Adultery Tale of a lustful revenge

[karansonkar]

So evil, I will let u know honest review and would appreciate if u take that as a feedback nothing else m really ur very big fan very very big fan m personally created this account just to write a review for u... So evil the thing is consistentcy u know at this platform there r many writer's many who r consistent they r not even 10% of ur level but they complete there story... Will u believe I personally know 7 people who use to read ur stories 1 were couple they use to enjoy but after ur last story "MUSKAN" ur reputation went down sorry to say that u know the reason y??

I'll let u know because u write story in such a way that u make people think even when they r busy u r such a gem writer I would say only two writers have such skills u and linking and he is also no 2 infront of u u don't have any competitor bro in ur skills but the thing is that u leave ur stories people get so annoyed the couple I was talking about and the rest guy's were like v won't read his stories again reason ?? Left all stories incomplete I was like he is really good writer but u break our heart brother by leaving stories incomplete see there are 2 way now first complete muskaan atleast finish her first sex with hariya or u can continue with this story and leave it again

My suggestion is stop writting I know v don't pay u and u entertain us but bro look even some stupid writers r coming with absolutely no sense no buildup but they r taking there story till sex so people read that ur stories r true addiction 1 guy out of 7 was like I really wasted my time and energy because of that evil 

If u want stop ur writing and i really say no one will care and if it's ur passion make ur audience feel confident in u complete muskaan bro rest it's called

And if u stop this story too v won't care u know y?
It's like that dialogue kisi ko itna na darao ki dar he khatam hojae so v don't even dear to loose u now... There r ample of writers whom people can support i would repeat not of ur skills but committed and dear u might have personal life and all v respect that but it's ur choice to write it and u asked u so that's on u now and this was the most honest opinion which u can get because 7 people 7 man sseeeveeennn I found were reading u so that's really a big thing for some hidden writer's people don't care about ur new stories most people want to read muskaan I would say the build up u gave to muskaan i challenge people here to bring 3 stories like that just 3 I bet 5k on that but incomplete 

I wrote my emotions out bro 

Rest ur call if u don't complete muskan sex stories than leave bro

Quit writing because m not someone who is just writing random comments m really ur fan and saying so 

Bye legend stop it now!

U were the best 
Bye bro ? ?

[Rana007]

This update is extremely hot and erotic. You are really rocking the forum.

[Sushmita Sharma]

Bahut badhiya ek kamuk aur exciting update. Bahut mazaa agaya yaar

[Romi]

Very much erotic and exciting update. Please upload more pictures of actress Sajal Ali

[Anju Ghosh]

Ashadaran, amazing update. Bahut khub writing.

[Sheuli Mala]

Bahut bahut hot update dala aapne yaar. Bahut hi kamuk tharika se chal rahi is kahaani

[Mousumi Hamid]

Wah! Bahad hi garam aur kamuk update

[Nobita]

No bhai esa ni h ....we really love ur story ...ur the very first writer jiski story mene pdhi or uske baad ur my favourite na jane kitne baar mene apki bade Ghar ki Bahu betiyan story pdhi but wo incomplete rhi uska dukh hua....and ur 2nd story koel wali wo bhi mene Kai baar pdhi ....I don't want u to stop this story but what I want is aap iss story ko complete kre or fr baki stories ko bhi ek accha conclusion de .

[Nayak singh]

Important

 So guys, recently i have been noticing decline in replies, likes & even views which makes me think if readers have lost intrest in this story? I'm not hungry for views & likes but replies is something i always lookup to whenever i post updates & unfortunately readers response recently has been too dull for my liking.

I don't know the solution but either i post only one update per week or just discontinue story altogether because i dont wanna continue it without people showing little to no intrest at all.

 Recently maine notice kiya hai ke likes, replies aur views kafi kam arhe hain kya main iska matlab ye samjhu ke logon ko is story men koi interest nahi raha? Mujhe views aur likes ki bhuk nahi hai lekin replies ka mujhe besabri se intizar rehta hai ke logon ka kya response rehta hai mere har post ke bad.

Ab iska samadhan ya to main har hafte sirf ek hi update dun ya fir story band hi kar dun kyunke main story ko logon ke intrest dikhaye bina continue karna nahi chahta.

Evil bhai personally mai aapke writing ka bahut bada fan aadmi hun Maine aapki sari stories padhi hai aur wo sari hi mast stories hai par mujhe jo personally sabse interesting lagi wo hai muskaan wali aapne story me jo plot banaya hai aur jo describe Kiya hai bilkul aaisa lagata hai jaise koe movie chal rahi hai samne .. par aapne jab wo story incomplete chodi sach bata raha hun bhai bahut disappoint huyi aisei gem story ko bich me chodna .. aap pls bhai is story ke sath us story ko bhi continue karte to maja aa jata atleast 1 update bhi weak me dete to kafi hai .baki aap ki marzi aapko jaisa sahi Lage baki aap is forum ke legend aadmi hain aapke compitition me koe nahi hai so don't worry about views bas aap story complete kijiye pls it's a humble request...

[Miss Lanka]

chamatkar update! lajawab,mast aur ekdom kamaal ka kahaani!! Hats off

[Sameena.]

बिल्कुल शानदार कहानी।

[Diva19]

ekdom jackass update! Like aur repu added yaar.

[Milky Aunty]

What an exciting update it is!!After this update.....I'm really excited for next update....agla bahot maza aane wala h

[Mohini Gupta]

bahut bahut shandaar,lajawab aur behad hi garam update! Really excellent and super exciting writings!

[Fanfunda]

aap such mein ek classic writer hain yaar, bahut bahut mast aur lajawab update dala aapne,bahut khoob

[Alexander the Great]

Absolutely marvelous and fabulous update! Superb! Fantastic and enticing writings!

[Anvesharonny]

I’ll give you my honest review as I am someone who loves your writing and regard you as the top writer on this forum. 
When I first started reading this story it made me crazy and I couldn’t stop reading it over and over again. Just the way you wrote the expression of Nusrat when she saw her old tormentor Raghu chacha after so many years. Up until the last update when Raghu chacha almost had her under her control. It was so kinky and felt like I’m watching a movie. 
But then I started to sense that the story is going to be involving other characters so early in the story which will make Raghu and Nusrat’s encounters mix with others - like her neighbour aunty which is not my favourite part. 
There are so many good stories end up losing its original plot when the main character, Raghu in this story, will be fucking her neighbour and she will just look and masturbate. 
For example there was Akmas story - a hot housewife and bahu ends up gets fucked by watchman and plumber but then the writer for no reason involved her old 50 year old sass and the next two months it was all about sass and watchman while Akmas just watches them and masturbates.
I just don’t think when an old horny man has a young beautiful lady to use and all he’s interested in fucking an old lady with no chemistry whatsoever. 
Another story Aslam ki Rand Dr Kamya was such a huge success because it was just about Aslam and Kamya. ASLAM fucked her in every update and readers loved it. That’s because the main focus was always on Kamya and Aslam was only interested to fuck her and make her his rand. 
Of course other characters can be added in the story for a little cocktail but before the readers actually get to see the full chemistry between the two main characters, the other character hijacks the whole story in its early stages. 

When you say people are not replying, I believe that’s because they are only interested in Nusrat and Raghu. I’m not getting any kinks seeing Raghu and Sudha Aunty. They can of course come later in the story but what I’ve thought this story to be and where I’m seeing it’s headed kind of loses interest. 

I don’t know if you have seen Japanese Jav porn but they are the epitome of kinkiness and horniness. It’s mostly about cheating wife and old man young girl kind of theme and only focus on two characters. The evil guy keeps coming back to house to fulfils his lust and the girl eventually gives up and becomes his whore to use any way he wants. 

Please forgive me if I’ve upset you with my review. Of course you’re the brain behind this hottest story and maybe you know what we don’t know and you may prove us all wrong by giving a whole different kinky surprise updates in the future. 

Please don’t close this story. It’s the best story I’ve ever red. Please consider my thoughts and disregard if you find this nonsense. 

From your honest reader. 
Regards. 

I have completely agree with your view.What I thought Raghu will seduce nusarat and she will become crazy for sex with Raghu following kinky update.
But what happened suddenly she got married,Raghu returned and had an affair with old lady something doesn't match up.
May be you have delayed marriage part and continued with Raghu nusart part before marriage would had much fun.After marriage she is not sexually happy with Kabir remembers her affair with Raghu and suddenly he appears then they started sexual affair behind Kabir's back would had fun,that's my point of view.

[Anvesharonny]

And evil bhai post one update a week make readers eagerly wait for next update,value your time and writings.You are legend.

[sushilt20]

Waiting for update

[Rizwana Hasan]

super duper hot story! bahut bahut garam aur kamuk writings!