21-06-2019, 08:45 PM
Kahani me twist aaya.. Hmm ab to aur interest badhta jaa raha hae ek to raghu aur ram me se kamya ko kon paega pehele aur dushra ye anjan ladki hae kon.. Hamesha ki tarha behtarin update Ajay bhai..!
Adultery Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust)
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21-06-2019, 08:45 PM
Kahani me twist aaya.. Hmm ab to aur interest badhta jaa raha hae ek to raghu aur ram me se kamya ko kon paega pehele aur dushra ye anjan ladki hae kon.. Hamesha ki tarha behtarin update Ajay bhai..!
21-06-2019, 11:12 PM
Nice bro
22-06-2019, 01:20 AM
great update ajay ji. nice suspense bhi hai...
22-06-2019, 02:03 AM
great twist
22-06-2019, 03:14 AM
Mind blowing Writing bhai...
Just too good... Waiting for the next one..
22-06-2019, 03:18 AM
Nice update
22-06-2019, 08:45 AM
(21-06-2019, 04:27 PM)Dipak31 Wrote: Intresting turn very nice bro thanks yaara......aagey bhi saath bane rahiyega...... Reps added++1 (21-06-2019, 06:05 PM)naani Wrote: Kya update diya Ajay bhai Apne. Kya twist diya Apne anth Mai. Kya ye ladki Kavya ka dosth ya Kajal ya koi aur bahut jaldi aab action bhi shuru honee wala hain bhai......saath bane rahiyega...... Reps added++1 (21-06-2019, 07:04 PM)Anmolkjain Wrote: Excellent update yaara. Suspence de diya h aapne ab to kl k update m hi clear hoga ki ye kon h...or naya shikaar v h...raghu or jeetu ki to nikl padi... naya shikar to raghu aur jeetu ko milney wala hain wo to waqt hi batayega..........saath bane rahiyega..... Reps added++1
22-06-2019, 11:54 AM
It is really a great story. Your writing skills and styles are highly appreciated. Keep going brother.
22-06-2019, 02:49 PM
Waiting for next update bhai..!
22-06-2019, 03:14 PM
With every update story getting hot
22-06-2019, 03:43 PM
Nice update
waiting for next
22-06-2019, 03:45 PM
Bhai mer personal opinion hai ki Story ki ek he herione rehni cahiye .. ha aap aur caracters bhi add kr skte hai par main focus kavya par he rehni cahiye....
Thanks
22-06-2019, 05:32 PM
Awesome update dhiya aapne Ajay bhai
22-06-2019, 06:15 PM
Kha ho yaara
22-06-2019, 08:29 PM
I waiting for next bhai
22-06-2019, 08:36 PM
Bhai yeh story puri ho jaye Phir aap. akele hum akele tum story post karo q ki woh adhuri story dhi XP pe aur behtareen mohabbat dikhayi thi aapne us story me. to ho sake to...
22-06-2019, 10:15 PM
shandar
23-06-2019, 08:01 AM
(21-06-2019, 08:45 PM)Jaan Wrote: Kahani me twist aaya.. Hmm ab to aur interest badhta jaa raha hae ek to raghu aur ram me se kamya ko kon paega pehele aur dushra ye anjan ladki hae kon.. Hamesha ki tarha behtarin update Ajay bhai..! thanks yaara..........sare raaz ek ek kar khultey chale jayengey.......saath bane ragiyega............. Reps added++1 (21-06-2019, 11:12 PM)sumit143 Wrote: Nice bro thanks yaara............
23-06-2019, 08:09 AM
(22-06-2019, 01:20 AM)itonya Wrote: great update ajay ji. nice suspense bhi hai... thanks yaara.......agle update mein suspence clear ho jayega....... (22-06-2019, 02:03 AM)roni25 Wrote: great twist thanks yaara......... (22-06-2019, 03:14 AM)KareenaKapoorLover Wrote: Mind blowing Writing bhai... thanks yaara for appirication..............saatth bane rahiyega......
23-06-2019, 08:12 AM
(22-06-2019, 03:18 AM)Ajgupta Wrote: Nice update thanks yaara.......saath bane rahiyega..... (22-06-2019, 11:54 AM)Emilio Barzini Wrote: It is really a great story. Your writing skills and styles are highly appreciated. Keep going brother.thanks for appiriciation..........saath bane rahiyega......... |
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