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Vineeta ek jhooti shaadi me jakdi mahila/ A SEXY POOJA
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93 15.55%
Garima ek happily married housewife jo seductive mahol me behek gai/ A HOUSEWIFE SEDUCTION
18.39%
110 18.39%
Shabana ek zaheen housewife jiska shareer jitna akarshak tha bhagya utna hi kharab/ TRAPPED
34.11%
204 34.11%
Neha the bold stylish girl with full of fantasies/ FANTASY
10.87%
65 10.87%
Neetu ek sawli bengali girl jiski jald shaadi hone wali hai par ek khatre ke sath/KAMASUTRA LOVE
6.02%
36 6.02%
Aarti ek gareeb ghar ki behad sundar ladki jo aane wale khatre se hai anjaan/DEMONS LOVE
5.69%
34 5.69%
Shobha the bride and centre part of this story jiski suhaagraat uska sapna hai/FIRST NIGHT CONFESSION
9.36%
56 9.36%
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A wedding ceremony in village
(05-08-2024, 05:07 AM)HBK♡♡ Wrote: Bhai Vineeta ki jam kar chudai karao ab sabhi puja dono ki akhen khol kar honi chahiye puja ke baad bhi Vineeta ki jam kar chudai honi chahiye kyunki sirf 1 baar ki chudai se na to Vineeta ko maja ayega na hum sabko

Finale to definetly aankhe khol kar hi hoga par ha Vineeta ki storyline me sirf sex bhar hi nahi hai waha unke andar ke emotional baate kahi zafa gehri hai. Sex ke antim padaav tak pahuch jana wo bhi bina ek doosre ke prati hawas wasna ya love express kare aur itna kuch hone ke baad bhi ab tak unka charectar yani izzat barkaraar hai jo Garima me nahi rahi so there is a difference between Garima and Vineeta aur Vineeta ki kahani usi tarah aage bad rahi hai. Par ha definetly Vineeta ka wo final update apni taraf se best banane ki koshish karunga.

Par ha aise hi apne suggetions de isse shayad wo update banate samay mai in sujhavo ko dhyan rakhkar aur jada badiya update bana saku.
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Lakhan singh us safed kabootar ka kaafi door tak peecha karte karte ek mele tak le aya jaha kai dukane lagi thi jaha aurto ke saaj sringaar ki alag alag dukaane lagi thi. Par un dukaano ki khaas baat ye thi ki har dukaan alag alag samaan ki thi par us dukaan par kewal ek tarah ka samaan hi mil raha tha. Jaise kajal ki dukaan par sirf aur sirf kajaal hi tha, lipstick ki dukaan par tarah tarah ke rango ki lipstick hi thi, nail polish ki dukaan par kewal nail polish mil rahi thi inke alawa bindi,saree,sindoor, powder, inner wear(bra), inner wear(panty),chppal, eye shadow, darpan, sungadhit itr, tarah tarah ke hair oil, face pack, creams, gaalo ki laali,yaha tak ki sabun ki bhi dukaane the. Lakhan singh ko samajh nahi aa raha tha ki yaha is mele me unhe karna kya hai.

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Wo ye sab soch hi rahe the ki tabhi chhota sa ladka bhagta hua aya aur lakhan jee ko ek patra thama kar wapas bhaag gaya. Lakhan jee ne use peeche se awaaz di par wo pal me unki aankho se ojhil ho gaya. Lakhan jee ne wo patra khola jisme aghori ka ek aur sandesh likha tha.

" Lakhan jee agar ye patra apko mil chuka hai matlab aap us kabootar ka peecha karte karte is mele tak pahuch gae hai jaha kewal aurto ke saaj srigaar ki hi dukaane lagi hai wo bhi alag alag vastuo ki. Har dukaan me samaan bechne ke liye ek ek mahila khadi hai, aur har mahila ke paas ek naksha hai par un sab naksho me se kewal ek naksha sahi hai baki sab galat aur us sahi nakshe me us bhawan ka pata hai jaha aaj ki Venus puja ke aage ke charan pure hone hai. Vineeta jee bhi apko wahi milengi. Is mele se ek baar me kewal ek cheez hi le sakte hai aur jis bhi dukaan se aap koi vastu lenge us dukaan ki mahila apko ek naksha degi aur nakshe ke sahare apko aage ka safar pura karna hai. Ab agar apko sahi naksha mila to aap apni manzil tak pahuch jaenge aur agar aap galat dukaan par gae to aap ek galat jagah pahuch jaenge aur apko dubara wapas akar phir se is prakriya ko doharana hai jab tak ki apko sahi naksha na mil jae. Aur dhyan rahe is prakriya ko pura karne ke liye apke paas kewal suryast tak ka samay hai. Agar suryast tak aap us bhawan tak nahi pahuche to ye saari dukaane hat jaengi aur apki aaj ki puja bhang ho jaegi. Par ab ye soch rahe honge ki wo sahi naksha in sab dukaano me se kis dukaan ki mahila ke paas hai to sahi uttar usi patra me tha jo apko shuruaat me diya gaya tha aur kaha gaya tha ki ise behad dhyaan se padiye. Ab usi patra ko dhyaan kariye aur sochiye stree ke sringaar ki wo kaun si vastu hai jo Devi Aphrodite ko sabse adhik priya hai. Asha hai aap sahi chunaav kare aur saralta se apni manzil tak pahuch jae. Shubhkaamnae. "

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Nahi bhai philhaal ke liye to tirangi barfi panchmel phir kabhi dekhenge Thanks for created the id for this story. Koahish karunga waise is story me hi itne saare kirdaar hai ki har kirdaar par ek ek alag srory likhi ja sakti hai aur yahi mera plan hai sabko apni apni ek story dena. Bilkul bhai notes aur google search dono bahut kara and shukriya ise appreciate karne ke liye and definetly mera prayas hoga Aphrodite Venus puja ka ye aakhiri charan bhi logical erotic and Anushkafull ho. Becoz u love Anushka.
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(09-08-2024, 05:07 PM)update chota de rhe h shayad aap busy h aajkal samajh sakte hai. kaafi wait karwaya waise aapne chalo dekhte hai kb milan hota h lakhan vineeta ka. will wait for anushkaful update. ? whi to kah rahe hai vineeta ki story hi to wo devotee pure love wali story hai jo aage bahut potential rakhti hai.  Logan555 Wrote: [Image: dffKsZcl_o.jpg]



Nahi bhai philhaal ke liye to tirangi barfi panchmel phir kabhi dekhenge Thanks for created the id for this story. Koahish karunga waise is story me hi itne saare kirdaar hai ki har kirdaar par ek ek alag srory likhi ja sakti hai aur yahi mera plan hai sabko apni apni ek story dena. Bilkul bhai notes aur google search dono bahut kara and shukriya ise appreciate karne ke liye and definetly mera prayas hoga Aphrodite Venus puja ka ye aakhiri charan bhi logical erotic and Anushkafull ho. Becoz u love Anushka.
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Lakhan singh us pure mele ki har dukaan ka tehel tehel kar nirikshan karne lage. Unke dimaag me wo subah wala patra ka ek ek shabd chal raha tha ki wo kaun si vastu ho sakti hai jo Devi Aphrodite ko sabse adhik priya thi. Lakhan singh jis bhi dukaan ke saamne se guzarte waha maujood mahila unka abhivaadan karte hue apni dukaan me maujood samaan dikhate hue aise darsha rahi thi ki uski dukaan hi sahi dukaan hai aur uske paas hi sahi naksha hai.

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Lakhan singh bindi ki dukaan ke saamne se guzre to waha tarah tarah ki sundar bindiya thi. Ek pal ko unke dimaag me aya ki bindi lagane se aurat ki sundarta bahut bad jaati par kya bindi sahi vastu hai.

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Aage sindoor ki dukan thi unke man me khayaal aya ki sindoor se hi aurat ka suhaag hota hai bina sindoor ke aurat suhagan nahi kya sindoor ho sakta hai. Jab wo itr ki dukaan ke saamne se guzre to waha se aati tarah tarah ke itr ki sugandh ne barbas hi unka dhyan apni taraf kheech liya. Itr ka shauk to unko bhi bahut tha aur waha aise aise natural itr the jinki kabhi unhone mehek nahi soonghi thi. Wo waha maujood alag alag itr ko soongh kar uska anand lene lage. Wo bhool hi gae wo yaha ek mehetvapoorna karya se aae hai. Waha maujood mahila ne hi unhe unka vastavik karya yaad dilaya.

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Mahila: Aapne bilkul sahi chunaav kara hai, aap itni saari dukaano ke saamne se guzre par kahi apka dhyaan vichlit nahi hua par is dukaan se aati itr ki madak sugandh ne apko apni taraf aane ko majboor kar diya. Ab aap khud hi sochiye isse jada mehetvapoorna vastu aur kya ho sakti hai stree ke sringaar ki jo purush ko apni taraf akarshit hone ko majboor karde.

Lakhan singh ko bhi kahi na kahi uski baate sahi lag rahi thi. Unhone ek pal ko man me chintan kara aur phir us dukaan se ek behad sugandhit itr ki sheeshi leli. Sheeshi ke sath us mahila ne ek naksha bhi Lakhan singh ke haatho me tham diya. Lakhan singh ne wo patra khola jisme ek marga dishao ke anusaar darshaya gaya aur yaha se 20 km door wo bhawan dikhaya ja raha tha. Lakhan singh bina der kiye wo itr ki sheeshi aur wo naksha lekar us safed ghode jispar baithkar wo aae the par sawar hokar us nakshe me darshae marg se hote hue tez gati se manzil ki taraf bad chale takreeban ded ghante me wo us nakshe me darshai jagah par pahuch chuke the par yaha bhawan to door door door tak koi jhopdi bhi nazar nahi aa rahi thi.

Jise ye to saaf ho gaya tha ki Lakhan singh ne galat vastu chun li thi. Unhe us mahila par bahut gussa aa raha tha par yahi to pariksha thi kahi na kahi wo khud se bhi gussa the unhone apne chunaav me thoda aur dhyan dena chahiye tha. Unhone apne sir ke upar chamakte surya ko dekha uski sthiti se spasht tha ki abhi suryast hone me lagbhag 3 ghante ka samay shesh tha yani wo ab bhi wapas jakar sahi vastu chun sakte the. Wo bina ek bhi pal ki der kiye dubara ghode par sawaar ho gae aur tez gati se wapas us mele ki taraf daud pade. Is baar ghode ki gati pehle se thodi dheemi thi wo samajh gae ki ghoda bhi lagatar chalne ke karan pyasa hai. Raaste me unhe ek talaab dikha jaha unhone khud bhi paani piya aur ghode ko bhi paani pilaya par is sabme bhi unka kuch samay vyarth ho gaya.

Lakhan singh (ghode ko sehlate hue): Dost mere paas jada samay nahi hai mujhe tumhari sahayta ki zarurat hai please dost meri madad karo.

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Jaanwar bhi pyar ki bhasha achhe se samajhte hai Lakhan singh ke is pyar dulaar ko dekh us shwet ashva ne uttar me apna sir jhuka diya. Lakhan singh ne aage bad kar uske maathe ko choom liya aur dubara us par sawaar ho gae. Is baar to us ghode ki tezi dekhte hi ban rahi thi. Pani peene me samay lagne ke bawjood us ghode ne ded ghante ka safar ek ghante me poora karke Lakhan singh ko dubara us mele tak pahucha diya. Lakhan singh dubara mele me daakhil ho gae. Sabse pehle unhone wo itr ki dukaan dhoondni chahi par wo hairaan the kyuki wo dukaan ab waha se gayab thi. Shayad lakhan singh ko bhramit karne ka uska kaam pura hua isliye wo dukaan hata di gai.

Ab Lakhan singh baaki dukano ko dhyan se dekhne lage, wo jante the ki ab unke paas bus ek mauka aur hai kyuki agar is baar phir unhone galat vastu chuni to dubara itni door jakar wapas ana aur phir teesri baar koi vastu lekar suryast se pehle apni manzil tak pahuch jana sambhav nahi hoga aur shayad ye ghoda bhi itna safar nahi kar paega. Isliye is baar unhe jo bhi chunna hai bade dhyan se dimag laga aur subah ka patra yaad karke hi chunna hoga. Unhe samajh nahi aa raha tha wo kya chune sindoor, bindi, lipstick achanak wo saree ki dukan ke saamne pahuche aur saree ki dukaan ko nihaarne lage. Waha dukaan me tarah tarah akarshak saree thi.

Lakhan singh (man me) : Kya saree wo vastu ho sakti hai.

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(31-07-2024, 09:59 PM)hitenray09 Wrote: logan555 PMed you

Hiten i replied your PM.
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Superb! bahut hi mast and exciting update curiosity hai aage kya kya hoga
Vineeta ki jabardast chudai ka besbri se Intjar hai
Logan Bhai agar is story ka the end karna to Ishi Vineeta ki new story jarur start karna
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excellent update  clps

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(11-08-2024, 08:15 AM)HBK♡♡ Wrote: Superb! bahut hi mast and exciting update curiosity hai aage kya kya hoga
Vineeta ki jabardast chudai ka besbri se Intjar hai
Logan Bhai agar is story ka the end karna to Ishi Vineeta ki new story jarur start karna


Thanks HBK
Bus isi me to asli maza ki curiosity end tak bani rehni chahiye. Sabr kare sabra ka fal definetly zabardast hi hoga. Mera plan to har kirdaar ki alag story ka hai lets see kya hota hai philhaal to abhi isi story ko khatam karna hai.
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(11-08-2024, 10:32 AM)Somnaath Wrote:
excellent update  clps

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Lakhan singh waha maujood saariyo ko hath me lekar mehsoos karne lage. Waha kaachivuram, banarsi, jodhpuri, bengali tarah tarah ki saree. Man hi man wo vineeta jee ko in sariyo me imagine kar rahe the ki in sariyo me kitni sundar lagegi. Wo vineeta jee ke liye ye saree lena chah rahe the unka dil keh raha tha ki yahi sahi vastu hai Satee. Achanak unki nazar ek saree par padi jisme chhote chhote kaanch ke gol tukde lage the jisme lakhan jee ko apna pratibimb dikhai de raha tha. Aur us sheeshe par nazar padte hi unke zehen me subahb wale patra ki wo line click kari ki Devi Aphrodite ko sringaar ka bahut shauk tha aur unka kaafi samay khud ko aaine me nihaarte hue beetta tha. Aur Lakhan singh un saariyo ko wahi chhod kar us dukaan ko dhoondne lage jaha unhe wo vastu milne wali thi jo Devi Aphordite ko sabse adhik priya thi. Aur jald hi Lakhan singh us dukaan thi aur wo dukaan thi Darpan ki Dukaan.

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Lakhan singh ne waha se ek sundar sa darpan liya aur us darpan ke sath us mahila ne unhe ek aur naksha diya. Nakshe me 12 km door ki ek jagah dikhai gai thi.

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Lakhan singh ne us mahila ko dhanyawaad kara aur ek baar phir apne ghode par sawaar hokar us nakshe me batai jagah ke liye nikal pade. Suryaast hone me ab bhi lagbhag 1:30 ghante ka samay baaki tha aur Lakhan singh ka ghoda tez gati se apni manzil ki taraf dauda ja raha tha. Lakhan singh 10 km ka safar pura kar chuke the par iske aage unhe ruk jana pada kyuki aage ek mahila unka raasta roke khadi thi. Us jagah par aas paas ke vatavaran me unhe behad bheeni bheeni madak kamuk sugandh aa rahi jiske saamne us itr ki sugandh bhi fail thi. Lakhan singh ne us mahila se raasta rokne ka karan poocha.

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Lakhan: Devi jee aap mera marg kyu roke hue hai mujhe kahi pahuchna hai jald se jald.
Mahila: Mai janti hu aur meri yaha uapsthiti is baat ka pramaan hai ki aap sahi raste par hai par apka raasta mujhse hokar hi aage jata hai.
Lakhan: Matlab mai kuch samjha nahi.
Mahila: Apko ye bheeni bheeni sugandh mehsoos ho rahi hai.
Lakhan: Ha ho to rahi hai bahut hi achhi sugandh hai.
Mahila: Ye menhdi ke paudho ki sugandh hai. Apko subah jo patra mila tha usme bhi menhdi ka zikra tha yaad hai na apko.
Lakhan singh( yaad karte hue): Ha yaad aya us patra me bataya gaya tha ki Devi Aphrodite ke shareer se Menhdi ki badi hi madak sugandh aati thi jise soonghne wala deewana ho jata tha.

Mahila: Matlab apne wo patra bade dhyan se pada tha bilkuk sahi kaha aapne. Ab is menhdi ki bhi aaj ki puja me mehetvapoorna jagah hai, yaha se thodi hi door menhdi ke paudho ka baag hai. Apko waha jana hai aur waha se menhdi ki pattiya tod kar.unhe pees kar uska lep is patra me bharkar mere paas wapas lana hai. (Mahila ne ek jug numa patra Lakhan ki taraf bada diya jo lagbhag 1 liter ka hoga). Patto ko peesne ke liye silbatta aur pathar wahi rakha hai.

Lakhan singh ne socha tha wo suryast se pehle hi jald apni manzil tak pahuch jaega par is nae karya ne uski samasya ko bada diya use jald se jald ye karya karna hoga.

Mahila: Kis soch vichaar me doob gae aap menhdi to apko laani hi hogi kyuki apki laai gai is menhdi se hi apki patni ka sringaar hoga unke haath pairo me apki laai hui mernhdi hi lagai jaegi.

Jab Lakhan singh ko ye pata chala ki uski laai hui menhdi se hi Vineeta jee ka sringaar hoga ab to unhe har halat me Vineeta jee ke liye achhi se achhi menhdi laani hi thi wo bhi niyat samay ke andar. Lakhan singh ne turant wo jug us mahila ke hath se le liya aur us sugandh ki disha me chal pada. Kuch hi pal baad wo us menhdi ke baag me pahuch chuke the.

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Pura vatavaran menhdi ki sugandh se mehek raha tha. Wahi paas me rakha silbatta aur pathar bhi lakhan singh ko dikh gaya. Lakhan singh ne samay vyarth na karte hue menhdi ke paudho ki kuch badi badi daaliya tod li aur unke patte chhantkar unhe silbatte par rakhkar peesna shuru kar diya. Lakhan singh ko ghar par silbatte par chatni peesne ka experience tha isliye ye kaam unke liye naya nahi tha. Bus samasya thi samay jo bina ruke lagataar aage badta ja raha tha aur yaha Lakhan singh silbatte par menhdi pees rahe the.

Lakhan singh ke hath tez tez chal rahe the wo patte tod tod kar silbatte par lakar use pees pees kar uska lep us jug me bharte ja rahe the.Aadhe ghanta ho chuka tha par abhi bhi wo jug pura nahi bhara tha par phir bhi wo thoda relax the kyuki yaha se kewal 2 km ka safar shesh tha jo ghode par baithkar wo aram se 10 min me pura kar lenge aur suryast se pehle apni manzil tak pahuch jaenge. 15 min aur peesna bahane ke baad Lakhan singh ne wo pura jug menhdi ke lep se bhar diya. Kaam samapt kar wo tezi se wo jug lekar us jagah par wapas laute jaha wo mahila khadi unka intezaaar kar rahi thi par ab wo Lakhan singh ke ghode par baithi thi. Lakhan singh wo jug numa paatra lakar us mahila ke hath me de diya.

Mahila: Waah aap le aae par kaafi jada samay lag gaya aapko. Khair mai usi bhawan par jaa rahi aap bhi suryast se pehle waha pahuch jaiyega mai apko wahi milungi. Aur ha apka ghoda le ja rahi ab 2 km ka safar paidal thodi na jaungi. Sheeghrata kariye suryast hone me ab sirf adha ghanta hi shesh hai.

Itna kehkar wo mahila ghoda lekar chali gai aur Lakhan singh bechara sa muh lekar wahi khade reh gae.Ab bechare Lakhan singh kya keh aur kar sakte the. Wo to is umeed me the ki ghode par baithkar jald hi ye safar pura kar lenge par ghoda to wo mahila le gai aur ab bache hue 2 km unhe paidal hi pure karne the. Lakhan singh ne nakshe ko gaur se dekha aur tez gati se paidal hi apni manzil ki disha me daud pade.

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Surya dheeme dheeme ast hone ki taraf badta ja raha tha aur Lakhan singh apni puri takat se apni manzil ki taraf daude ja rahe the. Surya aur Lakhan singh me ek alag hi race si chal rahi thi dekhna tha ye race kaun jeetta hai.
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Nice update to finally Lakhan singh ko shi rasta mil hi gaya
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(13-08-2024, 01:48 PM)Kuchnahi24 Wrote: Nice update to finally Lakhan singh ko shi rasta mil hi gaya


??? Hmmm finally Lakhan singh ko sahi rasta mil hi gaya. ?
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(13-08-2024, 05:59 PM)Logan555 Wrote: ??? Hmmm finally Lakhan singh ko sahi rasta mil hi gaya. ?

Aieeeee ? koi twist h kya ismai ? Abhi Vineeta ke pas pahuchane mai der hai kya ?
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Please jab story ko read kare to upar jaha thread rating ke stars bane hai waha jada se jada stars dekar is story ki rating ko improve kare jab story ko chhoda tha tab 5 star the ab kewal 2 star hi dikh rahe aur mujhe nahi lagta ki meri story 2 star deserve karti hai jo log comment nahi karte wo atleast itna to kar hi sakte hi ki thread rating me five stars de.
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(13-08-2024, 08:50 PM)Kuchnahi24 Wrote: Aieeeee ? koi twist h kya ismai ? Abhi Vineeta ke pas pahuchane mai der hai kya ?


Nahi philhaal to abhi koi twist nahi hai but ha story me abhi bhi kaafi twists hai.
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Lakhan singh apni puri jaan lagakar daud rahe the aur sath hi surya ke ast hone ki taraf bhi apni nazre jamae hue the. Kuch hi minute baad Lakhan singh ko saamne thodi door par ek sundar bhawan nazar aane laga tha jo rang birangi roshni se jagmaga raha tha aur jiske dwaar par Devi Aphrodite ki ek pratima bhi khadi thi. Yani yahi wo jagah tha jaha is Grah shanti puja ka Grand finale yani aakhiri charan pura hona tha.

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Lakhan singh ne apni gati aur tez kardi aur suryast hone se pehle wo us bhawan ke gate par pahuch bhi gae par gate par khade dwaarpaal ne unhe andar ghusne se rok diya. Aur hairaani ki baat ye thi ki wo dwaarpaal bhi ek mahila thi. Aaj ki grahpuja me unhe subah se kewal aur kewal mahilae hi mili thi.

Dwaarpaal: Theheriye aap Devi Aphrodite ke is bhawan me aise andar pravesh nahi kar sakte.
Lakhan singh (haafte hue): Phir hmmmmfff hmm kya hmmmfff karna hoga hmmmff andar jaane ke liye.
Dwaarpaal:Arpan aur Samarpan
Lagan: Arpan hmmmff Samarpan matlab.
Dwaarpaal: Pushp Arpan is bhawan ke charo taraf pushp vaatika hai jaha tarah tarah ke pushp lage hai apko waha se Devi Aphrodite ke priya pushp ko lakar Devi Aphrodite ke charno me arpan karna hai aur pushp ka chunaav dhyan se karna agar aapne galat pushp chuna to is bhawan ke dwaar apke liye band ho jaenge. Aur sheeghrata kijiye Suryaast hone me kuch hi pal shesh hai.

Itna sunte hi Lakhan singh us bhawan ke bagal me bani pushp vaatika me ghus gae. Waha tarah tarah ke pushp lage Bela, Champa, Chameli, Mogra,Gulaab, Rajnigandhq, Genda, Gudhal aur bhi kai. Par is baar Lakhan singh ke man me koi duvidha nahi thi unhe pata tha unhe kaun sa phool chunna hai, wo seedha Gulaab ke paudhe ke paas gae aur waha se ek sundar Gulaab ka phool le liya aur tezi se Devi Aphrodite ki pratima ke paas pahuch gae. Unhone wo gulaab ka pushp us dwaarpaal mahila ko dikhaya aur usne bhi muskurate hue sehmati me apna sir hila diya.

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Dwaarpaal: Ab apko ye pushp Devi Aphrodite ke charno me arpit karte hue khud ko unhe Samarpit karna hoga. Apko apna poorna Samarpan karna hoga ki aage aaj ki saadhna me jo bhi karya honge aap bina peeche hate unhe pura karenge. Aisa karne ke baad hi apko andar pravesh milega. Par dhyan rahe ek baar Samarpan karne ke baad aap peeche nahi hat sakte.

Lakhan singh ke liye peeche hatne ka to sawaal hi nahi uthta tha. Aur ab tak intni sari vidhiya poori karne ke baad is aakhiri padaav par peeche hatne ka to sawaal hi paida nahi hota tha. Isliye unhone bina der kiye wo Gulaab ka pushp Devi Aphrodite ke charno me arpit kara. Aur khud ke Samarpan ki bhi shapath li.

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Lakhan singh: Mai Lakhan singh putra shree Darshan singh aaj ki saadhna ke liye khud ko poori tarah se Devi Aphrodite ko Samarpit karta hu, aage is saadhna me jo bhi karya hoga mai bina peeche hate unhe pura karunga. He devi kripya mujhe apne bhawan me pravesh karne ki anumati de.

Isi ke sath us dwaarpaal mahila ne us bhawan ke darwaaze khol diye aur Lakhan singh use bhi dhanyawaad karke bhawan ke andar pravesh kar gae. Andar wahi mahila jise unhone menhdi wala paatra diya tha unka intezaaar kar rahi thi

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Mahila: Aakhir aap samay se yaha aa hi gae. Maanna padega is umar me bhi apki furti aur tezi kisi naujawan yuvak ko bhi peeche chhod de. Suna hai apne dangal me apne se aadhi umar ke khud se tagde pehelwaan ko hara diya tha. Aur sabhi graho ki puja ke sabhi charno ko badi kushaltapoorvak paar kar liya. Sach me iske liye aap badhai ke patra hai.
Lakhan: Waise in sabme mai akela nahi tha insabme Vineeta jee ka bhi barabar ka yogdaan ya yu kahu shayad unka yogdaan mujhse bhi jada tha. Mai to apne pariwaar ke liye ye sab kar raha tha par unhone jis tarah bina kisi swarth ke ye sab kara uski koi tulna nahi ki ja sakti.

Mahila: Bilkul sahi kaha aapne unki jitni prashansha ki jae kum hai. Aur ye sab aap dono ke sammilit prayaso ka hi parinaam hai jo aap is sadhna ke aakhiri padaav tak pahuch gae hai. Bus apki Grah shanti ki puja sampann hone kewal aaj ki raat shesh hai bus jis tarah ab tak aap dono ka sahyog karke puja ke har charan ko pura kara hai aaj raat ke bache hue charan aur pure kar le.
Lakhan: Bilkul humara bhi yahi prayaas rahega. Waise Vineeta jee kaha hai kya wo bhi isi bhawan me hai.
Hmm wo bhi yahi hai par aap unse abhi nahi mil sakte kyuki wo bhi is waqt apni ek alag tarah ki saadhna me leen hai aur ab apki aur unki mulakaat raat me hi ho paengi. Puja ke aage ke charan apke aur unke sath raat 9 baje tak hi prarambh honge tab tak aap 3-4 ghante vishram kar le taaki raat ki puja ke liye aapko kisi tarah ki thakawat na rahe, aaiye mai apko apka vishram kaksh dikha deti hu.

Wo mahila Lakhan singh ko ek kamre tak le aai.
Mahila: Ab aap yaha 3-4 ghante araam kariye, meri aapki mulakat ab raat 9 baje puja ke agle charan ke samay hi hogi theek hai.

Itna keh kar wo mahila waha se chali gai. Kamre me ek aramdayak bistar tha bistar ke kinaare taaze falo ki tokri rakhi thi. Aur khidkiyo se aati hawa alag hi anand ki anubhuti kara rahi thi. Lakhan singh subah se bhooke bhi the unhone pehle to bistar ke sirahne rakhe fal khae aur phir bistar par let gae. Is puja ke prarambh se ab tak lakah singh ko kabhi zameen, kabhi jungle kabhi patto par sona pada tha ab jake unhe ek aramdayak bistar naseeb hua tha Isliye bistar par lette hue safar se thake hone ke karan unhe neend aa gae. Puja ke shuruaati charan to Lakhan singh ne thodi bahut dikkat ke bawjood badi saralta se pure kar liye the ab dekhna ye tha ki aage aane wale charano me kya nai chunauti unki pratiksha kar rahi thi.

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Jabardast! ekdom kamaal ka update! bahut khub, bahut acha writing! Vineeta ki story best hai! lagta hai kuch bada hone wala hai Vineeta ki life me!
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Absolutely amazing update 9pm ka Intezar hai Logan555 Bhai Vineeta ki dhamakedar chudai honi chahiye puri raat
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