31-07-2024, 08:02 AM
(30-07-2024, 09:39 PM)Haran000 Wrote: Veeranna ఈ కథ నాకు ఏదో ఒక రకమైన incest fantasy లా అనిపిస్తుంది. అమ్మా అమ్మా అని వస్తూ ఉంటే. I’m not able to read, I stopped at 3rd update.
మీకు చెప్పాలి అనిపించి చెప్పేసా.
Not incest bro.... Gayatri character resembles possessiveness...abhi character resembles competitiveness ...sumant ni common man pov lo chuste...manishi ki tana dagara undedi ekkada dooram ipotundo ani bhayam next eppudu vere okaritho compare cheskuntu vaalla kante manam takkuva ane inferior life ni lead cheyyatam lo oka bhayam badha...veetiki todu life lo success lekapote own parents kuda value evvaru ane realisation...veetini anni bharinchaleka tirigi chinnatanam vaste baagunnu ane chinna aasa (playing with bablu character)...idemi kaadu asalu manishiki unna anni samasyalu mana alochana lonche.. problems manam koni techhukuneve ani guru bodha chese neem bro lanti character valla ponde relaxation....inni aspects unnai story lo....readers entertainment kosam konni elements mix cheyalsi vastadi...so evari istam valladi...evari taste valladi....chadive vallu chaduvutaru