[Ankit Roy]

Good starting bro...keep it up.

[deepangshu]

Eagerly waiting for the new update bro

[Sexthinker]

Eagerly waiting for the new update bro

Jb itna intezar krlia hai toh Bs thoda aur intezar krlo fir update ajyega

[Sexthinker]

Good starting bro...keep it up.

Thank you

[Sexthinker]

Update 4



Kuch din baad mere exam start hogye fir mein busy hogya padhai mei mummy ke saht time spent nhi kr para tha... mein jldi se exam khtm hone ka intezar krne lga....

Fir 3 week ke andhr exam khtm hogye...finally ab mein free hogya... lekin mene ek chiz notice kia kl raat ko mummy dher se kisi se chat kr rahi thi...pr lagta hai mummy ne kisko dost bna lia hai bs itna soch rha tha tbhi  mummy  room se bhr ayi aur boli

Mummy – beta mein bhr jari hun aunty ke saht ati hu  thodi dher mei
Me – ohk mummy

Pr is baar mummy phone chord kr nhi gyi jarur kuch toh  baat hai  mereko yaad aya id mene bnyi thi id ka passowrd muhje yaad hoga hi...fir mene turant mummy ki id login ki apne phone mei

Mene dehka pehle se jyda aur request aye hue hai and dm bhi pr mummy ne kisi ki request accept nhi kri aur na hi dm khola sirf ek ka khola woh bhi kisi vijay nm ke uncle ka dher thk baat hui hai ab woh apko btne wla hun

Usse pehle mein apko bta dun mene mummy ka asli nm nhi rhka tha profile pe pr is uncle ne mummy ko  college friend ke nam se bulaya tha ...

Uncle – hello miru
Mummy –  hey aap kon
Uncle – pechana nhi
Mummy – ji nhi
Uncle – itni jldi muhje bhul gyi kya?
Mummy – ji mein apse mili nhi hun kese pechanungi  aapko
Uncle – kesi baat kr rahi ho mein tumko college time se jnta hun....  shyd abhi bhi jante hoyenge muhje
Mummy – nhi muhje kuch yaad nhi hai plz btiye na kon hai aap?
Uncle – tumahre  class  mein hi pdhta tha
Mummy – ji nhi yd
Uncle – ohk mei vikramaditya hun
Mummy – ohhhhhh jiski complaint principal ke pass ati rheti thi?
Uncle – ji haan whi hun
Mummy – tumne muhje pechan liya? Itne saal baad bhi
Uncle – haan kese nhi pechanta   tumko tumahara hi deewnapan hai muhje
Mummmy - kya mtlb
Uncle – ji kuch nhi
Mummy –  kya krte ho tum
Uncle  -  engineering ki job krta hun aur tum
Mummy – bahut ache mei toh event planner hun
Uncle  – nice job
Mummy – hmmm aur kese  ho
Uncle – acha hun tum btao
Mummy – mai bhi achi hoon
Uncle –  aap married ho?
Mummy – kyu tumko shaadi krni hai?
Uncle – haan tumse
Mummy – kya mtlb
Uncle – mei bs aise hi puch rha tha...
Mummy – hmmm  hn ek beta hai mera aur tumhari hogyi shaadi
Uncle – haan mere do bche hai ek beta aur beti
Mummy – sahi hai  kitne bde hai
Uncle – college jne lge hai itne bde hai
Mummy – mera beta bhi itna bda hogya
Uncle – fir toh achi baat hai
Mummy – haan  chalo bahut baat hogyi ab sojao
Uncle – itni bhi kya jldi hai aur baat krte hai na
Mummy – ji nhi muhje neend ari hai good night
Fir mummy ne phone rhkdia side mein aur so gyi


Raat mein itni baat hogyi mummy me muhje btya bhi nhi... koi baat nhi  jb ghr ayegi tb puchlunga mei playstation on krke game khelne lga....fir thodi dher baad mummy agyi ghar pe  fir room mein chlegyi khpade change krne mummy ne hlki heavy  saree pehni thi isliye ab light sarre pehnegi kuch dher baad room se aur  ayi mere pass akr baith gyi..

Mummy –  kya kr rha hai
Me – kuch ni mummy bs soch rha tha....
Mummy – kya soch rha hai...
Me  -  yehi ki apne abtk online  kisko dost bnya  ki nahi
Mummy – (jhutt bolte hue)  nhi beta abhi tk toh koi nhi mila   bs kuch post dehk leti hun  aur thodi dher online ati hun bs
Me – kyu mummy kisi se baat kyu nhi krte kitne log ke dm  aur message aye hue hoyenge...
Mummy – hn beta kitne message ate rhete hai
Me – fir apne baat kyu nhi kia
Mummy – dr lgta hai koi acha sa nhi mila muhje isliye sb gnde hai
Me – arre dro nhi mummy yhn online wale  ache hote hai  unke sht aap koi bhi baat share kr shkti ho
Mummy -  nhi beta nhi krna kuch share mein khush hun tere se sht time spent krke
Me – acha mummy lekin mereko lgta nhi hai aisa
Mummy – aisa kyu beta
Me – kyuki  kuch aisi baat hogi jo aap muhjse share nhi kr pati ho
Mummy – nhi beta aisi koi baat nhi hai
Me – fir mummy  krlo na kisi se baat apko bhi acha lgega muhje bhi lgega...
Mummy – tuhje kyu lgega?
Me – kyuki jitni andhr se aap suhk rhe paogi utni jyda khush rhe paogi isliye
Mummy – pr mein toh khush hun beta tuhje hr br aisa kyu lgta hai mein duhki hun
Me – kyuki muhje pta hai papa apko time nhi dete hai isiliye papa nhi toh koi aur sahi apko time de
Mummy – apni jubaan pe lagam de
Mummy ka gussa jyda hogya tha is baat se mummy ko aur gussa nhi dilana chta tha isliye mein chup rha mummy whn  se uht kr chli gussa hote hue apne room me...

Fir mein bhr chla gya thodi dher ke liye  ab tk mummy ka phone ajata hai is br nhi aya... shyd abhi bhi gussa hai...fir mene socha kyu na unke liye ice cream lekr jau thki mummy gussa gayab hojye... mai shop mai gaya mummy ki favourite ice cream liya aur fir mein ghr agya  mene mummy ko awaz lgyi mummy ne koi response nhi dia mene dehka mummy kisi se phone pr kaam ki baat kr rhi hai kbhi kbhi mummy ko phone ate hai kaam ke liye...fir mene ice cream fridge mein rhkdia....fir mai game khelne lga  

1 ghnte baad mummy room se bhr ayi   pr mummy ne muhje nhi dehka lgta hai abhi bhi naraz hai mummy ko manana pdega...
Mummy kitchen mein gayi... kitchen mein sbzi katne lagi mai bhi kitchen mein aagya aur bola
Me – lao mummy mai kaat dun
Mummy kuch nhi boli ansuna kr dia meri baat ko
Mene mummy ka pakadte hi mummy ne muhje
Mummy – haaht chord mera...
Me – nhi
Mummy – suna nhi mene kya bola
Me – nhi
Thbi mene mummy ko apne pass khich lia aur unki aanko ko dehkne lga mummy bhi meri aanhke dehkne lagi mai unki pith ko sehla rha tha... mummy ko thoda acha lgne lga  aisa lgra tha mummy ka gussa dheere  dheere km hora hai
Pr mein bhul gya mummy ke haaht mein chaku hai aur mummy ne pehle mere phet ki aur   chaku ki nok rhkdia tha jese hi mei mummy ke pass ane ki kosis kia  muhje niche kuch chupne lga jese hi mene niche dehka chaku hai mai drte hue thoda dhur hogya mummy se.... mummy mera ye reaction dehk kr  jor se hasne lgi... aur boli

Mummy – bada mja agya  
Mai mummy ko aisa dehk khush hogya kyuki mummy mngyi...fir unko bola apke liye kuch laya hun
Mummy – kya laya hai?
Me – anhke bnd kro suprise hai...
Mummy – ohk

Mummy ne aanke bnd krlia mene unko bola ab kholto apni anhke... jese mummy ne ice cream dehka aur khush hogyi.... aur boli

Mummy – beta ko pta tha mummy itni asani se nhi mnegi isliye unki favourite  ice cream laya hai
Me – haan mummy
Chl aja khate hai ice cream nhi toh pighl jyegi....fir hum dono ice cream khane lge...

Fir mai relaxed hogya kyuki mummy muhjse naraz nhi hai

Fir papa ka phone aya

Papa – hello beta  
Me – hello papa kese ho
Papa – thik hun beta teri mummy kya kr rhi hai
Me – kitchen mai hai
Papa – acha unko phone dena  
Me – kyu kya hua
Papa – kuch baat krni hai teri mummy se
Me – ohk deta hun
Me- mummy papa ka phone aya hai..
Mummy – acha la de phone
Mummy – hello mister
Papa – hello janeman
Mummy – kon janeman apko meri yaad ati nhi hai na apke pass time hota nahi hai mere liye
Papa – arrey meri janeman  tuhje pata hai na company ke kaam ke liye krna parta hai  isliye humare pass pesa hai
Mummy – woh sb muhje nhi pata mai tumko kitna miss krti hun apke bina muhje acha nhi lgta jaldi ghr aaona
Papa – hn janenan kosis krta hun
Mummy – kosis nhi muhje date btao kb aaoge
Papa – arre jaan jldi aaunga chinta mt kr... mai tuhje kitne br call kia pick kia nhi tune..
Mummy – arrey haan mera phone silent pe hai isliye  pata nahi chala
Papa – silent pe kyu?
Mummy - kaam ke liye phone aye the na mene socha thodi ke liye silent krti hun phone thaki koi disturb na kre muhje
Papa – acha theek hai... i love you janeman
Mummy  muhje dehk kr boli tu thoda dhur jaa fir mai dhur chla gya
Mummy – (papa ko ) i love you  
Papa – bye take care
Mummy – u too

Mummy muhje awaz lgti hui phone deti hai...mene mummy se pucha kya baat hui
Mummy – kuch nhi beta papa  ka abhi ghr ana mushkil hai
Me – acha koi baat nhi mein hun na apke sht
Mummy – hn mera pyara beta
Khana bn kr tyr  hogya tha fir humne khana khaya fir mai bed pe let kr ....sochne lga mummy aaj raat ko fir se uncle se baat kregi... fir mein room se bhr dehka mummy ke room ki light bnd hai...fir mein mummy ke room ke pass pahuch  keyhole se dehkne lga mummy phone pe lgyi hui thi.... fir mai room akr sogya.....

[deepangshu]

Good going, keep it up

[Nikita nim]

Bohot acha script hai. Story bohot acha badh rahe hain .

[Waseem990]

?Shandar mazedaar?

[Ankit Roy]

Story bohot sahi chal raha hai Bhaisaab

[StoryReader1]

Please continue

[Sexthinker]

Update 5


Subha hogyi ab mai uth gya tha fir fresh hone ke baad naha kr room se bahar aya   pr mummy kitchen mai nhi thi mummy ke room mai gya dehka whn pr bhi nhi thi fir chatt pr gya wahan pe apne apne khapde suhka rhi thi   kya gajab  lgri thi mummy aaj toh unka nanga pet dehkne ko mila muhje wah kya hi chamak rha tha  mere se raha nhi jara tha mai lekin usse pehle mai charo trf dehkne lga koi chatt pr toh nhi hai vese koi dihka nhi muhje fir mai Mummy ke pass pahuncha aur unki chikni kamar pkd li mene mummy thoda hilsi kahi  aur piche mudkr muhje dehk kr boli

Mummy – kya  kr rha hai beta tu chod muhje koi dehklega toh kya bolenge
Fir mene mummy ko ghumna kr apni trf khicha  aur ankho mein dehk bola
Me – koi ni hai dehkega kese mummy.
5 min tk dono ek dusre ki ankho ko dehkte rhe...Fir aunty  ki awaz ayi  
Aunty ka rehka hai mummy ki dost hai lekin utni khas nhi hai pr woh mummy ko apne sht market jrur lekr jti hai ..

Rehka – meeru
Fir hum dono alag hogye pr sharma bahut rhe the mummy aur mai pr mein sidha balcony ki trf kahi aur dehkne lga
Mummy –  hn rehka bolo  
Rehka – tu aaj free hai kya
Mummy – haan
Rehka – shamko bazar chlegi  
Mummy – haan
Rehka – sahi hai milte hai shamko 5 bhje
Mummy – thik hai
Fir aunty chale gyi...fir mummy ne piche halka sa thappad mara aur boli

Mummy – bola tha na  chord muhje chora kyu nhi
Me – kya karta mummy mai aap ho hi itni khubsurat ki bs apko  dehkta rhau
Mummy – htt besharam aise bolte hai mummy se sharm nhi ati tuhje
Me – isme glt kya bola hai aaj aap sch mei achi lgri thi isliye rha nhi gya mere se
Mummy – htt chup chap niche jaa mai ari hun 5 min mai
Me – ohk mummy
Fir mai niche agya   kitchen mein dehkne laga kuch hai khane ko kyuki thodi si bhook lgri thi pr khne ko kuch nhi mila fir mai thodi dher mobile on krke instagram use krne lga mummy agyi niche aur kitchen mein khana bnane lgi  thodi dher baad awaj lgyi main dining table pe akr baith gya  khane lga khane ke baad muhje dost ka phone agya mai mummy ko bta kr bhr chla gya....

Shamko 4 bhje ghr agya mummy sori thi is wqt mene mummy ko call kia mummy ne gate kholdia fir andhr agya aur mummy ko bola
Me – arre mummy aap sori thi kya?
Mummy – haan beta kyu kya hua?
Me – aunty ke sht apko bazar nhi jana hai kya?
Mummy – arre haan beta mai toh bhul gyi thi acha hua tune yd dila dia..
Me – koi ni mummy aap tayar ho  jao  aram se..
Mummy – thik hai beta
Maine aisa isliye kia thki mai aram se chat pdh shkun kl raat dono ke bich kya baat hui hai...
Thodi dher baad doorbell baji mene gate khola dehka rehka aunty thi mene unko welcome kia aur woh andhr agyi aur muhjse puchi

Rehka aunty – teri mummy kahan hai?
Me- andhr hai tyr hori hai
Aunty – theek tu yhi rhe mai jti hun
Fir 10 min baad mummy aunty agye mere smne aur boli hum bhr jare hai dhyn rhkna ghr ka mene thik hai boldia dono ke jate hi mene gate bnd krdia... fir apne room agya bed pe let gya fir mummy ki id login kri aur unki chats pdhne lga....

Uncle – hello
Mummy – hey
Uncle – kl aap itni jldi kyu chle gye the?
Mummy – mereko neend ari thi isliye
Uncle – acha, pr kitna maja ara tha tumse baat krke
Mummy – koi ni ab on agyi hun ab baat krlo kya baat krni hai
Uncle – haan mai ye keh rha tha tum abhi utni khubsurat ho jitni pehle thi khud kfi acha maintain kia hai

Mummy – ji shukriya, pr maintain khn kia hai mene kfi workload hai family ko time dena prta hai muhje extra time  nhi mil pata hai
Uncle – welcome meeru, but fir bhi kfi acha maintain kia hai apne... itna toh meri wife ne nahi kia hai jitne apne krke rhka hai

Mummy – thank you...vese ye id mere bete ne bnyi hai usi ne profile lgyi hai...

Uncle – wow isliye kfi  achi photo ayi kyuki apke bete ne jo  click kri hai apki photo
Mummy – pr tumko mai kese mili yhn facebook pe tum muhje pechane kese?
Uncle -  mere pass kuch photos the sabke  bs kbhi kbhi whi dehkleta tha tha purane din yd krta tha isliye
Mummy – acha shi hai
Uncle – haan tum nhi krti yd kisiki?
Mummy – time nhi mil pata tha isliye mai sbko bhul gyi
Uncle – koi na, hum dono wpis milgye hai utna kfi hai
Mummy – hmmm
Uncle – aur apke pati kese hai?
Mummy – unka pucho mt unke pass mere liye time hota hi nhi hai humesha kaam kaam krte rhete hai
Uncle – aur beta kesa hai tumhara?
Mummy – acha hai pr bahut sharati hota jara hai aaj kl mere sht woh kuch jyda sharati krne lga hai
Uncle – hehehe koi na tumhara saht  masti nhi krega toh kiske sht krega
Mummy – hmmm ye bhi shi hai pr bahut pyar krti usse
Uncle – chlo acha hai
Mummy – hmm
Uncle – vese mai apse kuch kehna chta hun agr aap gussa na kre toh ?

Mummy – haan bolo kya bolna chte ho?
Uncle – mai ye kehna chta hun hum log mil gye hai bahut saal baad kyu na  aap muhjse milogi
Mummy – nhi hum online thik hai muhje nhi milna kisi se
Uncle – pr kyu?
Mummy – aise hi
Uncle - tum aisa toh nhi soch rhi ho hum log shadi shuda hai..ab milne ka ka koi chance  nhi hai?
Mummy – haan
Uncle -  pr milne mai glt kya hai...vese bhi bahut saal baad mile hai please milte hai mana mt kro
Mummy – dehkti hun baad mai btati hun...good night
Uncle  - arre itni jldi aur baat krte hai
Mummy – kya jldi hai isme time dehko kitna hogya....
Uncle – arre toh kya hua chahe toh hum puri raat kr  shkte hai
Mummy – ji nhi good night...
Mummy ne net off kardia aur phone drawer mei rahk kr sogyi
Fir mai playstation mai game khelne...tbodi dher baad
Door bell bhaji... mene gate khola mummy  samne thi aur aunty bhi..dono andhr agye aur sofa pe baith gaye..aur main dono ke liye pani lekr agya glass mai...aur dono ne pani piya...fir thodi dher  baat karke fir aunty apne ghr chale gyi...

Main room mai gaya mummy apne room me gayi.....pr mereko yd aya mera phone table pe rahka hai  drawing room mai....phone lene ke baad mai mummy ke room ke bhar khada raha mummy ko dehk raha tha....mummy bed pe baithi hui thi kuch soch rahi thi....me smahj gaya tha shayad mummy uncle se kese milegi ye soch rahi thi....
Mai drawing room ke sofe pe baith gaya mummy ka wait krna laga kb mummy muhjse uncle ke bhare mai baat kregi....5 min baad mummy ayi aur mere pass baith gayi....pr kuch bolne chati hai pr bol nahi pari...

Me – kya hua mummy
Mummy – (thoda darte hue) kuch nhi beta
Me – aap itni tension mai kyu ho bolo kya baat hai mummy
Mummy – mai tuhje kuch baat batana chti hun lekins usse pehle tu  muhje promise kar meri  baat sune ne ke  baad tuhje gussa  toh nhi ayega na
Me – nahi mummy bolo kya batana chti ho
Mummy – beta main........(sharma gayi)
Me – mummy sharmao mat batao na mummy please
Mummy – beta maine ek uncle se friendship karli hai(ye bolte hi mummy ne sharma the hue apni gardan niche krli )
Me – wow mummy ye toh apne acha kia kisi ko friend bana lia hai...
Mummy shocked hogyi  ye sb sun kar mummy ko laga tha mera recation kuch aur hoga shayad.....
Mummy – tuhje gussa nahi aya  kya
Me – nhi mummy muhje kyu gussa ayega  mereko acha laga ye sun kr atleast apko koi time toh dega kam se kam papa toh apko time dete nhi koi aur hi sahi( blink krte hue)
Mummy –  htt besharam apni mummy ko aankh mrarta hai
Me – lekin mummy  pr ye sb hua kb?
Mummy – hogya kuch do din pehle
Me – sahi hai mummy enjoy with your new friend.... pr apne kisko dost banaya hai
Mummy – ye sab mai tuhje baad mai btaungi pr ab jo mai bolna chti hun tu woh sun
Me – haan bolo
Mummy – woh muhje  date krne ke liye coffee bar pe invite kr rhe hai...
Me- kya baat kr rhi ho mummy
Mummy  kuch boli nhi bs sharma rahi thi....mei mummy ko chedne laga

Me – fir apne kya bola unko
Mummy - mene kuch nhi bola hai usko bs....pr is baat ka  daar hai ki tere papa ko pta chala toh mera kya hoga

ME – isme darne wali kya baat  hai...vese bhi papa ko kon  batayega...mai toh apke saht hun...papa abhi nahi ane wale hai...

Mummy – thik hai beta  parso jaungi milne...

Me – parso kyu
Mummy -  kl tu muhje btyega na date pe jane ke liye kese tyar hote hai isliye

Mummy kuch dher mereko dehkti rahi....mene mummy ko awaz dia tb mummy ne mereko gale lagya aur gaal pe kiss kia aur boli....

Mummy – i love you beta

Me – love you mummy

Chl ab raat hogyi hai mai dinner bana rahi hun tb tk tu upr se kapde utr karla jo chatt par suhkne ke liye rahke the...mai woh sab kapde utar kr lekar agya...
Thodi dher mobile mai youtube khol kr education video dehkne laga...tab tak dinner ready hogya aur fir dinner karne lage...fir hum sogye

[Nikita nim]

Acha update hai . Maa bete ke bich acha chamestry ho raha hai .

[deepangshu]

Nice..

[Yash121]

Nice update

[Ankit Roy]

Nice concept but regular update dijiye..

[Waseem990]

Naya update ka intzaar hai 

[Ankit Roy]

Update do bhai

[Sexthinker]

Nice concept but regular  update dijiye..

 Thank you........but Ye kese possible ho shkta hai?

[Sexthinker]

Update do bhai

Update week mai ek baar ayega friday ya saturday ko

[Sexthinker]

Naya update ka intzaar hai 

Uske liye toh intezaar krna hoga