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Adultery Manasi fas gayi jaal me...
#1
Hello friends !!!!

Me ye jo kahani likhane ja rahi hu wo puri tarah se sach hai.
Ye ghatana meri ek dost ke sath huyi hai wahi me aap sabko batane wali hu. Me iss kahani me apne taraf se kuch cheeje dalne wali hu taki story aur jyada romanchak ho sake Aur waise bhi kahani me thoda bahut mirch masala to chahiye na yaar tabhi to maza aayega. 

So gyus ye meri pehli story hai jo main likhne ja rahi hu. Mujhase agar koi galti ho gayi to please maf kijiye ga Kyonki pehli bar me kahani likhane likh rahi hun..
Ye ek aisi ladki ki kahani hai jise duniyadari ki koi samajh nahi hai, ye ladki bahut sidhi sadhi hai ya yu kahu ki kuch jarurat se jyada hi bholi hai.
Kaha konsi bat bol ni hai ye ise jaldi samaj nahi ata aur upar se ye dikhane me bhi kafi khubsurat hai.  Uske issi bhole bhale swabhav ke karan uske sath kya kya hota hai ye main is kahani me bataungi... 
Aur ha personal reasons ke wajah se me apne dost ka aur baaki ke logon ka naam yaha par change karne wali hu. So please don't mind.



Ye kahani Part A to Part Z me complete karungi bas aap logon ka sath chahiye.

Kahani jald hi shuru hogi.....
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#2
Good luck keep it up
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#3
Good start
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#4
Go ahead. Looking forward to unfold the journey .
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#7
Hmm post next update
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#8
Nice start
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#9
To chaliye dosto kahani shuru karte hai.
Meri ye kahani Adultery + incest theme par aadharit hai

Part :A - Introduction 

Pahle is kahani ke main characters ke bare me janate hai

*Manasi - age 18 saal ( yaani main)
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*Pratap - age 46 saal (mere papa)
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*Pramila - age 45 saal (meri mammi)
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*Kamal - age 48 saal (Makan Maalik)
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*Rashmi - age 44 saal (Kamal ki wife)
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Inke alawa agar kahani me kisi ki entry hui to Apko uske bare me jankari mil jayegi....

Ye kahani uss samay se start hoti hai jab mere papa ka transfer Hyderabad se Jaipur hua tha..

Tab meri 12th ke exams ke baad ki chhuttiya chal rahi thi. 

(Note - yaha par maine Jaipur city ka naam randomly suggest kiya hai. Real me ye sab jaipur city nahi hua hai. Thanks)

Ha to jab papa transfer hua to meri summer vacations chal rahi thi. Jaipur city hamare liye ek anjaan city thi. Yaha par kisi ki Jaan pahchan nahi hone ki wajah se yaha par ghar ya flat dhundana bhi bahut mushkil ho raha tha. Ek do din hum waha par hotel par ruke rahe jab tak koi thaav thikana nahi mil jata.

Aur fir ek jagah par hame ek makan mila. Usme 1st floor ki manzil bhi thi. Uske land lord ground floor me rahte the aur unhe 1st floor rent par dena tha to wo hamne le liya.

[Uss ghar me do log hi rahte the. Ek couple rahta tha (Kamal aur uski wife Rashmi) ye hamare kahani ke main characters hai. Aur mere Ghar me main meri mummy aur papa.]

Wo Mr. Kamal aur sath me unki wife Rashmi hame jaha rehna hai wo 1st floor dikha rahe the. Usme saamne se balcony fir under ek bada sa hall uske baju me kichen, kichen ke piche alag sa toilet bathroom, fir hall ke piche do bedrooms aur unke piche yaani ghar ke pichale side se ek aur balcony. Ye sab dikhate hai. 

(me kamal ko uncle aur unki patni rashmi ko aunty bulati hu) 

Ghar dikhane ke bad unhone hame unke ghar yani niche lekar aaye. Fir hum logo ne unka Ghar bhi dekh liya bilkul same tha upar ki tarah sirf niche hone ki wajah se balcony nahi thi.
Hamara flat type ghar kafi bada tha isliye papa ko laga ki ye paise kuch jyada hi mangenge isliye papa ne unhe pucha kamal bhaishahabb ye hame rent kitna dena hoga mahine ka ispar Kamal uncle bole - dekhiye ghar ka rent + light beel + paani sab ka milakar 5000rs de dijiye ga.

Papa ye sunkar bahut khush ho gaye kyunki bahar rent bahut jyada mang rahe the, aur yaha par ye Makaan itna saste me rent par mil raha hai isliye papa ne unhe turant ha kar di aur 10,000rs advance bhi jama karva diya. Uske baad ek din me hi hum waha par rahne ke liye aa gaye. Papa ne bhi dusre hi din office join kar liya unka office time subah 8 baje se shyam ko 6 baje tak ka hota tha. 

Fir aise hi din par din bitate chale gaye aur din par din Kamal uncle aur Reshma aunty hamare close hone lage ab to hum log roj raat ko ek sath me hi rat ka khana khaya karte the.waqt aise hi bitata jaa raha tha.

Ek din matlab raat me jab hum sab log dinning table par dinner kar rahe the tab papa bole ki
Papa - Kamal bhaisahab Mansi ko BSC karna hai to yaha par koi accha college hai kya?? ya fir dusre city me??
Kamal Uncle - Are pratap ji neki aur puch puch  aur aap kya dusre city ki baat kar rahe hai. Are hamare yaha bahut accha college hai, In fact me waha par professor tha pahle.
Papa - accha, kya padhate the aap waha par 
Kamal uncle - Math subject padhata tha. Aur to aur me abhi kuch mahino pahle hi retired hua hun isliye meri waha par puri jan pahchan hai.
Papa - Are ye to bahut achhi bat hai, matlab ab koi tension nahi hai.
jara wo thoda sa mansi ke addmission ka dekh lijiye ga ye kehte huye papa thode hichak rahe the.
Uncle - Pratap ji isme hichakne ki kya baat hai, aap tension hi chhod dijiye ga. Mansi bitiya ki addmission ki saari formalities me puri kar dunga don't worry! 
Me kal hi mansi ko sath lekar jata hu college me aur iska documentation ka kaam complete karwata hu waise bhi addmissions khul chuke hai. Apko aane ki koi jarurat nahi hai Aakhir ye meri bhi to beti jaisi hi hai 
Papa - thik hai bhaisahab aapne to mansi ki puri jimmedari hi utha Li hai
Uncle - Maine kaha na aapse pratap ji ye meri beti jeisi hi hai, jeisi nahi balki beti hi hai.

Uncle ki ye baatein sunkar hum sab log khush ho gaye aur phir idhar udhar ki baatein karte huye khana kha liye aur sone ke liye chale gaye.

Agle din subah har roj ki tarah papa apne office ke liye chale gaye aur mammi mujhe uthane ke liye mere bedroom me aayi aur mujhe uthane lagi.

Mammi - Mansi uth jao ab dekho bachha 8 baj gaye hai, dekho kamal bhaisahab ready ho gaye honge, tumhe college jana hai na unke sath apna addmission karvane ke liye.

Ye sunkar me jaldi se aankhen malte huye uth gayi aur boli - ha mammi jana hai mujhe bhi pls mujhe nashta de dijiye me nahakar aati hu aur me jaldi se bathroom me chali gayi ready hone ke liye.
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#10
Please guys, Likes, comments dijiye meri iss post par .
Main abhi iss platform me nayi hu. So agar kuch galati ho jaye to sambhal lena.

Aur ha next part B me 'Mansi jaal me fasne lag gayi' iske upar hoga.
To dosto please apne apne comments, raay bhej dijiye ki Part B kaisa ho. Taaki usake hisaab se me agla part likh saku. Aur aapke raay aur comments se mujhe aur bhi himmat milegi ye kahani likhane me.
So guys, please comments me on A part and what happened to next B part
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#11
updates are too delayed
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(01-07-2024, 02:24 AM)mahamatherchod Wrote: updates are too delayed

Main bimar pad gayi thi isliye thoda let ho gaya lekin main promise karti hu next updates jald se jald Dene ki koshish karungi..
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#13
Amazing start
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#14
Good start clps
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