19-07-2024, 07:52 PM
bht alaaw
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Adultery Biwi meri, par Bacha kisi aur ka
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19-07-2024, 07:52 PM
bht alaaw
19-07-2024, 08:06 PM
(19-07-2024, 07:33 PM)Naaz Wrote: Aa hi gayi update thanks dear ...sure plz review dekhna ..tumhare past reviews ko read krke bhi bahut acha laga .. By Humiliating Stories ( Author)
19-07-2024, 09:05 PM
Bahut khoob mja aa gya next update kb tk aayega raha ni ja rha
19-07-2024, 11:13 PM
Behad romanchak update
19-07-2024, 11:55 PM
Excellent piece... Keep it up.
19-07-2024, 11:57 PM
Bahot hi acha likhe ho
Ek ek pal ek ek ahesas ek ek lamhe Itna details me aaj tak kisi bhi writer ki story nahi padhi Par afsoos ye hai ki agla update tak intizar karni padegi ab
20-07-2024, 12:20 AM
Bhai acha hai mazza aya but saala update tu jaldi diya kar toh kya mazza aye like daily news paper give daily one update toh mazza ajaaye. I know u r a writer nd needs to think nd plot the twist but I m myself also a writer but can write in a flow once on table.
20-07-2024, 04:29 AM
(19-07-2024, 07:13 PM)HumiliatingStories Wrote: (Preet ke liye jaise woh koi normal mirror hota hai andar se ......par bahar jaise shubham ki ek dam halat buri hone lagti hai ....preet ko bhi iss tarha se uski baahon me baahe daale dekh .....aur iss tarha se ....song pe dance kr raha hai woh uske sath ....shubu jaise ek dam bechain ho uthta hai ki yeh uski bholi preet ko usse na chin le sahi me ...ab jaise usse really me tention hone lagti hai .)Erotica update
20-07-2024, 04:31 AM
(19-07-2024, 07:13 PM)HumiliatingStories Wrote: (rahul dekhta hai ki kaise preet upar se niche tak usse dekhti hai aur aise sharmaa bhi rahi hai aur shayad thoda ghabra rahi hai usse dekhke ....preet ko dekhte hi usse woh kal raat ka uska roop yaad aata hai....kaise preet ki cuteness aur innocense ne ek pal mei hi usse horny kr dia tha puri tarha se aur kis tarha se usne 2 bar squirt kia uske sath bed pe ....par preet ke uss innocent roop se uske baat krne ke way se ...uska ek dam deewana hi ho gya tha rahul..... kal raat k baad se woh preet ko ek pal ke liye bhi bhul ni paaya tha .)Beautiful update
20-07-2024, 07:00 AM
20-07-2024, 08:13 AM
Shandaar aur kamuk chudai ki hai
20-07-2024, 08:30 AM
(20-07-2024, 04:31 AM)sushilt20 Wrote: Beautiful update thanks for appreciation...but bro kitni bar bola h yeh comment me maine ki story ko quote mat kro plzzz iss commnet ko edit kro...comment kro but puri story ko quote mat kia karo .. By Humiliating Stories ( Author)
20-07-2024, 08:32 AM
(19-07-2024, 11:57 PM)Naaz Wrote: Bahot hi acha likhe ho update will come very soon don't worry dear By Humiliating Stories ( Author)
20-07-2024, 04:27 PM
(20-07-2024, 08:32 AM)HumiliatingStories Wrote: update will come very soon don't worry dear Ek request hai Aap jis tarah likh rahe ho waisa hi likhte rahe bas Auro se alag likh rahe ho Yahi khasiyat hai aapki story me Alag alag rai maswara de sakte hai readers Aapko wahi likhna hai jo aapki soch, aapki khasiyat aur aapki hunar hai Bahot saare writers hai yahan sabki apni apni pahchan hogi Aap bhi Agar sab ke jaisa likhne lage to aapki asli khasiyat khatm ho jayegi Aapki lekhani hi aapki pahechan hai Badhai ho sir
20-07-2024, 05:26 PM
Bhai aapki story 1no hai. Sab kuch sahi par yar update thoda jal diya karo. Aapne fans k liye sirf itna sa kaam kar dijiye
21-07-2024, 03:52 PM
Waiting for update bro
22-07-2024, 03:07 AM
Waiting for update
22-07-2024, 01:58 PM
Wow! Just Outstanding.
22-07-2024, 02:55 PM
No chances of update I think so story is over incomplete.
22-07-2024, 03:04 PM
Update ayega
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