[Asad Pong Pong]

Awesome,just amazing update

[THE EVIL]

So evil, I will let u know honest review and would appreciate if u take that as a feedback nothing else m really ur very big fan very very big fan m personally created this account just to write a review for u... So evil the thing is consistentcy u know at this platform there r many writer's many who r consistent they r not even 10% of ur level but they complete there story... Will u believe I personally know 7 people who use to read ur stories 1 were couple they use to enjoy but after ur last story "MUSKAN" ur reputation went down sorry to say that u know the reason y??

I'll let u know because u write story in such a way that u make people think even when they r busy u r such a gem writer I would say only two writers have such skills u and linking and he is also no 2 infront of u u don't have any competitor bro in ur skills but the thing is that u leave ur stories people get so annoyed the couple I was talking about and the rest guy's were like v won't read his stories again reason ?? Left all stories incomplete I was like he is really good writer but u break our heart brother by leaving stories incomplete see there are 2 way now first complete muskaan atleast finish her first sex with hariya or u can continue with this story and leave it again

My suggestion is stop writting I know v don't pay u and u entertain us but bro look even some stupid writers r coming with absolutely no sense no buildup but they r taking there story till sex so people read that ur stories r true addiction 1 guy out of 7 was like I really wasted my time and energy because of that evil 

If u want stop ur writing and i really say no one will care and if it's ur passion make ur audience feel confident in u complete muskaan bro rest it's called

And if u stop this story too v won't care u know y?
It's like that dialogue kisi ko itna na darao ki dar he khatam hojae so v don't even dear to loose u now... There r ample of writers whom people can support i would repeat not of ur skills but committed and dear u might have personal life and all v respect that but it's ur choice to write it and u asked u so that's on u now and this was the most honest opinion which u can get because 7 people 7 man sseeeveeennn I found were reading u so that's really a big thing for some hidden writer's people don't care about ur new stories most people want to read muskaan I would say the build up u gave to muskaan i challenge people here to bring 3 stories like that just 3 I bet 5k on that but incomplete 

I wrote my emotions out bro 

Rest ur call if u don't complete muskan sex stories than leave bro

Quit writing because m not someone who is just writing random comments m really ur fan and saying so 

Bye legend stop it now!

U were the best 
Bye bro ? ?

Quiet a comment huh? Agreed. Complete muskan story? If you have followed this thread i've mentioned once that i'll be completing muskan story once this one is finished. Not only muskan but also my other stories which didn't got proper endings.

Yes i've left my stories abruptly quiet few times & understand people being disappointed but i had my reasons which were lot more important than this. I was a reader just like you guys once then i decided to write my own oneday & here i am. Writing isn't something i would ever pick over my personal life. Story writing is only my kind of a small kink.

Inshort, i will continue writing & complete my previous stories as well & those who like will my style of story writing will read & those who don't i can't force them to do so. All i was mentioning is decline in replies which now i can understand because this forum doesn't seems to have active readers like it used to be before.

Thanks for the comment, really appreciate it.

[THE EVIL]

No bhai esa ni h ....we really love ur story ...ur the very first writer jiski story mene pdhi or uske baad ur my favourite na jane kitne baar mene apki bade Ghar ki Bahu betiyan story pdhi but wo incomplete rhi uska dukh hua....and ur 2nd story koel wali wo bhi mene Kai baar pdhi ....I don't want u to stop this story but what I want is aap iss story ko complete kre or fr baki stories ko bhi ek accha conclusion de .

I've already mentioned that i'll be continuing muskan story once this one gets to an end.

[THE EVIL]

I have completely agree with your view.What I thought Raghu will seduce nusarat and she will become crazy for sex with Raghu following kinky update.
But what happened suddenly she got married,Raghu returned and had an affair with old lady something doesn't match up.
May be you have delayed marriage part and continued with Raghu nusart part before marriage would had much fun.After marriage she is not sexually happy with Kabir remembers her affair with Raghu and suddenly he appears then they started sexual affair behind Kabir's back would had fun,that's my point of view.

Sudha isn't part of the plot, her charchter is a mere trap for nusrat to get seduced (totally unintentional) by raghu once again. Infact there are no more scenes of her & raghu. Everyone seems to have speculated this whole scenario horribly wrong.

[THE EVIL]

Then evil bhai aap kabir ki choti bahan ko introduce Kara sakte hain jo abhi just 18 ki huwi ho aur hostel se ghar holiday me aayi ho aur kafi Jyada gussel aur ghamandi aur nakchadhi ladki ho aur sath me andar se innocent bhi ho..ye sir ak idea hai mere taraf se baki aap to guru hain is field ke to aapko Jo thik Lage waise kahani ko aage bdhayee ..
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Acha sujhau hai main dhayan men rakhunga.

[THE EVIL]

Nahi evil bhai aisiii baat nahi hai aap pls story ko continue rakhiye.. bahut hi mast story hai yee hamari taraf se full response rahega absee aur week me 2 update rakhiye ak bahut kam ho jayegaa plsss bhai..

Don't worry weekly 2 updates ayenge.

[THE EVIL]

I’ll give you my honest review as I am someone who loves your writing and regard you as the top writer on this forum. 
When I first started reading this story it made me crazy and I couldn’t stop reading it over and over again. Just the way you wrote the expression of Nusrat when she saw her old tormentor Raghu chacha after so many years. Up until the last update when Raghu chacha almost had her under her control. It was so kinky and felt like I’m watching a movie. 
But then I started to sense that the story is going to be involving other characters so early in the story which will make Raghu and Nusrat’s encounters mix with others - like her neighbour aunty which is not my favourite part. 
There are so many good stories end up losing its original plot when the main character, Raghu in this story, will be fucking her neighbour and she will just look and masturbate. 
For example there was Akmas story - a hot housewife and bahu ends up gets fucked by watchman and plumber but then the writer for no reason involved her old 50 year old sass and the next two months it was all about sass and watchman while Akmas just watches them and masturbates.
I just don’t think when an old horny man has a young beautiful lady to use and all he’s interested in fucking an old lady with no chemistry whatsoever. 
Another story Aslam ki Rand Dr Kamya was such a huge success because it was just about Aslam and Kamya. ASLAM fucked her in every update and readers loved it. That’s because the main focus was always on Kamya and Aslam was only interested to fuck her and make her his rand. 
Of course other characters can be added in the story for a little cocktail but before the readers actually get to see the full chemistry between the two main characters, the other character hijacks the whole story in its early stages. 

When you say people are not replying, I believe that’s because they are only interested in Nusrat and Raghu. I’m not getting any kinks seeing Raghu and Sudha Aunty. They can of course come later in the story but what I’ve thought this story to be and where I’m seeing it’s headed kind of loses interest. 

I don’t know if you have seen Japanese Jav porn but they are the epitome of kinkiness and horniness. It’s mostly about cheating wife and old man young girl kind of theme and only focus on two characters. The evil guy keeps coming back to house to fulfils his lust and the girl eventually gives up and becomes his whore to use any way he wants. 

Please forgive me if I’ve upset you with my review. Of course you’re the brain behind this hottest story and maybe you know what we don’t know and you may prove us all wrong by giving a whole different kinky surprise updates in the future. 

Please don’t close this story. It’s the best story I’ve ever red. Please consider my thoughts and disregard if you find this nonsense. 

From your honest reader. 
Regards. 

Thanks for the comment. I agree sudha's charchter isn't everyone's type but who said she is second MC of the syory!? Even in muskan's story few people showed disinterest when i introduced a side charchter for particular buildup. The idea behind introduction of sudha's role is to give that little spark in nusrat's long forgotten lust cum submissiveness towards raghu which might have lowered post getting married to kabir.

I thought everyone will get this thing. It's quiet awkard for me to come & explain.

Thanks though, really appreciate it & don't worry this story will get its deserving end.

[Nobita]

Please give us a update today

[Jaan]

App to 0ne of my favourite writer ho bhai ... Jo log ap ke story k deewane hae .unka response aate rahega.. bus aap ki story ka to mae hamesa intezar krta hu .. sorry response na krne k liye ...

[THE EVIL]

Hey guys, fist of of all me posting declining views comment wasn't something out of rage or anger, i did it because i wanted to point out something. When i started this story response was overwhelming then after few updates views, replies were declining which didn't bothered me at first but after noticing it quite few times i felt like should talk it out with everyone.

Secondly i've never forced anyone to read my stories (not that i can). Stories like koel, BGKBB were enough proof for me to understand that a lot of people like my story writing. So yeah those who are into these type of stories will read & those who don't can read whatever story they like on this or any other forum.

Lastly I'm not closing this story for goodness sake, already told you guys i'll finish this story & then muskan's.

Thank you

[Nahida Parveen]

wah! kya ek chamatkar update dalaa aapne yaar,just awesome! please keep going.

[Shilpa.]

zabardast update,ekdom chamatkar aur mazadar writings skills!!! Superb storytelling.

[Abbu ki jaan Ayisha]

waiting

[Roxy]

What an exciting, sexy, spicy and erotic update it is! Hats off to you buddy. yr):

[Deepika Singh]

ekdom garam,mazadar aur masaladar update!!!

[Marzia Mithu]

बिल्कुल बहुत ही गर्म, कामुक और रोमांचक अद्यतन। यह कहानी आपके मोहक लेखन के साथ प्यारी और दिलचस्प है।

[Fantastic Four]

Absolutely wonderful, beautiful,very much hot, erotic and exciting update.This story is full of excitement and interesting with your seductive writings.

[sushilt20]

Waiting for update

[Kanika Kumari]

Beautiful story

[Vamp]

superb, wonderful, sexellent update.
bahot hi garam aur kamuk writings