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Adultery Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust)
Kahani me twist aaya.. Hmm ab to aur interest badhta jaa raha hae ek to raghu aur ram me se kamya ko kon paega pehele aur dushra ye anjan ladki hae kon.. Hamesha ki tarha behtarin update Ajay bhai..!
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Nice bro
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great update ajay ji. nice suspense bhi hai...
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great twist
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Mind blowing Writing bhai...
Just too good... Waiting for the next one..
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Nice update
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(21-06-2019, 04:27 PM)Dipak31 Wrote: Intresting turn very nice bro

thanks yaara......aagey bhi saath bane rahiyega......

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(21-06-2019, 06:05 PM)naani Wrote: Kya update diya Ajay bhai Apne. Kya twist diya Apne anth Mai. Kya ye ladki Kavya ka dosth ya Kajal ya koi aur

bahut jaldi aab action bhi shuru honee wala hain bhai......saath bane rahiyega......

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(21-06-2019, 07:04 PM)Anmolkjain Wrote: Excellent update yaara.   Suspence de diya h aapne ab to kl k update m hi clear hoga ki ye kon h...or naya shikaar v h...raghu or jeetu ki to nikl padi...

naya shikar to raghu aur jeetu ko milney wala hain wo to waqt hi batayega..........saath bane rahiyega.....

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It is really a great story. Your writing skills and styles are highly appreciated. Keep going brother.
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Waiting for next update bhai..!
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With every update story getting hot
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Nice update
waiting for next
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Bhai mer personal opinion hai ki Story ki ek he herione rehni cahiye .. ha aap aur caracters bhi add kr skte hai par main focus kavya par he rehni cahiye....
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Awesome update dhiya aapne Ajay bhai
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Kha ho yaara
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I waiting for next bhai
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Bhai yeh story puri ho jaye Phir aap. akele hum akele tum story post karo q ki woh adhuri story dhi XP pe aur behtareen mohabbat dikhayi thi aapne us story me. to ho sake to...
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shandar
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(21-06-2019, 08:45 PM)Jaan Wrote: Kahani me twist aaya..  Hmm ab to aur interest badhta jaa raha hae ek to raghu aur ram me se kamya ko kon paega pehele aur dushra ye anjan ladki hae kon..  Hamesha ki tarha behtarin update Ajay bhai..!

thanks yaara..........sare raaz ek ek kar khultey chale jayengey.......saath bane ragiyega.............

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(21-06-2019, 11:12 PM)sumit143 Wrote: Nice bro

thanks yaara............
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(22-06-2019, 01:20 AM)itonya Wrote: great update ajay ji. nice suspense bhi hai...

thanks yaara.......agle update mein suspence clear ho jayega.......

(22-06-2019, 02:03 AM)roni25 Wrote: great twist

thanks yaara.........

(22-06-2019, 03:14 AM)KareenaKapoorLover Wrote: Mind blowing Writing bhai...
Just too good... Waiting for the next one..

thanks yaara for appirication..............saatth bane rahiyega......
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(22-06-2019, 03:18 AM)Ajgupta Wrote: Nice update

thanks yaara.......saath bane rahiyega.....

(22-06-2019, 11:54 AM)Emilio Barzini Wrote: It is really a great story. Your writing skills and styles are highly appreciated. Keep going brother.
thanks for appiriciation..........saath bane rahiyega.........
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