[Veeeruoriginals]

Update please

Nyt 11:30 nundi 3:30 varaku nidrapokunda story raasi...site lo post cheddam ani mail lo draft lo copy chesanu bro...em ayindo copy chesaka vere edo nokkanu anthe mottam lengthy story antha matash ipoindi....entha badha vachindi ante...life annaka jaragatam common le ani sardicheppukunna last ki

[srider69]

You should be able to find it in drafts or if you sent it, it will be in your sent email

[raju143]

update plzzzzzzzzzzzz

[Veeeruoriginals]

Veeranna ఈ కథ నాకు ఏదో ఒక రకమైన incest fantasy లా అనిపిస్తుంది. అమ్మా అమ్మా అని వస్తూ ఉంటే. I’m not able to read, I stopped at 3rd update.

మీకు చెప్పాలి అనిపించి చెప్పేసా.

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Not incest bro.... Gayatri character resembles possessiveness...abhi character resembles competitiveness ...sumant ni common man pov lo chuste...manishi ki tana dagara undedi ekkada dooram ipotundo ani bhayam next eppudu vere okaritho compare cheskuntu vaalla kante manam takkuva ane inferior life ni lead cheyyatam lo oka bhayam badha...veetiki todu life lo success lekapote own parents kuda value evvaru ane realisation...veetini anni bharinchaleka tirigi chinnatanam vaste baagunnu ane chinna aasa (playing with bablu character)...idemi kaadu asalu manishiki unna anni samasyalu mana alochana lonche.. problems manam koni techhukuneve  ani guru bodha chese neem bro lanti character valla ponde relaxation....inni aspects unnai story lo....readers entertainment kosam konni elements mix cheyalsi vastadi...so evari istam valladi...evari taste valladi....chadive vallu chaduvutaru

[1234hitman]

Continue chei sodhara story ni wait chesthuna update kosam

[Haran000]

Not incest bro.... Gayatri character resembles possessiveness...abhi character resembles competitiveness ...sumant ni common man pov lo chuste...manishi ki tana dagara undedi ekkada dooram ipotundo ani bhayam next eppudu vere okaritho compare cheskuntu vaalla kante manam takkuva ane inferior life ni lead cheyyatam lo oka bhayam badha...veetiki todu life lo success lekapote own parents kuda value evvaru ane realisation...veetini anni bharinchaleka tirigi chinnatanam vaste baagunnu ane chinna aasa (playing with bablu character)...idemi kaadu asalu manishiki unna anni samasyalu mana alochana lonche.. problems manam koni techhukuneve  ani guru bodha chese neem bro lanti character valla ponde relaxation....inni aspects unnai story lo....readers entertainment kosam konni elements mix cheyalsi vastadi...so evari istam valladi...evari taste valladi....chadive vallu chaduvutaru

హా అంతే. నా taste కి ఎందుకో connect కాలేదు. చెప్పేసా. Lite bro. I’ll try again when interested.

[hisoka]

Not incest bro.... Gayatri character resembles possessiveness...abhi character resembles competitiveness ...sumant ni common man pov lo chuste...manishi ki tana dagara undedi ekkada dooram ipotundo ani bhayam next eppudu vere okaritho compare cheskuntu vaalla kante manam takkuva ane inferior life ni lead cheyyatam lo oka bhayam badha...veetiki todu life lo success lekapote own parents kuda value evvaru ane realisation...veetini anni bharinchaleka tirigi chinnatanam vaste baagunnu ane chinna aasa (playing with bablu character)...idemi kaadu asalu manishiki unna anni samasyalu mana alochana lonche.. problems manam koni techhukuneve  ani guru bodha chese neem bro lanti character valla ponde relaxation....inni aspects unnai story lo....readers entertainment kosam konni elements mix cheyalsi vastadi...so evari istam valladi...evari taste valladi....chadive vallu chaduvutaru

 bro sumanth ala unnadu ante thanaki valla amma midha kuda feeling chala ekkuvaga unnatte lekunte eppudo pattinchevaadu entha inferior vaadu ayna thana ki istam ayna vallu ala chesthunte assalu urukoru edho okati chestharu but ala unnadu ante valla amma midha chaala feelings unnayi kabatte ala chesthunnadu so try to satisfy him. best enti ante okavela valla incest raayakapoyina koduku midha gayatri ki and abhi ki jelous feeling oche la cheyyu. it will be a great.

[hisoka]

Bro ni last Gayatri part 2 ani chandiva andhulo kuda same names so dhanni uhinchukoni rasthunnav naaku ardhamindhi but koduku Mari antha thallini Ala chesthunna impotent la undaru please change it nuvvu incest attach chesina parvaledhu but don't degrade sons like that. It doesn't look like reality. Story ippativaraku konchum Ala unna em anipinchaledhu kani ikamundhu alane impotent ga oka son unte chala badha anipisthundhi. Ah chadive interest mothum pothundhi. If you can change please change it.

[Markande]

Update please

[tej578]

Veeranna bro nee istam vochinattu rasuko first below vaati ki updates writing start chai so many days infact months iyyipoindhi ....madhyalo Gayatri dhi okati partial small update ichav anuko .....

1. Gayatri
2.Chandrakala
3.Santu

[raju143]

అప్డేట్ ప్లీజ్ ప్లీజ్ ప్లీజ్

[naree721]

Update bro

[chinnuboss55]

waiting update bro . . . ..

[Nightking633]

Update bro

[naree721]

Update bro

[Paty@123]

Pls, I request the reader
Not to ask updates plz

[Markande]

Update please

[naree721]

Waiting for update bro

[maleforU]

Can anyone update the story plz

[Krishnaveni]

Waiting for your update