18-08-2024, 08:06 AM
nice one
(19-08-2024, 09:24 PM)Sathiesh034 Wrote: Omg don't knw when this gonna end u kept on dragging but at the same time intersting also . Don't make him as a cuckold. Then this won't be a unique..
(19-08-2024, 10:29 PM)3sivaram Wrote: In the end....
Srinu considers Ganga as good wife.
Ganga said I'm pregnant, Srinu was dumbfounded. banghead:
He pretends he is happy for the news, still he is not sure, it was him or Chacha and Javed.![]()
When srinu opens mobile and saw CCTV. she is watching camera and laughs.![]()
He watched another camera, she was there too, He opened another and another, she was at all cameras![]()
he finally realized something very very important.![]()
He went crazy......
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(20-08-2024, 01:24 AM)intrepid Wrote: Hi KK,
Is the story really over? Is “Happy Ending” the last episode? Can you at least have Ganga convey in her own words what occurred after Javed and Chacha kidnapped Ganga and took her to the 2nd floor of the under construction building while Srinu was unconscious?
This is the genesis of the story, but has not been addressed at all, I.e why and how did Javed and chacha let her go after dragging her to the 2nd floor? Appreciate if you can at least cover this in case you decide to end the story.
BTW, I don’t want you to end the story BEFORE it reaches its logical end with a conclusion! Thanks.
Intrepid
(20-08-2024, 12:31 AM)befriend007 Wrote: This is not happy ending. It’s worst ending.
Please don’t end it this way and of course not now.
There are many questions still unanswered, please continue this in your own way as you thought.
(20-08-2024, 01:14 AM)tomdickharry2024 Wrote: Please don't end it this way KK.. this is too abrupt.. I agree it's a happy ending for the protagonists but leaves too many questions unanswered.... just wishing you would consider continuing this. Thank you for your efforts so far!
(20-08-2024, 01:24 AM)intrepid Wrote: Hi KK,
Is the story really over? Is “Happy Ending” the last episode? Can you at least have Ganga convey in her own words what occurred after Javed and Chacha kidnapped Ganga and took her to the 2nd floor of the under construction building while Srinu was unconscious?
This is the genesis of the story, but has not been addressed at all, I.e why and how did Javed and chacha let her go after dragging her to the 2nd floor? Appreciate if you can at least cover this in case you decide to end the story.
BTW, I don’t want you to end the story BEFORE it reaches its logical end with a conclusion! Thanks.
Intrepid
(20-08-2024, 02:59 AM)Manwithlove Wrote: This is incomplete in many ways
Don't end the story there are many questions unanswered..what happened in the theatre? What happened in the construction building? These are the two main questions that has gone unanswered..
(20-08-2024, 11:39 AM)kk007007 Wrote: Dont worry guys. Its just fate saying to srinu "gotcha" moment in his life.
I thought you guys will understand.![]()
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Story still pending
Cheers
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