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06-06-2024, 07:04 PM
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Please note that this story is a slow burner which takes time to build the characters and settings before any action happens.
My aim is to explore how women in otherwise "happy marriages" end up cheating than the usual "Whore wife who cheated because that guy had bigger dick" stories. Such cases are happening all over and we read or hear about it every now and then.
Please take patience and let me know how you liked this story
All pictures generated by AI. Any resemblance to real person in coincidental
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A wave of apprehension gnawed at Kavya as she left her one-and-a-half-year-old son, Nirav, at her mother's house and hailed a ride share. This was the first time she had entrusted his care to someone else, and the thought of being away from him for four days made her heart ache. She worried about how much he might cry for her, even though her mother was close to him.
Priya's words echoed in her mind, "Do it for yourself, Kavya. You also need to take a break from your motherly duties." Priya was right. Ever since she got pregnant, Kavya's life had revolved entirely around her baby, leaving no time for herself.
Her husband of six years, Harshit, had refused to drop her at the train station, citing an important meeting. She knew, as a senior manager, he could have easily rescheduled it, but his displeasure at her leaving was clear. Kavya was determined to attend her colleague's wedding. She needed a break from everything, including Harshit's house.
As she reached the train station, she found Suhail already waiting. He was a fresh graduate, just 22, and looked like a teenager. Next came Priya with her husband, Matthew. Kavya envied Priya's chic style and the freedom her husband allowed her. Priya and Matthew, who had met on Tinder and married, shared Instagram stories filled with their adventures and Priya's fashionable outfits. Even now, Priya wore stylish cotton pyjamas perfect for the train journey. Her luggage bag was twice the size of Kavya's.
Noticing Kavya's unease, Priya reassured her that everything would be fine. Soon, Ravish joined them. At 28, the same age as Priya, he was their team leader. Slightly overweight but always supportive, he was the mother hen of the team, never micromanaging them.
The train was about to leave, but their last co-passenger hadn't arrived yet, and he wasn't answering his phone. The group grew tense, unsure whether to board the train or wait. Suddenly, they saw a figure sprinting towards them. It was Manikandan, or Mani for short. Like Suhail, he was a fresher, but at 25, he had taken a different path, studying for a diploma and working various jobs before venturing into IT.
The team breathed a collective sigh of relief. Mani was the heartbeat of their team, always bringing fun and energy to the office. His carefree attitude had delayed his graduation, but he remained unapologetically himself. Mani immediately hugged Matthew, chatting like old friends. Kavya noticed how comfortable Priya's husband was with her travelling with three men. When Kavya had considered cancelling, it was Priya who had insisted that she come along.
Soon they boarded the train and settled into their seats. They pulled out a deck of Uno cards and started playing, which quickly led to lots of arguments and laughter. Kavya felt a rush of excitement and nostalgia. It had been over a decade since she travelled by train, as her family usually opted for flights and cars.
Their destination was a small village far from any airport or major station. The closest point was a nature reserve that had recently gained popularity on Instagram. Unable to book direct tickets, they had to leave much earlier than the wedding date.
"Kavya, the train has started, but your mind is still at home," laughed Priya, noticing her lost expression.
"I don't know, but I'm getting a bad feeling," replied Kavya. "Leaving Harshit and Nirav for the first time..."
"It's okay, Kavya," said Ravish. "You deserve this break. Don't worry, they will be fine."
"It's just that he doesn't know I'm going to the resort," Kavya said quietly. "He thinks we'll be gone for four days just for the wedding."
"Why didn't you tell him?" exclaimed Suhail.
"Well, when I mentioned the wedding, the only thing he asked was what about Nirav," Kavya explained. "And when I said my mom would take care of him, he got upset that I discussed it with her before him."
"But still, you should have informed him about the resort," said Ravish.
Kavya looked at Priya, hoping for a different answer. Priya shrugged, "Well, it was Matthew's idea to book a resort instead of spending all three days in the village."
"What should I do?" Kavya asked. "Should I call him and tell him now?"
"Well, technically you did not mislead him or lie to him. You are going away for the wedding and if he can’t really hold the conversation, you can’t discuss the details with him. I’d say hold it over him instead should the need ever arise." interjected Mani, who had been quiet until then.
"Well, that is an idea!" added Priya. "I agree sharing this now makes no sense. There will be an argument, you will spoil your mood."
"What if he finds out?" wondered Kavya out aloud.
"Don't worry, we won't post any pictures on Instagram or WhatsApp that have your face in them," said Priya. "That way, he won't know anything."
Kavya bit her lip. It wasn't a simple thing. Harshit wasn't the patriarchal type. She remembered how he allowed her to wear sexy dresses and go to clubs with her girlfriends during the early days of their marriage, which even her conservative parents didn't allow. He was as open-minded as Matthew.
Also, Harshit often joked that Instagram was like Twitter for people who couldn't read. He didn't follow any of her friends, so she felt safe.
"Okay, Kavya, I want you to get up and put your hands on your heart to take a pledge," said Priya. Kavya complied.
Priya started, "Repeat after me: In the next four days, I won't think about Nirav or Harshit. The only person that will matter is me, and I'll enjoy it like I'm fresh out of college."
"Should I?" asked Kavya nervously.
"Of course you should," said Mani. "Otherwise, you might as well get off at the next station. What's the use of going on vacation if you can't relax and enjoy yourself?"
"I guess it's too late now," smiled Kavya.
As she closed her eyes, she felt an energy rush through her body, and the word "vacation" seemed like a luxury. She promised herself that for the next few days, nothing else would matter, and she would enjoy every moment
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Awesome, Two women and four men.
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Kavya gonna enjoy the young dicks and uncountable orgasms.
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Great start continue this story
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And hope you update today can't wait
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Kavya is going to get the best orgasm of her life this time with all her holes filled with monsters. Awesome
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07-06-2024, 11:08 AM
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The dinner trolley came, and everyone was busy eating, but Kavya was still pondering the fact that she hadn't informed Harshit. After dinner, she excused herself to the toilet and checked her phone. There were no notifications. She opened WhatsApp and saw that her message "Boarded train. See you" to Harshit had a blue tick. He had read it but hadn't replied.
She wanted to call her mom, but it was already 10:05, and this was the time Nirav would be too cranky to sleep. Sleeping without his mom for the first time, hearing her voice might only agitate him. Dejected, Kavya went to the door of the railway car. The cold air hit her face, but there was something about it that made her smile. She decided to stand there until the next station, letting the air clear her mind.
While she was lost in her thoughts, she felt a camera flash. She turned to find Mani standing with his phone, grinning at her. He looked at the screen, and his jaw dropped.
"Wow," he said, looking surprised. Kavya was stunned by his reaction, thinking maybe her picture looked bad. She stood there for some time in silence while Mani admired the photo. Then he showed it to her. It was perfect! Her hair was flying in the wind, the background blurred due to the speed of the train, her body prominently displayed with her dress highlighting her features. Her face had a melancholic smile that added to her allure. It was a million emotions frozen in time.
"My masterpiece," said Mani, breaking the trance. Kavya nodded. Ever since they had joined the company, Mani would offer to take pictures of her, edit them, and send them back. She liked how he openly admired her beauty and praised her. He did the same for Priya, so it never felt inappropriate.
"This one needs zero editing. You could hang it in your living room," he added.
"Thank you, Mani," said Kavya happily. "You are a good photographer."
"With a woman as beautiful as you, photography comes naturally," replied Mani with a wink.
They both returned to their seats, smiling. Mani always knew how to make her smile, both at the office and through messages. Since Harshit often worked late, Kavya would be bored after putting Nirav to bed. Mani would message her around 10:30, and they would chat and laugh. He always ended by praising her looks. The more she blushed, the more he praised her beauty and femininity, making her evenings pleasant.
The group set up their sleepers and began to doze off. As the train passed through a city, mobile internet returned, and she received a notification. She opened it excitedly, thinking it was Harshit, but it was the photo Mani took with the caption "SAD ANGLE."
Kavya laughed. Mani often called her an "angel," but his bad English made him type "angle." She teased him back, asking if it was an acute angle or an obtuse angle.
They all slept and reached the station the next morning. The resort had sent a Jeep for pickup. After a tough one-hour journey through unpaved roads, they reached the resort. It was an amazing place with giant trees surrounding the house and a small river flowing in front. They had booked two rooms, one for the boys and one for the girls. After the tiring journey, they needed a rest.
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Very good start. I think i have read some of your earlier works
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07-06-2024, 02:56 PM
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I don't know why, mostly the authors never comment or encourage other writers. But the authors expect comments and all sort of things for their thread. How selfish??
You broke the trend, thumbs-up. I came here reading your comments. I like your username Madiha. I have a past with that name.
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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07-06-2024, 03:05 PM
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Hi madiha,
I like your casting of the characters, you have one from every R.....on. Are Priya-mathew interfaith? Then thumbs-up. Thats how friends are made. Realistic. This suggests that we are from same part of the country..
Premise is promising, keep it simple, keep it relatable. Tease the readers, Don't introduce an Alpha male and extreme cuckoldry . Keep posting.
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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07-06-2024, 03:54 PM
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(07-06-2024, 02:56 PM)Hornytamilan23 Wrote: I don't know why, mostly the authors never comment or encourage other writers. But the authors expect comments and all sort of things for their thread. How selfish??
You broke the trend, thumbs-up. I came here reading your comments. I like your username Madiha. I have a past with that name.
I've no problems in commenting in other threads. In fact In Literotica, my editor loved my characters and ended up writing a story based on my character in Australia..
I'll read your story when i get time. I need a proper setting to do that
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(07-06-2024, 03:05 PM)Hornytamilan23 Wrote: Hi madiha,
I like your casting of the characters, you have one from every R.....on. Are Priya-mathew interfaith? Then thumbs-up. Thats how friends are made. Realistic. This suggests that we are from same part of the country..
Premise is promising, keep it simple, keep it relatable. Tease the readers, Don't introduce an Alpha male and extreme cuckoldry . Keep posting.
My story is more on exploring how supposedly happy wife cheat . Priya and Matthew met on tinder so they are the last to look at caste/religion.. i didn't want any religion based fetishes but just about group of IT workers who ended as friends
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(06-06-2024, 09:58 PM)Gitaranjan Wrote: Awesome, Two women and four men.
Three men .. unless you want to add another character
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07-06-2024, 08:45 PM
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(07-06-2024, 03:57 PM)madiha.agarwal Wrote: My story is more on exploring how supposedly happy wife cheat . Priya and Matthew met on tinder so they are the last to look at caste/religion.. i didn't want any religion based fetishes but just about group of IT workers who ended as friends Bro, I have many fetishes. But religion is certainly not among them. I too meant the same, tried to appreciate your forward thinking.
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The boys should fuck her in her marital bed and every room of her house.
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Amazing one. Will kavya return home with seeds of a bastard child in her womb. waiting to see.
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(07-06-2024, 03:59 PM)madiha.agarwal Wrote: Three men .. unless you want to add another character
how about, resort manager
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