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Great comeback bro.
As I already said, your way of drafting the story is awesome.
I just want to get clarified couple of points here.
As you mentioned that Ganga has kissed or forced to kiss and got kissed by local with zero interest, below scenes are not got connected.
1. If she has no interest on him/them, then why did she switched the seat in the theatre?
2. What happened for an hour after the movie ended?
I hope you do have better explanation for this!
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Cant wait to read what happened next.
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Waare waahhh.. you are exceptional writer. no doubt.
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Super interesting update. waiting to read how they enjoyed and planned the plot to fool her husband and cops.
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woww.. how i missed this story for son long
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Hi kk,
Ganga knew srini is never going to confront her. She witnessed javed and chacha over powering her husband. No wonder her pussy got wet over their molestation. Instead of abusing her, javed left Ganga as per their accords. And it worked.
She is doing this because, thinking it's one time affair. Once a wanker is always a wanker, a bitch is always a bitch. She thinks srinu will have no idea what had happened. Even if he knows, she believes that he won't confront her. After all they are together as couple for a long time, so she knows him very well.
But I would be disappointed, when eventually ganga opens up to srinu seeing her hubbys face and if she tells a another story. And if they reconcile as though nothing has happened. Or if these are simply srini's imagination and nothing else. Then my boy, that would be devastating for the readers.
Why everything needs to end well??
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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Bro don't listen to suggestions, that's only going to dilute your story.
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Whatever the ending is whether it be her cheating her husband or she went through the most traumatic incident of her life or nothing happened.All the three are possible so just go with what you already decided than changing based on some comments, because till now the story is from Srinu's perspective and imagination but it might be drastically different from what Ganga went through.
So as readers we should just enjoy the story rather than telling the author how we want the story to end.
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Wonderful update.
Next one should be top class erotica and true first night for Ganga :)
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Srinu will soon end up landing in a mental asylam or in prison.