evil bhai ish story ko plz continue karo...  Sick Namaskar Iex
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please update
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(07-12-2018, 08:01 AM)THE EVIL Wrote: Sorry guys due to some personal issues i'm delaying updates (till next week) Hope u guys will understand. But promise i will come back with a bang.

-THE EVIL

2 saal tak sabne intezaar kiya ish story ka...  yourock
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Update kardo bhi
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Kindly update
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Priya isvakt apne hi kamre me apne hi bistar per apni jawani ki aag me jal Rahi thi ye priya ko aaj life me pahli baar mahsus ho raha tha vo khud hi apne hatho se apne mote rash se bhare boobs ko press kar rahi thi is khabar se bekhabar ki koi use isvakt usi ke kamre ki khidki se ghur raha hai
Vo do aakhen lagatar priya ki ek ek halchal ko gour se dekh rahi thi or vo koi or nahi ramu tha jo chupke se sabse najar bachakar sidhiya chadhkar 2nd floor per aa gaya
Ramu priya ki ek ek harkat ko gour se dekh raha tha or apne ek hath ko apne pajame me le jakar apne mote land ko masal raha tha
Udhar priya apne per se control khote ja rahi thi vo apne dono hatho se apne blouse ke button kholne lagti hai ye scene dekhkar ab ramu ki aankhe chamak se badi ho jati hai
Vo gour se dekhe ja raha tha priya apne blouse ke sare button khol deti hai or apne jism se blouse ko alag kar deti hai aaj priya ko khud nahi pata tha ki vo kya kar Rahi hai or koi use dekhe bhi ja raha ek ghar ka budha nakar kahne or dekhne ko budha per uske andar jawan logo se bhi jyada bhara hua josh

Yeh uske pajame me khade land ko dekhkar hi bata sakta tha ki budha kitna tharki hai
nospam horseride

 

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Wink 
Please suggestions kare
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Dosto yeh story ka writer kahi chala gaya shayad kahani ko adhuri chhod di hai mujhko iskahani ko dekhkar laga mai isko jald hi puri kar sakta hu isliye ek chhota sa update diya hai agar acha lage to batana mai is kahani aage badha dunga
nospam horseride

 

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Acha update h story ko poora karo please
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(08-04-2023, 12:22 AM)Omprakash meena Wrote: Dosto yeh story ka writer kahi chala gaya shayad kahani ko adhuri chhod di hai mujhko iskahani ko dekhkar laga mai isko jald hi puri kar sakta hu isliye ek chhota sa update diya hai agar acha lage to batana mai is kahani aage badha dunga

Story writer to hae avi aur ek new story likh rahe .. ek bar unse puchho.
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Special Update 1
Neha 9th class ki student thi or ek ameer khandan se talluq tha 34/26/34
rang gora hiegt 5ftus k Father apni 2nd Wife k sath doosry shehr me rehte they

Neha ko Facebook per ek story milti he usko intrest ata he us story
Ko parh kerto woh more k lye niche diye gye link per click krti he to waha woh story kafi hot hone lgti he
Neha ko apni taangon k bich sarsarahat hoti feel hone lgti he or usko buht maza ane lgta he woh jab poori story khatam krti he or wash room jati he to dekhti he panty to poori gili hui pari he usko gila pan to feel horha tha pehle bhi but itni gili hogi usko nhi pata tha kher us ne su su kia or apni chut per pani bahaa ker thanda kia kyu k usko real me sex k bary me kuch khas nhi pata tha so woh abhi buht masoom thi or phir woh so gai doosry din school se ate hi dress change ker k lunch kia or phir apne room me ja ker us ne dobara story read krne k lye dobara wo hi site khol li yun ye uska roz ka mamool bangya. Uski mom samjhti thi k Neha study me busy rehti he shayad.
Ek roz us ne ek story writer Shahid ko email per uski story ka feedback bhi likh ker bhej diya or buht tareef ki Shahid ne usko thanks kaha or us se uska introduction poocha to us bhi apna introduction bhej diya Shahid buht khush hua or usne btaya k uski age 50 year he or woh uski beti ki umer ki he is lye woh dosti krna chahta he us se but woh usko beti hi boly ga. Neha ne accept ker liya or shahid ko apna number bhi de diya.
Ab unki msg per bat hone lgi.
Woh buht hi Adult jokes marta tha kyu k woh sex stories ka writer tha to ye uski adat thi is lye neha bhi rafta rafta use too hogai. Uske jokes zyada tar apni real married life per hi hotey thy jis me woh apni wife or khud ki baten btata tha jo hoty to jokes thy but neha ko unhe sunker buht hi gili gili feelings ati thin jis ke karan Shahid se bat krte huye usky panty gili hi rehti thi aisa kyu hota he Neha ko ye bat nhi samjh ati thi but itna samajh ata tha k usko shahid se bat krna acha lgta tha. Ek din Shahid ne Neha ko apni pictures bhejin jinhen dekh ker Neha chonk gai. Usko laga k Neha ne is shakhs ko Kahin to dekha he mgr Kahan ye Neha ko yad nhi Aarha tha. 2 din tak us ne buht yad krna chaha but usko yad nhi aya kher...

Ek roz woh apni mom k sath market gai to Neha or uski mom ek Bartan waly ki shop per thin to samne ek toys ki buht bari shop thi or us Shop per Ek Uncle nazar aye jinki shakal bilkul Shahid ki pics se match kr rhi thi...
Neha unko aankhen phhaar ker dekhti he to woh Uncle bhi Neha ko dekhte hen ek 16 sal ki Khubsurt larki tight chest or kamar se kasi hui frock pehne khari usko hi dekh rhi he woh usky dekhne k andaz se thora confused horha tha k ye larki mjhe itna ghoor kyu rhi he.
Idher Neha ko abhi tak yakin nhi tha k ye Shahid hi he kyu k Shahid ki pic me usky kafi hairs thy jabky saamne uncle aadhy takle the usne foran mobile me usko msg kia to samne shopkeeper Uncle k mobile me bhi msg aya unka dhiyan Neha se hata or woh apne mob me busy hogye
Neha: Hi
Uncle: Hi kesi ho Neha beti
Neha: me fine Uncle ap sunaen kahan hen
Uncle: beti me to shop per hun
Neha: ohh to ap busy hen shayad
Uncle: ary nhi busy nhi tha me woh meri shop k samne ek larki khari mjhe ghoor rhi to tumhe hi yad kr rha tha k tumhara msg bhi agya.
Neha k peron tale zameen sarakne lagti he Neha ko ab lgne lga tha k ye hi Shahid he Shayad

Neha: acha to aunty se zyada Khubsurt he kia woh
Uncle: Khubsurt to buht he but us se zyada hot bhi he agr aisy aam teri aunty k hote na to me poori poori rat pita mgr teri aunty to us se pehly apni baton se karely ka juice pila deti hen.

Neha: ufff toba he Uncle ap kitni gandi baten kr rhe ho us larki ne kapry nhi pehne hen kia?

Uncle: beti kapry to pehne hen but buht mast or fit frock pehni hui he thori frock uper hoti to uskey tarbuj bhi dikh jaty jo abhi meri taraf hi ker khari hui he.
Neha k ye sunte hi us ki chut me to pani ki ek dhaar ati hui lgi ond dil me sochti he Ufff kese vichaar hen in k dil me
Neha: Ufff me to phir apke samne kabhi nhi aungi ap buht gandi baten krte hen.

Uncle: beti tumhare bare me bhaka me aisa kese bol sakta hun tum to meri beti ki trah ho.. bas tumse dosti bhi he to
Is lye khuli bate krleta hu agr tumhe bura lagta he to sorry beta
Neha: it's okay Uncle me bad me bat krti hu ap se bye

Neha ab ghr aa kr bhi Shahid k bary me hi soch rhi thi jese us ne anjane me uske boobs Masoom Neha Or Shareef Shopkeeper
or gand ki baten ki thi woh usko pagal bna rhi thi usko buht ajib lag rha tha but ander kuch maze wali feelings bhi arhi thi or sharam bhi....
To be continue.....
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Meri story upload nhi horhi kesy hogi iski other updates bhi deni hen but first hi upload nhi ho rhi ?
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Good story
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kindly update....
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(21-12-2018, 03:00 PM)Rumana Wrote: तुम भाई कहाँ हो? कृपया गर्म और कामुक अपडेट के साथ वापस आएं।

(21-12-2018, 04:07 PM)WARSHAW Wrote: मुझे हमेशा आपकी कहानी बहुत पसंद है। मैं आपको इस मंच में ढूंढने में बहुत खुश हूं।

(24-05-2019, 05:14 PM)Silverstone93 Wrote: I think there is no need to change names of characters. Those who are demanding changes haven't read "Koel - Ek masoom Housewife". That masterpiece wasn't Interfaith story, still the story sky rocketed on original site and became one of the best. 
Writer skills lead story to success. Have a faith in THE EVIL. I am sure that he'll give his 100℅ to this story and I'm sure that you'll love it. 

Of course, All rights are reserved to THE EVIL. I just put my views in front of you. Thanks.
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भीड़ है क़यामत की फिर भी  हम अकेले हैं.



thanks
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