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oh.. story is nice...
but u r trying to explain every second of the character in slow motion...
the story is pulling with what's next kind of the thing but too much explanation is delaying that..
your girl is not your property!.. why do you stop your girl from sitting on my lap facing me and getting lost looking deep in to my eyes... FREE HER..Right Now..
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what happened in the interval ..??? and after movie and why this sudden attack..?? is heroine safe ..??
your girl is not your property!.. why do you stop your girl from sitting on my lap facing me and getting lost looking deep in to my eyes... FREE HER..Right Now..
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Temporary relief for srinu.
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Unknowingly and sadly srinu has turned a cuckold.
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Great updates KK.. thank you!
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Great updates KK.. thank you!
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Great updates KK.. thank you!
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firstly ... great writing bro.. bringing together the emotional connect, the detailed sequencing and building up both emotional connect as well as the physical desire.. wow you rock bro
one of the best erotic master piece..
at the end still keeping people and all your fans wondering what is happening....
its a big big big suspense and everyone wonders what really happened?
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Excited to know what he finds out in the cc recordings
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Awesome. Like Srinu mind betrayed him, Gangas body betrayed her.
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Wow.. what an update man.. so satisfying and yet waiting for more!!?
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Srinu has two minds now. one thinking he is deeply in love and other thinking he is now living with a whore. He often calls Ganga in his mind as whore and pretend to fool himself that he is still loving Ganga. Hope the CCTV bring the real character of Ganga and answer what happened in the interval, later in rest room and then in unstructured building hopefully. Very interesting.
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Early update is appreciated sir