01-05-2024, 07:56 PM
Update?
Adultery Heavenly angel: deceived by trust by duckhunter
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01-05-2024, 07:56 PM
Update?
02-05-2024, 08:56 AM
Bro this is my last comment as i already lost interest in this story.I just want to tell the writer a few points which made me lose interest on this story,i think a silent majority of audience will feel the same.
1.Addition of ramu and making Rahim a villian,that destroyed Rahim character,he went from getting jealous of chaami to allowing ramu to have sex scene with her, completely abondoning his best friends,for me if Rahim would have made that sex scene with Vishnu whom she trusts the most,it would have helped story progress without making Rahim a villian. 2.Kabaddi was a great plot,but if Rahim would have asked devika to help him in practicing,she would have helped as she treats him as her little brother,where Rahim would have taken advantage without her thinking bad him as it was a contact sport. 3.Addition of new characters a lot and them doing more than what the main characters have done whom she actually trust,it destroys devika as a character.You can compare the comments of the recent chapters to older ones.In older ones audience loved and emotionally connected to devika,but in recent chapters comments all the audience saying she should get fucked by the three guys which clearly shows that now they don't care about devika,all they want is sex session which shows all the character development of devika throughout story is just nullified. 4.I hope you realise that and continue the further story more on development of chemistry between devika and main leads which is very important in long stories for example like in "Dhika an innocent angel" story. 5.Pls stop adding new characters and concentrate on how building the romance between the main characters. Guys if you are feeling the same pls comment and tell the writer before it's too late
03-05-2024, 04:52 AM
Thanks for all the feedbacks and suggestion. I think most of you are not liking the way Im proceeding with story. Im still trying to keep the original plot. Like people deceiving devika and trying to take advantage of her. Here also in the photo session, salmaan is trying to take advantage of the situation. And never i have made devika a bitch. In all the scenarios, its how people cunningly deceive her and gets her trust and then taking advantage of situation.
I totally agree, off late there was lots of new characters coming to her life which could have been avoided and stuck with central characters. But it all happened while i was trying to create new and fresh scenarios, backing of new characters were required. If i had stuck with original plot, i would just be limited with only few scenarios and the story would have got over with very few chapters. I understand everyones feedback and comments regarding expectation of this story. After this episode finishes, I will try to bring back Ganapati and Chami to the story immediately and after that Vishnu and Anand to wrap this story. Any suggestions that helps the story please post it here. Thanks guys
03-05-2024, 05:19 AM
Salmaan - lets go sir, we dont have much time
Saying that salmaan went back. Venki followed salmaan thinking what salmaan had said Rizwan - okay guys lets move to the last set of photos. We have another great location. You guys will be surprised They walked to another area in the farm. They reached near a small lake. It is so beautiful. There are coconut trees, cows grazing , grass everywhere. And near the lake on the banks it is sand. But whats more surprising is right near the lake on the sands there is something which is completely out of place. Its the odd one out. It is a white old bath tub. Venki and devika was surprised to see bath tub there near a beautiful back drop Venki - why there is a bath tub Rizwan - yeah the surprising element. Everywhere its beautiful nature ,only this one is standing out. I believe me it will be looking good on the photo Devika - so what you have in your mind Rizwan - so we will take the next and last photos in here Devika - okay Rizwan - so i want you guys to get into the tub. It should be full romantic photos. I dont want you guys to refrain. Express yourself. However you want . and i will capture from this side. It will be beautiful Venki - ok , so how do you want to start Rizwan - okay, first we will start near the lake. But before that madam can you wear this it will be looking good in the photo Saying that rizwan took out a garland necklace made out of shells. Rizwan - madam you can wear this and adjust it in a way that you are not exposed as you will not wear the top cloth Devika took the shell necklace and put over her neck. It is long enough. She turned away from rizwan and salmaan to face venki and removed the top cloth and dropped it to the ground. Both devika and venki adjusted the necklace so it will cover her nipples and round aerola. Devika turned around to face the kids and there was a shy nervous smile on her face. Salmaan mouth opened. Almost all of her breast is visible except the nipple and aerola. Salmaan clapped and told Salmaan - wow madam you look like a goddess Devika smiled with shyness Devika - lets do it. Im feeling really uncomfortable Rizwan - dont worry its just us and these photos are for you guys Rizwan then took a sunflower and went near devika and kept on her ear Rizwan - now its more elegant and beautiful Both venki and devika moved to sand area near the lake Rizwan - okay lets go, we will finish it. First we will take some singles of madam. Venki moved away from the frame and rizwan took few snaps of devika facing the camera. It was indeed beautiful photos. The necklace on her looked beautiful. Rizwam took few photos of devika turned sideways. It gave a nice side view of her naked boobs. Everyone was able to see the size and roundness of her breast when she turned sideways. Only her nipple was covered. Then rizwan made venki join her and they tooj few photos hugging and kissing. And some photos they were sitting on the sand Salmaan told rizwan Salmaan - bro, now im going to suggest an idea, you just support it. Dont tell anything else Rizwan - what do you mean Salmaan - nothing bro, let me have some fun Rizwan did not understand what his brother is suggesting Salmaan - okay guys, these are beautiful and i have an idea to make it more beautiful and i bet the photos will look artistically beautiful as well Rizwan - what's up Salmaan - bro, you know that im good in body art and painting. I have an idea. With that necklace madam is looking beautiful. How about like adding small body art. It will enhance her beauty in the photo Devika - what exactly are you saying salmaan Salmaan - madam , its like tatoo, i have something on mind, please let me do it and it will look beautiful, if it doesn't you can wash it away. Devika - do you mean body painting Salmaan - similar, i would call it body art. So i will draw something like may be a flower or butterfly on your body. And it will be looking good. Please atleast allow me to try and you guys tell how it will look Devika - but it will take more time and we dont have much Salmaan - im good at this just only 10 mins Devika was not sure and doesn't want to prolong this. So she looked at rizwan and venki for support Rizwan supported his brother , as he genuinely thought it will look good Devika looked at venki and venki whispered Venki - devu , i spoke with salmaan and he told he will never let anybody in the college know. Its just a picture he wants to draw. May be butterfly something like that. Its not a big deal. Lets do it ,it will not take much time. And also we dont want to make him sad, we dont want him to gossip about you at the college right, lets get over with it. Now devika didnt have any other choice but to agree Devika - okay , lets get this done as quickly as possible. We need to finish this off Salmaan was happy that his plan is working out. He somehow wanted to see devika naked without giving any suspicion. So when venki came to speak with him, he thought it was the perfect opportunity to ask for a favour as they practicaly cannot deny. Salmaan actually do not want to harm her nor wanted exploit devika. But his teenage hormones made a desire in him see this beautiful women naked. He may never get an opportunity, so he thought better be little brave and see if he will be lucky without hurting anyones feelings Salmaan - okay , i dont have the paints and my tools here. Its inside the office room. Lets go there madam Salmaan sighned rizwan with his eyes and asked him to make a reason to stop venki coming with them. Venki was walking with devika to go to the office building. But rizwan quickly interfered Rizwan - sir let them go, lets stay here, we have taken the single photos of madam, we will take some singles of sir now Venki stopped and devika looked at venki. Venki reassured her Venki - okay devu, you guys go. Come back fast. In case if anything let me know Salmaan - dont worry sir, we will come back quickly Venki - yeah salmaan , better be quick we have to go somewhere else as well after this Salmaan smiled and winked at venki. And he walked away with devika. Venki was little worried to leave his wife with salmaan. But he knew his wife and confident that she will react if someone tries to misbehave with her. Devika had again took the towel and wrapped it around her to cover her top. The office was like 200 meters away Devika to break the ice and to calm her down started speaking Devika - so salmaan, i didnt know that you do body arts. How did you learn Salmaan - yes madam, i learned it from my grand father. He was a great artist and he trained me from my childhood Devika - oh nice. Nobody told me in the college Salmaan - yes, only few knew about it in the college Devika - why, you should use all the opportunity to showcase your talent Salmaan - yes madam, thats why im using this opportunity and madam you rate how good im Salmaan looked at devika and smiled. Devika also smiled Devika - yeah yeah lets see. If its not good. I will give zero for real college exam..heehe After some chit chat with salmaan she is feeling more comfortable, all this while she was assessing salmaan to see if he is a good boy. So far till now salmaan has always treated her with respect. Even during her nightmare time with rahim at the kabadi episode, it was only salmaan who had helped her. From that time itself she felt salmaan is a good boy. They reached the building and salmaan took her to the office room. It is old room, there are some office books and papers. There is only a table there in the room, without any chair. It is all dirty and dusty. Salmaan swittched on the light and the fan was not working Devika - this is the office, this place looks very dusty Salmaan - yeah this room is used to just store some files and rarely used Devika - is there any other room Salmaan - no madam , otherwise we have to walk further down to the guest building. That where you guys changed the dress earlier today. But it will take more time to walk down there. I thought we will do ot quickly and go back Devika - ok then we will do it here. But its really hot here Salmaan - i know madam sorry the fan is not working Devika - hmm.. Okay so what are you drawing? Salmaan quickly from a bag took out the colors and the brush. He couldn't believe he is with the most beautiful women.The queen in their college. He was also nervous and should be carefull to keep devika calm and make her willfully do it. Salmaan - okay madam. As we dont have much time. We have to do something simple but yet looking good. And also should be related to the background of the photos you guys are taking. Devika - okay Salmaan - you guys are taking photos on the beautiful backdrop of the nature. So i think something related to nature will look beautiful Devika - hm Salmaan took out an album from his bag and looking through it. He flipped through the pages. And he stopped at one photo Salmaan - i think this one ia good and related to what i have in my mind. Its simple Salmaan showed the photo to devika. It was a simple canvas photo, nothing special. It was a photo of a flower and a butterfly on top of it. It was simple. And devika did not find anything special about the photo. So she said okay and did not think much about it Devika - yeah i think that is simple and should do. Hope you can complete it fast Salmaan - sure madam, let's get started then Devika - sure, may be you can draw it on the back of my shoulder Salmaan thought for a moment and said Salmaam - madam, its not a tatoo im drawing. Im a body artist. And body art should have a meaning and also should be making sense. Other wise why body art, you can just draw a picture on a canvass when it is body paint it has different dimension and our body will be the canvass Devika - okay, i dont know much about it Salmaan - yeah don't worry, you just have to trust me and stay relaxed. Only look at final result Devika - okay Salmaan - it might be little uncomfortable , but you will definitely appreciate the result Devika - okay master. What do you have in your mind Devika tried to lighten the mood and tried to relax Salmaan - hehe , okay Salmaan knew he do not have much time. He quickly removed all the books and paper which was there on the table Salmaan - madam i dont want you to be moving while i draw, you have to stay stable. So can you sit on this table please Devika dusted the table with one hand and used both her hand to push herself onto the table. She sat on the edge and her legs were hanging down Salmaan quickly came near devika with the brush and paint. †************************†
03-05-2024, 05:46 AM
Nice update.
03-05-2024, 08:52 AM
Please update quickly, can't wait for the next episode
03-05-2024, 09:27 AM
Thanks for understanding bro.The main characters are coming back let's go.
03-05-2024, 10:47 AM
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Great decision on already planning the ending of the story.I always hated writers who left the story unfinished.I can already tell this story is going to have a great ending.
03-05-2024, 03:07 PM
Please update the next episode as quickly as possible.. Can't wait the body art episode. & bring back vishnu.
03-05-2024, 04:51 PM
looking a body alone is boring, do some touch or grope
04-05-2024, 05:04 AM
No one has fucked her tight so far including her husband. Feeling like we are deceived.
04-05-2024, 07:15 PM
05-05-2024, 10:51 AM
Waiting for big update?
05-05-2024, 11:45 PM
Please continue
06-05-2024, 06:56 AM
Devika dusted the table with one hand and used both her hand to push herself onto the table. She sat on the edge and her legs were hanging down
Salmaan quickly came near devika with the brush and paint. Salmaan - now madam stay stable. He dipped the brush in the colour and touched her stomach near her deep navel. Devika was totally surprised and the cold touch of brush on her naked skin made her shiver and pull her stomach in Devika - are you going to draw on my stomach? Salmaan - now let the master do his work. Madam you stay relaxed and try to be stable without moving much Devika - but Salmaan again brushed the paint on her stomach around her navel. Devika felt tickling as salmaan applied color with quick strokes. Devika was already very turned on beacuse of the drugs and intimate shoot with her husband. The cold touch of brush on her bare skin reignited her emotions Devika trying to shake away from her thoughts tried to engage in talks with salmaan Devika - dont tell any of your friends that you drew a flower on your teachers stomach Salmaan - im an artist madam, i keep my client info confidential hehe Devika - im not your client, im your teacher. Im agreed to do this , first because i have not done a body painting. I always fond of tattoo, but venki doesn't like. Salmaan - what is the second reason? Devika - second, because i want to see if my student is talented Salamaan - heheh..that you will find soon Devika kept light talks with salmaan, she was trying to make sure , he will not tell anyone at the college Devika - so what will you tell your friends, when they ask what you were doing for vacation Salmaan - i will tell them, i went for a painting competition and drew a beautiful flower Saying that he entered the brush into her deep navel and stroked it there. Devika closed her eyes and her stomach trmebled for a second Salmaan - are you okay madam He asked while keeping thr brush on her deep navel Devika - huhhuh../yeah yeah its tickling Salmaan finished drawing a flower around her deep navel. Devika again involuntarily started her pussy getting wet due to the drug. She kept her legs tightly closed trying to suppress the wetness. Salmaan - madam , next i have to draw on your upper chest. It will better if you remove the necklace you are wearing. And you can hold the towel on your front Devika - what you mean by upper chest Devika tried to question, but Salmaan quickly placed his index finger on her lips Salmaan - sssshh...trust me. Let the master do his work. And i will let not tell any of my friends, on what canvass i used, to draw the beautiful flower. Trust me. If thats what bothering you Devika sighed and felt relieved hearing it from salmaan that he will not tell anyone. But at the same time she felt obliged to comply to the request of salmaan as a return of favor. She felt salmaan is a good boy and gentleman. Devika - you are a good boy Salmaan - no im a good artist Devika - that i will tell only after you finish Salmaan - then allow to finish Devika smiled and slowly removed the necklace she was wearing and then adjusted the towel she was wearing and she held it in place covering her breast. Salmaan took different colour and approched devika Salmaan - madam can you lower the towel little Devika moved it down little Salmaan - madam little more Devika moved it down another inch and looked at salmaan. But salmaan was not satisfied. He took out his hand pulled the cloth further down. And he stopped it right on top of where her round aerola starts. Devika looked at salmaan with wide eyes Salmaam said playfully Salmaan - artist decides were to draw on the canvass Devika - artist will get a slap. There are places in this canvass which artist has no permission to access. Partly due to the drugs and partly as she is convinced that salmaan is good boy and professional, she took it lightly and remained calm Salmaan started his work on her sensitive breast above her aerola. Again the cold soft touch of the brush made her clench her teeth. She shivered Salmaan - you are moving so much madam Devika - brush is cold Salmaan - i think it will be best if you lay down Salmaan pushed her shoulder, devika moved back on the table and laid down. She kept the towel in place while doing. When she laid down , the cloth on her waist got stretched and moved up few inches displaying meaty thighs infront of salmaan Salmaan continued his work and started drawing. Devika had goosebumps Salmaan - madam , stay relaxed. Devika had her eyes closed as she fought to control her emotions. Salmaan talked while he worked Salmaan - madam, you are the best teacher. Devika - why Salmaan - you are so kind Devika - how Salmaan - Madam, do you remember when you came to our kabadi competition. I fell on that pit and would have died if you had not saved me. You risked yourself to save me. Devika - anyone would have done that Salmaan - no , you did not think about your condition, when you did that. Devika remained silent as salmaan painted near her nipple. Her nipples had become so hard and erect and her pussy was more wet. Salmaan - madam can you keep your hands to your side. Salmaan did not wait as she himself, kept her hands which were holding the cloth towards her side. Salmaan continued drawing Salmaan - on that day, madam you became naked for your student, which teacher would do that. You are an actual angel from heaven who saved my life Salmaan was noticing her reactions, he felt she is lost in thoughts as she had eyes closed , breathing hard. He could see both her nipples standing out through the cloth. He had completed drawing a beautiful butterfly on her breast. Both devika and salmman was sweating. Salmaan wanted to move ahead but at the same time he was scared as well. He looked at devika. She was fucking sexy Salmaan - that was first tine i was seeing a naked lady. You were the most beautiful women i had ever seen. Salmaan with trembling hands, held the cloth that was kept on her breast Salmaan - on that day, i saw a beautiful pair of breasts He slowly pulled away the cloth and there her round milky breast came into his view. Salmaan - which i always dreamt of seeing it again Salmaans hand was shivering, his heart was pounding as he looked at her naked breast. Her nipple were so erect. Her aerola was of a coin size and brown. He dropped the cloth to the ground. Devika was in a trance and as the effects of drugs kicked in. Her chest was heaving as she took deep breath. Her lips were shivering Salmaan -And it has only become more beautiful Devika fighted her body reactions and she took her hand and covered her breast again and opened her eyes to look at salmaan and with feeble voice asked Devika - salmaan what are you doing. No please Her voice did not have much strength and it trembled Salmaan - madam relax, dont worry. Trust me. Salmaan looking at devika , again held her hand and moved sideways. He was surprised, devika did not resist. He dipped the brush in the color and slowly touched the brush on her round aerola. Devika body stiffened and she looked at the other side and held the sides of the table tightly with her hands. Salmaan quickly brushed on and around her aerola and soon a beautiful flower was drawn. He then dipped a different colour on the brush. And this time stroked on her erect pointy nipple directly. Her whole body trembled and for the first time she gasped for air Devika - huhh...oh no..please Salmaan coloured her whole nipple, as she trembled upon on each his brush touch. Her pussy was on fire as it is all moist. She kept legs tigtly closed as she was totally turned on due to the drugs. The drug made her loose control over her body as it responded to salmaan touch. Devika even though wanted to stop salmaan, her body didnt allow her to respond back. Her mouth is dry, she is sweating and her chest is pounding fast Salmaam finished and it looked like a butterfly sitting on the flower drinking honey. Using his artistic skills he made her nipple look like a beautiful flower Salmaan understood that devika is excited, but was surprised how easily she got seduced. He didn't knew that his uncle had drugged her before. He looked at the watch, he still has some more time. So he did not waste any time and he walked to the other side of the table with his brush Salmaan - seriously you are looking more beautiful now. It is the first time im seeing a beautiful women up this close. On that day i was in pain and did not really realise it. It looks like god took special care in carving you madam Salmaan- madam , your nipples it looks like a beautiful flower that is waiting to be plucked. Saying that salmaan looked at devika and using the back of his hand he slowly brushed her skin starting from her upper chest moved along her breast and last over her protruding nipple. Another shiver occurred to her body, the moment salmaans hand moved over her nipple. She held salmaan's hand tighlty and stopped him Salmaan - madam, you are sweating, i was wiping it off. They paint will get spread if you are sweating Devika was silent , eyes closed. With her hands trembling. Salmaan reassured her and kept her hand back to her side Salmaan - its an exotic flower This time he used his index finger and touces her round aerola and circled around her nipple. Devika was extremely turned on and her body involuntarily arched and pushed her breast up as if it was begging to be touched. Salmaan was surprised at his skills of seducing a women. He dipped his index finger and thump in the paint and then held her hard nipple and rolled in his fingers to apply the color. Devika opened her mouth and gasped for air and slightly moaned as salmaan's fingers on her nipple brought electric shock in her. She started rubbing her closed legs as an orgasm started building in her. Salmaan explored her nipple for a moment and made it more hard by pulling it. And as he didnt have much time quickly used the brush to draw another flower on her nipple. He was impressed with his work and more than that he was happy to see her topless and responding to his touches Salmaan - we are almost done madam. Now some finishing work He took a brush and drew a line from her nipple down to her stomach, similarly from the other breast as well and joined both these lines at her stomach and moved down as a single line down to the flower drawn on her navel. It looked like a stem of a plant and her nipples are depicted as two beautiful flowers and a third flower down on her navel. And a butterfly is drinking honey from one of the flower. Salmaan - it is more beautiful than i thought. Madam you will love my creation. Salmaan didn't want to stop there, he also wanted to see his teacher's most precious part as well. He made up his mind and knew he has everything in his control Salmaan - stem ,leaves, flower and butterfly is drawn and one last thing is missing. No plant is complete without its roots Saying that he continued drawing the line down from her navel slowly down to her lower stomach. He without asking permission, loosened the knot of her waist cloth. He noticed that her stomach going up and down faster , her fist is closed, eyes wide shut, lips parted, sweating profusely, legs tightly closed. Salmaan was also trembling anticipating what he is about to see. His shivering hands opened the loosened cloth to both sides like a book. And thus revealing the most intimate secret part , of his teacher, right infront of his eyes. Salmaan's mouth widened seeing the sight. His favourite teacher is lying without a single thread on her body, fully naked and no control over her body. Salmaan eyes did not even blink as he did not want to miss any moment. He continued moving down his brush drawing the line. He looked at devika, the more close he reached towards her honey pot , her breathing got more heavier. Devika - huhhhuhh...no..no..please Salmaan continued and it reached her neatly trimmed pubic hairs and stopped it there. He kept the brush back as he finished his work Devika - hhhuhh...hmm Salmaan brought his face close to her pussy Salmaan - wow, madam we have the perfect root for our flower here He brought his fingers and touched her pubic hair and ran his fingers through the bush Devika - salmaan please....huhhh Devika has completely lost her control as the drug made her body sexualy responsive and her pussy was glistening with her juices, which salmaan did not miss. He has never seen a women so excited and has only seen in a wet pussy in porn. Salmaan - wow, looks like we dont have to water the flower Salmaan brought his face really close to her pussy lips and studied the texture, folds, skin of her choot. He inhaled her womenly scent which made him ecstatic and high. And slowly brought his index finger which was playing with her pubic hair to her slit and touched her pussy lips Devika shuddered and her whole body jerked Devika- uhh..huhhh.. Salmaan did not stop there he moved his finger further down and touched the clit sticking out. Devika was on the verge of a huge orgasm But suddenly salmaan noticed rizwaan and venki is walking towards the building from a distance through the window. Salmaan realised his play time is over but he was happy and satisfied to see his favourite teacher naked and he was proud to see he had made her wet. He took out his fingers from her sticky wet pussy and stood up Salmaan - madam , i have completed the work and is the best work i have done. Thanks for cooperating Devika took still another minute to calm down and come back to reality all the while she remained on the table naked. Salmaan tasted the pussy juicy from his wet fingers and enjoyed the salty taste Devika sat up and regaining composure and quickly covered her pussy and breast with the clothes. She did not say anything to salmaan Salmaan came close to devika and reassured Salmaan - madam all i have for you is respect and you are the best teacher and i will never tell anyone in the college about this day. You can take my words . i promise. I slightly got little carried away towards the end. Please forgive me. It was because i had never seen a women this beautiful. Sorry for touching you there. I should have controlled my emotions Devika remained silent she was more upset about herself as she cant understand why she was unable to stop him. What is happening to her body. She has never been this horny. Keeping these thoughts on her head. She walked outside the building to meet venki and rizwan there. Salmaan also followed her outside. ************†**************"†******
06-05-2024, 07:14 AM
Please back Vishnu
06-05-2024, 12:03 PM
Beautiful
06-05-2024, 06:15 PM
Good episode
06-05-2024, 09:10 PM
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Master Class
06-05-2024, 09:43 PM
Another disappointment for Devika and readers. Who is going to fuck her hard, deep and tight finally. Will she give birth to a bastard child.
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