Adultery Tale of a lustful revenge

[Vamp]

superb, wonderful, sexellent update.
bahot hi garam aur kamuk writings

[Prince raj]

Hey guys, fist of of all me posting declining views comment wasn't something out of rage or anger, i did it because i wanted to point out something. When i started this story response was overwhelming then after few updates views, replies were declining which didn't bothered me at first but after noticing it quite few times i felt like should talk it out with everyone.

Secondly i've never forced anyone to read my stories (not that i can). Stories like koel, BGKBB were enough proof for me to understand that a lot of people like my story writing. So yeah those who are into these type of stories will read & those who don't can read whatever story they like on this or any other forum.

Lastly I'm not closing this story for goodness sake, already told you guys i'll finish this story & then muskan's.

Thank you

Right bro , you are my favourite writer in this forum. Same like you , i also started a thread for just my kink. you had earlier replied on my 1st update. Just write ,what you think and imagine , dont focus much on suggestion. once the story proceed and sexual encounters appear , comments and views will also increase . stick with your slow build up narration. And lastly , if you have read  further updates of my story , kindly reply ,how it was ....thanks..

[Bonita]

bahut hi mast, jabardast aur faadu update
kamaal ka likhte hai aapne yaar
bahot maja aaya padhke

[Regina]

wonderful update!!wah!! bahut bahut mast likhte hai yaar, shabash

[Therocksayys]

Thanks for the comment. I agree sudha's charchter isn't everyone's type but who said she is second MC of the syory!? Even in muskan's story few people showed disinterest when i introduced a side charchter for particular buildup. The idea behind introduction of sudha's role is to give that little spark in nusrat's long forgotten lust cum submissiveness towards raghu which might have lowered post getting married to kabir.

I thought everyone will get this thing. It's quiet awkard for me to come & explain.

Thanks though, really appreciate it & don't worry this story will get its deserving end.

Totally understandable. But the reason I said that is because of how you felt as a writer about readers not showing much interest anymore and probably thought people are not interested in the story anymore. So just wanted to point out my thoughts so it might give you a hint. 

But trust me when the story picks up the pace and the Raghu and Nusrat begin their secret illicit affair in her own bedroom, the story will break all records. Their steamy hot sex filled encounters will be too hot and kinky to read. I can already imagine. 

Waiting eagerly for the next update.

[Ghosthunter]

Absolutely fantastic, fascinating and exciting update it is! Really mind blowing and erotic writings.

[Nayak singh]

Evil bhai update kab aayegaa iss week me ak bhi update nahi aayaa hai .. we r waiting for the update so excited..

[anushka]

CAN WE EXPECT A MEGA UPDATE TODAY ????

[pujaa69]

Waiting for the next bigg update ????

[Mousumi Hamid]

Waiting

[THE EVIL]

Thank you guys, update will come tonight! Apologies for the delay i was quiet busy watching T20 worldcup knockouts, final & few other things. I will read comments once I'm about to post update tonight.

Thanks

[THE EVIL]

Absolutely tasty and delicious update!!

Absolutely tasty and delicious update!! 

Absolutely wonderful, beautiful and marvelous story!!

Congrats for completing 200k views.

Exciting and erotic update!

Superb writings!

Awesome storytelling.

Thanks

[THE EVIL]

wah! bahut bahut garam update

Loving story!
Bahot badhiya update!

Aur intezar nahi hota... Fata fat dhamake dar sex lao bro.

Stunning update! garam aur sexy writings.

Another blockbuster update

Congrats on 200k views already evil bhai

Beautiful update

you are amazing writer...
keep going...
replies and comments will flow like a hurricane on your stories evil bro....
we are eagerly waiting..

You're good writer
Countinue the story evil

It is really  a very nice story. Your amazing and thrilling writing is very much interesting and enjoyable! Please keep going buddy.

Incredibly exciting writing! I am very much pleased for reading this story.

अविश्वसनीय रूप से रोमांचक और कामुक कहानी! यह कहानी कामुकता और उत्तेजना से भरी है।

chamatkar aur charming update

Thanks

[THE EVIL]

This update is extremely hot and erotic. You are really rocking the forum.

Bahut badhiya ek kamuk aur exciting update. Bahut mazaa agaya yaar

Very much erotic and exciting update. Please upload more pictures of actress Sajal Ali

Ashadaran, amazing update. Bahut khub writing.

Bahut bahut hot update dala aapne yaar. Bahut hi kamuk tharika se chal rahi is kahaani

Wah! Bahad hi garam aur kamuk update

No bhai esa ni h ....we really love ur story ...ur the very first writer jiski story mene pdhi or uske baad ur my favourite na jane kitne baar mene apki bade Ghar ki Bahu betiyan story pdhi but wo incomplete rhi uska dukh hua....and ur 2nd story koel wali wo bhi mene Kai baar pdhi ....I don't want u to stop this story but what I want is aap iss story ko complete kre or fr baki stories ko bhi ek accha conclusion de .

chamatkar update! lajawab,mast aur ekdom kamaal ka kahaani!! Hats off

बिल्कुल शानदार कहानी।

ekdom jackass update! Like aur repu added yaar.

What an exciting update it is!!After this update.....I'm really excited for next update....agla bahot maza aane wala h

bahut bahut shandaar,lajawab aur behad hi garam update! Really excellent and super exciting writings!

aap such mein ek classic writer hain yaar, bahut bahut mast aur lajawab update dala aapne,bahut khoob

Absolutely marvelous and fabulous update! Superb! Fantastic and enticing writings!

And evil bhai post one update a week make readers eagerly wait for next update,value your time and writings.You are legend.

Waiting for update

super duper hot story! bahut bahut garam aur kamuk writings!

Thanks

[THE EVIL]

Awesome,just amazing update

App to 0ne of my favourite writer ho bhai ... Jo log ap ke story k deewane hae .unka response aate rahega.. bus aap ki story ka to mae hamesa intezar krta hu .. sorry response na krne k liye ...

wah! kya ek chamatkar update dalaa aapne yaar,just awesome! please keep going.

zabardast update,ekdom chamatkar aur mazadar writings skills!!! Superb storytelling.

What an exciting, sexy, spicy and erotic update it is! Hats off to you buddy.

ekdom garam,mazadar aur masaladar update!!!

बिल्कुल बहुत ही गर्म, कामुक और रोमांचक अद्यतन। यह कहानी आपके मोहक लेखन के साथ प्यारी और दिलचस्प है।

Absolutely wonderful, beautiful,very much hot, erotic and exciting update.This story is full of excitement and interesting with your seductive  writings.

Beautiful story

Thanks

[THE EVIL]

Evil sahab main ek ✍️ writer hu aur kafi hadh tak famous bhi ye mera ek reader's account hai maine aaj se pehle kabhi kisi bhi writer k liye comment ni kiya hai aur main apse kehna chahta hoon ki aap jaisa writer maine aaj tak ni dekha hai ek writer hai sairat linking aur oc se uska start hai koi ap jaisa nahi hai muje infact maine apki skills utha kar apni story me use ki hai kafi likes aur views mile hai apse ek request hai sir ki aap pehle muskan complete kijiye maine ab tak ki waisi story nahi parhi hai sir in this field u r my icon this is my kink to write ye story new hai isko ruko thoda ya toh ek update muskaan ka aur ek iska par muskaan tadapna ni chahiye hariya usko apne talent se sambhogh karle accidentally waisa kuch kare sir please as a writer aur as a fan apse request hai meri tahe dil se ???? please sir please maine aapke wajh se is platform par he nahi kafi platform par izzat kamai hai aur maine dekha aap //// par bhi agae hai toh hum toh dhany hogae hai saalo se apki stories parh raha hu soch aaj likh bhi du par og I'd se ni likh sakta reason altoh ap samjh gae hoge as a writer aur maine sare cmnts bhi parhe jo Karansonkar ki I'd be kaha wo bilkul sahi tha 1 writer aur 4 readers ko personally janta hu jo apke fan hai literally fan hai agar aap muskaan story ko likh kar paise me bhi sell karoge toh wo kharid lege par wo nirash hogae hai kaafi q ki muskaan ki jo adah apne batai na pighalne wali apna character na chorne wali wo us se pehle koi story me ni dikha that could b ur best story continue karde sirji wo bohot meherbani hogi

Apka samartak hone k naate muje bas ye sun na hai ki ok main abhi he chalu karduga muskaan ye story ko sir time lag jaega lagh bhag kuch mahine phir muskaan aegi par sir aap please pehle muskaan likh lijiye naa hum gareeb ka bhi bhala hojae ? dhanyawaad sirf

Thanks comment ke liye jaise maine kaha i'll definitely work on muskan story once this one is complete.

[THE EVIL]

superb, wonderful, sexellent update.
bahot hi garam aur kamuk writings

bahut hi mast, jabardast aur faadu update
kamaal ka likhte hai aapne yaar
bahot maja aaya padhke

wonderful update!!wah!! bahut bahut mast likhte hai yaar, shabash

Totally understandable. But the reason I said that is because of how you felt as a writer about readers not showing much interest anymore and probably thought people are not interested in the story anymore. So just wanted to point out my thoughts so it might give you a hint. 

But trust me when the story picks up the pace and the Raghu and Nusrat begin their secret illicit affair in her own bedroom, the story will break all records. Their steamy hot sex filled encounters will be too hot and kinky to read. I can already imagine. 

Waiting eagerly for the next update.

Absolutely fantastic, fascinating and exciting update it is! Really mind blowing and erotic writings.

Evil bhai update kab aayegaa iss week me ak bhi update nahi aayaa hai .. we r waiting for the update so excited..

Waiting for the next bigg update ????

Thanks

[THE EVIL]

Right bro , you are my favourite writer in this forum. Same like you , i also started a thread for just my kink. you had earlier replied on my 1st update. Just write ,what you think and imagine , dont focus much on suggestion. once the story proceed and sexual encounters appear , comments and views will also increase . stick with your slow build up narration. And lastly , if you have read  further updates of my story , kindly reply ,how it was ....thanks..

Thanks, i'll read it no problem.

[THE EVIL]

Part 14

Nusrat deewar ke sahare khadi khud se fight kar rahi thi ke jo bhi usne thodi der pehle dekha use o turant hi bhul jaye lekin uska jism dubara se uska sath nahi de raha tha. Usne kabhi expect nahi kiya tha ke raghu chacha uski shadishuda zindagi men laut kar ayenge. Shadi ke pehle jo huwa use o bhul bhi chuki thi. Anjane men aur nadani men usne jo bhi galti ki thi usko o sudhar kar aage badh chuki thi lekin yun raghu chacha ka wapas ana use ajeeb lag raha tha.

Khair o fir wahan se fresh hokar wapas apne kam men lag jati hai. Sham men kabir bhi ghar wapas aata hai aur o dono sath men ek acha quality time spend karte hain. Raat men dono shohar biwi dono yun bahar niklte hain thodi walking ke liye jo o usually karte the. Thode der yun hi tehlne ke baad kabir ek paan wale ki dukan ke pas rukta hai aur majburan nusrat ko bhi wapas tehlna padta hai.

Kabir ek paan ka order deta hai aur nusrat ko puchta hai chahiye kya lekin o mana kar deti hai. Thodi der men kabir paan chaba raha hota hai aur o dono wahan khade hi the ke...

Raghu...kaise ho nuuu...kabir betaa??

Kabir aur nusrat mudkar raghu ke taraf dekhte hain jo abhi abhi aya tha...



Kabir...arey raghu chacha kaise hain?? Hum bilkul thikk...

Raghu...main bhi thik kabir betaa..

Kabir...pehli baat to ye beta beta bolna band kijyee ajeeb lagta hai...bas kabir...

Raghu...haahahah bilkul sahiii..

Kabir...hahaha...aur sunayiye yahan kahan??

Raghu...arey bettt...haha kabiirr bas yun hi paan khane aya tha...

Kabir...acha main aur nusrat bhi paan khane hi ruke hain...

Raghu chacha nusrat par upar se niche tak nazar ek baar dalte huwe jo idar udar dekh rahi thi raghu chacha ke ane se.

Raghu...mujhe nahi pata tha nusratttt paan bhi khati haii..maine to bas uskoo....

Kabir...kya aapne??

Raghu...hahaha nusrat ko maine bohat sari chizen sikhayi hain pata hai tumko?? Aur nusrat ko mera bohat pasand bhi tha...

Kabir...kyaa pasand tha? Aur kya sikhaya hai??

Kabir bhi nusrat ko dekhne lagta hai thoda hairani se nusrat ke chehre ka rang uda huwa tha raghu chacha ki is baat se o kya jawab deti...



Raghu...aisa kya dekh rahe ho kabirr nusrat ko mere hath ka swadisht khana pasand tha aur kya kya sikhaya hai o main dhire dhire bataunga ab to nazdik hi hain...

Kabir...haahahah acha khana...aur haan sahi baat hai ab to ana jana laga rahega...

Raghu...haan

Kabir...nusrat ne kabhi nahi bataya ke aap itna acha khana banate hain chacha...kyun nusrat??

Nusrat...mm mainn oo kabirr oo...

Raghu...hahaha kaise batayegi kabirr ye koi batane wali chiz hai. Ek ladki ko agar kisi gair mard ka pasand ho to o thodi na apne pati ko uske bare men batayegi hahahah...

Utna bolkar raghu chacha bade hi awkwardly hasnta hai. Kabir bhi na samjhne par bhi hansta hai uske sath. Nusrat jo thoda bohat samjh gayi thi bohat embarrassed feel karti hai

Kabir...hehehe bade mazakiya ho aap raghu chacha aisi baat hai to lagta hai mr. Khanna se baat karke aapko humare ghar shift karwana padega...

Ye baat sunkar nusrat apne shohar ko hairani se dekhti hai ke baat bohat aage badh rahi thi o ye bilkul nahi chahti thi. Raghu chacha agar unke ghar aagye to usko rokna namumkin hojayega. Jis chiz ko o kunwari rehkar nahi control kar payi thi o shadi ke baad krna to next to impossible hona hi tha.

Raghu..haha haan baat kar lo agar o man jate hain to...

Kabir...arey main to mazak kar raha hun chacha nusrat itna acha khana bana leti hai ke humen kisi aur ki zarurt kabhi padi hi nahi....

Raghu..hehe ye bhi sahi hai...

Kabir...chalo thik hai chacha hum chalte hain kabhi aana ghar...

Raghu...haan zarur beta...

Fir nusrat aur kabir jane lagte hain aur adat se majbur raghu chacha nusrat ki chal dekhne lagta hai uski kha jane wali nazar nusrat ki matkti huwi gand par thi.



Ufff aisi chal jise o shadi ke pehle dekha karta tha. O apna lauda wahin maslne lagta hai jab tak kabir aur nusrat uski ankhon se ojhal nahi hojate.

Agle din kabir ke office janeke baad nusrat apne kam karke baithi huwi ke tabhi door bell bajti hai jise sunkar nusrat darwaza kholne jati hai to samne none other than raghu chacha ko dekh ek tarha seham si jati hai. O sochne lagti hai ke raghu chacha is waqtt yahan kya kar rahe hain.Raghu chacha ke chehre par ek alag hi evil smile thi.

Raghu...kaisi ho nusrat??

Nusrat...mm maainn thikk hu chacha aurr aap?

Raghu...bilkul mastt....

Raghu chacha nusrat ko tade jarha tha jise dekh nusrat ko ajeeb lag raha tha.

Raghu...andar ajaun??

Nusrat...hh haan ayiye naa..

O dono andar chale jate hain. Raghu chacha jakar sofe par baithta hai. Nusrat wahin side men khadi hojati hai.

Raghu...kafi acha ghar hai nusrat...

Nusrat...haan

Raghu...kabir waqai men kafi bhagyshali hai acha ghar aur achi biwi dono mile hain use hehe...

Nusrat ko ye baat ajeeb lagti hai lekin o ignore kar deti hai.

Raghu...waise nusrat mujhe pura yakeen hai kabir jitna bahar se acha dikhta hai utna tumare sath bhi acha hi hoga...samjh rahi ho na...

Nusrat...kkk kyaaa matlaab chachaa?

Raghu...matlaab bistar parr..

Nusrat raghu chacha ka yun bilkul direct bold jawab sunkar hairan si hojati hai aur usko jhatka sa lagta hai.

Nusrat...ye kyaa bol rahee hain aapp chachaa?? Plss mehrabani karke aisi batien na karen ye humara niji mamla hai...



Raghu...haha o to hai nusrat main to bas puch raha tha ke jo maine tumko sikhaya tha shadi se pehle o kam aya ya nahi??

Nusrat chup rehti hai usko nahi samjh arha tha ke o is situation kis tarha se handle kare. Raghu lekin samjh jata hai ke nusrat uski baat ko avoid krna chah rahi hai.

Raghu...aya hi hoga kam waise lekin mujhe ye baat abhi bhi khatak rahi hai nusrat...

Nusrat...kkonnsii baat ??

Raghu...yahi ke shadi ke 2 saal baad bhi ghar men bachon ka shor abhi tak nahii??

Nusrat ke gaal laal hojate hain raghu chachaa ki is baat se. Is tarha boldly direct raghu chacha ki batien use na sirf hairan kar rahi thi balke sharm ane par majbur bhi kar rahi thi.

Raghu...kyun nusrat??

Nusrat...cchh chachaa yee aap plss mainee bataya haii ye humara niji mamla haii..



Raghu...hmm niji mamla hai ya kuch aurrr..??

Nusrat...kk kyaa matlab??

Raghu...shayad kabir men kuch kamiii...

Nusrat...nahiii ye aap kya bol rahe hain kabirr mujhse bohat pyar karte hain o unme koi kami nahi hai...

Raghu...to fir tum men...

Nusrat...nnn nahiiii...

Raghu...hmm fir to ek hi matlaab niklta hai iska...

Nusrat...kk kyaa???

Raghu...dekh nusrat main teri madad kar sakta hun jaise maine shadi se pehle ki thi lekin uske liye tumhe khulkar mujhse baat karni hogi aur mera sath bhi khulkar dena hoga....

Nusrat...mmm mainn samjhi nahii..

Raghu...main tumari samsya samjh gaya hun...ye chiz sirf pyar tak nahi rehti hai pati patni ke ek dusre ke liye bohat sari zarurten hoti hain jo main tumko ab ache se sikha sakta hun..tumari shadi bhi hochuki hai isliye main ache se samjha sakunga.....bolo sikhna hai??

Nusrat...Nnn nahii chachaa plss main shadishuda hun kabir ko bhanak bhi lagi to acha nahi hoga....

Raghu...arey nusrat to main pata lagne do kabir ko...soch lo tumari ye jo pheeki shadishuda zindagi chal rahi hai usme tum naye naye rang bhar sakti ho. Aisi chizen tumko mere alwa koi khul kar koi nahi batayega aage tumari marzi....

Utna bolkar raghu chacha wahan se chala jata hai. Nusrat wahin bed par baithkar sochne lagti hai.

Nusrat...kya ye sahi rahega?? Raghu chacha se firse sikhna...nahii nahii main ab shadishuda hun ye to dhoka hoga... yaad hai na akhri baar jab ye sab huwa tha to kaise raghu chacha ne shadi ke ek din pehle ufff nahi nahii main ye nahi kar sakti aur waise bhi raghu chacha to bakwas kar rahe the humari shadishuda zindagi to behad khubsurt chal rahi hai.



Utna sochte huwe nusrat wapas apne kaam men lag jati hai. Raat men kabir ke aneke baad o dono acha time spend karte hain khane ke baad domo bed par baithe huwe batien kar rahe the. Thodi der baad dono ekdusre ke sath romantic hone lagte hain. Kabir nusrat ko letakar uske sath foreplay karne lagta hai.

Nusrat bhi uska sath dete huwe ankhen band karke uske sar men hath ferne lagti hai. Usne is waqt ek nighty pehni huwi thi. Kabir uske gale par chum raha tha. Apne shohar ko yun romantic huwa dekh nusrat bhi kafi excited thi. Kahin na kahin usko ye lagta tha ke jo bhi aaj raghu chacha ne use bola hai o jhut hai.

Kabir chumte huwe upar uske chehre par mathe par yahan wahan chumne lagta hai. Nusrat ko niche kabir ka lund khada hota huaa feel hota hai jisse o aur excited hojati hai. Thodi der baad kabir apna tshirt nikal kar boxers men aajata hai. Nusrat thodi bohat garam to hochuki thi. Ab tak nusrat ki nighty bhi utar chuki thi. O bas bra panty men bed par padi huwi thi kabir ke samne.

Kabir apne boxer utar kar under thoda niche karke nusrat ko missionary position men le aata hai aur dhire se apna lund se karke nusrat ki pinkish chut par andar dalne lagta hai...

Nusrat..aahh kkabiirr..



Kabir fir aur dhire dhire apna gora lund andar karta hai. Nusrat bhi kabir ke hath sakhti se pakad leti hai aur apni ankhen band kar leti hai. Kabir fir halke halke dhakke lagane lagta hai. Nusrat bhi ab thoda normal hone lagti hai. Dono apne shohar biwi wale romantic sex karne lagte hain.

Takreeban 15 minute baad dono alag hojate hain. Nusrat halki halki ukhdi huwi sansen normal karne men lagi thi wahin kabir to maze ke satwe asaman par besudh leta huwa tha. Uski biwi koi normal awrat to thi nahi itni khusburt gori chitti upar uski chut ufffff.

Kabir fir bathroom chala jata hai nahane wahin nusrat leti huwi apne chehre par ek muskan liye huwe thi tabhi uska hath galti se apni chut par lagta hai ufff kitna ajeeb feel hota hai sex karne ke bad. Usne zindagi men kabhi nahi socha tha ke sex men inta maza hota hai. Magarrr shadi ke pehle raghu chacha ne bhi to use bataya tha aurrr.....

Nusrat ko ab shadi ke ek din pehle wali o raat yaad aati hai jab raghu chacha uske kamre men aye the aur unhone kya demand ki thi. Aur fir o dono nange hogye the aur raghu chacha ne uski chut par apna o bada uffff utna bada awzar!!! Kabir ka to itna bada nahi hai fir bhi kitna maza aata hai agar raghu chacha ka...



Nusrat ko apni soch par ghin aati hai lekin raghu chacha ka us raat uski kunwari chut par apna bada kala lauda rakhna bhul nahi payi thi ufff firse wahin scene uske dimag men chalne lagta hai. Anjane men uska hath jo uski chut par tha wahan sehlane bhi lagta hai.

Abhi abhi o apne shohar ke sath sex kar chuki thi aur abhi usko raghu chacha ke kale awzar ki yad aayi thi jo o apne shadi ke ek din pehle feel kar chuki thi. Nusrat khud par blanket le leti hai. Uska hath chut par chal raha tha. Uski ankhen sochte huwe ya maze men band hochuki thi. Dheemi dheemi siskariyan uske mun se nikal rahi thi.

Nusrat man men... yee mainn kyaa karr rahii hunn...galat hai yee...mujhe sirf apne shohar ke bare men sochna chahiye fir ye chachaa aawwh...

Nusrat apni ek ungli chut par ragdne lagti hai jaise usdin raghu chacha apna kala lauda ragad raha tha. Ufff scene kafi kamuk tha. Ek shadishuda jawan awrat jo thodi der pehle apne shohar ke sath sex kar chuki hai aur o thodi der baad ek naukar gair mazhbi adhed umar ke admi ke bare men soch kar apni chut sehla rahi thi.

Tabhi bathroom ka door khulne ki awaz aati hai. Kabir nahakr bahar aajata hai jisse nusrat bhi thoda sambhal jati hai. O apne shohar se ankh nahi milati kyunke jo o kar rahi thi o bohat galat tha.

Kabir...nusrat jawo naha lo main sorha hun mujhe kal jaldi office jana hai..

Nusrat....ss soo jawoo kabirr main naha lungii..



Kabir...thik hai jaldi nahakr sojana...

Nusrat...thikk hai...

Kabir chaddar odhkar dusre taraf face karke sojata hai wahin nusrat apni blanket thodi hatakar firse apni chut sehlane lagti hai. Uff uski chut geeli hone lagi thi itni der tak to. Use yakeen nahi horha tha ke o thodi der pehle hi apne pyare shohar ke sath romantic hokar sex kar chuki hai lekin ab is waqt o apni chut sehla rahi thi.



Nusrat ki ankhen kuch sochte huwe band thi aur uske nazuk gore hath uski pinkish chut par.

To be continued...

[THE EVIL]

Part 14 posted, click here for updated index.