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Hello my friend,
It was a nice composition of an interesting story.
I wish to give just one suggestion ahead.
I accept that a good story makes the readers involve into it much, which requires detailing in the story. Each and every aspect should be given in detail.
But I felt here that, you are giving too much of detail, which makes the readers either to loose interest or to do skip reading which I do.
Please don’t take it in a wrong way, it’s just my suggestion and the way I felt.
One final thing is, it would be better if you explain that Srini also finds the CCTV footage from the theatre too. Because it actually started at the theatre. It also explains what happened during the interval break, why she switched her seat back to her position, where was she and what was she doing for almost an hour after the movie ends.
I hope you had better plans to expose this.
Good work and keep rocking…
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Good to hear that this is not cuckold story.
So the ending cannot be happy happy. But justification needed for wife action/cheating. Lets see how it goes.
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Dear author - when can we expect next update?
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I don't know, why many people interested in cuck stories punishing weak, But punishment to sinner, or karma did this to them. Are really better ones.
All pics and videos posted by me are copied from g**gle only
Please inform me to remove if you don't like them
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Awesome, the truth is out.
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Wonderful
eagerly waiting for the next part
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Is she nude inside while closing the door. Did he hear the moans and groans when he reached the second floor. The men noticed srinu and asked her close the door? or did they threaten to kill her husband if she did not cooperate. It is the reason she did not disclose the real events in the FIR. This is an awesome thriller so far. Why did the polis did not take the medical test for her. Did she hided the r*pe. She has no guilt in her face after this or the foolish husband did not find that?
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Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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Waiting for next update brother this is absolute thriller.
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Awesome update. Plz provide next updates at the earliest.
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Very interesting update.
Now he has to put Cctv in his home and spy on his wife mobile. Life is going to turn more miserable soon. Ganga asked for movie. It looks like the affair started much earlier. Did she met javed before that in his mechanical shop or did he visit her for fixing the puncture of her scooty.
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Betrayal at its best !!!!
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You are successfully taking each reader into the scene, one of the best story narrations ever I came across.
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the cheating wife with a question mark is a good title coz the wife might be protecting him or might be cheating...I guess we would know at the end...great writing
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Ganga must be more brilliant than her husband. She has done lot of things someone can never think of.
lovely update friend.
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Looks like ganga dont want to miss the enjoyment she is getting from the young and circumcized dick of javed and experiece dick of chacha. She must have got double penetrated and their dicks must have ruled all the holes and touched the points that she does not know it exists and showed the heavenly pleasures. Her husband never given that pleassures and it should have angered her. So, she want to use this opportunity to get the utmost pleasures. That is the reason she closed the door leaving the wimp husband outside. She knows very well how he can fool him later. She now knows that only low class men have great stamina to satisfy high class woman. Extraordinary writing.