[Renjith]

Super bro

[Isaac]

Excellent story... Enjoyed very much...

[manigopal]

Under moondru siru kathaigal I started this story as Bathilukku bathil but halfway through changed the name to oru manaiviyin thavippu through admin. In the posting of this story here I have added a 'extra' descriptions from the original story I wrote. Hence it will not be exactly the same as the copies you have. I intend to post a new story after this and not the other two stories I had written. Thank you for your continues support.

etharkum neenga itha parthaal nanraga irukum my backup @ கதைகளின் சங்கமம் - கதைகளின் சங்கமம்

since this is free hosted it will get down so wait until it opens :D

[game40it]

Super bro

Excellent story... Enjoyed very much...

etharkum neenga itha parthaal nanraga irukum my backup @ கதைகளின் சங்கமம் - கதைகளின் சங்கமம்

since this is free hosted it will get down so wait until it opens :D

Thank you all and happy that you all enjoyed reading the story. Have just started writing a new story and would post it soon under a new title. Thank you

[Renjith]

I am waiting

[enjyxpy]

அதீத அன்பின் காரணமாக உண்டாகும் பெண்ணின் கோபம் என்ன மாதிரியான விளைவுகளை உண்டு பண்ணும் என்பதற்கும் .. ஒரு கணவன் மனைவி எப்படி இருக்க வேண்டும் என்பதை மிக சிறப்பாக சித்தரித்த கதை .. பல முறை படித்தும் அலுக்கவில்லை.. இப்படி ஒரு அற்புதமான  கதை தந்ததற்கு நன்றி game40it

[shivakrishna]

One of the finest sex stories I have ever read....

Real life la oru thapu eppadi nadakum ... And oru wife pandra thappu oru family la yentha alavuku badhipu erpaduthum nu theliva soli irukanga....
Oru ponu thapu panita na adhu avala mattum Ila Ava purushan kozhanthainga Appa Amma nu antha kudumbathaiyae baadhikum....

Adha romba azhaga soli irundhenga sex mattum ilama husband and wife relationship nu azhaga irundhadhu....
Pana thapuku yellarukum dhandanai kedachiduchu....

Unga current story ana aval Avan purushan story Ku ippadi oru realistic aa ... Real life la wife appadi thapu Pana yena husband panuvaru and pengala verum kama porul aa mattum pakra Vikram nu yena agum...

Bhavani purushan .. bahvani aa yena Pana poranga nu pakalam....

[shivakrishna]

அதீத அன்பின் காரணமாக உண்டாகும் பெண்ணின் கோபம் என்ன மாதிரியான விளைவுகளை உண்டு பண்ணும் என்பதற்கும் .. ஒரு கணவன் மனைவி எப்படி இருக்க வேண்டும் என்பதை மிக சிறப்பாக சித்தரித்த கதை .. பல முறை படித்தும் அலுக்கவில்லை.. இப்படி ஒரு அற்புதமான  கதை தந்ததற்கு நன்றி game40it

Ama husband and wife oda pure relationship aa pathi azhaga soli irundharu... Intha Mathiri irukum nu tha na aval Avan purushan story aa padicha ... BT adhula konjam husband and wife relationship oda balance ilatha Mathiri irundhadhu....adha konjam feeling aa irundhadhu antha story la...

[KevinSkywalker]

Both are different core idea in the story build up. In this story wife wants to take revenge on husband for cheating. Once she realised revenge only hurts their relationship she ended it.

in aval avan purushan, wife wants to enjoy her sexual life. she is spoiling her life and family by trusting wrong person

[shivakrishna]

Both are different core idea in the story build up. In this story wife wants to take revenge on husband for cheating. Once she realised revenge only hurts their relationship she ended it.

in aval avan purushan, wife wants to enjoy her sexual life. she is spoiling her life and family by trusting wrong person

Yeah she is spoiling her life and her family too .... Since it is realistic natured story......so story nambara Mathiri finish agnum na Bhavani Ava husband aa kola panitu Vikram kooda poi seranum... Ila Bhavani husband Bhavani Pana thapuku avala kolanum Ila Vikram aa kolanum... Manichi accept panikara Mathiri vandhalo Ila bahavnai and vikaram relationship aa allow pandra Mathiri vandhalo Adhu avalo natural aa irukadhu ...
It have to end in someone's death..

[game40it]

Thank you all for your comments. This story was a short story so how everyone resolved their issues for done fairly early. However my new story is of longer duration (already it's reached twice the length of this story). How everyone resolved the conflict going on in their relationship would only be known at the end. Everyone then will live with the consequence of their actions. One thing for sure, it doesn't have to have a violent ending.

[enjyxpy]

Thank you all for your comments. This story was a short story so how everyone resolved their issues for done fairly early. However my new story is of longer duration (already it's reached twice the length of this story). How everyone resolved the conflict going on in their relationship would only be known at the end. Everyone then will live with the consequence of their actions. One thing for sure, it doesn't have to have a violent ending.

Wow .. thats gonna be much interesting to see what consequences they are going to face because of their actions.. good to hear that there is not violence. People who have done wrong have to repent for their actions.. hope the new story will also have a nice climax like this one. Thanks game40it  ;)

[Murugan]

Update podunga

[Murugan]

Updatea ilaya

[game40it]

Updatea ilaya

Bro intha kathai mudinthuvittathu. Naan ippothu aduththa kathai - Avan Aval Purushan endra thalaippil eluthi kondu irukken.

[manigopal]

?????

[Kannankrishnan]

Super story

[gymhotking]

Hot story....

[Jack195]

Very nice

[Black Mask VILLIAN]

இந்த கதை எழுதுனவர் கண்டிப்பா பாராட்டபட வேண்டியவர்......