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Adultery Tale of a lustful revenge
wah! bahut bahut garam update
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Loving story!
Bahot badhiya update!
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Aur intezar nahi hota... Fata fat dhamake dar sex lao bro.
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Stunning update! garam aur sexy writings.
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Another blockbuster update
DEATH IS JUST THE BEGINING.
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Congrats on 200k views already evil bhai
DEATH IS JUST THE BEGINING.
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Then evil bhai aap kabir ki choti bahan ko introduce Kara sakte hain jo abhi just 18 ki huwi ho aur hostel se ghar holiday me aayi ho aur kafi Jyada gussel aur ghamandi aur nakchadhi ladki ho aur sath me andar se innocent bhi ho..ye sir ak idea hai mere taraf se baki aap to guru hain is field ke to aapko Jo thik Lage waise kahani ko aage bdhayee ..
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(24-06-2024, 12:35 PM)THE EVIL Wrote: Part 13

Nusrat ki ankhen yun lete lete badi hojati hain. Uske pure sharir men ek ajeeb si vibration ekdum se hoti jisse o puri hil jati hai. Uski kunwari chut ne aisa ahsas kabhi nahi kiya tha. Uffff ye kaisi feeling hai aur kaise o insab chizon se bachi rahi. Obviously o aisa dharm aur khandan se taluk rakhti hai jinme ye sab kafi had tak forbidden hai lekin o akhir kar ek ladki thi usne kabhi na kabhi to ye experience karna hi tha.

Nusrat ki ankhen ab apni kunwari chut par lage huwe us bade aur garam chiz par nazar dalti hain aur bapre ye kya raghu chacha ka oo oooo oo bada sa ling uffff kitna kala hai aur unlike mslms uske tope par skin chadi huwi hai uffff akhir kar o ek gair mazhbi jo hain. Uski pinkish chut par raghu chacha ka o kala lauda uffff behad kamuk lag raha tha.

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Nusrat bhi feel karti hai ke uski yoni jaise tadap rahi thi raghu chacha ke us bade kale ling ko feel karne ke liye. Lekin lekin ye to galat hai na sirf raghu chacha ek gair mazhbi admi hai balke unke ghar ke naukar ke sath sath ek adhed umar bhi hai. Kahan raghu chacha aur kahan uska honewala shohar kabir jo behad gora chitta aur handsome bhi hai.

Nusrat ka jism uska sath nahi de raha tha ya yun kahen raghu chacha ne uspar ek jadu sa kiya tha. Otherwise uske jaisi shareef aur hayadar ladki raghu chacha ke changul kaise fans jati?? Wahin raghu chacha to pagal hochuka tha apne kale laude ko is bade mslm gharki itni khubsurt kunwari ladki ki behad saaf aur pinkish chut par rakhkar.

Uske maze ki seema nahi thi is waqt. Usne bhi kabhi nahi socha tha jis ladki ko choti si badi hoti huwi dekhta aya tha ekdin usi ladki ki chut par apna lauda ragad raha hoga. Raghu chacha dhire dhire apna lauda upar niche kar raha tha is waqt. Use pata tha use behad ahista se ye karna hoga warna nusrat itna zorse chillayegi ke sare ghar ko to kya sare shehar ko pata chal jayega.

Raghu usiliye firse nusrat ki nabhi par chumne lagta hai jhuk kar. Nusrat bhi firse apni ankhen band kar leti hai aur is ajeeb se sukoon ko enjoy karne lagti hai lekin raghu chacha ko awzar uski yoni parr uffff kitna garam aur bada hai. Kya kabir ka bhi itna hi bada hoga ufff uski kya halath hogi.

Yahi sab sochte huwe nusrat leti huwi thi ke uska mobile bajne lagta hai. Mobile ke ring ki awaz sunkar raghu chacha to nahi hatata lekin nusrat apna hath aage badhakar mobile dekhne lagti hai uspar uske kisii saheli ka call arha tha lekin raghu chacha jo kar raha tha uske chalte huwe o call ignore kar deti hai.

Ab usme nusrat ki kya galti o to zindagi ke anokhe aur chupe huwe raaz enjoy ka rahi thi jinse o aajtak vanchit thi.

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Tabhi call bhi kat jaati hai lekin dubara se call bajne lagti hai. Nusrat abki baar call silent kar deti hai raghu chacha ye sab dekhkar khush hojata hai use pata tha nusrat ab khul rahi thi o jhijak nahi rahi thi kahin na kahin o bhi chah rahi thi ke raghu chacha uske sath ye sab kare.

Inhin sab men takreeban 5 minutes baad bedroom ka door koi khatkhatane lagta hai. Jiski sunkar raghu chacha bhi uth khada hota hai. Nusrat jo ankhen band karke leti huwi thi apni chut aur chuche chupa kar door ki taraf dekhne lagti hai. Raghu chacha ek baar nusrat ki taraf dekhkar window ke pas jakar bahar dekhne ki koshish karne lagta hai ke kon hai.

Wahin nusrat hadbadate huwe bed se utar kar jaldi jaldi apne kapde pehne lagti hai. Raghu bhi dara huwa bahar dekhne ki koshish men laga huwa tha tabhi...

"Nusrat nusrat darwaza kholo"

Awaz sunkar raghu chacha aur nusrat dono samjh jaate hain ke ye to munir shah hai. Nusrat apne abbu ki awaz sunkar behad dar jati hai ab o kya kre uska baap literally bahar khada hai aur o is waqt apne kamre men hai unke ghar ke nauakr ke sath o bhi shadi ke ekdin pehle.

Raghu chacha bhi munir shah ki awaz sunkar dar jaata hai isliye o jaldi se jakar ek taraf chup jata hai. Wahin nusrat jo abtak kapde pehan chuki thi o raghu chacha ko chupa ddekhkar thodi himmat karte huwe door kholti hai aur samne uske abbu khade the.

Nusrat...aa aabbuuu aaap is waqtt??

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Munir...nusrat darwaza kholne men itni der??

Itna bolkar o andar aata hai aur idar udar dekhne lagta hai. Aisa nahi tha ke usko aisa koi shak tha lekin o uski beti ko ache se janta tha ke o hosakta hai kisi pareshani men ho isliye idar udar nazar daal raha tha...

Munir...kya huwa beti tumne jawab nahi diya itni der kyun lagi darwaza kholne men??

Nusrat...oo o abbuu main oo washroom mem thii oo isliye itni der lag gayi...

Munir...hmm acha tum soyi nahi abhi tak kal pata hai na jaldi uthna hai beti..

Nusrat.. haa abbu so hi rahi thi.

Munir..hmm thodi der ruk jawo beti o tumari ammi ko kuch baat karni thi tumse o arhi hogi...

Nusrat...ammii??

Munir...haan ammi ko..

Nusrat ko paseena ane lagta hai aur o ruk ruk kar raghu chacha jahan chupe huwe hain wahan dekhne lagti hai jise uske abbu somehow notice kar lete hain aur...

Munir...kya huwa betii kuch pareshani hai??

Itna bolkar o udar jane lagte hain. Nusrat ki to hawa tight hojati hai.

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ab o kya jawab degi uske abbu jinse usne ye baat chupa rakhi hai kya kahegi o ke raghu chacha is waqt yahan kya kar rahe hain o bhi der raat? Jaise jaise uske abbu ke kadam udar badh rahe the waise nusrat ke dil ki dhadkan pure ufaan par thi. Usko paseena bhi kafi ane laga tha. Idar raghu chacha ki sitti pitti gul hochuki thi o samajh chuka tha ke uski to khair nahi thi ab kyunke o is chiz explain kar hi nahi sakta tha.

Akhir o kaise explain karega ke o is waqt nusrat ko kal dulhan banne wali hai uske kamre itni raat ko kar kya raha hai o bhi is tarha chupkar ?? Jaise hi munir shah wahan pohnchta hai tabhi darwaze par nusrat ki maa aajati hai.

Fairda...Ji aap abhi tak yahan hai salman aapko dhund raha tha jayiye aap main bhi aati hun thodi der men...

Munir shah wahan ek baar dekhkar hat jaata hai.

Munir...haa o main bhul gaya o kal ke bare men discuss karna tha ek baar acha aap dono maa beti apni batien khatam karke jaldi se nusrat sune do usko kal jaldi bhi uthna hai.

Farida..haa aap chaliye main aati hun thodi der men....

O fir wahan se chala jata hai aur idar nusrat aur uski maa kuch batien karne men lag jate hain. O bed ke dusri side face karke baithe isliye raghu chacha ko bhi chupi huwi jaga se nikalne ka mauka mil jata hai isliye o jaldi se bahar akar ek baar nusrat ko dekhta hai aur wahan se dhire se chala jaata hai aapna man markar.

Farida...o kya tha tumne awaz suni nusrat??

Nusrat...kk konssii awazz? Nahii too..

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Farida...pata nahi kuch to awaz ayii..khair..

Fir wapas se dono apni baton men lag jaati hain. Raghu chacha bhi apni kismat ko koste huwe wahan se chala aya tha use pata tha ke uske hath se o chance gaya ab to koi na koi us room men aate hi rahega. Use bada gussa arha tha lekin o zabardsti bhi nahi kar sakta tha. Apni futi kismat ko koste huwe o chala jata hai.

Agla din nusrat ki shadi ka. Ek behad important din uski zindagi ka. O dulhan banne jarhi thi kabir ki. Aisa din jiska usko besabri se intizar tha. O akhir kar kabir ki honi jarhi thi. O aur kabir aajke baad ek sath zindagi guzarne wale the. Subha subha shadi ki tayyariyan dhum dham se shuru hojati hain. Sare log kam men lage huwe the koi kisi chiz ki kasrat nahi rakh raha tha akhir itni badi shadi jo thi.

Subha ki choti moti kasmo ke baad nusrat dulhan ki tarha tayyar hojati hai. Tayyar honeke baad kya bala ki khubsurt lag rahi thi nusrat. Aise jaise koi jannat se utri huwi hoor pari ho. Aisa ke koi bhi dekhe to uska dil machla jaye.

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Udar ghnte baad kabir ki bhi baraat aajati hai nusrat ke ghar. Aisa karke dono stage par pohnch jate hain. Wahan un dono ek parde ke piche rakha jata hai aur fir nikah ka program shuru hota hai.

Insab ke bich bheed men raghu chacha khada dekh raha tha nusrat ko. Wahi nusrat jo dulhan bani hai aur kal raat usne lagbhag usko apne niche le hi aya tha aur billi shadi se pehli hi mari jati lekin shayad kismat ko bhi ye manzur nahi tha. Wahin bheed ke bich koi tha jise raghu dekh raha tha aur o shaks bhi raghu ko bade gusse se dekh raha tha.

Thodi der baad nikah ka function hojata hai aur logon ko khana khilaya jata hai. Dulha dulhan stage baithe huwe guest ke tohfe aue wishes receive kar rahe the. Dono ki jodi badi hi khusburt lag rahi thi. Ho bhi kyun na akhir itne bade khandan se jo taluk rakhte the. Unke aas paas rishtedar daron me sath gharwale bade hi sajhe dhaje huwe the.

Function khatam honeke baad bidayi ka waqt aata hai nusrat apne gharwale aur rishtedaron se alwida lekar kabir ke sath uski car men baithkar apne sasural ke liye chali jaati hai.

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Kabir....Nusrat Nusrat...sogyii kyaa??

Nusrat apni ankhen kholte huwe baith jati hai...

Nusrat...huhh?? Haa o kabiirr nind lag gayi thiii...

Kabir...acha maine naha liya hai tum bhi naha lo ek baar...

Nusrat...haa tum sojawo main nahakr sojaungi...

Kabir...pakka na??

Nusrat..haan kabiirrr...

Nusrat fir towel sab lekar bathroom chali jaati hai. Wahan o mirror ke samne apna sar pakad leti hai tabse o uski zindagi ke ek kale raaz ke bare men soch rahi thi jo usne shadi se pehle ek tarha se raghu chacha ko allow kiya khud use pata nahi tha kyun?

Nusrat ke pas bhi uska jawab nahi tha. O ab apne sare kapde utar kar shower lene lagti hai. Usko shower lete huwe raghu chacha aur sudha aunty ki harkton ke bare men yaad aata hai. O to in chizon ko bhul jana chahti thi lekin ye raghu chacha pata nahi kahan se wapas aagye uski achi bhali zindagi men. Aye to aye ye wapas se kaise usko ye sab dikh raha hai use kuch samajh nahi arha tha.

O kapde nikal kar bilkul nangi hojati hai aur shower on karte hi pani ki bunde uske gore sharir par girne lagta hai. Ek sukoon use milta hai jab pani ki bunden uske ang ang ko chu kar biche beh rahi thi.

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Thodi der pehle kabir ne use kitna ache se pyar kiya. Kitna khayal rakhta hai kabir uska. Uske pyar karne ke tarike men kitna cutness hai. Usko o thodi bhi taklif hone nahi deta.

Kabir ka o kitna gora hai lekinnn....nusrat apni soch ko jhidkte huwe wapas se shower lene lagti hai. Uske baad o khud ko poch kar wapas bed par jakar sojati hai. Agle din kabir office chala jata hai apne time nusrat bhi apne ghar ke kaam men lag jati hai. Dopehr ke waqt nusrat khana banakr free huwi hi thi ke usko Mr. Khanna ke chat par kuch halchal ki awaz aati hai.

Halanki o Mr. Khanna ke ghar par isse pehle itna kabhi bhi gaur nahi karti thi lekin jabse raghu chacha wala incident huwa tha na jane kyun nusrat kuch zyada hi chaukanna hogyi thi. O jaldi se apni chat par dabe paun wahan pohnch jati hai. Wahan o dekhti hai sudha aunty khadi huwi kapde sukha rahi thi lekin wahan o akeli nahi thi unke sath raghu chacha bhi khade the bilkul unke piche.

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Uffff ye kya scene hai. Raghu chacha akhir ka kar kya rahe hain. Itne bade admi ki sanskari awrat ko yun besharm bana diya tha unhone lekin kaise?? Nusrat ek aur chiz bhi notice karti hai ke sudha aunty aaj peticot aur blouse men thi aur unko dekhkar lag raha tha ke unko isse koi pareshani nahi hai.

Nusrat unki batien sunneki koshish karne lagti hai jo halki halki aa bhi rahi thi.

Sudha...raghu jii aap badee hi badtamiz ho nitin aata hoga...

Raghu...sudha teri jaisi maal ke liye to badtamiz hona hi padega na. Tere pati jaisa dheela to main hun nahii...

Sudha...khabar dar mere pyare patidev ke bare men kuch bhi kaha to main chad jaungi tum par...

Raghu....acha to kisne roka hai chad jaa mujhpar sudha ranii hahaha...

Sudha..main chadkar aapko marungi raghu ji...

Raghu...mujhe maregi ya mujhse marwayegi..???

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Sudha...raghu jii aap bhi naa

Itna bolkar o bhagne lagti hai lekin raghu uski kamar kaske pakad leta hai aur use utha kar khud hi use niche lejata hai. Idar nusrat ye sab dekh aur sunkar puri tarha hairan thi use ye sab abhi bhi digest nahi horha tha ke sudha jaisi shareef awrat aise raghu chacha ke sath kaise o more importantly itne jaldi??

O wahin khadi khadi soch rahi thi ke use mr. Khanna ke gharse ajeeb ajeeb si awazen aane lagti hain o pretty much samjh jati hai ke ye jaisi awazen hai isliye apne mun par hath rakhte huwe wahan se niche bhag aati hai. Ufff ye firse use kya horha tha. Ye kaisi feeling jisse o dobara rubru horhi thi. Raghu chacha is waqt zarur sudha aunty ki na jane kis tarha se lll lee rahee hongee???

Isi bich nusrat hall men akar deewar ke sahare khadi thi. Is waqt usne ek punjabi suit pehna huwa tha. Upar terrece par itna kuch sunne aur dekhne ke baad nusrat ki sansen tez thi aur uska ek hath dress ke upar se uski chut ke kareeb.

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To be continued...

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Arrow  So guys, recently i have been noticing decline in replies, likes & even views which makes me think if readers have lost intrest in this story? I'm not hungry for views & likes but replies is something i always lookup to whenever i post updates & unfortunately readers response recently has been too dull for my liking.

I don't know the solution but either i post only one update per week or just discontinue story altogether because i dont wanna continue it without people showing little to no intrest at all.

Arrow  Recently maine notice kiya hai ke likes, replies aur views kafi kam arhe hain kya main iska matlab ye samjhu ke logon ko is story men koi interest nahi raha? Mujhe views aur likes ki bhuk nahi hai lekin replies ka mujhe besabri se intizar rehta hai ke logon ka kya response rehta hai mere har post ke bad.

Ab iska samadhan ya to main har hafte sirf ek hi update dun ya fir story band hi kar dun kyunke main story ko logon ke intrest dikhaye bina continue karna nahi chahta.
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3. Game of lust
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5. Muskan
6. Tale of a lustful revenge
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(26-06-2024, 11:29 AM)THE EVIL Wrote: Important

Arrow  So guys, recently i have been noticing decline in replies, likes & even views which makes me think if readers have lost intrest in this story? I'm not hungry for views & likes but replies is something i always lookup to whenever i post updates & unfortunately readers response recently has been too dull for my liking.

I don't know the solution but either i post only one update per week or just discontinue story altogether because i dont wanna continue it without people showing little to no intrest at all.

Arrow  Recently maine notice kiya hai ke likes, replies aur views kafi kam arhe hain kya main iska matlab ye samjhu ke logon ko is story men koi interest nahi raha? Mujhe views aur likes ki bhuk nahi hai lekin replies ka mujhe besabri se intizar rehta hai ke logon ka kya response rehta hai mere har post ke bad.

Ab iska samadhan ya to main har hafte sirf ek hi update dun ya fir story band hi kar dun kyunke main story ko logon ke intrest dikhaye bina continue karna nahi chahta.

Nahi evil bhai aisiii baat nahi hai aap pls story ko continue rakhiye.. bahut hi mast story hai yee hamari taraf se full response rahega absee aur week me 2 update rakhiye ak bahut kam ho jayegaa plsss bhai..
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(26-06-2024, 11:29 AM)THE EVIL Wrote: Important

Arrow  So guys, recently i have been noticing decline in replies, likes & even views which makes me think if readers have lost intrest in this story? I'm not hungry for views & likes but replies is something i always lookup to whenever i post updates & unfortunately readers response recently has been too dull for my liking.

I don't know the solution but either i post only one update per week or just discontinue story altogether because i dont wanna continue it without people showing little to no intrest at all.

Arrow  Recently maine notice kiya hai ke likes, replies aur views kafi kam arhe hain kya main iska matlab ye samjhu ke logon ko is story men koi interest nahi raha? Mujhe views aur likes ki bhuk nahi hai lekin replies ka mujhe besabri se intizar rehta hai ke logon ka kya response rehta hai mere har post ke bad.

Ab iska samadhan ya to main har hafte sirf ek hi update dun ya fir story band hi kar dun kyunke main story ko logon ke intrest dikhaye bina continue karna nahi chahta.

I’ll give you my honest review as I am someone who loves your writing and regard you as the top writer on this forum. 
When I first started reading this story it made me crazy and I couldn’t stop reading it over and over again. Just the way you wrote the expression of Nusrat when she saw her old tormentor Raghu chacha after so many years. Up until the last update when Raghu chacha almost had her under her control. It was so kinky and felt like I’m watching a movie. 
But then I started to sense that the story is going to be involving other characters so early in the story which will make Raghu and Nusrat’s encounters mix with others - like her neighbour aunty which is not my favourite part. 
There are so many good stories end up losing its original plot when the main character, Raghu in this story, will be fucking her neighbour and she will just look and masturbate. 
For example there was Akmas story - a hot housewife and bahu ends up gets fucked by watchman and plumber but then the writer for no reason involved her old 50 year old sass and the next two months it was all about sass and watchman while Akmas just watches them and masturbates.
I just don’t think when an old horny man has a young beautiful lady to use and all he’s interested in fucking an old lady with no chemistry whatsoever. 
Another story Aslam ki Rand Dr Kamya was such a huge success because it was just about Aslam and Kamya. ASLAM fucked her in every update and readers loved it. That’s because the main focus was always on Kamya and Aslam was only interested to fuck her and make her his rand. 
Of course other characters can be added in the story for a little cocktail but before the readers actually get to see the full chemistry between the two main characters, the other character hijacks the whole story in its early stages. 

When you say people are not replying, I believe that’s because they are only interested in Nusrat and Raghu. I’m not getting any kinks seeing Raghu and Sudha Aunty. They can of course come later in the story but what I’ve thought this story to be and where I’m seeing it’s headed kind of loses interest. 

I don’t know if you have seen Japanese Jav porn but they are the epitome of kinkiness and horniness. It’s mostly about cheating wife and old man young girl kind of theme and only focus on two characters. The evil guy keeps coming back to house to fulfils his lust and the girl eventually gives up and becomes his whore to use any way he wants. 

Please forgive me if I’ve upset you with my review. Of course you’re the brain behind this hottest story and maybe you know what we don’t know and you may prove us all wrong by giving a whole different kinky surprise updates in the future. 

Please don’t close this story. It’s the best story I’ve ever red. Please consider my thoughts and disregard if you find this nonsense. 

From your honest reader. 
Regards. 
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you are amazing writer...
keep going...
replies and comments will flow like a hurricane on your stories evil bro....
we are eagerly waiting..
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You're good writer
Countinue the story evil
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It is really a very nice story. Your amazing and thrilling writing is very much interesting and enjoyable! Please keep going buddy. clps clps clps
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Incredibly exciting writing! I am very much pleased for reading this story.
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अविश्वसनीय रूप से रोमांचक और कामुक कहानी! यह कहानी कामुकता और उत्तेजना से भरी है।
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chamatkar aur charming update
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