21-06-2019, 08:45 PM
Kahani me twist aaya.. Hmm ab to aur interest badhta jaa raha hae ek to raghu aur ram me se kamya ko kon paega pehele aur dushra ye anjan ladki hae kon.. Hamesha ki tarha behtarin update Ajay bhai..!
(21-06-2019, 04:27 PM)Dipak31 Wrote: Intresting turn very nice bro
(21-06-2019, 06:05 PM)naani Wrote: Kya update diya Ajay bhai Apne. Kya twist diya Apne anth Mai. Kya ye ladki Kavya ka dosth ya Kajal ya koi aur
(21-06-2019, 07:04 PM)Anmolkjain Wrote: Excellent update yaara. Suspence de diya h aapne ab to kl k update m hi clear hoga ki ye kon h...or naya shikaar v h...raghu or jeetu ki to nikl padi...
(21-06-2019, 08:45 PM)Jaan Wrote: Kahani me twist aaya.. Hmm ab to aur interest badhta jaa raha hae ek to raghu aur ram me se kamya ko kon paega pehele aur dushra ye anjan ladki hae kon.. Hamesha ki tarha behtarin update Ajay bhai..!
(21-06-2019, 11:12 PM)sumit143 Wrote: Nice bro
(22-06-2019, 01:20 AM)itonya Wrote: great update ajay ji. nice suspense bhi hai...
(22-06-2019, 02:03 AM)roni25 Wrote: great twist
(22-06-2019, 03:14 AM)KareenaKapoorLover Wrote: Mind blowing Writing bhai...
Just too good... Waiting for the next one..
(22-06-2019, 03:18 AM)Ajgupta Wrote: Nice update
(22-06-2019, 11:54 AM)Emilio Barzini Wrote: It is really a great story. Your writing skills and styles are highly appreciated. Keep going brother.thanks for appiriciation..........saath bane rahiyega.........