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Adultery Tale of a lustful revenge
#41
Excellent and beautiful start
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#42
Superb, stunning and thrilling start.
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#43
Absolutely great and awesome start
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#44
Bahut hi mast aur behad hi shandaar shuruwat
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#45
bahut badiya start.bahut hi mast story.
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#46
ekdum kamaal ka shuruwat
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#47
ashadaran start,awesome story,amazing writings!
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#48
bahut badiya shuruwat,ekdum fataka story,awesome and amazing writings!
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#49
wah!wah!wah! ekdum kamaal hai yaar buss ekdum kamaal ka start! Hats off Namaskar Namaskar Namaskar
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#50
Fabulous Start,Raghu ke double meaning dialogue toh jabardast the,aahe kya hota hain dekhna interesting hoga.
Finally legendary writer back on this forum.Welcome Back.
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#51
(10-05-2024, 11:16 AM)THE EVIL Wrote:
First of all storyline is completely different & you will see it in coming updates. Secondly mujhe nahi lagta readers ko every time ek different theme expect karna chahiye writer se because it depends on us which theme we are more comfortable with. Iska ye matlab bhi nahi hai ke main yahi theme par every story likhunga. Readers ke pas several options hain stories padhne ke liye agar unko meri ye story pasand ayegi to padhenge otherwise nahi its upto them.


If i feel like people aren't interested in this story i'll immediately close it no problem. That way atleast i'll have an idea to not write stories based on this theme anymore.

Brother ignore the noise and just write what you love to write.
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#52
bahut badiya ek zabardast aur mast kahaani!
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#53
Beautiful story! Very nice and spicy writings! congrats yourock
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#54
congrats for new thread.
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#55
Only fucking scenes can't make an adult story specially interfaith adult story extremely hot and erotic. The elements that make it extremely hot and erotic are good plots, excellent themes, suitable characters setting,related situation narrations, making different situations and the most important elements are erotic, exciting and double meaning naughty conversations among the characters. I know it very well that you are the master of eroticism in this field. And I heartily request you to apply more such kinds of above mentioned elements in this great story.
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#56
Beautiful and excellent story. When so sweet, so cute, so sanskari, so pakiza, so faithful, so loving, so innocent, so religious and so conservative a wife, a mom or a sister is seduced and fucked by a low class house servant or a watchman or a janitor or a hardcore criminal type of man of opposite majab and compels her to become his personal whore and turns her into a rand, it makes an interfaith adult story extremely hot, exciting, enjoyable ,pleasant, pleasurable and super erotic because extreme and insatiable sexual thirsts, desires and randipana are concealed inside every such kind of above mentioned female and it needs a perverted and evil minded man of extreme sexual prowess who has got a monster dick to bring out her randipana.
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#57
Great start
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#58
Bahut bahut shandaar aur lajawab shuruwat
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#59
(10-05-2024, 07:47 PM)Mafiadon Wrote: Only fucking scenes can't make an adult story specially interfaith adult story extremely hot and erotic. The elements that make it extremely hot and erotic are good plots, excellent themes, suitable characters setting,related situation narrations, making different situations and the most important elements are erotic, exciting and double meaning naughty conversations among the characters. I know it very well that you are the master of eroticism in this field. And I heartily request you to apply more such kinds of above mentioned elements in this great story.

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#60
(10-05-2024, 07:59 PM)Mafiadon Wrote: Beautiful and excellent story. When so sweet, so cute, so sanskari, so pakiza, so faithful, so loving, so innocent, so religious and so conservative a wife, a mom or a sister is seduced and fucked by a low class house servant or a watchman or a janitor or a hardcore criminal type of man of opposite majab and compels her to become his personal whore and turns her into a rand, it makes an interfaith adult story extremely hot, exciting, enjoyable ,pleasant, pleasurable and super erotic because extreme and insatiable sexual thirsts, desires and randipana are concealed inside every such kind of above mentioned female and it needs a perverted and evil minded man of extreme sexual prowess who has got a monster dick to bring out her randipana.

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