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Very nice update.
I thought this loser who cannot save his wife as told by javed will jump from the balcony and kill himself unable to bear the mental torture.
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That was awesome. I think flash back of Srinu is not going to be that interesting like what happened for him now.
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30-06-2024, 09:45 PM
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Marvelous update, but with less detailing in my opinion.
Did Javed not taken her number?
Ganga came back to them only to seek their help to save her husband. however, these bastards left her without any care? Ganga did not even mind their behavior or not even thought about them.
She told polis that her jewels and phone are stolen etc. This update does not touch that.
Her mangalsutra is still with her and also her earrings, ankle chain etc. cops did not question it? They must also be brainless like her husband.
In any case where a husband is beaten to death and jewels not stolen, the first suspect will be the wife for adultery. Here that too did not happen.
Hope these things comes out as part of investigation of super cop Srinu.
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Awesome
The bit about looking at the wallpaper bringing back memories is so good
Those who complained that this is fantasy
What if the reality was more wilder  like Javed or chacha weren't a chance meeting??...
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Seems this is a long novel that will have birth and death of Srinu. Nice one.
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30-06-2024, 11:35 PM
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Awesome update and now switching to flashback ! Waiting eagerly for the next episode of this titillating saga!
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(30-06-2024, 09:45 PM)Manikandarajesh Wrote: Marvelous update, but with less detailing in my opinion.
Did Javed not taken her number?
Ganga came back to them only to seek their help to save her husband. however, these bastards left her without any care? Ganga did not even mind their behavior or not even thought about them.
She told polis that her jewels and phone are stolen etc. This update does not touch that.
Her mangalsutra is still with her and also her earrings, ankle chain etc. cops did not question it? They must also be brainless like her husband.
In any case where a husband is beaten to death and jewels not stolen, the first suspect will be the wife for adultery. Here that too did not happen.
Hope these things comes out as part of investigation of super cop Srinu.
Bro, its just srinu's imagination based on cctv footage.
What's the point if ganga gets their phone number ?
Now i wonder are you guys understanding the plot or not ????
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Hi Kk, I enjoyed your last update.
In a way it gave satisfaction.
To others, dear Xossipians
This story is all about the insecurities of srinu, and the mental trauma he suffers after that incident. This may seem like a adultery, cheating, in a way cuckold story.
But this a story between husband and wife. Through all the chaos, how they find peace is the plot. And what measures they take to have a healthy relationship.
You can have all the fun through srini's imagination, but reality is different. The author knowing or unknowingly have given the clues everywhere through out the updates,the things is you have to read between the lines.
For example, javed and chacha after everything Ganga has done for them, they left her in the dust,naked.
I too have doubts, this story will have an twist in the plot. It would be outrageous to compare with midnight Shyamalan's epic movies. But this story is a bit like that. I hope you get that, this story will turn on its head, a U-TURN.
wait for it. # All the best # KK007007
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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Why Srinu is not focusing on catching the culprits?His wife may lie to him but not them.
He should turn his anger from his wife to them.
Srinu face to face with javed and chacha and how that scene unfolds.Them making fun of srinu telling how they enjoyed his wife.Or srinu helping the cops in catching the criminals and them telling the truth.
I write all this cuz you seem like cornering yourself with the only option of confronting his wife to know the truth.
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01-07-2024, 03:52 PM
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(01-07-2024, 01:38 PM)Gojo 6eyes Wrote: Why Srinu is not focusing on catching the culprits?His wife may lie to him but not them.
He should turn his anger from his wife to them.
Srinu face to face with javed and chacha and how that scene unfolds.Them making fun of srinu telling how they enjoyed his wife.Or srinu helping the cops in catching the criminals and them telling the truth.
I write all this cuz you seem like cornering yourself with the only option of confronting his wife to know the truth.
Bro, srinu went to po!ice station, Investigation is ongoing. His focus is to catch them. But he is a common man like any one of us. he cant be running on roads and beating the **** out of people to catch the culprits. I'm pretty much sure this is what any common man would do in a situation like this.
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Srinu is mentally and physically weak person. He neither have guts to face his wife or those men. These type of men always doubt their beautiful wife imagining that they are in affair with someone. Slowly they start spying them and then torturing them. Sometimes they go to extent of killing. These type of men have a feeling that they are not satisfying their partner and there is a great chance that their wife will open their legs when they meet someone charming and stronger. More than that, it looks like after been hit in his head, srinu slowly losing his mental stability.
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(01-07-2024, 08:01 PM)Chitrarassu Wrote: Srinu is mentally and physically weak person. He neither have guts to face his wife or those men. These type of men always doubt their beautiful wife imagining that they are in affair with someone. Slowly they start spying them and then torturing them. Sometimes they go to extent of killing. These type of men have a feeling that they are not satisfying their partner and there is a great chance that their wife will open their legs when they meet someone charming and stronger. More than that, it looks like after been hit in his head, srinu slowly losing his mental stability.
Not really..
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(01-07-2024, 08:01 PM)Chitrarassu Wrote: Srinu is mentally and physically weak person. He neither have guts to face his wife or those men. These type of men always doubt their beautiful wife imagining that they are in affair with someone. Slowly they start spying them and then torturing them. Sometimes they go to extent of killing. These type of men have a feeling that they are not satisfying their partner and there is a great chance that their wife will open their legs when they meet someone charming and stronger. More than that, it looks like after been hit in his head, srinu slowly losing his mental stability.
Agree with you...
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03-07-2024, 06:47 AM
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Excellent and extraordinary updates
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